Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
Amazing parts Surya that was defiantly a big surprise😊 three updates at once finally finished reading them.Dont have words to describe the parts.I really loved the way u showed seher and agni's feelings and their emotions.The songs that u included in the parts were really nice they really went with the situation.I really liked the way seher was getting agni to open up to her even if it was through his anger.
The scene were seher throws water on agnis face was really beautifully described and agnis reaction to seher was even more intresting i really liked the line were he said that yeh larki mujhe pagal karde gi.Also the scene were agni was doing his pushups and trying not to think about seher was amazingly potrayed i could actually imagine rajeev doing that.
Seher has really become strong i really like her determination in winning back agni and proving to him how she loves him the scene were she is talking to maan and agni gets jealous was one of the best scenes i really liked the way u showed how agni cant help himself reacting to what seher does.But later when he becomes rude to seher it shows how much he has hidden inside off him.I felt really bad 4 seher even though agni doesnt know the truth it was still hard to see seher having to listen to all the bad words.
I really liked the way u showed how agni was feeling guilty after hurting seher no matter what agni loves seher a lot. Sehers letter was really funny i really liked the way she was annoying agni and the car scene was really intresting.Agni and seher are more like tom and jerry always trying to annoy each other.The office scenes were amazingly described i really liked the way u showed sehers nervousness but the way she handeled it was really good.The lift scene was really good i really liked the way agni was trying to see wether seher hurt her self or not and the scene were seher says she isnt a girl but a grown up woman was really good the best part was agni's reply.
After reading the parts i have really enjoyed the way u have potrayed agni and sehers charachters and the way they are evolving.
Cant wait 2 read the next part.
Happy Diwali Surya and thanks 4 such wonderful parts.
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