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Hey Nandini...🤗

Reserved...!

Have a look at my previous comment on page 54 :)

i dunno wat to say...

Originally posted by: Phatty16

Reserved! I'm coming back ASAP ;)

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As I began to read your brilliant words, I was anticipating so much. What's going to happen this time? How will Armaan and Ridhima react? I was so excited to read this update, it scares me to think what'll happen when I read your conclusion!

As I read the first couple of diary entries I couldn't help but go "Aww". They both are insanely in love with each other. They're both VERY committed to each other, but the mere fact that Armaan left to come back to see his Lady Love with Sid, was heart breaking. I loved how you described their emotions! They were bang on, so correct! I loved the way you had incorporated the depth of their emotions so well into their diary entries.

Sitting here and reading your words, I could actually picture Armaan and Ridhima writing in their diaries expressing themselves so feebly. You had written their reactions SO well, and the way you depicted their emotions, was brilliant. I love you for that! It's hard to sit here and think how you're going to type out the next part, and how you're going to express ones view, I know, I've tried millions of times, and it's hard. But you my love, you are an amazing writer! I love the way you write!

As I sit my bum on this chair and swivel around trying to think of my emotions after reading this, the only thing that comes to mind is the fact that what you wrote was utter brilliance. I haven't EVER connected to a story SO well. The way you wrote Ridhima's emotions, was beautiful. I loved the fact that she FELT Armaan's presence! That was beautiful! I pitied Armaan at that moment. To see Ridhima with Siddhant, eek.

Oh my, Ridhima cutting a muffin for Armaan's birthday? That gesture touched me. Not even kidding, it did. I loved that though they're parted, HE is still a part of her. He's still her other half, and he still has a bond of love which is shared with her. Brilliant!

AH! So as I read the part of their reunion, I was sitting here, my heart beat racing, my fingers on the mouse scrolling down as fast as I can to see what's happening now, AH. It was so well written! I couldn't stop reading. My eyes were racing through your words trying to find the connection, and bingo! There it was. Armaan met Ridhima again. Of all the places, at a conference! Hayye. BEAUTIFUL writing, love! My heart is still beating fast. As I was reading; Armaan walking towards the podium, towards Nikhil, towards Ridhima... and leaving nothing but the whiff of his cologne! loved it! It was pretty epic now that I think about it... so close, yet so far away!

So I know I'm writing a super long comment, but I can't help but comment on each part of your update! Ah, It's beautifully written hun! WOAH. So they met AGAIN at Sanjeevni? Damn. The way you wrote our their entrance, walking into the hospital, was great! Once again, my heart was racing, to see them meet and reunite, but none of that happening - instead they greet each other like strangers! Uh-oh. The response to Armaan's simple question left Armaan aghast. I couldn't believe the way things had turned out! Eek. Sid is married to Tia, phew! I saw that one coming, but Ridhima's rejection? Nada, nope. I didn't see that one coming! Wow.

Girl, you write so brilliantly, I'm kind of REALLY jealous of your skills. This was an absolute heart breaking/warming update. I LOVED it! Great writing.
<33.

PS. Sorry for the lambaaaa comment, got carried away 😳