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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#861

OMG! This is a hugeeeee leap! =D

I loved it..happy for Samrat and Dia :) And my god..Nups is super succesfful! and Mayank's back..waiting to know the FB!

-Mansi

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-Sindhu-

@-Sindhu-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#862

Hey Ruchi!! 🤗

It's been a long while since I commented on this FF. And I sincerely apologize for that! Sorry! *kaan pakad ke*

The story is very well shaped. Every character has it's own importance.

The pain Nupur, Mayank, Samrat and others went through was very well described.

Mayank repents for his deeds. That's good. A person realizing his mistake is indeed a very great thing. And the efforts he put to mend things was nicely explained.

Nupur's pain was nothing when compared to Mayank's! He deserves punishment. But I think it's high time that she forgives him as the story took a leap.

Samrat and Dia got married. That's so nice!

Aww... I love Agastya. He is such a matured boy.

I'm so excited to meet HIS Uncle Sharma. The way you stop your chapters at a crucial point is what I love!

I love the way you writing. Simple yet elegant style of writing. Beautifully written piece of work. And I'm very glad that I'm reading it.

Love you loads,

Sindhuja

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#863

*Edited*

I dint know you were reading my new FF re! 😲 Anyway, thanks a million and I've updated it. 😳 And hey - wasn't this too short? But like always I like the change you've made. I wonder what happened to Mayank. It's getting really interesting now. Nicely written!

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#864

thank God u updated

i was jumping to c the pm

loved the fact tht nupur is still tht stable ....strong woman...

beautifully grown charcter of Agastya love there bond

Dad turns to UNCLE sharma...han life

ya n i love diya

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#865

OMG Ruchi ! yay you Updated it soon ! I love the chapter. So it took a fifteen year leap. Cool ! I guess Uncle Sharma is Mayank😉 Update Soon

Natasha

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#866

it was an awesum udpate

the story moved 15 yrs into teh future

i never expected nupur to 4give mayank so easily

agastya is such a sensible child

so im assuming that uncle sharma is none other than mayank

it will be interesting to see how mayank n agastya met

and im sure mayank knows taht agastya is his son

im sure the next update will be even more exciting

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#867

15 years leap wooooooooow it was awesome part n amazingly written i so hope nups this time forgive mayu i loved san n dia couple
thanks alott for the pm

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#868

Ruchiiiiiiiii

amazing

amazing

too good

so u took 15yrs leap!!!!

N I know tht uncle sharma

hope everything will get well soon

love agastya

cont soon girl