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@Mrs.Hulk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: coolvini4u
*EDITED*😆😆

Hey Prinz 🤗😆masiiiiiiiiii

Yayyy!! m first again 🥳😃

Wow !! that was a superb update.. . 😆thankuuu
Ridz and Armaan going to shimla 😍
Anuraag and taani scenes were really nice... Taani!! kuch aur toh bolna seekh yaar 🤣😆lagta to yehi hai....illiterate kahika.....(dill k mamle main)
Maan Geet definitely fought isnt it? m sure Maan got late cz of her 🤣... 😆u'll see actually what happen in the next part😳😆😆😆

Cnt soon... hoping for AR meet next 😉😆 ..thanx 4 d pm.. 😆my pleasure😃

Love
Vini

Originally posted by: kashishk
Hey Prinz,
Just caught up with ur FF, I am truly loving it.😆i am glad u like it yaar
All the character are awesome and plus these characters are from the only serials I am watching so I am really enjoying it.😃
Though I would love to see RM but Maaneet s hi kaam chala loungi :)😆RM is always first...But Maneet is now-a-days hot obsession..😳
So, Armaan and Ridhima are going to meet each other in the nest part, that's gonna be nice :D
Lagta hai Geet and Maan ki already fight ho chuki 🤣😆yaaa.....right😛
Now please continue soon and thanks for the PM :).😆glad u like it...next part is on it's way😃

Luv u<333love u more😃
Kashish

Originally posted by: nandinidev
Heyy Prinz! 🤗

Nice work! Shimla, eh? Sounds nice and exciting...hehe...😉

Looking forward to more! 😊

Loads of love and cheers! 😃

thank u nandini😃

Originally posted by: ankitajain94
nice one continue soon

thanks dear....😃

Originally posted by: RUBA-SIDDIQUI
Hey prinz
amazing part
really liked it
continue soon
thnx for the pm dear

Thank u😳

Originally posted by: ffkhan
OMG Prinz nice update! And thank u soo much for adding me in PM list!😃🤗

thanks Faz😛...my pleasure

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Heyyyyyyy PP
Kya baat hai!
Taani ko "hmm" bolne ke alawa aur kuch nahi aata kya? 😆
N AR in Shimla????
Waiting..........
Lovely part
Take care

😆haa....thanks ashu😛

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
Awesome update
loved it
can't wait 4 AR 2 meet
anurag is so funny
how do maan and geet know each other
can't wait 2 find out
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Thanks...ya u'll find out soon😃

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@Mrs.Hulk

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: luv07prida
lovely update prinz
ek dum real real lag raha hain

do update soon😃

Thanks Ms. Bossy...glad u r liking it😃

Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan
Heyyyyyyyyyy Prinzu .😆hey rashgulla

looks like i m late again 😆
Sorry was not able to come online .😆it's okay😃

Coming to the part it was just Greatttttttttttttttttttttttttt.
WOW waiting for AR meeting . Ridz was behaving like a nervous skul girl going to a new skul alone lolz😆
looks like Maan & geet have started with their routine (fights) lolz😆as usual
& Tanni myyyyyyy GOD isse Hmm ke ilava kuch or bolna kab aayega hehe.😆nahi aata usse bolna😛

Loving this FF like hell .😆awww....thanks😃
I watch all the shows so i m loving it even more.

Urs Rashgulla 😆😆ur's naughty princess😳

Originally posted by: kuhus_era
HI PRRINI ..............
DONO PARTS MAST THE .....
LOVED THEM....
AR KO MILWA DE JALDI SE ....

AUR UPDATE SOON....
ABHI JAYING BAD ME AUR COMMENT KARUNGI..... YE KAMINA HOD CHILLA RAHA HAI MUZE....

CHAL BBYE TAKE CARE
LOVE YOU

KUHU

..

Thanks Kuhu di.....😃

Originally posted by: sammy4u
awesome parts dear
loved them

Thanks sammy😃

Originally posted by: hunder
prin i know i am an idiot and a lazy soul that i have not up0dated my comment yet, just give me 1 week i will pakka read and give a mahabharat comment

I am still waiting for it😛

Originally posted by: aparajhita
PRINYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY amar SP..🤗🤣😆APSYYYYYYYYYY amar SP😆😆

I am so sorry for the late reply re...r ami ektu lazy hoygechilaam majhe...tai reply korini..😳🤣😆it's okay😃

Kintu ekhon...read both the parts in one go. 😃

Loved it to the core re...just mind-blowing writing. 👏 The way you managed the whole thing, which definitely becomes difficult with so many characters in hand, was BRILLIANT. ⭐️😆Thanku😳

Armaan the flirt 😉...Riddhima the sweet girl 😃...Geet the BADBOLI one 😆...Anurag and Taani the confused ones...🤣....and Maan the aggressive one 😳😆.....All the characters portrayed are so realistic and beautiful...you bet why I chose to read your PM when I have 75 unread PMs. 😃😆Love you MORE for that😳

Kintu ekta kotha...tui nijer AE JI ke Riddhima-r shonge dekhbi ki bhabe..? 😲🤣🤣😆i'll manage😭😆😆😆

And Maan Angry young man ache bolei PRITHVI er enter hovar joruri..to give Maan a tough COMPETITION..🤣🤣😆we will see😳😆😆

Update soon re..and thanks for waiting patiently for my comment. 😳😆😆u welcome😛😆

Loads of love,
Apsy (SP).

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@Mrs.Hulk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: pinkss
hey Prini
when r u updating da next part???

plz update sooon...waiting waiting waiting!!!!

lots of love

JIA!!!

😆the next part is on it's way..Thanks😃

Originally posted by: princess52
hey prinzz...😆Habziiiiiiiiiiiiii
sorry yaar i knwo mene 2 parts ke liye comment nahi kiya
i feel so bad..but u knwo teh reason na??
but now i iwll surelyy be regular pakka se😆 it's okay😳

teh parts swere qamazing shurru se lekar abhi tuk😆really??? thanku😳
intro mein u talked abut mind n hearttt gosshh tht was aazingi aactlyyy read it twice
nn teh parts til now amazing😃glad u like it😃😃
storyy is gping reallys mooth i m loving it
plzz continee sooon n doo pm me sure yaar😛

love u 😆Love u more
ur newtson sisUr anpar dr😳😆😆

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
heyy dear
nice ff
plzz add me to ur pm list
thx
dhruvika

Thanks.....will definitely Pm u😳

Originally posted by: cutee987
superb parts yaar , thanks for pm me
and plz continue soon
eagarly waiting for next update.

Thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

PCQ🤗

Gal m so sorry, me is late in commenting but well finally read ur part 2 after so long and wow I love the way u write these parts. M eagerly waiting for Geet & Maan's convo 😛 haha so defo continue soon.

TB ❤️

it's okay TB😳.....glad u like the parts....Thanku😃love ya😛

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL
i bet unki gadi takra gayi th i...😆 sorry for not replying on the first part and replying late on this one..sorry sorry sorry...BUt man this was soo f**kin funny..i cracked upp soo hard!! uhmaziin update..accha jaldi update kar kamini

😆😆we will see.....it's okay kamini...itni sorry maat bol,.......😆part is on it's way.....Thanks😃

Originally posted by: diyaa1pk
hmmmm...looks like fun...count me in ....

Thanks for liking it😃will Pm u....😛

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@Mrs.Hulk

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

ankitajain94, cutee987, diyaa1pk, dhruvikaluvsKSG, Sweet_Ashum, dmg_mjht, sammy4u, nandinidev, ARMAANKSGFAN, dazzling_armaan, ffkhan, princess52, aparajhita, aRohAAnGeL, coolvini4u,

Thank u so much guys.....😃😃

Okay....Now really really sorry for not updating earlier......i was kinda thinking of stop writing....But change my decision......THANK u HABZi......this part is dedicated to u....love you.......Now....enjoy the part guys😃

~~PART 3~~

Maan And Geet shouted together

BoTH : TUM!!!😲

Geet : hey Baba ji...lagta hai aaj to mera din hi kharab hai(looking Upward)

Maan : Oh God...tum mere picha karte karte yaha task pohoch gayyi????😡

Geet : Oye...Hello Mr. Whatever u are...u have NO right to talk with me like that.😡

Maan : Maan aaj tera din pehle se hi kharab tha aab iss churel ko bhej diya aur kharab karne(blabbering under breath)😆

Geet : Tumne mujhe Churel kaha?????😡😡

Maan : ekdum sahi suna tumne😛...Churel se jada khatarnak dikhti ho tum.😡😆

Geet : UUU😡😡......mujhe churel bulaya...Itni himmat???😡😡U dusht Danav😡..Das saar wala Ravan😡...Jungle k tarzaan😡(OMG!..it's funny😆😆😆)......kire pare tere mu par😡...mujhe jante nahi ho tum😡.....

they started shouting on eachother ( Hoshiyaar Guys)😉😆😆😆

Maan was shocked to hear and couldn't imagine someone was calling him with Those names.....

On the other Hand...ADI knew How his Boss was....he was afraid to see maan's ANGRY FACE...and praying ki ye JUWALA MUKHI phat na jate.....😆😆

Anurag and Tanni was shocked too...they didn't even know what was happening there.......(ullu ke pattho😆😆😆..unhe rok bhi nahi sakta...dikhta nahi waha WWF shuru hone k kagar pe hai😛😆😆)

Atlast...Taani got some AKKAL and went to stop Geet😳

Taani : Geet....bas kar yaar....kya bol rahi hai??😕

Geet : ek dum thik bol rahi hu...tu nahi janti aise logo ko...janbuj k mujhse jhagra karne aaya hai...Upar se mujhe churel bulaya😡....main isse nahi chodungi.....

Taani : Geet ye humare clients hai yaar..tujhe koi galat fehmi huyi hai...😕

Geet : GALAT FEHMI MY FOOT😡...subhe mere hi piche para huya hai ye DUSHT DANAV...😡

taani : subha se??😕

Geet : Ha subha se..

~~~Flash Back~~~

yaad hai na WWF😉😆😆.......ting ting ting...
ROUND ONE😆😆

Maan & Adi was in the Car...meanwhile maan phone rang and it's DADI...

on phone

Maan : hello..Ji Dadi boliye.(while looking in the file)

Dadi : maan main mandir pe tumhara Intejaar kar rahi hu..kaha hai aap???

maan : Mandir???😕 dadi ma..meri clients k saath meeting hai...main abhi mandir kaise aa sakti hu...i will be late.😕

Dadi : Appne mujhse promise kiya tha ki aap mere saath aaj mandir aayege...aur aapko aana hi parega.(dhongi DADI-so much natak yaar😆😆😆)

Maan : par Dadi ma.....😕

Dadi : No...main aapka intejaar kar rahi hu....aur aap mujhse milne mandir aa rahe hai...and that's final....and she cut the call.

Maan : Lo aab erk aur musibaat....

maan reached the temple.....and saw dadi talking with some girl

Maan : dadi ma.....kya baat hai....jaldi boliye mujhe der ho rahi hai...

dadima :...aree maan beta aao aao....isse milo..ye hai chandni..😃

chandi smiled looking at maan😳..and maan was looking otherside..then he held dadima's hand and took her to a side....

Maan : maine aapse pehle bhi kaha na....mujhe abhi koi shaadi nahi karni...aap plz mere liye ladki dekhna band kardo...

and saying so he left in hurry from there with ADI...isse pehle ki Dadima phirse pakad le😆😆...maan was walking very fast and crushed with some one....and fall down...and to his Phuti kismat that person is none other than our BELOVED GEET😆😆

Maan : dekh k nahi chal sakti???😡

Geet : kya main dekh kar nahi chal sakti???😡dhakka tumne lagaya...maine nahi...main thik hi chal rahi th...tum hi ho jo aapni aanke ghar pe bhul aaye ho😆

Maan : Oh plz...aab bahane maat banao....pehle mujhe girati ho uske baad aab mujhse hi lad rahe ho.

Geet : U.....how dare u shouting at me??.....tum jante nahi ho mujhe(ya...PRESIDENT of INdia na😆😆😆)

and their fighting going on.....Adi was like....in space... suddenly...when his eardrums couldn't take the shouting anymore

he said....Maan sir...humain meeting k liye der ho rahi hai...let's go....
and he took him from there.....Geet was still doing her chapad chapad.....(bolne wali machine😆😆)

~~~FlashBack end~~~

Taani : Geet to itni choti si baat ko leke itna kyu jagad rahi hai???😕

Geet : choti si baat???😲😲....ye tujhe choti si baat lagti hai...ek to pehle dhakka mara......upar se mujhe hi suna raha tha....and finaaly....meri car ki head light bhi tod di😡

ANURAG & TAANi : ye car ki headlight bich main kaha se aa gayya????😕😕

Maan : Car ki headlight tumne todi😡.....gaari chalani nahi aati...aa gayyi road pe...huh😡

~~~Flashback~~~

ting ting ting...ROUND 2😆😆😆

ADI : sir...plzz shant ho jayiye...Bhul jayiye uss incident ko.

Maan : mujhe .....mujhe RAVAN bulaya😡.....main dusht danav😡.....i can't believe this...😡

suddenly the car stop and THUD!!!!!🤢

Maan : kya hua????...😕😡

Driver : sir samne se kisine thok di...

maan :jara dekho...

driver came out and argueing with sumone.....after 10 mins...maan came out of the car...and saw GEET again...

Maan :...Tum phirse???

Geet : Oh..ye tumhari car hai...tabhi to main sochu...

Maan : what meri car!!....gari chalana aata nahi....aa gayye kartab dikhane...😡😆😆

Geet : what do u mean by that....tumhare driver dekh k nahi chala...aur thok diya.....meri car ki headlights tut gayyi.....upar se ye shanpatti dikha rahe ho

Maan : what!!....argggg!!😡😡....meri picha chodne ka kitna loge tum??😡

Geet : hah...what!!(boiling)😡😡

and they fight again over ......but jam lag gayya aur round khatam ho gayya😆😆....and they go in the own cars cursing eachother under breath.....

~~~Flashback end~~~

Anurag and taani was listening carefully.....

after listen to them...they came to know.....jualamukhi dono taraf hai....aur kabhi bhi phat jayega....so they tried to ignore the matter😳😆😆(intelligency thodi bachi hai abhi tak)😆😆😆

Anurag : achcha guys...stop fighting....let's continue with meeting.

and they sat to do the meeting ATLAST😆😆......throughout the meeting .Adi was giving the presentation....maan & Geet was looking at eachother Angerly cursing eachother in mind....(kabhi nahi sudhrenge😆😆😆)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

On the otherside....Riddhima just reached Shimla.....she went to the place where they told....It was like a camp....cold all around in shimla....riddhima was walking after the man who was leading her luggage to her room...

she was looking around....It's so beautiful all around.....she didn't know where she was going....suddenly she banged with someone and fall down.....well almost fall down😉...when two strong arms Held her waist and save her from falling....she closed her eyes tightly....she was so afraid suddenly....But don't know y she felt relax in those arms.....those was made her feel so protective....😳

she opened her eyes....and saw the most amazing sight 😍.....pair of grey eyes which looking at her so lovely😳........suddenly he said.." Beautiful"😊...

and they kept on looking at eachother..................

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TO BE CONTINUED...😛

Precap : Kuch kuch hota hai😳😆

.................................................................

Phew....My fingers are paining😆😆
here is the part guys😛
Hope u guys will like it😳
sorry again for late update again😳
Comment or criticize guys😃
u r my only encouragement😳😆😆
Thank u guys😃

Lots of love
prinz😳

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Me first!!!!
Wohooooo
Now that's what I call "Toofan mail"! 😆
I looooooooved the part
OMG!!!
What WWF fights!!!
The "ting tings" were awesome
😆
N the small part abt AR was also cute 😳
Thanks for the PM in advance
😆
Take care
Love,
Tutti fruti

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago

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diyaa1pk

@diyaa1pk

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#86

🤣

🤣totally love it ......itnnay pyarey pyarey words geet ne use kiyye maan ke liyye....wow.....she mst be havng a dictionary of abuses......im impressed....nd soo waiting for kuch kuch hota hai ......kahein pyar na hoo jai .......

phir millenge next update main .....

bye

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ffkhan

@ffkhan

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

At last u have updated.

Nice update. Specially loved Maneet arguement scene.🤣

Very nice. Continue soon.😛

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Sammy

@sammy4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#88

great update yaar
loved it
WWF was awesome (all three rounds)

Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago

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aparajhita

@.Aparajhita.

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

reserved.

BTW Mrs. Ranchordas...agar main yeh bhool jaun ki maine kahan post reserve kiya hai to separate post banaungi..🤣
Aur agar main edit karna hi bhool jaun to ek reminder PM please. 🤣🤣

Edited by aparajhita - 15 years ago