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The First Part Of "HumraahI" Will Be Posted With In Half An Hour..😊

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Thank You To All The Readers Who Have Liked The 'Introduction' Post Of 'HumraahI' ..😊

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Hello Guys…Yeh lijiye jaisa aap log chahthe the I'am back soon… well maine socha tho tha that I will post the part later in the week… but aaj I have started writing it… actually aaj jab main online aayi tho I saw the comments you guys have given & I just could not stop myself from typing the first part of 'HumraahI'…. This part is dedicated to "nehuu"… nehuu happy birthday yaar… I hope tumko yeh part achcha laga. I know you are waiting for the first part to be posted tho I'am typing it today as your birthday gift. Hope you will like it.. & guys I hope all of you will like the first part as well.. waise I'am happy kii aap sabko characters achche lage, I was wondering if you guys would like them or not… most of the characters I have used are my favorites… I hope kii aap sabko yeh fanfic agge bhi achchi lage.. thank you for all encouragement & good wishes it really means a lot… guys if you guys cannot comment then please like the post & guys if you are not receiving my pm for the updates then please do tell me, so that I can add your names to my friend list… & now let me begin with the first part of "HumraahI"… hope all of you will like it….

In the Introduction Part we have seen all the different characters of the fanfic now it is time for us to know them better….. so here's presenting the first part of the fanfic….

****HumraahI – Part 1 ****

It is the year of 2010… Hum dekh sakthe hai kii sadkon par kaafi chehel pehel hai… harr kissi ko dekho tho yeh lagtha hai kii usse kahiin na kahiin pohanch ne kii jaldi hai…. It was just a hustle bustle life of a busy city…. It is the city of Delhi… the Capital city of India…. yahaan ek taraf there is the Chandni Chowk at North Delhi, where people are busy & happy in their lives.. here the people are contented with what they have….. the carry on with their lives with a smile on their faces at any time…… on the other side there was the congested by lanes of the Vasant Vihar at South Delhi…. On the west Delhi had it's posh localities, which was known for it's trendy & posh shopping malls…. While on the east Delhi the culture of traditions was just like that of New Delhi… Different people lived all around Delhi…. But no one really bothered about the other, being of the busiest cities in India, people were busy in there own lives….
Away from all of this….there was the 'Utpal Villa', it was located at the Eastern Side Of Delhi, this house was away from the city's lifestyle… this home here had some special bondings & it had laughter & smiles all the way… this home has the feeling of oneness & relationships… it was not because of the home, but it was because of the people who lived in this house… kehthe hai na insaan kii pechaan uske ghar se nahii hothi balki ghar kii pechaan usmein rehne waale logon se hothi hai… & this was absolutely right… any person whether a stranger or a friend for the inmates of the 'Utpal Villa', knew & can sense the love & oneness in the air one's they are near the 'Utpal Villa'… generally people often wonder how the people in the 'Utpal Villa' though are not blood related but yet are so bonded & attached with each other… but strangers, cannot understand the bond & relationships the people at the 'Utpal Villa' share…

As we go to the outskirts of East Delhi….. we see the huge gates of the 'The Utpal Villa', there are two security guards placed at the gates, people cannot enter the villa if they are strangers… as we zoom in, we see a huge garden in front of the house, the porch was visible where a minimum of five cars were placed…. Apart from that we see gardeners working in the garden & some watering the plants…. In the centre the villa was a huge mansion, it was one of it's kind… it was a dream house which every person who dreams big would have dreamt of…. However big the villa was there was a sense of friendliness surrounding the air…. The people working there had a smile on their faces, this showed that the workers really liked working there… outside the huge gates of the 'Utpal Villa', there were small houses, which comprised of single or two rooms… this was the place where the security guards, the drivers & the servants of the 'Utpal Villa', lived…. Going back inside the gates of the 'Utpal Villa', we see that the house had a homely feeling to it… this homely feeling was given to this villa because of the presense of the two women in the 'Utpal Villa'… earlier when only the guys stayed together, it was just a place where the guys lived, but now it was there home… it was the place where they liked spending their time.. it was the place where they longed to come back to at the end of the day… is ghar mein koi bhi gair nahii tha, chahe woh chota ho ya phir bada, everyone in the house was treated with respect… on the other side of the porch apart the cars we can see that three sports cars & three sports bikes were placed…. The garden was a lavish green spread area which consisted of different kind of plants, trees & flowers, at the corner of the garden there was a small carved wood shed made, under the wood shed, there was a small coffee table & there was a swing placed in between of the wood shed.. it looked like wood shed was there just to enjoy the evening time having a cup of coffee & enjoying the cool breeze of the evening, near the wood shed there was a small pond.. at the other end of the garden, there was a small wooden house… it was just a single wooden small room with small windows….. in the night the wooden shed & the small wooden home had the perfect romantic ambience… the wooden house was agni's favorite place, whenever he wanted to get away from everyone, he used to sit in the wooden house… the wooden home had some musical instruments, which agni used to play whenever he wanted to relax & calm his mind.. this was the 'Utpal Villa'.. when we zoom in behind the villa, the villa has a sit out area along with a swimming pool… it was the place where every weekend the inmates of the house spend a lot of time in……. this was the house appearance from the outside… now let us see the villa from inside….

(Here Are Utpal Villa Pictures For A Better Imagination…
The Front View Of The Villa…

The Sit Out Area At The Back Side Of The Villa, Near The Swimming Pool….

The Wooden Shed In The Garden With Coffee Table & A Swing In The Center…. & A Pond By The Wood Shed…

The Wooden House At The Other End Of The Garden….. There Were Curtains Covering The Windows & The Small Door Of The Wooden House…
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(Guys Here Are The Pics Of The Sports Cars & Bikes Which Are Present 'Utpal Villa's' porch…

Agni's Car… BMW Z4….

Prithvi's Car… Aston Martin….

Milind's Car.. Renault Megane…..

Apart from these sports cars.. all the three guys owned the new model of Hayabusa….
Agni's Hayabusa…

Prithvi's Hayabusa…

Milind's Hayabusa….
)

Now As we zoom in, into the doors of the 'Utpal' household, we see that there is a huge hall, which has a big chadeliar in between… the hall high ceilings…. It was neatly decorated & painted in elegant colors… when we see every nook & corner of the hall, we can know that the people in the house have taken a utmost care of each & every small thing in the house.. we can see that the hall is in turn connecting to four different rooms… one of the rooms was the study, one was the small library & the other two rooms were the guest rooms…. Apart from that there was a small 'puja' room there…… On the other side of the hall, it was opening to a medium sized dining room & the dinning room was connected to the spacious kitchen…. In between the dining room & the hall, there was a spiral staircase which was leading to the upstairs.. in the first floor of the house there were four huge bedrooms, two at the either corners…. At one end one room was occupied by milind & prachi… on their rooms, bedroom door, there was a small heart on which there names were carved…… coming to the other room which is occupied by prithvi & damini at the other end of the floor, prithvi & damini's door had a carving of a girl & boy & underneath the carving their names where written…. The other two rooms were not very close to the occupied rooms.. all rooms had enough space between each other… everyone had their privacy in the cocoon of their bedroom… then as we keep walking around the first floor, we can see that there is another staircase which was leading to the second floor… the second floor had five spacious rooms….. the rooms were all empty… in between all these rooms there was a small fairy tale type of room which was wholly in pink… the room belonged to sneha, agni had made sure that whenever sneha comes to visit him she has a room like a princess…. The room was totally decked with toys & games… it was just like how sneha wanted her room to be… agni had made sure sneha had a room of her choice at 'Utpal'… then there was a staircase leading to the last floor of the house… the third floor…. the third floor was as spacious as the other two floors but the third floor comprised only of two huge sized rooms in the center & a small room attaching both of them in between.. the third floor totally belonged to agni… it was only main & meri tanhayi for agni at the third floor…. Agni had a habit of staying alone & milind, prachi, prithvi damini respected that & gave him the space as & when he needed.. & above the third floor, the spiral staircase was leading to a small terrace… this is how the 'Utpal Villa' looked from the inside…. Now let us see what the inmates of the 'Utpal Villa' are upto… coming back to the hall, we see that the huge clock is ticking & it is showing 10 AM in the morning… the maids & helpers in the house are doing their work with swift & ease.. as we go back to the hall, we see that a lady in her late 20's dressed in her jeans & kurta is coming out of the puja room, following her is another lady who looked slightly younger to the first lady.. she was wearing a capri with a t-shirt…. Both the ladies walk out through the hall & go towards the dining hall… once they go there they start giving quick instruction to the people who are working there….. after doing that both the woman, sit on the dining table & they smile at each other… the woman who is younger one of the two says:- damy, finally kaam hogaya hai.. ab bas humein un logon ka intezaar karna hai….
The other one nods in reply, she is damy, in short for Damini….. Damini:- haan prachu sahii keh rahii hai tu… breakfast tho already ready hai… maria se keh diya hai kii who breakfast ek barr check karle, taaki sab kuch theek rahe…
Prachi:- [looks at the clock & says] yeh dekho ghadi mein dus bhi baj chuke hai lekin ab thak is ghar ke theen bandaron ka koi patah nahii hai… patah nahii yeh log humare is ghar mein aane se pehle sab kuch kaise sambhalthe the.. ab tho harr cheez ke liye un theeno ko humari zaroorat padthi hai..
Damini smiles & says:- haan un theeno ka hum dono ke bagair tho kuch bhi nahii ho saktha hai… lekin agar dekha jaye tho humara bhi un theeno ke bina kuch nahii ho saktha hai…
Prachi:- haan yeh bhi sahii hai…. Waise damy, aaj ka program fix hogaya hai na….
Damini:- prachuu zara dheere bol, agar agni ne sunn liya na tho woh humari watt laga dega…. Humein chodega nahii woh….
Prachi:- haan jaanthi hoon, agar agni ne humari baatein sunn liye, ya agar usse yeh bhanak bhi pad gaya kii hum aaj kya plan karr rahe hai tho, woh ghar se bhi bahar nahii niklega…. Sara din apne kamre mein bund rahega… prachi & damini giggle thinking about agni being locked in his room, in order to escape their plans….
Then damini says:- lekin haan prachu, jab prithvi aur milind yahaan aayenge tho humein unhein humara idea batakar unhein humare plan mein shamil karna hoga…
Prachi:- lekin kya woh dono bhandar, humare is khichidi plan mein shamil honge woh bhi us theesre bhandar ke khilaaf…
Damini:- don't worry yaar, woh dono humara saath bilkul denge… kyunke humare jaise hii ab woh dono bhi chahthe hai kii agni shaadi kar le… tho don't worry i'am sure humara 'Khichidi Pakao Number 99' zaroor kaam karega…
Suddenly prachi is lost in some thoughts… when damini asks her:- kya hua… prachi just smiles & says kuch nahii damy main bas purane dino ko yaad karr rahii thi… damini nods her head & prachi continues saying…..
Prachi:- damy, main aaj bhi woh din nahii bhooli jab agni, prithvi aur milind mujhse milne ke liye deewar khooda (jump) karthe the… mujhse milna tho milind ko hotha tha lekin aathe the theeno saath mein… aur tab maine un theeno ka naam theen bhandar rakh diya tha… kitne achche din the na woh…
Damini:- sahi kaha tumne woh din bohat achche hua karthe the.. lekin prachu aaj bhi woh theeno tumhare liye tumhare theen bhandar hii hai… aur haan jaise 'Gandiji Ke Theen Bhandar' hua karthe the na, yeh theeno tumhare, yaani ke 'Prachijii Ke Theen Bhandar' hai….
Listening to that prachi cracks up laughing.. damini joins her in the laughter…. When prachi controls her laughter & says:- prachijiiiii…. Hahaha.. tum bhi na damy bohat funny ho… waise agar woh mere theen bhandar hai, tho woh tumhare bhi tho 'bekaron kii toli' hai…
Damini:- haan, aur nahii tho kya jab main pehli barr prithvi se mili thi, us din se prithvi saxena mujhse baat karne kii koshish kartha tha… aur mere cabin ke bahar ghanto time pass kartha tha.. sirf prithvi hii nahii uske saath saath agni aur milind bhi wahii khade hothe the koi na koi kaam ke bahane se.. tho maine unka naam 'Bekaron Kii Toli' laga diya tha…
Prachi:- yeh theeno bhi na damy bade hii alag hai.. sample piece hai, saare ek se badhkar, ek….
Damini:- [she giggles & says] sahii kaha.. lekin yeh theeno jaise bhi hai humare liye yeh theeno khaas hai… na inke bina humari zindagi chalegi na humare bina unki….
Prach nods her head in a yes & she says:- damy, zara dekho yeh log kahaan reh gaye hai, humein office bhi tho jaana hai na.. aaj hum us naye collaboration ke bare mein discuss karne waale hai meeting mein..
Damini:- haan ruko main dekhthi hoon.. damini is just about to get up from her chair, when she sees two guys walking into the dining hall…. Both are dressed to leave to the office… they smile at the two woman…. Prachi says:- morning prithvi… while damini says:- good morning milsi…
The guys come & sit on the dining table… & then milind says:- morning damy… while prithvi says:- morning prachu…. Kya baatein ho rahii thi tum dono ke beech bohat zyada excited lag rahee ho..
Damini:- kuch nahii prithvi hum dono bas purane dino ko yaad karr rahe the…. Achcha waise tum dono late ho… please abhi jaldi se nhasta karo aur phir humein tum dono se kuch baat karni hai…
Milind:- baat.. kya baat karni hai… milind is curious to know….
Prachi:- [has a naughty glint in her eyes & she says] offohhh mills, tum mein zara sa bhi sabr nahii hai… pehle tum log breakfast kar lo phir hum batathe hai… humein kuch important baat karni hai aap dono se..
Now suddenly prithvi:- achcha yeh sab theek hai lekin yeh agni kahaan reh gaya hai… aur woh ab thak yahaan breakfast ke liye aaya kyun nahii…
Damini:- shayad woh so raha hoga… tum dono breakfast karke office jao, main aur prachu agni ke saath aa jaayenge..
Milind:- arre waah yeh kya baat hui tum dono hum dono kii respective better halves ho, lekin aadhe se zyadan waqt tho agni ke saath rehthi ho… yaar prithvi mujhe tho lagtha hai kii yeh dono humse zyada lift agni ko dethi hai..
Prithvi:- haan milsi, tune bilkul sahii kaha… main bhi is baat ko observe karr raha hoon.. lekin kya karr sakthe hai, zamana aisa hogaya hai… [prithvi aur milind yeh baat damini aur prachi ko chidane ke liye kehthe hai..]
Prachi:- helloooo… chup karo tum dono.. jahaan chance mila is baat ko lekar shuru ho jaathe ho kii hum tumhe importance nahii dethe..
Damini:- aur haan agar tum dono chahthe ho kii main aur prachu tum dono ko bhi utna hi bhaav de jitna hum humare dearest agni ko dethe hai, tho tum dono ko humare liye kuch karna padega….
Prithvi in a very suspicious tone says:- kya karna padega humein.. kahiin yeh tumhare us mission ka hissa tho nahii…
Prithvi & milind look at damini & prachi & as if they get there answer by looking at their faces, milind says:- ohhh… no… not again…. Hum tumhare koi 'Khichidi Pakao' mission mein nahii shamil hone waale hai…..
[damini & prachi make a puppy type of face…]
Prithvi:- guys milsi ne joh kaha woh bilkul sahii hai… dekho aaj thak tum dono ne 'khichidi pakao' plans ke shayad 90 missions kiye honge aur humne tum logon ka saath bhi diya, lekin is barr nahii.. dekho harr barr your missions flop, aur is barr bhi flop hii hoga… tho isse achcha hoga kii hum aise koi faltu plans kare hii na…
Milind:- haan prithvi ne bilkul sahii kaha… tum logon ke plans ek dum tumhare mission ke naam ke jaisa hai.. tumhare ideas bhi bekaar hothe hai aur tumhare mission ka naam bhi… yeh kya naam hua 'Khichidi Pakao Number' whatever… yeh aisa lagtha hai kii jaise koi director apne useless actor ke retakes count karr raha hai….
Is baat par milind & prithvi hy-fy with each other… while prachi & damini give them angry stares…
Now prachi says:- milind humare joh ideas hothe hai na woh tum logon ke ideas se tho bohat behtar hothe hai.. & most of the time humare ideas isliye kaam nahii karthe kyunke you guys goof up…
Damini:- exactly… aur haan humare mission ka naam 'khichidi pakao number whatever' nahii hai.. aur na hii humare ideas sirf 90 hai.. darasal humare mission ka naam 'khichidi pakao number 99' hai.. & this is the 99th time we are working on this mission & trying to hook up your best friend, Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal with a girl..
Prithvi:- arre tum log tho aise baat karr rahe ho jaise humara woh best friend tum logon ka kuch nahii lagtha…
Prachi:- nahii aisi koi baat nahii hai, aapka woh dost humare liye bohat khaas hai aur issi liye hum log yeh koshish karr rahe hai kii humare us khaas dost kii zindagi mein koi ek khaas 'HumraahI' aa jaaye joh usse poora kar de..
Damini:- absolutely.. aur haan agar tum dono apne best friend kii sach mein fikar karthe ho tho tum dono ko humara saath dena hoga… [damini tries the emotional blackmailing… she winks at prachi, as they know that emotional blackmail will surely work on these three best friends..]
Milind:- ab yeh kya baat hui.. damy tum tho blackmail karr rahii ho…. Not fair…
Prachi:- well jahaan thak hume lagtha hai anything is fair, kyunke after all hum joh karr rahe hai agni ke liye karr rahe hai..… ab aap log decide kar lo kii aapko humara saath dena hai ya nahii….
Prithvi:- ab prachu tune keh diya hai tho humein tho tera saath dena hii hoga.. tho theek ab batao is barr tumhara kaunsa wacky plan hai…
Milind:- haan batao kya karrna hai.. lekin haan ek baat hai agar agni ko is plan ka patah chal gaya tho uske zimedaar tum dono honge… bolo manzoor hai..
Prachi & damini nod their heads like obedient kids.. now prachi, damini, milind aur prithvi ko kehthe rehthe hai kii woh unka breakfast jaldi khatam kare… milind, prithvi do as they are told, kyunke they know kii when both the woman are hyper excited they should not do things which irks them.. after having the breakfast, damini, prachi explain to milind & prithvi 'Khichidi Pakao Number 99', to them & they also tell them what they should do… after discussing the plan, milind & prithvi leave to the office, while damini & prachi go upstairs to the third floor… as they reach the third floor, they knock on one of the big doors, on that door, in the center, the following is carved 'Bright Dawn'.. on the either side of the written carving, one side there was a a picture of a early morning sunrise which was carved & on the other side, there was a carving like the fire… damini knocks on the door, but when they get no response, prachi peeps inside the room..
Prachi:- damy, yeh dekho yeh janab ab bhi so rahe hai…
Damini:- theek hai chalo usse utathe hai…. Prachi & damini open the door slowly & then they look around the room… saare room mein kapde bhikre pade hothe hai… the rooms walls are painted in white & black.. the room had a high ceiling… damini & prachi starts picking up the shirts, files, papers, charger & other things which are lying in a messed up state in the room.. then they both walk to the bed, sitting on the either side of the bed… they look at the person who is sleeping there, he has his face covered.. only his forehead was visible. Finally prachi damini ko kuch ishara karthi hai & then suddenly both damini & prachi apne cell phones ko us insaan ke kaan ke pass rakhthe hai.. they both play it at the same time & yahaan yeh insaan gets up with a jerk…. The bedsheet is drawn out of his face his eyes her still droopy, his hair is dishelved.. he has both his hands covering his ears.. uski aisi haalat dekhkar both damini & prachi laugh & they hy-fy each other.. that person is still having a frown on his face.. while prachi & damini together say:- good morningggg Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal.. that person is none other than agni…. Agni looks at both of them, he makes a face & says:- kayeka good morning… harr agle din tum dono shaitaan mere kaan mein aakar yeh jungle boy tarzan waala ringtone bajathe ho… yeh kaunsa tareeka hai utane ka… aur tum dono ko koi aur ringtone nahii mile, yeh tarzan, junglee jaisa chillatha hai aur usse tum good morning kehthe ho… khaak good morning… ufff…. While agni keeps saying all this damini & prachi have a time of their life laughing… this irritates agni more & he says:- aur ab tum dono yeh khee kheee kheekhee karna band karo… warna mujhse bura koi nahii hoga..
Ab damini aur prachi ek saath milkar pinch on agni's cheeks & ruffle his hair & they say together:- agni waise tumse bura tho aur koi hai bhii nahii… they start laughing again.. listening to their continuous laughter, the stern look from agni's face changes to a grin, he laughs & says:- thank you… aur iske baad theeno bhi milkar khoob hasthe hai.. this is what happened between the three of them every second day when the girls came to wake agni up… us ghar mein paanch log rehthe hai, both the girls were, very close to agni.. they saw a elder brother in him.. they shared all their feelings with agni first even before sharing them with their respective husbands.. agni, prachi & damini formed a great team.. when these three ganged up, prithvi & milind had to literally run for their lives.. milind & prithvi had named the three damini, agni & prachi 'The Dangerous Trio'…. After the laughter subsided.. agni with a smile on his face says:- good morning ladies…. Both damini & prachi wish him good morning… & then damini & prachi start cleaning the room…. Now agni looks at them & says:- ladies tum dono ko nahii lagtha kii tumhe mujhe utane ka tareeke mein kuch change laana chahiye.. jis din se tum log is ghar mein aagaye ho, us din se tum log mujhe yahii tarzan waala ringtone bajakar uta rahe ho… now is baat ko tho itne saal hogaye hai tho tum logon ko nahii lagtha tumhe yeh style change karna hai… because mujhe utane ke tareeke bhi waise hii hogaya hai jaise tum dono is ghar mein hogaye ho…
Both damini & prachi have a hand on their hip, in a way to answer kaise.. agni with a cheeky smile on his face says:- tum logon ka utane ka style aur tum dono is ghar mein rehna… ek jaise hogaya hai….. you know typically old fashioned .. kuch naya karo yaar.. add spice to your life…. [agni teases both of them]
Yeh baat sunnthe hii both damini & prachi rush to agni & they start hitting him on his arm…
Agni tries to save himself & he says:- arre… ladies.. sorry.. dekho aisa kabhi nahii kahuga… please mujhe chod do… Bhagwaan ke liye mujhe chod do. [agni adds dramatically…]
Listening to agni's dramatic expression both the woman again crack up & they start giggling away to glory… prachi, damini get back to their work of cleaning the room… when agni says:- ladies mujhe ek baat samaj mein nahii aathi tum ladkiyaan itna kheekhee karke kyun hasthe ho…. It is very tacky…
Prachi:- agni woh kya hai na tum ko ladkiyon kii yeh kheekhee tab thak tacky lagegi jab thak tumhari zindagi mein koi ladki nahii aathi… jab tumhari zindagi mein koi ladki aa jaayegi na tab us ladki kii kheekhee tumhe ek khoosurat dhwani lagegi tumhare kaano ke liye… issi liye hum kehthe hai kii koi ladki dhoond kar shaadi kar lo…
Damini:- billkul sahii kaha prachu ne.. tho agni kya kehthe ho hum tumhare liye ladki dhoond na shuru kare…
Agni looks at both of them, he has a expression which was like here they go again.. he sighs & says:- ladies tum dono kabhi thakkthe nahii ho na… kitni barr keh chukka hoon kii mujhe shaadi nahii karni hai… aur na hii mujhe ladkiyon mein koi interest hai.. aur rahii baat ladkiyon kii kheekhee tho main din bhar tum dono kii kheekhee bohat sunntha hoon mere liye wohii kaafi hai… aur main nahii chahtha kii yeh kheekhee kheekhee mujhe koi khoobsurat dhwani lage kheekhee, kheekhee kii tarah hii theek hai mere liye… main aise hii theek hoon.. bas ab tum log yeh jaan lo that I'am not interested… & stop trying…
Damini:- well agni just like you don't stop giving us lame excuses for not getting married, ussi tarah prachu aur main us din thak nahii rukenge jis din thak tum shaadi ke liye taiyaar nahii ho jaathe… tho bas tum bahane banathe raho hum baat chedthe rahenge…
Agni:- achcha theek hai.. tum logon ko joh karna hai karo.. lekin I'am not interested…
Prachi:- agni ek baat poochun, please bura nahii manna….
Agni:- haan pooch na prachu.. lekin haan yeh matt poochna kii main shaadi kab karunga.. uske alawa kuch bhi pooch le…
Prachi:- agni tum kahiin gay tho nahii ho na… agar tum gay ho tho humein bata sakthe ho, hum tumhari shaadi ek ladke se bhi karwa sakthe hai…
Agni is shocked & he shouts:- whattttttttttttt…
Damini & prachi laugh.. & prachi says:- haan, aur nahii tho kya tum hii tho keh rahe the you are not interested in girls, tumhe shaadi nahii karni hai.. tho mujhe laga shayad tumhe ladki nahii ladke pasand ho… agar aisa hai tho tum humko bata sakthe ho.. waise bhi aaj ke daur mein sab kuch chaltha hai…
Agni:- hahahaha… very funny ladies… [agni a tapli on both the girls head.. & then he says that he would get ready & come..] while going to the washroom, agni looks back at prachi, damini & says:- damy, prachu tum dono ko koi zaroorat room ko theek karne kii.. main sham mein karr loonga.. tum dono bhi jaake ready ho jao…
Damini very naughtily says:- agni jis din is ghar mein Mrs. Agni Vashist Garewal aajaayegi na us din hum dono yeh sab karna chod denge..
Agni:- naahhh… mujhe lagtha hai kii tum dono hona yeh kaam karne ke liye.. so I don't need a wife….
Prachi:- agni soch lo agar biwi aayegi na tho tumhe woh jungle boy tarzan ka ringtone nahii sunna padega… you will be saved from the ringtone.. aur tumhari biwi tumhe pyaar se utayegi… socho agni… socho…
Agni:- not interested…. women they never stop trying….. uffff….
Both damini & prachi throw a cushion at agni & say:- men they never stop dodging… agni ducks when the cushions are thrown at him & he says:- missed it… yeh kehkar agni washroom ke andar chala jaatha hai… while in the room prachi & damini sigh & smile at agni's antics… this was a regular feature.. at every single stage both damini & prachi get the topic of agni's marriage & his wife… prachi & damini keep mentioning it while agni tries all his means to escape the situations.. agni has named each situation 'The Great Escapade', just like the 'Khichidi Pakao' Mission of prachi & damini… agni's mission was to escape from their plans… jaise the khichidi plan has reached the 98 mark, even agni's, the great escapade has reached the number 98.. kyunke jab bhi prachi aur damini ek nayi koshish karthe to hook agni with a new girl, agni kuch na kuch karke bach jaatha hai… this was their way of life.. their way of laughter…. Prachi, damini never asked agni about his past.. they know that things are not ok between agni & his family but they never intrude into that… they just let agni be.. many a times agni tries to stay away from them in order to give the two couples some privacy, but milind, prachi, prithvi & damini never let agni feel left out.. this was their home, their life, their relationship….. each & everyone in the house loved the other unconditionally.. such was their attachment… it was the place which the five called their home… 'The Utpal Villa'..
Damini & prachi left agni's room, they both left a note stuck on the mirror…. After a while agni comes out of the washroom ready to go to the office… he goes in front of the mirror to comb his hair.. when he sees a note stuck to the mirror, he take it & reads it aloud…. The note:- socho… 'Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal' socho… agar shaadi kar loge tho tumhari zindagi kitni aasaan ho jaayegi… tumhe tho ek tie bhi baand na nahii padega… agar biwi aajaayegi tho woh tumhara tie bandegi…. humari baat par zaroor gaur farmana… Prachu, Damy..;);)

Agni just smiles, shaking his head & says:- in dono ka kuch nahii ho saktha… agni knew very well that the girls had used the tie example, knowing pretty well how much he hated to tye a tie… agni then starts looking in the mirror…. When suddenly a laughter starts ringing in his ears.. agni closes his ears with full force as if he is blocking the laughter from reaching his ears.. aur usse prachi aur damini kii kahii hui baat yaad aathi hai of how laughter of your 'love' becomes music to your ears…. Agni has a frown on his face… & then he crumples the note in his hand & he throws it in the dust-bin.. agni leaves the room in a huff.. it was like the laughter had caused him discomfort & it was like the laughter haunted him & he wanted to go away from it…
Later agni comes down, he joins prachi & damini who are waiting for him to have his breakfast… agni diverts his mind talking & teasing both of them… while prachi, damini are not left behind & they keep teasing agni saying that if he continues to stay away from girls then one fine day there will be a big news in the headlines which would say 'Agni Vashist Garewal' the most eligible bachelor is supposedly a gay… prachi & damini tease agni saying that agar ab bhi woh ladkiyon se durr bhaagtha raha tho they both will publish this very news in their media publication itself…. Agni inturn teases them saying that woh unki life kii personal baaton ko out kar dega, jaise kii milind aur prithvi ne kya kya papad bale the to win over their respective wives.. all there teasing keeps going on & on without an end… all the three together leave to 'SDP Media Home'.. all the way their teasing sessions continued.. this was regular feature.. even the employees working at 'SDP' were used to this.. 'SDP Media Home' was spread over a huge area.. with in the land, it had three huge buildings… one related to radio television, one related to newspaper & magazine, one was the main office, where all the five managed the work… it's branches was spread everywhere… prachi was the finance head in the media home, while damini was the creative ad designer… while milind, agni & prithvi were the joint holders of the 'Managing Director' of the company… they also took care of the CEO & COO position together.. everything was combined.. in between these five no one was the boss… they all valued each others opinion… & regarded each other with respect & love…

Their daily busy routine of life started as they reached the office premises… they may be a family at home, but in the office they were all just professionals… all of them were highly regarded for their professionalism… though being professionals they were never unfair to their employees… & this earned them a lot of respect… the young girls in the office had a crush on their three handsome bosses… everyone knew milind & prithvi were out of their reach as they both were happily married to prachi & damini.. it was obvious to one & all that agni kept a distance with girls, the only girls he was close to were prachi & damini.. but that did not stop the young girls in the office to try their luck on their boss agni.. agni used to receive roses, card, marriage proposal, gifts at his office very second day.. agni used to just ignore this fact, while milind & prithvi used to have a count of the proposals, gifts, roses & cards agni was receiving… milind, prithvi had a heck of a time along with prachi & damini, teasing agni, while agni used to get irritated…
A meeting was supposed to be held on that day as they were thinking to collaborate with another media firm.. all the five meet in the conference room, with other important people in each section…. The meeting starts at around 6 in the evening, prachi & damini make sure that the meeting ends by 8….. later they nudge milind & prithvi to carry out their plan.. milind & prithvi do as they are told.. they tell agni that a new client wants to meet them at 'Hotel Plaza' at 9 to discuss a future business deal… when agni asks prithvi & milind to accompany him, they both say that they are going out with prachi & damini.. agni falls for their lie & he says he would go & attend the meeting alone… agni leaves for the meeting while prachi & damini give thumbs up to one another for their plan being successful… now they just hoped all went well…
On the other side agni reached the place where he was supposed to attend the meeting.. at the reception agni is informed that the person is already waiting for him.. agni walks into the restaurant… but as he goes in he starts to feel weird as he sees that there are couples all around enjoying their candle light dinner.. agni finds it weird that a client wanted a meeting to be held at such a place.. he anyway goes to his table, there was another shock waiting for him on the table.. when he reaches there, he is surprised to see a girl sitting there.. he consoles himself saying that may be the client is a girl.. agni with poise takes his seat… after the initial introduction, agni tries to come straight to the point & talk business.. but whenever agni tried to talk business all that the girl did was she talked about food, flirted with him & at a stage agni was shocked when the girl started telling him that what they will do after the wedding & where they will go for their honeymoon… it took some time for agni to register what actually was happening here…. the girl was trying to get close to him, when agni abruptly stood up, he left the place in the pretense of using the loo & he literally ran out of the restaurant & the hotel premises… agni heaves a sigh of relief when he reaches his car & he is on his way back driving home.. agni was thinking what he would do to milind, prithvi, prachi & damini for getting him stuck with such a girl.. he was muttering curses to them under his breath.. he switches on the radio to change his mind…. The song starts playing..

The Song:-

"Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa...
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa...
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa...
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa.....
Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai...
Tanhaiyon mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon...
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda...
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar...
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai...
Kyun hoon ab bhi main yun bekaraar..
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa...
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa
Faasle hain magar phir bhi tu door nahin...
Maanke hum to hai, par tu majboor nahin...
Har lamha mujhko ye tadpati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai...
Tanhaiyon mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon....
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda...
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar...
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai...
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar...
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa...
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa...
Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai...
Tanhaiyon mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon....
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda...
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar...
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai...
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar...
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa....
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa..."

(Courtesy Movie: Pathshaala)

With every word of the song agni is getting lost, his cars speed doubles up… he was getting certain images of his past which he wants to just wipe out of his heart & mind.. his cars speed keeps increasing & the anger on his face can be clearly seen.. but with the anger there was a sense of pain which only he understood… agni did not want to fall weak… he finally stops the car with a loud screech one's he reaches the 'Utpal Villa'.. he wipes the lone tear forming in his eyes, plasters a fake smile on his face & walks inside the house… he starts looking for the inmates of the house in hall & kitchen, when he does not find them there, he knows where to find them… he walks towards the other end of the villa, to the sit out area by the pool.. his guess was right he sees all of them sitting there & gossiping.. agni walks in & he sits in one of the chairs as soon as the others see agni, they get quiet.. agni just sits there & he was rubbing his forehead with his hands.. he does not say anything.. damini walks behind agni & she starts massaging agni's temples. Prachi sits by agni's side & she says:- so it did not go so well..
Agni sighs & says:- ohh… just ask me how bad it was.. God… sirf main jaantha hoon main khud ko us chipku monica khanna se kaise bachakarr aaya hoon… peecha hii nahi chod rahii thi…
Damini:- kya hua hai agni….
Agni:- damy yeh pooch kii kya nahii hua hai.. God woh ladki patah nahii kya kya keh rahii thi.. keh rahii thi shaadi ke baad yeh karenge shaadi ke baad woh karenge.. yahaan honeymoon pe jaayenge… yeh aaj kal kii ladkiyaan are just too much.. aur jab mujhe is baat ka ehsaas kii wahaan koi client meeting nahii balki aap logon ka ek aur planned date hai, tho main apni jaan bachakarr bhaag aaya, uffffff kitna chipakthi hai woh ladki…
Prithvi & milind had a tough time controlling their laughter listening to agni's experience with the girl.. damini controls her laughter & says:- tho tum khudko bachakar kaise aaye…
Agni:- well maine usse kaha kii mujhe washroom jaana hai aur isse pehle kii woh kuch kahe main wahaan restaurant se bhaag aaya…
Milind:- iska matlab tu us ladki ko wahii chod kar bhaag aaya..
Prithvi:- arre milsi yeh agni bhaag nahii aaya, balki yeh us chipku se washroom ka bahana banakar apni izzat bachakarr rafoo chakkar hogaya aur yeh yahaan ghar aagaya washroom use karne ke liye… kyun sahii hai na agni….. prithvi teases agni… prithvi & milind hy-fy… & both simply roll with laughter at their theory of thinking about agni ka izzat bachakarr bhaag aana… prithvi & milind continue teasing agni, when agni says:- ab tum dono kii khair nahii ruko zara tum dono.. abhi batatha hoon…
yeh kehkar agni starts running behind prithvi & milind who were running for their lives… while running they continued laughing while agni was scolding them… finally agni gets his chance & he pushes both milind & prithvi in the swimming pool.. now agni laughs at them, even prachi & damini join him in the laughter.. ab agni in a very sweet tone tells damini & prachi that he is hungry he goes onto add that the chipku did not even let him eat, with her chipakne ke antics… this is met by another round of laughter even milind & prithvi join the mirth of laughter.. damini, prachi tell agni that they would get their plates of food here as everyone has to eat… damini, prachi leave.. yahaan agni apne haath agge badatha hai so that prithvi & milind can come out of the pool.. prithvi & milind inturn pull agni inside the pool & all the three guys in the pool laugh as though they have run away from the mental asylum.. when they are joined by prachi & damini they sit at the edge of the pool while the prachi & damini keep feeding the three guys & even they have their food… they continue to talk, laugh, smile, tease & play with one another… this was life for them.. this was their happiness….. this was the thing 'Utpal Villa' had the most, the oneness in relationships… though they were not related by birth, by blood, but they had a bond which was higher compared to any relationship by birth or blood.. we see that all the five are having a time of their lives by the pool side smiling & talking to each other….

With this ends the first part of "HumraahI"…. This was a look into our hero's life… the next part our heroine will make her entrty… it will be her life in the second part.. I hope all of you liked this part… I hope this was upto your expectations…. Thank you all so much for the comments…

Nehuuu I never thought I would post this part so soon, but I wanted to post this part as a gift for your birthday… I hope you liked it.. & I hope you liked our hero's entry & life… & dear wishing you a very happy birthday once again.. I wish & pray all your dreams come true.. keep smiling….. love you…🤗

Guys please send in your comments.. even criticism is welcome.. I'am waiting for your comments eagerly….😊

Preview For The NextPart:- Seher's Entry & Her Life…

The next part will be posted in this week itself… & please don't forget to comment….

Take Care…
Byeeeee…

Love
Surya..😊

Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Hi Dear😊
How r u?

Firstly, Happy Birthday Neha.....WIsh u all the happiness of this world. Hope this day brings a lot happiness for u. Enjoy ur day.😃

The update is awesome yaar👏, It is written beautifully. The way u have described everything is just awesome. I loved the way u have described the whole house. It gives a clear view on reading.

The bong between these five people is shown beautifully. Loved Agni's entry and all the masti- mazak between the friends. Damini and Prachi's plan was gud but Agni runs from there. I liked all the teasing part.😆 😉 😆

In Whole, I just loved the whole part.
Please continue soon.
Luv Preet.😃

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NIDA

@NidaRajeev

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

hayee soni awesome concept n name.. 😊 simply brilliant.....as always... 😳 👏

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Wow wonderful update.. really liked the bonding between all the five.. esp Agni-Damy-Prachi... very curious to knw ab t Agni's past.. do continue soon ..

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

awesome part

i really liked the way u have described the house that the five live in it gave a better percpective of the place.i really enjoyed the way u decribed the relationship between all the members and how they were bonded with each other.It seems damani and prachi wont stop their plans untill they get agni married.The way the girls were teasing agni was really intresting and i liked the way u showed how agni still thinks about his past even though he doesnt want to.cant wait to read the next part to see how seher is living.

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