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Posted: 14 years ago
Here is my next update guys. It also non editable so forgive me for that but i promised to complete it before last date.So i decided to post the part without editing. Bare me for my mistake.I again say pay more attention on story rather than words. Part 14
Love doesn't understand Logic
Part 15

Nikki lends on Abhi on bed but before she move he swirl her down under his while holding her both wrist in his palm tightly on both side of her face. Nikki gasps at his action, look at her handcuff hand in his than try to move but Abhi's strong muscle vain her all effort. Nikki weekly replied while swallow a lump in her throat "Move" and he start moving toward her make her head rest completely on bed. Nikki lips start shivering as he is approaching, he capture her in his and loosen his hand grip on her. His hand goes to her back to pull her more into that kiss while her hands digging dip in his hair. First they start of gently teasing each other lips but as soon their hands go each other back their mouth open wide to take other all. Their tongues battling and exploring each other deep down as their kiss harden their hand grips on their back increases. They broke their kiss in between to get some oxygen but again take other lips into one to taste each other more. Their passion drawing them into more each other as if they couldn't survive if they broke up, they swirl on over each other at time by time but didn't let go each other. They get intoxicated with their taste and their passion works like a drug to them which taking them into pleasure.

The phone start ringing but no one is able to break up, Nikki extends her hand toward it in order to off it but Abhi thinks that she is trying to pick it up so pull her hand by his. Their struggling of hands over phone make the speaker button to on "Hello Nikki, when will you going to come we are waiting for you at dinner". Armaan voice snaps them out from their pleasure of kiss, Nikki calls with heavy voice "Armaan" and move from under him, sit close to phone which is on bedside table as if Armaan watches her what she is doing with him. Abhi also move to sit next to her, listen to him and Armaan question "Why are you breathing so heavy? Are you alright? Do I come to pick you up?" Nikki wide her eyes as if her act got caught and fast breathing which she taking to come on normal is stopped to hear that. Abhi roll her eyes on his question and look toward her as if not interested in his talking. When Armaan didn't get answer he asked "Nikki, what are you doing?" to which Nikki nervously repeats his question "What am I doing?" and look at him with nervousness.

Nikki is behaving like someone is taking her exam and she going to fail in it as she doesn't have the answer of any of his question. Nikki replied hesitatingly by gulping dry lump in her throat "Nothing. I am fine". Armaan question unaware that phone is on speaker phone "What is that Modi doing? Is he scaring and threatening you? That's why you tense and breathing heavily, don't worry Nikki don't forget your best friend still alive to save you from that devil". Nikki amused on her friend wildest imagination, look at Abhi who making quizzing look through narrow his eyes. Nikki immediately answer before Armaan start making another intuition "Armaan, there is nothing like that. Ok" but Armaan retort "Than why didn't you answer my question?" Abhi stopping himself for long as Nikki sitting beside but he had enough "Dr. Armaan". Abhi voice startle Armaan, he throws his phone toward Ridhimma who is coming from a kitchen and she caught it but gives confuse look to him in order to ask what happen.

Abhi again asked "Armaan" but Ridhimma heard and replied in order to defense him "Dr. Modi actually I told him to call you for inviting at dinner with us". Abhi becomes soft to hear Ridhimma voice "Ridhimma I don't think'." but she cuts off him "Dr. Modi when you'll come to drop Nikki, you going to have a dinner with us. Please". Abhi agrees, cut the phone and told Nikki to get ready as they have to leave for AR's home before leaving the room.

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After cutting the phone Armaan asked "Why did you call that Modi for dinner?" Ridhimma shoot her eyes to him first than asked "Why did you call there when I told you not to disturb them? Armaan stop interfering in their life, for god sake whether you like it or not accept that Nikki is happy with him. By the way in any case I have already decide that Abhimanyu is going to have a dinner with us whether you called him or not". Armaan asked like a kid "Why?" to which Ridhimma reluctantly answered "You better start mingling with him as he is going to be your best friend Nikki's life partner" and patted on his cheek.

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Abhi knock at door, get inside the room after she said yes to find Nikki standing near bed back to her white dress. He smilingly comes toward her, she thought he is going to carry her again like he brought her here. He bend to pick the key from bed when Nikki stretch her hands in order to take him in arms but down it before he catch it after stretching from bed. Abhi smilingly ask "You are ready. Let's go" and Nikki gives artificial long smile to him and walk out. Abhi bring her at AR's home back without talking much to her during the journey, it makes Nikki confuse at one time he is so into her and other time behave as if nothing happen between them.

Abhi and Nikki enter the home where Abhi doesn't get warm welcome from Armaan but Ridhimma is very glad to see both of them together. All four Abhi, Nikki, Armaan and Ridhimma sat on dinner table with opposite of their partner. Ridhimma bring food to serve all of them and settle herself and Armaan inquisitively watching all Abhi's action consciously unaware of surrounding. Abhi inhale to take the smell of exotic fragrance of food with close eyes and compliment "Hmmm Smells good". Ridhimma smiled on his compliment but Armaan confusedly asked "What smell good?" in order to think hard what is he smelling near Ridhimma. Ridhimma pressed her lips in arrogance as he doesn't notice her cooking food and replied to Abhi "Avoid him. Taste it than tell me whether it is good as it smell". Armaan stand from his seat, scream "What?" with wide open eyes but Abhi, Ridhimma and Nikki look at him confusingly. Armaan taunt Abhi "Why are your eyes always on my girl? First Nikki than Ridhimma" to which Abhi shockingly stand from his seat "WHAT?'

Ridhimma yelled at him "Dr. Modi is talking about my cooking food which definitely you didn't notice" and turn toward Abhi apologetically said "I am really sorry Dr. Modi on behalf of Armaan. I don't know what I '". Abhi interrupt her in between to stop her from apologize further "It's ok Ridhimma, you need not to apologize for other fault. I have my sympathy with you" and take his seat again. Armaan uneasily settle himself back on seat and embarrassingly replied "I am sorry Dr. Modi" but Abhi shakes his head on his childish reaction "Take my one advice freely. If you stop jumping on conclusion in advance than you'll need not to apologize me or anyone else". Nikki watching Abhi who is not even given single glance to her since the time they came here and Armaan keep saying sorry to Ridhimma with his eyes but she is avoiding his pleading.

Nikki look under the table where Abhi's leg stretched toward her than she puts off her one slipper while looking at him who totally engrossed in food. Abhi pull his leg back while Armaan stretches his own while Nikki moves her toe to tickle Abhi's leg but touch Armaan by mistake. Nikki start tickling with her toe on leg thinking its Abhi who completely unaware of her act and Armaan start giggling due to tickling on his leg thinking that finally Ridhimma forgive him. Abhi finds Nikki eyes on him with amusement look on her face, she raised her brow with a smile and in return Abhi raised his also in puzzlement. Ridhimma watch Armaan giggling which make her fumes that he is smiling and having fun when he knows she is upset with him. Ridhimma get up immediately to collect the plates while Abhi also stand up and said "Let me help you out in this". Armaan and Nikki get shocked to watch them standing and than look at each other who are only sitting. Both said in unison "YOU" which draw Abhi and Ridz attention toward them and both pull their leg back. Armaan start laughing a loud while Nikki gets fidgeting in embarrassment but both Abhi and Ridz get confuse on their abrupt behavior.

Ridz angrily asked "Why are you laughing Armaan?" to which he is going to answer in split but Nikki stuffed his mouth with prantha. Abhi look at Nikki weirdly and trying to judge her behavior but Armaan trying to speak with stuffed mouth. Seeing another prantha on Nikki's hand, Armaan run away from there by keeping his hand on mouth and she run after him. Abhi and Ridz watch them both like badminton ball moving too and fro motion as they are pacing in the room like cat and mouse. Abhi said with narrow brow without turning "I know from the beginning that both are crazy but it look like their craziness is increase with day passing". Ridhimma raised her brow and look above "I'll pray for both us from god" and breathe out in defeat.

Armaan stop her hand in midway to stuff him more and split hurriedly "She tickled my leg under table by mistake to consider mine as Abhimanyu". Ridz and Abhi eyes get widen to hear this, while Ridz split in laugh as Armaan but Abhi get embraces to watch them both laughing a loud. Nikki gives hard elbow to Armaan which make him fall on sofa still in split of laugh and run out in lawn. Abhi silently left from there and go in search of Nikki out, where he finds her seating on the bench and blabbing "Stupid, idiot what is the need to split in front of all?" Abhi goes, sit next to her which silence her and she stand up to leave from there but Abhi hold her wrist from behind. Nikki kept tugging her hand from his hold but he stands behind her and she jerk her hand from his grip but Abhi pull her back to him by putting her on her abdomen to apply force. Nikki's back clasp with his chest, his hand grip increases on her stomach which makes her shiver with anticipation. Abhi bend his head in her hair, his breathe tickle her on ear, his hand warmth reaches inside her kurti which make her close eyes. Nikki put one of her hand on his which lying on her stomach while other capture by Abhi's other hand whose finger making their way into between her to entwined.

Abhi start kissing her neck gently which making Nikki's knee go weak to fall down but Abhi strong grip around her body stopping her fall. Nikki turns her face to give her lips to him, he take her into his and kiss her gently until don't hear the voice calling Nikki inside. Abhi broke kiss, loosen his grip on her said "I think I should go now" but Nikki protest to stay more. Abhi said with seriousness "Don't stop me. Today I don't have any control on my feelings of getting you back in my life. Today I am scared of my own feeling for you. Let this day pass to control myself before I brake all barriers. Bye" and kiss her on cheek before leaving.

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Next day

Abhi takes Nikki in one flat, Nikki asked after entering in it "Whose house is this? To which Abhi answer "Right now no ones but soon going to be". Nikki look every corner of house than Abhi said "You know what is specialty of this house?" Nikki look at him perplexed and Abhi answer with grin "Hospital is near about by 30 min, Market is 5 min far and School is 15 min far". Nikki is surprised to hear this as this is the same house which she told to him to buy for them after getting married. Abhi smiles to watch her eyes glistering with tears and continue "Sorry but my budget for the marriage is 15 lakhs if you adjust in it". Nikki run toward him, throws her arms around his neck and he put his hand around her small waist tightly to pull her from ground in order to twirl her round and round. He put her down as he finish her twirl around and said "But there is one problem". Nikki look at him confusingly "WHAT?" while keep her hand around his neck and Abhi answer "We are going to have two kids as they get company of each other but if they both fight with each other than don't you think we have to think about more company for them". Nikki embarrasses with his comment, playfully hit him on his chest and Abhi also smile to watch the expression on her face. Nikki hide her head in his chest and he gather her in his embrace possessively.

Nikki asked "When did you purchase this" by keeping her head on his chest and he answer "During the six month when you are far from me inspite of around me" by leaning against the wall. Nikki look at him "When you have a house than why didn't you shift here rather than seeking accommodation in hotel". Abhi lower his head in order to meet her eyes "This house I brought for us. Leaving here without you is worse than hell for me. This house realized me more the emptiness in my life without you if I shifted here". Nikki finds Abhi's eyes glistering with tear, she kept her hands on his cheeks and kisses his both eye after lowering his face with his palm. Nikki put her lips on his in no time, her tongue seek entrance in him and draws his tongue in her to claim her. They keep in that position for long time.

After some time

There is raining heavily outside where Abhi is sitting near the window and Nikki is lying between in his stretching leg. Nikki hiding her head in his neck while keeping her eyes closed, her hand on his which holding her abdomen from front and other hand in his. Nikki closed eyes and nose touching his neck, her chin comes underneath his while his finger playing with her to parting her again and again to put his. Nikki felt that there is something in her finger, she open her eyes, sits to watch it and find a diamond ring in her finger which Abhi slid in her. Nikki keep watching her while Abhi wrap his arm around her and asked "Marry me Nikki. I can't stay away from you long, not a single day". Nikki eyes get moist to hear that, she turn in his wrapping arm and hug me back strongly "I love you Abhi. I have waited for this long. Make me your forever". Abhi hugged her back "I love you too" and hide his head in her neck as she is.

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(Abhi called back in Sanjeevani not only as head but as a board of member and in charge of all Sanjeevani open because of his effort. Nikki also get her job back but on asking Abhi why he joined it again as knowing him well he never accept this offer in first place because their nothing important for him other than his image. He told her "I know you want to be in Sanjeevani with your friends around you. You left it for me than can't I leave my ego for you once". Nikki told their friends that they want to marry each other as soon as possible which make them happy also)

Few days before marriage

Abhi called all Nikki's girl friend to ask "You all know I and Nikki want to marry and it hardly effect me as how we get married but I know it's different for girl. Nikki also dream something about her marriage like all you girl dream. So I want you all to tell me what exactly she dream her marriage. May be she is comfortable in telling you all that as its all girlie talk. Don't tell her that I told you to ask her as I want it surprise for her". All agreed and promise Abhi to help them in this and Boys ready to make arrangement for the wedding.

Day before marriage

All Nikki's friend are there at her house and forcing to her to act as Abhimanyu Modi, first she not agreed but later agree. Nikki told her friends that he admitted his feeling to her first time that to in his old angry mood. Nikki tried to act like him and speak in heavy voice "Galti tumahari hain. Tumahari vajah se itna important project mere haath se nikal gaya. Tumhari vajah se main apne kaam pe concentrate nahin kar pa raha hu. Ek doctor hone k bawajood ek bache ki tarah behave kar raha hu, sirf tumhari vajah se". Abhi comes there as Nikki started but no one notice him and Nikki continued "Sit in the car. Yeh jagah safe nahin or tum akeli ho. Chup chap bedhi raho samjhi, jab dekho bolti rehti hain, bolti rehti hain" and smiles a loud with her friends. Nikki start again with another dialogue "Aur bhi kuch kehna baaki hain kya..." and bump with Abhi whose is standing behind her after she turns. Abhi look at her with no expression, Nikki mumbles "They told me to do so" pointing toward her friends who backs out by saying that its all Nikki idea as Abhi glance at them with same expression as her.

All her friends' moves out from there by wishing her best of luck, Nikki trying to justify herself but Abhi said "I don't need any explanation. You have to be punished for this by making a fun of me infront of them". Abhi words remind her insult of him on pool side and Nikki closed her eyes in order to accept any punishment. Abhi smiles to watch her like that, wraps her arm across her waist to pull her close and put his lips on her before she understand. Nikki opens her eyes in between kiss to watch his expression where his mischievous glance on her told everything, she put her arms around his neck and he pull her from ground to take her on sofa. He put her on sofa gently while kissing her, hover on her in half lying position and moving his hand on her back for soothing.

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Abhi blindfold Nikki and takes her in the wedding venue in his car, Nikki asked "Where are you taking me like this? I watch it first time that Groom kidnaps his own bride before marriage. Abhi why are you not saying anything? I am going to pull this blindfold out". Abhi stops her hand to pull it out "Can't you keep quite for a while? I know I am asking for big favors from you but please atleast for some time". Nikki agrees and Abhi drove her near beach where there wedding venue is set up but she is totally unaware of this. Abhi halt his car, open the door from Nikki's side to guard her out and open her blind fold. Nikki is get surprised to watch the venue as it exactly as how she dream her marriage i.e. fusion of tradition Indian and Christian's marriage on the beach. The venue is decorated with white orchid's flowers and white curtains giving a feel of purity.

Abhi put his hand in her to bring her in where all friends waiting for her who mesmerize to watch her as she dresses in bridal outfit but simple and elegant. Nikki mingles with her friends who congratulating her one by one and told her that Abhi wants the wedding to take place as you dream it. Nikki smiles to hear that, roams her eyes to find it but he is out of sight from her eyes. She heard his voice calling from stage where he is standing with guitar hanging from his neck and standing in front of mike. Abhi said "See It's a wish of my would be wife so if I messed up. Please forgive me".

"Song for one and only my Nikki pehalwaan"smiles

Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu
Tu hi dil ki bekarari
Tu sukoon tu sukoon
Jaoon main ab jab jiss jagah
Paoon main tujhko uss jagah
Saath hoke na ho tu hai
Rubaroo rubaroo

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

Aa tujhe inn baahon mein bhar ke
Aur bhi kar loon main kareeb
Tu juda ho toh lage hai
Aata jaata har pal ajeeb
Iss jahaan mein hai aur na hoga
Mujhsa koi bhi khush naseeb
Tune mujhko dil diya hai
Main hoon tere sabse kareeb

Main ti toh tere dil mein hoon
Main hi toh saanson mein basoon
Tere dil ki dhadkanon mein
Main hi hoon main hi hoon

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

Ohhooo'
Kab bhala ab ye waqt guzre
Kuch pata chalta hi nahi
Jabse mujhko tu mila hai
Hosh kuch bhi apna nahi
Uff ye teri palken ghani si
Chaanv inki hai dilnasheen
Ab kise dar dhoop ka hai
Kyunki hain ye mujhpe bicchi

Tere bina na saans loon
Tere bina na main jiyun
Tere bina na ek pal bhi
Reh sakoon reh sakoon

Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu
Tu hi dil ki bekarari
Tu sukoon tu sukoon

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

(Abhi get dwon fron stage, start dancing with Nikki .All sing with him in chorous by holding the hand of their partner)
Abhi get married with Nikki with all the rituals and tradition and enjoying the party after that. Armaan and his friend plan to make Abhi drink at least one pack on this occasion, they knows that he'll not agree if ask directly. So they planned to make him drink one shot by offering as cold drink. Armaan informed waiter to bring one pack by mixing it in cold drink, he brings it but one person bump him which take his attention toward there. Meanwhile Nikki takes that drink from his plate, goes from there before he notice and drink it to calm her down from dancing for long. Nikki finds the taste of cold drink bitter but avoid it and again emerge herself on dance floor. Armaan scold waiter for not bringing the drink, so he again went and bring another class. Waiter put it on the table and asks for the tip, Armaan giving him money while Nikki takes glass from their behind. Armaan scold him again to bring empty glass while scratching his head he thinks "I had only one pack but it doesn't mean that I am imaging thing around. He doesn't loose his senses in one pack".

Armaan say a loud "Bring it fast and don't drink yourself in between" and he left to bring other one with full consciousness. Nikki stops him in between, takes glass from it and drink it before he can stops her. After drinking it one go, she said a loud in drunken state "Wow what a cold drink man? How you made it? I never tasted it before". Armaan and his friends get shocked to watch that Nikki drinks the pack which is for Abhimanyu and Abhi finds Nikki drunk. Abhi comes near her, hold her from waist, smell the glass she is holding and hold waiter collar "who told you to bring drink in this party?" Waiter gets fear of Abhi's anger and immediately point towards Armaan who told him to bring it. Before Abhi scold Armaan for his doing, Nikki goes to stage, stop music and takes mike from them "I am also want to sing a song for my hubby darling".

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
(she pull Abhi with his collar to kiss but couldn't due to height difference. She make round around him by holding his clothes again and again)
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
Mausam Bhi Be-imaan
Masti Ka Ye Saman
Roko O Logon Zameen Pe
Girne Laga Aasmaan
Thumak Thumak Ke Jhuloongi
Main Udke Gagan Ko Chhuloongi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
(She sits near the fountain to play with its water but Abhi draging her from there. She pulls him to sit with her)
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Dhandi Dhandi Pavan
Jalta Hai Ye Badan
Jee chahta Hai Bana Loon
Tujhko Apna Sajan
Hua Nahin Ye Pehle Kabhi
Meri Jaan Badal Gayi Abhi Abhi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
(She remove Abhi coat from him, wrap around her and hug him. He is tryign to control but his all effort going in vain)
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

(Nikki trying to dance around Abhi but loosing out all her senses. She kept her head which is hammering hard now)

Nikki faints in Abhi's arm, he gives Armaan a frustrated look and shakes his head with arrogance. He pull Nikki in his arms, takes her to his car, open car door to settle her inside and moves other side to drive her away. Girls scold Armaan and his friend for doing all this. Abhi drove away from there, stop the car, takes her in arm to pull out from car, bring her on the bed and settle her there. Abhi takes out all the jewellary which she is wearing so that she comfortably lay down to have a sleep. Abhi also go to changes his cloth and be in more comfortable attire.

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In the middle of Night

Nikki eyes open, she finds herself on bed, she get up from there to find Abhi. She find that she is not at home but on the deck of boat which is half covered and half open under the sky. There is bed and dressing table on the deck which is of white color and white curtains is lying on bed from top to bottom. She find Abhi standing there with his back facing her, holding the railing of boat, he is in Trouser and white shirt whose is totally unbutton. The cold breeze and wind blowing his shirt back, she lower her eyes and Abhi turn to find her wake up. He goes up to her, sit next to her but Nikki said with lower eyes "I am sorry Abhi, I know how long we wait for this moment but'." And Abhi put his finger on her lips "Sshhhhh'..Don't say anything. Let me just feel that I am not dreaming it but its true that you are mine and only mine". With this he put his lips on her, revolving his tongue in her and battling with her and bringing her in his, they both want to go as deep as they can go to explore each other. They broke with heavy breathe, Nikki blushingly run away from there where Abhi pull her dupatta from her body and smiles to watch her standing there where he is some time before.

Nikki finds that they were in the middle of the sea and no ones around from far, Abhi leave her dupatta behind, stand behind her by keeping his hand on her which holding railing and close the distance between them. Abhi remove the hair from her back to make it fall from her side shoulder and reveal her back where only threads of her blouse is falling. Abhi dig his head in her neck, to kiss her while keeping his hand on bare stomach, it shiver her deep down by his sensuous touch of his lips on her bare body. Nikki puts her hand on his which are on his abdomen to pull her closer him, he start biting and licking her sensitive skin which makes her moan by whispering his name. Abhi pull one of thread of her blouse which make her turn in his embrace, his hand on his stomach is moves on her back. Abhi moves her hair which resting on her shoulders to kiss this side now and makes one more of thread to loosen.

Nikki breathe becomes shallow under the heightened passion which Abhi ignited in her, she digs her hand on his bare back under the shirt. Abhi pull her up in his arm with one tug while Nikki biting his ear with her teeth, she kept one her hand on his neck under shirt and other on his firm chest. Abhi puts her on the bed, Nikki pull it off his shirt from his body, bring her mouth from his ear to his mouth by touching every skin of his face and close her lips on his to pull him on bed over her. Abhi close the light near the bed with his one free hand and bring it back to explore her more. The night of their being together forever is taken place in the beautiful moonlight, in the middle of sea where lots of waves mingle with each other in silence and cold breeze which actually lighten the heat and passion in the body of two lovers.

Morning 5 o'clock

Abhi and Nikki bare bodies wrapping in single blanket, they are sitting on the bench curdles into each other, keeping each other arms across each other possessively and legs entangles in each other. They both are waiting for sun rise as it bring new beginning in their life where after they are going to be together in each up and down of their life and their love going to blossom more with day passing. The sun rise from the lap of sea, brighten both their faces not only from light but also with the joy and happiness of being one from two and life to start which they always dream. Nikki tilt her head up and Abhi bend to captures her lips in kiss to seal their new beginning of life will be happy, prosper and blissful together.

THIS NOT THE END
BUT NEW BEGINNING.............

Guys this is an uneditable part so forgive me for my mistakes, i don't have time to edit it as it need extra time.Sorry for this inconveince.I hope you enjoy it with avoiding my mistake. I just want to complete before last date as i have no time after that.

Edited by wow123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I know guys there is lot of mistake in this as i write it whole today by itself.
So forgive me for that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I'll comment on your ff tomorrow as i am very tired today. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wow123

I know guys there is lot of mistake in this as i write it whole today by itself.

So forgive me for that.

Shale, this was the best update. it had everything ..... fun, joy, love and all those fabulous moments between AN. Thanks .... thanks a lot for recounting those beautiful AN moments....... auuwwww I miss them so much ...... and that home one was the best ..... I loved it so much.
I wish stupid CW's had some sense had taken the idea from you on the AN track after Jiah's entry.
This FF was the best ...........
Great job .......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Shale, this was the best update. it had everything ..... fun, joy, love and all those fabulous moments between AN. Thanks .... thanks a lot for recounting those beautiful AN moments....... auuwwww I miss them so much ...... and that home one was the best ..... I loved it so much.

I wish stupid CW's had some sense had taken the idea from you on the AN track after Jiah's entry.
This FF was the best ...........
Great job .......

Oh and I loved that dinner betwen AN and AR ..... Armaan and Nikki were hilarious ..... they were such a pair .... though we never got to see those fabulous moments between them ..... once again stupid stupid CW's.
And the marriage scene was great and the boat was the best. I am sure all AN lovers are going to be in the seventh heaven today after reading your update .......
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part shale loved ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow shalini that was such a cute,sweet ,romantic and omg hottest update 😳😳😳😳
thanku for giving us such a beautiful ff thanku😛god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ufff. Annieeee!!!
This is just not done! You asked for an extension and I gave you more than you wanted and you leave me with this at the end of the update???
My Abhi in such a bad condition, unconscious and talking like he's about to die any moment is just NOT right!
*crosses arms over chest*
Well I ain't talking to you before the next anf final part.
And btw, since it's an epilogue, you can post it afterwards...just make sure you don't take too long.
And mind, this is just coz you have only one more update left...and about the rest who still haven't finished, I'm allowing only epilogues after the deadline.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

Ufff. Annieeee!!!

This is just not done! You asked for an extension and I gave you more than you wanted and you leave me with this at the end of the update???
My Abhi in such a bad condition, unconscious and talking like he's about to die any moment is just NOT right!
*crosses arms over chest*
Well I ain't talking to you before the next anf final part.
And btw, since it's an epilogue, you can post it afterwards...just make sure you don't take too long.
And mind, this is just coz you have only one more update left...and about the rest who still haven't finished, I'm allowing only epilogues after the deadline.

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 I won't stop crying if u don't talk to me ..... but u know what .....
Khushi ....... I love u ..... love u ..... love u...... u r the best......for letting me write the epiloogue .... kya karoon when I started to write this update ... it went on and on and one .... just couldn't complete it .... and promise it is only an epilogue.... and I promise to make u very happy ....
And don't worry .... Abhi will be fine ..... nothing can happen to him .... we all love him so much .... and most of all Nikki loves him too much to let anything happen to him. 😃
So u will get an epilogue very soon .....
Edited by ANfan_1810 - 14 years ago

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