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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Firstly....wishing RAJ....a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! 🥳

And now cuming to the part Dii....I dont knw wat magic is this.....I mean is it becoz of RK's bday that I found this part exceptionally well written!! U r wondering if the emotions were well depicted.....here I think....this was one of ur finest works!! 👏👏👏

awww... thanku so much sumi.... you know what, i think even i gave my best shot for the 7th part only...aur kyun na ho after all it is our Mr. Perfect's birthday.... kyunnn dear.....😳😳😳😳

Oh yes....I can sooo well see the beautiful parts cuming ahead....and how tru u were when u said....Ladki bhi apmna kamal dikhayegi....😆😆

dekho sumi maine sahii kaha tha na kii seher apna kamaaal dikhayegi... just wait & watch woh agge agge aur kya kya dhamaal karthi hai...😆😆😆
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From the very starting.....that is Seher's convo wis Milind-Prithvi....and then her making Agni Gay....😆😆...it was hilarious....however all the while moments were being counted on our parts as well....as to when Agni-Seher will meet!!

even i was counting moments when seher & agni will come face to face....

And again....that scene was beautifully done by you....followed by the dining scene....awesum!! Meanwhile the emotions....were beautifully described thru the eyes!! 👏👏⭐️

thanku...😃


Then....the green chilly....and black coffee.....portion was nice....and of course the best part was Seher going to Agni's room....and watever followed was simply amazing!! I am actually speechless after reading all that u wrote.....I loved every bit of it....and its just I cant quote almost every line....so I am avoiding doing that!! 😆😆

awwww.. i'am glad that you liked every bit of the scenes...😳😳😳😳


And then Agni picked her up in his arms....and tok her to her room...whereas she kissed him acting as a sweetener for both....😳😆😉...lovely lovely scene Dii!!

hehehe... yeh scene maine isliye likha kyunke i wanted to spice it up towards the end, woh bhii tadka marrke...😉😉


And yeah....the precap seems really interesting....lovely song ahead....w8ing for that eagerly....do continue soon!! And of course....thank you for such a sweet part on such a special day....a gr8 start to this wonderful day....⭐️⭐️

thanku very much again... i will try & post the next part soon..😊

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

kya sahi mauka chuna hai aap ne maam...ud k liye...??? raj ka b'day...ha ha ha...!!! spl tha yeh ud...kyoun ki ek toh raj ak b'day...dushra...agni aur seher ki mulakat...tishri...jo ki mujhe bilkul bhi nahi kahna chahiye...phir bhi bata rahi hun...plz...ise seriously mat lena...par mujhe achanak laga ki is ud ko tune dil se likh diya hai...!!! itne khubshurti k sath tune har ek chiz ko describe kiya hai ki...kya kahun...just loved it...so much...

waise prii mujhe is baat kii khushi hui kii tujhe is part ke itne special reasons lage.. you know what for the first time even i felt i was writing with all my heart... aur kyun na likhthi, after all it was RK's b'day, the person who is very special.... thankuuuuuuuuuu....😳😳
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suru se akhiri tak sab kuch awesome tha...aur voh kiss scene bhi awesome-blosome tha...!!! in fact seher ka agni ko irritate karne ke scenes na bade funny the...!!! n of course...chilli n black cofee...bhi too gud the...!!! par black coffe k baad sugar me jyada maza aaya ...in fact voh scene is ud ka cherry tha...!!!
hehe.i'am glad you liked all the scenes....😃
matlab imagine kar k yeh ud ek b'day cake hai toh phir cherries toh honge hi na...
dinner table par...kya ho raha tha...!!! bichara agni thik se kha bhi nahi pa raha tha...seher ki wajah se...voh kuch jyada hi wild ho gayi thi...he he he...!!! nails se jo hamla karr rahi thi...aur bichara agni kisi ko kuch kah bhi nahi pa raha tha...!!! jaldi jaldi me khana khya...toh frnds se galiyan suni...aur upar se thik se kha bhi nahi paya...ha ha ha...
prii bas agge agge dekh seher kya kya rang dikhathi hai humare hero ko...hehehe...yeh tho bas shuruwaat hai....😆😆
ab itna sab kuch ho jane k baad...i hope...ki janab ka gussa kuch thanda ho jaye...ab itne hot kiss k baad...agar us ka gussa thanda nahi hua toh phir se seher ko kuch aur karna padega...
well agni ka ghussa thanda tho hoga lekin may be after some more kisses... who know...ahem..ahem...😉😉😉
song baht hi khubshurat tha...
shukriya
arre haan...kahna bhul gayi...vph agni ka seher ko apne bahon me uthana bhi mast tha...!!! chalo...gusse me hi sahi...par agni ne kuch toh kiya...jo seher k liye tha... soch prii agar agni ghusse mein seher ko utta saktha hai tho pyaar mein kya kya kar saktha hai....me yeh sochke blushing......hehahaha...😆😆😆😆
ab jaldi se cont kar... dekhogi. sochoongi.. kal, parsun kuch kahoongi..... marrna matt.. mazaak kar rahii thi, will surely try to update soon..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

will update soon..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

sorry for the delay will try & update soon..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

pls post the next part asap


sorry for the delay in the update will try & update soon..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

will try & update as soon as i can..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear take care and will wait for the surprise too...................know u wont disappoint us but to be honest the waits kills......................


thanku for undestanding deepu... i will try & post the update asap along with the surprise & i hope i don't disappoint you guys too....😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

take care... We will wait for the update..........


thanks for understanding golu... the update is on the way..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

when u posting the next part dear???????????????


deepu the next part will be up soon may be as soon as i reply to all the comments on the 7th part of the ff..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Guys Thank You All So Much For Your Over-Whelming Response On The 7th Part Of 'HumraahI', It Really Means A Lot...😃
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 14 years ago

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