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richa

@richasharma0991

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Posted: 14 years ago

#671

nice update annie. conti nue soon.

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piya-jiya

@piya-jiya

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#672

wonderful part annie 😊

loved jealous nikki😉

n changed abhi

waiting for next part

bye

love

muni🤗

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 14 years ago

#673

awesome part annie cont soon

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: mich09

@ Khushboo : I'll be stingy and say only few words for your scene 'AWESOME' I loved it." I can't find anymore words to express it''. 'It left me speechless '..

Well...I'll choose to forgive you for being so stingy with words...😉 Coz I'm extremely glad that you liked it so much and touched by your speechlessness.

Thanks Mich. This, coming from you, truly means a lot. 🤗

Originally posted by: mich09

@ The biggest blessing in your FF is Abhi is quiet cut off from Jiah.. I used to hate how Jiah hung around Abhi all the time''. Secondly, your storyline of the marriage track was something what we were looking for at that time and should have been something like this. Instead we got a very disgusting & pathetic track'.. 😡😡😡 Well your FF redeems that for us.

@red...I've thanked the stars so many times for that! 😆

@red underlined...yep...that was something I just couln't tolerate. 🤢 Chipku chudail...😡

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#675

@Shale...

Nice parts! 😃

Don't worry about the grammatical mistakes and spelling errors...it's the substance that matters. And anyway, I can guarantee you'll improve in those areas as well as you write...⭐️

Jiah is a complete devil. And right now, I hate her even more but I like the fact that at least Abhi can hurt her or scare her...the DMG waali Jiah was even more horrible because of her indifference to whatever happened

And it's an interesting twist you have here...👏

Par I have a bad, bad feeling about this...😲

Abhi signed the slip, na...I think the injections are expired or something of the sort. 😲 Oh no...more trouble for my poor Abhi! 😭

Solve the issue soon, Shale...but I have to say, AN in their dukhi aatma mode is truly awesome! 😃

And you don't have to get so hyper...there're 3 FFs left to be finished, yours, Annie's and Naina-Aishu's.

We can extend the deadline a few days more if you really need it but try to finish it within the current deadline...😉

I'm being lenient but I wanna see how fast you can update...hehehe 😆

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#676

Annieeeeeeeeeeeee I love youuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!! *almost suffocates you in one of the tightest hugs in history*

This update was like ice cream...it was sooooooooooooo nice and soothing! Loved the last part! 😃

But you gave me quite a few shocks...

Abhi talking a lot! 😲 Abhi smiling is one thing, but Abhi laughing? *chokes* OMG...and last but not the least, Abhi FLIRTING??? *faints* 😲 😲 😲 UNIMAGINABLE.

I'm still reeling from it... 😆

Ah...I know what happens when you sleep 3 hours and work yourself crazy for the other 21 hours...happened to me a few days ago but I slept 4 hours! LOL! 😆 I understand...and poor Abhi, he had a heartbreak and a guilty conscience to deal with it in addition! 😲

Poor thing...I feel so sad for him...

I loved the silence between AN...it always says far more than words...they're nuts, na! 😆 But they're such cute nuts! 😳

Update soon! 🤗

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dm_hpcrazy

@dm_hpcrazy

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#677

oh man oh man oh man -

Can't wait for update!!

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jibreen

@jsha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#678

hi Annie finally u r back😊how r u how was ur exams 😊yar this parts was asusual awsome i feel sad about AN both but abhi deserve this he was so mean towards niki but i m loving the niki jelously😡 after seeing abhi with sneha😳 very good continue soon yar and update asap ok bye

and wow yar once again u did a fantastic job 👏Abhi will again sacrifice 😭oh god how much pian he have to bear again😭yar update asap we r waiting pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
Annieeeeeeeeeeeee I love youuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!! *almost suffocates you in one of the tightest hugs in history*

This update was like ice cream...it was sooooooooooooo nice and soothing! Loved the last part! 😃

But you gave me quite a few shocks...

Abhi talking a lot! 😲 Abhi smiling is one thing, but Abhi laughing? *chokes* OMG...and last but not the least, Abhi FLIRTING??? *faints* 😲 😲 😲 UNIMAGINABLE.

I'm still reeling from it... 😆

Ah...I know what happens when you sleep 3 hours and work yourself crazy for the other 21 hours...happened to me a few days ago but I slept 4 hours! LOL! 😆 I understand...and poor Abhi, he had a heartbreak and a guilty conscience to deal with it in addition! 😲

Poor thing...I feel so sad for him...

I loved the silence between AN...it always says far more than words...they're nuts, na! 😆 But they're such cute nuts! 😳

Update soon! 🤗

Hi Khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

🤗 🤗 🤗

It is so nice to have you back!

Hope u did your exams well ...... I am sure u would have done well.

I am so glad you liked the update ..... this a bit changed Abhi .... 😆 .... as sure u guys will love him even more. 😃 This is Abhi with a mission ..... mission to win Nikki back, so he will smile, laugh, flirt, dance ...... 😆 .... do whatever it takes to win her back .... but very quietly ....

I am not sure if I will be able to complete this FF by Oct 6th.😳 But am sure trying to do it.

Hoping for the best .......😃

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#680

Hi all!

Thanks for being patient ..... this update took sometime since I was busy with something .... but now you guys will hear from me at amazing frequency .... since I need to finish the FF before Oct 6th....... warna Khushi will have to extend the deadline once again.😉

BTW .... did you guys see my VM ..... no one commented about it. Did u guys like it? Do see it and let me know how it is.