MN Gallery: Sonam (Page 50 | 13.09.10) - Page 22

very beautifully written sonam ........... ihad tears in my eyes reading it ......... normally i hate reading such tragic things on the couple i love sooooooo much .......but u wrote it really well i could feel each nd every emotion dat u have expressed in this OS ..... loved it lots ..........

beautiful OS Sonam di!
aww! Nupur's plight was too sad 2 read....
but the end was logical....shows that not all stories can be the usual 'happily-ever-after' kind! a touching one indeed!

I have a lump in my throat...
This is the saddest and most heart touching OS i've read....
I loved it....


Beautifully written, each emotion....👏👏👏👏
I have no more words to👏 describe what i feel...

it was very emotional

Raindrops

It was 11:00 PM, Nupur, Mayank, Samrat and Gunjan retired to their respective rooms but soon Samrat and Gunjan entered Mayank's room to talk to him about Nupur ....
Gunjan - Jeeju, kya di ko kuch bhi yaad nahi hai?
Samrat - Gunjan agar yaad nahi hai to hum yaad dilaayenge ...
Mayank - Aur agar wo humse bhaag rahi hai to hum use bhaagne nahi denge, use humaare pyaar ko samajhna hoga ....

After the chatting session, soon Samrat and Gunjan left for their rooms ... after an hour, Mayank was going to sleep in just in his black tracks, his forehead still bandaged when he heard someone singing and in no time recognised the voice, it was Nupur ... Mayank rushed towards the terrace ... he stood awestruck, she looked like an angel in the rain ... completely drenched ... her hair all open, she was wearing a white sari accompanied by a red blouse ... her anklets were tuning with her song ....

Saawariya........... she stretched her arms in diagonal manner .....
Ho Saawariya... Mayank kept staring at her, he was lost in her beauty ....
Naahi Chain Re Daras Bina Naahi Chain she bend sidewards, the rain drops falling on her glowing skin as he gazed at her ....
Saiyaan Aa Aa Aa..... she looked up to the moon and stretched her arms ... her thin waistline clearly visible ....
Jabse Gaye Bides Re, Saawariya Daras Bina Naahi Chain Mayank slowly walked towards her and soon the rain drenched him ...

Allah......
Allah......
(Allah...) Saawariya Daras Bina Naahi Chain
Saiyaan Aa Aa Aa Aa... Saiyaan... She started doing kathak, Mayank was lost in her ... she twirled and welcomed the rain with a smile and open arms ...

Saawariya...........Saawariya He came and stood in front of her, he fell in love with her all over again .... she slowly opened her eyes and was shocked to see Mayank so close to her ...

Nupur - Mayank ....

Arrey aankh se boondh gira koi, chingari ka tukda jala koi She turned to leave when he held her wrist .... Umeed ko aag laga zara, sehra ki pyaas buja zara
Her heartbeats stopped while he gazed at her Gan itna baras ke galne lagun main paani ke upar tarne lagun She tried get free of his hold not facing him while his hold stayed firm ... Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de He swiftly twirled her into his arms ... Oo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de her eyes widened as he kept looking in them; passionately .. her arms on his bare shoulders while his one hand wrapped around her bare waist ... Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara he dipped her behind by holding her palm in his fist Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara
she shut her eyes as he lovingly looked at her ...

Mera pal pal ang ang bar diya, tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya She stood facing her back towards him ... he slowly traced his fingers on her hand .... Mera hai kya jo main haar doon, jaan teri hai tujhpe vaar doon He clutched her hand, she looked at him and they shared a brief eye lock ... Doob gaye jo suna hai saare tere dere aate hain He smirked and swirled her to make her face him, they started waltz .... Dil ke chulu mein bechaare dubkiyan ghote khaate hain they matched their steps to the music of the raindrops ... not looking anywhere except in each others' eyes .... Beh ja, beh ja, chal tod kinare ko, Beh ja, beh ja, dhar le majdhare ko they moved away just to come back in each others' arms .... Chingari udha ke raakh se ik boondh gira ke aankh se her hands were around his shoulders while his around her waist as they rotated Chalne ke ishaara kar gaya, kar gaya, kar gaya staring in each others' eyes ... Sab bhar gaya, bhar gaya Kar gaya kar gaya, sab bhar gaya bhar gaya he lifted her form her waist as her hands rested on his shoulder, he looked at her as she closed her eyes and looked up at the night sky ... Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de slowly brought her down on her feet ...Oo behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de both were really close to each other and were lost in each others' eyes ... Behene de ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara he tightened his grip around her waist and pulled her near while she circled her hands around his shoulders ... Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara both could feel each others' breath on their faces ... they were really close to each other ... their lips just inches away from each other ....

Mayank - I love you Nupur .... main tumhe kaise yakeen dilaaun ki main tumse pyaar karta hun ...
Nupur - Mayank, I love you too ... main tumhaare bina nahi jee sakti ....

As he heard those words, his eyes sparkled and she realised what she just said ... she immediately pushed him and before he could react to anything just rushed down towards her room while Mayank kept standing in the rain ... he was happy that she finally confessed and decided that he wouldn't let her go now .... he quietly followed her ....

While she ran into her room, crying .... her sari was sweeping the stairs as she ran into her room ... she immediately shut the doors and and went into the balcony .... silently weeped over her life ...

Mayank (thinking) - Nupur, ab main tumhe kahin nahi jaane dunga .....

Nupur - Itna sab kuch ho gaya aur aaj bhi main Mayank se pyaar karti hun .... main kya karun? Kitni koshish ki par Mayank, Samrat aur meri Gunjan se main kaise door rah sakti hun .... unhi se to meri zindagi hai .... aur wo mujhse kitna pyaar karte hain ... shayad mujhe hi galatfehmi ho gayi thi ki unhe meri zarurat nahi hai .... unhe meri aur mujhe unki zarurat hai .... 3 saal trauma center ke ek kamre mein zinda laash bankar maine jinka intezaar kiya unki zindagi mein kitna kuch ho gaya ... Gunjan ne meri maut ka zimmedaar Samrat ko maana aur apni zindagi se use nikaal diya ... Samrat ne apne aapko meri maut ka zimmedaar maana aur isi guilt mein jeeta raha ... aur Mayank, Mayank ne ye 3 saal akelepan mein guzaare .... maine ye kaise soch liya ki wo mujhse pyaar nahi karte .... maine bahut badi galti kar di ....

Mayank - Galti to mujhse bhi huyi hai Nupur ....

Nupur immediately turned to see Mayank in tears walking towards her ...

Mayank - Maine kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya us death certificate par .... par ab wo waqt hum waapas nahi la sakte par ek nayi subah ke saath kya hum ek nayi shuruaat nahi kar sakte?

She nodded with a huge smile on her face and hid herself in Mayank's torso ....

Nupur - I am sorry ...
Mayank - Nahi, I am sorry ....
Nupur - I love you ....
Mayank - I love you too ....
Nupur - Main tumhaare bina nahi jeena chaahti ...
Mayank - Ek pal ke liye bhi tumhe apne aap se door nahi jaane dunga Nupur ...

Samrat and Gunjan - Nahi jaane denge ....

Mayank and Nupur turned towards the door to see Samrat and Gunjan smiling and having tears in their eyes .... both ran towards them and before Gunjan could; Samrat hugged Nupur tight ....

Samrat - Sabse zyada tumhe, maine miss kiya .... mere saath koi nahi tha jo meri taang kheenchta, mere jaise sochta .... main tumhe kahin jaane nahi dunga ....
Nupur - Maine bhi tumhe bahut miss kiya Samrat ... I am sorry ... promise, ab kabhi tumhe akela chodkar nahi jaaungi .... tumhe akele chod diya to tumhara in dono ne kya haal kar diya ....

Gunjan pulled Samrat ...
Gunjan - Wo meri di hai ... mujhe bhi unke gale lagne do ....
And jumped into Nupur's arms ....
Gunjan - Di vaada karo, ab kabhi mujhe khud se door nahi karogi .... aur aise phir kabhi mujhe daantogi nahi ....
Nupur - Main vaada karti hun, aisa kabhi nahi karungi .....

After a while, Samrat and Gunjan went away, leaving Mayank and Nupur alone .... he held her from behind, resting his chin over her shoulder and locking her in his arms to never let her go ....

Mayank - Nupur ....
Nupur - Hmm ....
Mayank - Hamaari zindagi mein baarish ki kitni zyada ehmiyat hai ...
Nupur - Matlab?
Mayank - Mujhe tumse pyaar ka ehsaas baarish mein dance karte hua, pyaar ka izhaar karne ke baad humaari wo pyaari si baarish .... date ke din baarish ... jab main Bangalore ja raha tha tab ki baarish ... har baarish ne mujhe tumhaare kareeb laaya hai ... tumhe 3 saal baad baarish mein dekha tha ... aur ab isi baarish ne hamesha ke liye humein mila diya ....
Nupur - Hmm ... agar aisi baat hai to ye baarish kaash kabhi na ruke ... aur hum yunhi ek dusre ke kareeb aate rahe ....

When it rains, when it pours,
I feel you are there with me ...
I wish it rains forever,
So that; I have you with me till eternity ...

*Reserved*

*edited*

Aww . . how sweet! 😳

Beautifully written, Di. I am so glad to be reading something written by after so long.

Keep writing! 👍🏼

TC
xx

-Kanky

hayye...that was an adorable os......simply outstanding...no words........

This is simply amazing Sonam.

Awesom,sweet,lovely os

Sona awesome OS
it was so sweet and cute.
yup mayur and rain- life time rishta

Wonderful OS- dil khush hogaya.

plz do write more