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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988
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yeay!!! hoot hoot!!! m d 1st one 2 comment dis tym....!!!😃,,,#let me dance 4 dis sudden unexpected joy!!#🥳
but m also feeling lyk yelling at u now..as u hv stopped again at such a crucial point!!!😲...

well...othrwise i luvd it...it's always a pleasure 2 read ur creations..😍..though i hv missed d 1st 2 parts..jst finished reading dem..den read dis part..2 maintain d consistency..😊...ruchi.. d plot is xtremely interesting.. i stil dnt get it ke kya huya hain mayur k beech.. well.. will be waiting 4 d nxt part.. update real soon..🤗 may god bless ya sweety..👍🏼

luv mayur always!!!🤗

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww............gettin back to after soo long !!!!

after ''love forver''

*squeeeeezin into a tight hugggg *

glad u liked it ...:) :)

love

-Ruchi-

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Tasnim

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

hey

awesome ff

add me to pm list

v interesting

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan
OMG mayank is so mean
n nupur cares so much abt her parents n sam abt nupur
i think sam loves nupur?
an awesum update
plz update asap

thanx...glad u liked it

will continue asap :)

--Ruchi--

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

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NahinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnNNNNNN this can't be happening!!

I wanted to be the first one !!!!😭😭*Cry with tearzzz*(Aur kissi aur cheez se cry kar te hai🤔?)🤣🤣🤣

I ran here when I saw ur pm !!!!!!!

sachi mein no lie!!!!

theeke I am the 3rd one

lol......a bigggggg jhapppppi for u !!!!.... :) :)

yeahhhhhh
now to this part

Ruchiiiiii me going to hug u now !!!returnin back a biggg hug again :)
can't tell u how happy I am to finally read this !!!me happpppy toooo...
ufffffff goshh Mayankzzzz soo mean !!!!!yeah😡😡;)

he made Nupur said yes to marry him or else he will take her fatherzzz job away

thatzzz just soo meann of him !!!yeah...but there z more to it ;) ...wait to read ;)

I can't believe it that no one sees her pain but Sammy😭

n he tellz his mom that Mayu forced her to marry him yeah...he is chweeeeet in this ff ...

when they were in the garden !!!!!!
I can't wait to read mom !!
wat will his mum say????????mjhe bhi nahin pata😆😆😆...kuch nahin hota , dimaag ke ghode runnn karne mein time hai😆😆😆

n haan want to know MayUrzzz story too !!!! yeah u'll get to know it very sooooooonnnn !!!!!!!
I have sligtly a idea wat it is

but sometimezz I am wrong (or is it mostly)😕😭😭😭🤣🤣awwwwwwwwwww......kuch nahin hota ...

anywayzz do continue ASAP na !!! anything for u 🤗🤗🤗

I want to read the next part right now !!!!ohkkkk....ahem ahem !!.,..thodha sa time limit puhleeeejjjj....
now now now!!!

luvv ya sis🤗love ya tooooo darlin :)

n haan I want the next part soooooo oooo oooo lonGGG !!!!! yeah sure :) :) :)

-Lina-

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Ahh, it's an awesome part Ruchi. =))

Gosh, I can so feel Nupur's pain. i feel really sad for her. 😔

Ok, why is Mayank acting a bit evil?

Nice to see Samrat's concern for her.

You write really well Ruchi.

Please do continue soon

-Daania

aww...thanx Daania ..🤗

glad u liked the update ..!!

u'll cum to know abt the reason soon ...for sure :)

-Ruchi-

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

Ruchi

i read it first time and trust me i loved it truely

I am just hating Mayank .he is behaving such a chip

and blackmailing Nupur

So bad

I am just wating for the next update

please update soon

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#188

Allah ke naam pe update de de baba!!

Update dede! Rehem kar...allah tumhe sukhi rakhega!🤣 🤣 🤣

Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

WoW i have no words to describe ur ff.. The plot is very diffrent from other stories nd I completly fallen in love with it...

Nd Pleaseeeeeeeee Update soon i can't stand it anymore I want to knw the reason behind Mayank's cruelsness nd why Nupur left excel what did mayank do to her? Nd Nupur rlly loves her parents.. It soos weet I love the way u potrayed the relationship between Nupur nd her parents nd actually Sam nd Nupur too i get the feelign that Nupur once used to love Mayank maybe im wrong...

But yeah plzz update SoooN

Edited by princez_94 - 15 years ago

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

Hey Ruchi,

I am so sorry for the late reply. Life has been a little mess lately, finally got some time to get out. Whoa after I read the second chapter, I couldn't wait to read the third and I am so lucky I didn't have to wait hehe.

Whoa but when I read the third chapter, I too felt disgusted like Nupur. I don't know what M did with her or to her, but it must have been terrible. I so hope in time he really repents his actions. I loved sammie boy hehe! He could have been there for her, like he could have tried to stop the wedding, would love to see his role ahead and certainly MN hehe!

You are a gifted writer and write so beautifully, the emotions each one of them could be felt bang on! I am absolute fan of your writing since ages and ages.

I still remember our connections with a lot of phrases like the magic recipe, queen of romance hehe, They still are as special for me as before.

Much Love,

Senny.

Edited by Senny - 15 years ago