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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

*EDIT*

🤣🤣🤣

Incredible! 👏

I can just imagine Abhi driving away, cursing Sid unlike anyone in a civilised society would dare to do, and end unding up ringing Nikki's doorbell...and when he sees her open the door, he thinks, "What in the world am I doing here?" 😲

And then he forgets all about the fact that he was mad, and he goes and kneads the dough with her...or, ahem, at least acts to! 😉 😆 😆 😆

You put the atta scene here, you naughty girl! But oh...I'm glad you didn't make her jumpe 10 feet into the air and ruin the moment...

The bit of atta on Abhi's nose looked so silly that I had a hard time controlling my laughter...and they actually ate the paranthas they made from it!!! 😲 Ewwwww

But honestly, I never understood what problem Nikki had with Abhi's nose...it's cute enough! *pouts* I mean, jab dekho she used to bang into his nose while waking up (of course, I'm sure she didn't intend that as she too must've wanted to know what exactly Abhi was planning on doing that night in Rajasthan...hihihi), putting atta on his nose...uff! *hairaan pareshaan* I, for one, like his nose! *indignant*

But anyway, getting back to the point, seriously, someone give Goofy a plate of mutton biryani to gorge on coz that fluffball needs to stop getting in the way!

How can he possibly not be scared of his and Abhi's size difference? 😲 He's courageous, I've to say...he deserves a medal...taking on Abhi, kya guts hai! Wah bhai wah! 👏

But LOL @ Abhi wanting to lose him while taking him on a walk 😆 poor guy, he has NO idea that Goofy can sniff his way back! 😆 😆 😆

I'd like to see a moment of understanding between Abhi and Goofy...maybe a peace treaty? *looks hopeful*

And OMG Nikki standing in front of Abhi WITHOUT her heels? 😲 😲 😲 I wouldn't have dared...I'd have felt like a mouse in front of him...yikes! What is she? 4 feet 1 inch as Abhi so confidently guesses before the Kabaddi match? 😆

And Abhi dragging her out to his house in those clothes...GOD...does that man have any sense???

She would look cute to him, but his mom would think he's kidnapped her from a flour factory! And that's NOT a good first impression.....

Abhi is so paranoid about Nikki and Sid! 😆 Me likes...

And me wants more and more hot scenes!!! 😳 Continue soon jaana! 🤗 Sorry that this comment wasn't relatively funny, as it's late at night and I'm kinda in a hurry to sleep...😕

But I'll try to be funny next time lol...😉

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#372

ROFL....Abhi is soooooooooo jealous man!! He is actually taking her to dinner so she doesn't meet Sid!!
N Sid baba hung up on Tia baby!! lovely.....Abhi ko batao ki he needs to save his sis from Sid not Nikki!!

Lovely update!!

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#373

@Annie ROFL. Its mindblowing update dear. I just can't control myself laughing.I thought Abhi's jealousy soon goin to create one more scene but he forget everything after watching Nikki.😆

Hahaha........I am loving goofy a lot. There is a lot of ppl come btw AN like Armaan, Sumanlata and Jiah but i can say proudly Goofy is best in all of them.😆 I can't believe that he ruin the beautiful moment of them. He is very possesive of Nikki, Abhi going to have a hard tiem with him.😆

Abhi's jealousy always create a fuss but i am glad u take it in new direction.He is taking her out for dinner that to his house in this condition in order to avoid Sid's meeting with Nikki. So he don't left any stone unturn.He can't say to Nikki that he is jealous as may be she think that he don't trust her. So he is taking new way to take Nikki far from Sid.

Looking forward...............Continue.................

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: hapinezz13
ROFL....Abhi is soooooooooo jealous man!! He is actually taking her to dinner so she doesn't meet Sid!!
N Sid baba hung up on Tia baby!! lovely.....Abhi ko batao ki he needs to save his sis from Sid not Nikki!!

Lovely update!!

Honu!!!!!

Sid is dead anyways! ab toh only god can save him from Abhi! Or maybe that report!

Till he is working on that report he has a shield against Abhi! Once it is out, even Sidbhaiya is out! 😆 Just wait and watch the fun !😃

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#375

Annie please update jaldi jaldi...am very impatient! *acts restless like Goofy*

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#376

Hi everyone!

Thanks for all those lovely comments. I am so glad u all enjoyed the last update ..... I enjoyed writing it too! 😃

And Khushboo ..... your comments are always hilarious ... weather u write them in the morning .... or late at night ..... I loved the way u described Abhi's nose ... and the way Nikki is always trying to destroy it .... well till today I had never noticed it so closely .... after reading your comments went and saw the videos again .... and well you know what ... his nose 'is really cute'.... 😆

And you can keep on hoping for a compro between Abhi and Goofy ... infact pray for it too .... but it is not going to happen any time soon.... sorry girl .... but Nikki needs to be protected from Dr. Modi .... warna pata nahi kya kya sab ho jata abhi tak ......🤣

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810
Hi everyone!

Thanks for all those lovely comments. I am so glad u all enjoyed the last update ..... I enjoyed writing it too! 😃

And Khushboo ..... your comments are always hilarious ... weather u write them in the morning .... or late at night ..... I loved the way u described Abhi's nose ... and the way Nikki is always trying to destroy it .... well till today I had never noticed it so closely .... after reading your comments went and saw the videos again .... and well you know what ... his nose 'is really cute'.... 😆

And you can keep on hoping for a compro between Abhi and Goofy ... infact pray for it too .... but it is not going to happen any time soon.... sorry girl .... but Nikki needs to be protected from Dr. Modi .... warna pata nahi kya kya sab ho jata abhi tak ......🤣

🤣 Point to be noted. All keep that in mind. Nikki should be protected from Abhimanyu

🤣thats why u put goofy who is all the time with nikki 🤣

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#378

When will your update is coming dear. Mine is gone to mitzi for editing.

Four ff is running now...........Ur, honey, Naina & Aishu and me.

I think more ppl should participate in it which make it more intersting.

Khush, sheenu, Rati, Ivy, fahi, Bhavs, nj, mitzi, kalindi and others where they all are gone.Buck up guys. buck up

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#379

annie loved this part awesome cont soon

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#380

@Annie...LOL why don't I ever know if I'm funny? 😆 You should def never hear or see me talk...I'll scare you then. Actually my bestie goes on about how just seeing my face makes her laugh...and I never get what is so funny about my face :S

But yeah...Nikki needs to be protected from Abhi and OMG just the thought of that miniature furball doing the job makes me crack up! LMAO!

Actually I'd like to know kya kya ho jaata in the absence of Goofy...hehehe...