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@ Meera, cute one shot Just another day'.. A different side to Abhi we get to see ! A desperate passionate lover! And good Armaan didn't get into the fire escape with Riddhima otherwise we would have had an Abhimaan moment too! 😆😆😆😆 For once AN were uninterrupted! Once again lovely scene.

@ Mitzi loved your one shot'.Loved how you've shown how life has changed for AN, post panchgani and how they see the other in different light'. Especially Nikki finding it difficult to handle this new Abhimanyu whose behaviour is strange but he is no more a stranger '''.

1) Ratz That Morning Love Stroke is so well written and loved Nikki's thoughts on Abhi's presence in her life not realizing how deep he had already seeped into her'. Very beautifully done 'wish you could continue'.. Do continue'. It would be a lovely read.

2) Sheena & Rhea,'' Amusing scene'' shocked us with Nikki weds Rohan part' Bigger shocker was Abhi dropping Ammy '. BTW who is Ammy ?😆😆😆😆 Can't tell you how much I laughed when I read the line Abhi dropping Ammy, I re read it a few more times...😆😆 Gosh I thought Abhimaan were having a dostana moment 😆😆😆😆😆😆''. Also was amused how Atul wondered how AN & SR knew he had lost the keys'😆😆. And where is the continuation'want to know what happened'.read only 1^st & 2^nd part'is there a 3^rd '.please let me know..wld like to read it

3) NJ had a hilarious time reading how Abhi was trying to get Nikki to open and almost going hypothermic 😆😆😆😆 Well written FF waiting to read the next part.

Now coming to the longer FFs

@ Naina and Aishu.....Loving the Modi family in your FF....AN with their cutie Neil and SR.... and then Armaan the obsessive lover.😆😆 Surprising but making a nice read....you guys have a nice writing style..... Just wondering if there is more to Nikki's hyperness and fear of seeing Armaan after so many years.... did he do something bad back then other than wanting a distance in their relationship...

@ Shale, Well I hated most, Jiah's entry into AN's life and all the mess that took place with AN in DMG after that , and always like to see it as a bad dream and put it behind me. But, I like your FF'.. The biggest blessing in your FF is Abhi is quiet cut off from Jiah.. I used to hate how Jiah hung around Abhi all the time''. Secondly, your storyline of the marriage track was something what we were looking for at that time and should have been something like this. Instead we got a very disgusting & pathetic track'.. 😡😡😡 Well your FF redeems that for us.

Coming to your FF, I liked how you've shown AN's understanding of each other's pain. I also liked the scene of the first coming together after six months in the garden, where they shared their pain the whole night and also the scene where Armaan injures Abhi and she asks him to let her go..And after he letting her go, she realized how badly stuck they were in love........really beautiful. Even the scene in Abhi's cabin after Nikki faints was nice....... , I was only not too pleased about Nikki deciding to marry Sid when her heart is not in it. The thought of making Abhi jealous and realize her pain, is fine, but not at the expense of someone else's feelings. The saddest part is poor Sid is being dragged into their messed up relationship and his feelings are being toyed with , even though it is not intentional on Nikki's part. But, otherwise, it does make an interesting reading and I don't know why I get the feeling Sid knows about the two of them and is doing it deliberately......

Loved what Nikki wrote in her diary at the start and the way her tear drop blotted out the irrelevant part and mirroring the truth......Mr. Meanie was way too rude with that statement about .....wiped out from face of the earth.....😭.but like Nikki, can help but still love him.. I had such an idiotic wide grin reading when Nikki thought she was seeing Abhi in the Chicago cafe, that was why I wasn't upset when Nikki left....... But then it wasn't Abhi...... it was his sweet brother Sid.......Lovely twist ! Loved Sid and how he makes Big Bro jealous esp with the FB pic......Loved AN moments , when Nikki goes to change after the pool and into Abhi's room......the tumble on the bed and the restrain..........and that little close awareness near the barbecue pit when she goes with plates..... Its amazing how Abhi's presence can race up not only Nikki's heart but the hearts of the readers too and the pace of the story 😆😆😆😆......and the kiss in the pool was breathtaking...... 😍 Loved Nikki's thoughts to her diary after that........awww.....so sweet

Gosh.....Abhi having to face Nikki's harsh words that she did not care for him.....😭😭😭. I tell you these two na big NUTS....... Nice to see in this part, Nikki giving her thought to one of her friends at least Ridz...........Not only had she broken ties with Abhi but also with her close friends because of him....... and Nikki rubbing the lipstick from Abhi's cheek was way too cute😳😳..loved it and also her kiss on his lips and later on refusing to let go of him till he kissed her and finally tell him she loved him in her drunken state......Found it too cute...... and loved how they wake up in bed together....😍. Also how he teased her after that..... also how he locked her in his room with him and confessed his love .....😍. also glad they spoke abt the past and clarified that part...... and nice to see Nikki driving a drunk Abhi home and returning the same favour......Is there another part coming up.....Would love to see a nice closure for this lovely FF......Do update and do PM me if you update.

Originally posted by: mich09

@ Annie, now its your FF turn,..... but, I am really tired now... so please bear with me....

Originally posted by: richasharma0991

shale............

love it

love it

love it

love it

love it

love it

love it............................yaar.

poor abhi.how much he had suffered.

i hate that jia...........

abhi nikki kissed each other.waooooooooooooooooooooo.

excited to knoe what happened next.

continue soon.....