You are my theme for a dream(SaJan FF) Updt on p64 - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammykhan

wowwww awesome part

really nice
loved it
continue soon



Thanks dear... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

it was surely amazing part i love samrat and suhani suprise for gunjan


Hey dear!! Thank u for loving it😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

aweosmeeeee updt loved it continue soon n thanx 4 the pm



Thank u 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

Heyy!!

well written!
Loved it!... N I really want time to fly faster!
Want to see them together!



Hey Manjari, thanks!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

Awesome update Amy dear after such a long tym.....👍🏼

Really love the surprise planned by Samrat....loved Sammy as Charlie!!!!! 😆😆So sweet....
Wel the father daughter reunion part was the best....just loved dat.....
then Gunjan ruffling Sam's hair n Sam getting irritated was just nice.....cant wait fr the party...do continue soon.....

ur's
Aditi



Adi my jaan!! thanks😃 will continue asap...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

wow wow amy wat a ff yaar loveee da concept lovee da CS n loveee n enjoyed reading alll the parts lolz loveeee sajan fights so awesome gosh hehee i knew gunji will think sammy as driver coz of da way sammy was dressed n all poor sammy uska luck hi kharab tha btw lol lovee how u introduce mayu also lolz kinda like stalker den he saying in tamil n all lolz bt den majan scene was fun anyways den in airport gunji fall into sammy arms😳😳 wowwww bt den omgggg she called sammy pervert poor sammy n den gunji anger in airport omgggg gunji has temper n den da prank by sammy in road poor gunji bt den gunji bichara sammy ko bahut scold kiya awww sammy he was being nice n all bt gunji scolds her so so bad n all n den finally she got to knw dat sammy is not driver he is jatin's son anyways den awww good to see gunji getting lovee from shilpa aunty n all n den loveeee sajan cutee fight lolz shatan hehehehe den der chess competion n bike race n all loveee n enjoyed it especially wen gunji got hurt in race n sammy showing concern n all awwwwwwwww n den finally dey became frnds woohoo loveee der scenes den n den loveee suhu-sammy scenes dey fight like tom n jerry heheheh den aww so good to see so so loveeee from shergil family wid gunji n all n den loveee to see bonding between gunji-her dad loveee his suprise to her so cuteeeee enjoyed reading all parts amy u an awesome writer👏 do continue soon now



Hey anu.. OMG!! thanks for such a long and descriptive comment hun...😳
I m glad u liked the story till now... and i really hope you enjoy it in future also...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG amy one of the sweetest update😳
So finally gun,s father arrived and aww she is soo happy.Loved the father-daughter bond!Wow i love keyboards but i don,t get a chance to play this wonderful instrument !and Aww i love that family gathering part where everyone teased Sam as charlie so sweet!
Aww i loved the ending part where gun Ruffled Sam,s hair!so cute loved it totally!
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pls update asap I lov it!!!! Thank you!!! 🤗 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey frnds,
Another update...😃

Part 16 (Party time)
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Shergill mansion was decorated like a wedding hall. Everything was so perfect, so beautiful. The lights, the dcor, the food, everything. Of course, because the arrangements were done by two beautiful ladies- Suhani, and Gunjan. Samrat also helped them, if splashing the water on floor and falling on the same water or mixing red roses with pink, by mistake, can be called help.

As the sky became darker, guests started showing. But the main attraction of the party, Jatin and Shilpa, were not there. They were out with Rajat, since morning. Why? Should I really tell you? This was their 'Surprise party'. So rajat had taken them out in morning, to buy time for the arrangements.

Samrat stood in his sky blue sherwani at the entrance of the hall, greeting guests. His nervousness grew with every new entrant to the party. Gunjan was taking the final look at the arrangements when her eyes fell on samrat. She sensed his discomfort.

"Kya hua?" she said placing her hand on his shoulder.

"Oh Gunjan!!" Samrat sighed with relief as he saw her, "Kuch nahi yaar. Wo mom dad abtak aaye nahi."

"Ohho aajayenge. Dont worry.."And she turned to leave as he held her hand.

"Please ruko na. Muze bada ajeeb lag raha hain logon ko yun greet karne me. Jab bhi yaha parties hoti hain, ye kaam generally mom-dad karte hain."

"Accha? Aur tum kya karte ho?" Gunjan asked him ironically.

"Main? Main party karta hu chashmish..!" samrat said with a grin.

"To aaj mat karo. And let me go, muze aur bhi kaam hain." And she was about to leave , jut then benji came in.

"Hey guys!! Wats up?" benji said enthusiastically.

"Hi benji! " samrat and gunjan said in unison.

"Hey gunjan! Looking great today. Kispe bijli girani hian?" Benji asked looking at gunjan from head to toe, and she felt a little shy at his comments. Samrat also looked at her , and realized that he hadn't looked at her carefully before, maybe because his nervousness.

But now, as he looked at her, he too agreed that she looked stunning in her royal blue salwar, which had silver beads all over. She had accessorized it with matching danglers, and the color contrasted with her ivory complexion very well. She looked heavenly..

"Sam!! Sam' " Benji's voice brought him back on earth.

"Haan bol.." he said nervously.

"Kaha kho gaya tha'?" Benji asked.

"Kahi nahi dude.." Samrat shrugged.

"Achha, ye diya kaha reh gayi yaaar?" Benji scanned the crowd for diya.

"Arey dude, maine to use invite hi nahi kiya.." Samrat said and gunjan controlled her laughter.

"Kya.. tune? Arey.. karna chahiye tha na'" Benji was almost heartbroken at the fact that Diya was not coming to the party.

"Hey guys!!" Benji turned around, to find Diya, walking towards them. He sighed with relief, and realizing that samrat was playing around with him, he smacked Samrat.

"Hi Diya, how are you?" Said gunjan.

"I am fine dear, and you are looking awesome.." Diya complemented her.

Benji was about to say something when Gunjan interrupted him, "Hey samrat, ab tumhe benji ki company hain. To ab ham chalet hain, tum log sambhal lena.. ok?" She said this and took diya with her.

"Arey yaar, main abhi kuch bola bhi nahi tha usse.. aur ye Gunjan use le gayi.. these girls!!" Benji said with disappointment.

"I know! Chal, Kam kar le'" said samrat while watching benji's small face.

''''''.

"Hello, Rajat uncle..? kahan hain aap?"Suhani said , her voice was slightly agitated.

"Bas , aa hi rahe hain." Rajat. Whispered from the other side of the line.

"Itni der kaha laga di aapne?"

"Arey ham aadhe ghante pehle hi pahuch jaate. Magar tumhare Dad ko beech me hi icecream khane ka man kiya, to rukna pada. Main kuch keh bhi nahi saka. Subah se unhe keh raha tha, jaldi kya hain, aaram se celebrate karenge, aur ab jaldi karta to unhe shak ho jata na..?"

"Accha accha, thik hain. Aap kaha hain abhi." Suhani asked.

"Main bas enter karne hi wala hu aur tumhare mom dad mere 10 feet piche hain. Waise sab set hain na?" He said as he entered the hall.

"Haan baba sab set hain. Accha thik hain main ab lights off kar deti hu." She cut the phone and instructed samrat to turn off the lights.

When Jatin and shilpa reached there, the hall was completely dark, there was no sign of movement.

"Ye lights ko kya hua?" Jatin said and shilpa held his hand for support.

"Shilpa, itne saal ho gaye shaadi ko, par firbhi, ab bhi andhere se dark e jab bhi tum mera haath pakadti ho naa' to aisa lagta hain ke'"

And just then lights came, and everyone in the hall shouted, "Kaisa lagta hain'?"

Jatin and shilpa stood there, surprised and embarrassed. They glanced around them and found their little angels, suhani and samrat, smiling at them. Shilpa called them and they ran to hug their parents.

"Happy anniversary mom, happy anniversary dad!!" samrat and suhani greeted them.

"Thank you beta..We are so surprised.. love you my angels.." Jatin said hugging them. Shilpa was so overwhelmed by everything that words left her mouth. Tears of joy flowed from her eyes as she looked at her kids with love.

"Happy anniversary Uncle, happy anniversary Aunty!!" Gunjan came there and greeted them.

"Thank you beta. To tum bhi shamil thi in sab me?" Jatin asked curiously.

"Haan. Aur main bhi.. Par tumne bataya nahi ke jab bhabhi aaj bhi haath pakadti hain to tuze kaisa lagta hian?" Rajat joined them.

"Tuze to main baad me dekh lunga. Tu bhi shamil tha na in sab main?" Jatin asked playfully and hugged Rajat as he wished them.

Samrat escaped from there as the teasing session between those two men started, and went to the stage.

"Hello, everybody." The voice immediately sought everyone's attention. Samrat was standing on the stage , holding a mike, Smiling.

"Today's a very special day for two very special people in my life. Mom and Dad. Today's their .. umm.. suhani..?" he leaned towards her as suhani corrected him, and continued, "so , today's their 30th anniversary and still as we saw sometime back, that their chemistry still works.." many people laughed at this point and samrat paused, joining them, "So , I wish a very happy anniversary to mom-dad. Hey guys, we love you..!" and he threw a kiss at them. Jatin caught the kiss and shilpa just blushed.

"Pagal hain ye.." she said with a smile.

"And now, may I take the pleasure to present before you, a great artist, who'll show her skills to all of us." As samrat continued, everyone looked at him with curiosity, suhani, with a smile and gunjan with confusion.

"Artist.. who? Sab arrange karte waqt ye to discuss nahi kiya tha.." she said to suhani.

"Shhh.. listen to him.." Suhani made a serious face and looked at samrat.

"This artist is a fresh talent. This is the first time she'll perform publically. So I request Miss Gunjan bhushan to come on stage, please give her a big hand.." As samrat said this , gunjan shook her head with disbelief.

"No.. no.. I cant.." she said to samrat who came down from the stage to her.

"Of course you can , chashmish. Tumhe karna hi hoga." Samrat insisted. Gunjan's nervousness grew as she saw two boys placing her keyboard on stage.

"Arey par muze kuch yaad nahi aa raha."She said hesitatingly.

"Stage pe jao, kuch na kuch jaroor yaad aa jayega." Samrat said with a smile and took gunjan's hand into his. He took her on the stage and gave the mike, and came down. Gunjan looked at her audience, they were watching her with curiosity. Her eyes soon found her dad smiling at her, she smiled back, took a deep breathe, closed her eyes and remembered her mother. Her heart was filled by the tune her mother loved the most, and she started playing the song.

(Note:- Those who don't know the song, please listen to the youtube video)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JlfPY8lzwMk&feature=related [/YOUTUBE]

Silence took over the hall as Gunjan's finger started dancing on the keys. Everyone was mesmerized as she started singing.

When I was just a little girl
I asked my mother, what will I be
Will I be pretty, will I be rich
Here's what she said to me.

Que Sera, Sera,

Whatever will be, will be
The future's not ours, to see
Que Sera, Sera
What will be, will be.


[ Gunjan almost had tears as she sang these lines, occasionally looking at her dad. Suhani looked at her mom and hugged her while, her mom caressed her. Samrat walked to his mom and hugged her.]


When I was young, I fell in love
I asked my sweetheart what lies ahead
Will we have rainbows, day after day
Here's what my sweetheart said.


[a smile played on her lips as she sang these lines dreamily, maybe thinking about her dream man. Just like her mother got her father.


Que Sera, Sera,
Whatever will be, will be
The future's not ours, to see
Que Sera, Sera
What will be, will be.

As gunjan played the ending notes, the hall was filled with applaud. Gunjan smiled with moist eyes and looked at her dad. Rajat had tears in his eyes, he missed his wife so much. This was her favorite song and she used to sing this when gunjan was very small, to make her sleep. This was gunjan's favorite too.

She came down from the stage and ran into her fathers arms, who kissed her forehead lovingly.

"Magical!!" Gunjan turned around as she heard Samrat's voice. He looked at her like he was watching at the 8th wonder of the world, "I have no words. It was simply' Magical!!" He said searching for words.

"thank you." Gunjan blushed at his praise.

"By the way, whats the meaning of 'Que sera sera?'", Asked samrat.

"Whatever will be, will be. Jo hona hai, wo hoga!" Gunjan explained and soon was surrounded by people who were praising her.

Samrat thought about the line' whatever will be.. will be!.. He looked at Gunjan, and at the same moment , she also looked at him. They exchanged smile.

"Que.. sera .. sera.." Suhani's voice broke his eye contact with Gunjan.

"Hey sue, nice line na? Que sera sera.." Samrat asked her enthusiastically.

"Yeah well, everything related to gunjan is nice for you Charlie.." she said grinning.

"Sue, you started it again.. I'm outta here.." samrat said and walked away..

"are suno toh.. gaya!" suhani smiled at herself, "But I do like the line.. Que sera sera.. jo hona hain wo to hoga hi.. I hope in dono me kuch ho jaye.." she said to herself.

The song kept playing in her mind during rest of the night.

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Edited by amy00487 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow wow amy dear awesome update wow so sajan were matching matching wearing blue wowwww sammy must be looking handsome in blue hehe anyways awww such an awesome suprise by Sammy n suhaani dey r awesome son-daughter lolz n den wow loveeee da song gunji sang so meaningful song loved it do continue soon now

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