Taming the Wild 5 part-60 pg-93 05/08/10

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caprigurl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Emotional
Suspenseful
Cute
Lovely and endearing
this part had it all

I esp loved Armaan remaining aloof from Riddhima
she needs to beeloo all the pappad now LOLZ

and yayay to more parts!
i loooorve this FF!

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

Hey Mansi!!!

Atlast a part...wow!! Girl, you are super good yaar!! Such a long part and yes, it was worth our long wait. Cheers!!!!

I absolutely loved the way you connect and try to tie all the strings of the fic. Somedays back I re- read some of the earlier parts and was thinking about his past. You have answered it now. His past was painful. You very well know when to reveal what. AR are again super cute here. Loved the way she tried to manofy him, but how long can he be away from her.

Lovely update Mansi. Everytime you satisfy us with longest updates with full of action. Thanks for the pm, and please next time too give longer updates but do not delay too much. Okay!😊

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jiyaa_m

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

gr8 part plz update soon

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namita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

u still havent replied my comment

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Julie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Mansi Di, that was awesome!!! Totally loved reading it and soooo looking forward to the next update!!! AR together and hopefully the confession!!! ❤️

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imshveta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Phew what a part. But I just kept Reading and scrolling down and at the same time hoping that you have not stopped there but at last you had stopped and I wished I could read more. I don't know how I am going to wait for the next part.
I loved the PAM portion.
Please don't keep us waiting next time.
It was great work. Thanks for the PM

love
Shveta

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JAZZ_ACUA

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

must tell tell you mansi, the flashback was amazing. u wont believe but even i was crying while reading.
i was a fantastic part. finally the truth is out. i m sure ridhima will get armaan out of the situation very soon.

mansi, i read that only 15-16 parts are left. iiiiii want to read more of this ff. please make it a little more longer.

loved the part.
fab job.
great

jia

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sasya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#148

just loved the part👏👏👏.i was feeling so many emotions read this one part.reading about armaan's such a sad and painful part i was seriously crying i felt soo bad for him can't imagine what a small child must have gone through after seeing soo much.and the repeated attempts of ridhima to cool him were great and the PJ was awesome.then i was laughing at that sadu part.and i hated pam,and loved ridhima openly declaring her love and trust.and armaan's small smile was a relief,i was like yes atlast he smiled.and the authority she showed by telling him and not asking him,that she will come to manali was cute.now can't wait to read what effects will this manali trip will have on them.continue soon.............
PLEASE dont end this ff so fast i love this ff.

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 15 years ago

#149

hey dont end this ff so soon plz and if u do plz start another one soon.love this ff,there is so much u can write.plz continue it.

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richa_b

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Posted: 15 years ago

#150

Hello Chief........am back with my comments 😃

It was such a wonderful update dear. Finally, the cobwebs have been cleared (almost I should say, as there are some still remaining, right? 😉) Your attention to detail is another aspect of your storywriting skills that really impresses me every single time. The way you threw light on Armaan's traumatic past was truly gripping and immaculately detailed.........kudos to you for penning it so well..👏

Coming to my favourite topic, the AR story 😊.......it was progressing well, though the room wala incident put a brake to it...😔 but again, I know it was necessary.......otherwise, how could we have gotten to know about Armaan's past. However, plzzzzzzzzz I don't wanna see any more tension brewing between AR........hope the Manali trip serves as the perfect opportunity to bring about their reconciliation followed by the much much awaited confession........😃

I can go on and on with my ramblings, so I better put a stop to it here. 😉 Hope to see lots and lots of lovely AR moments in Manali..........will be waiting 😃

Love and hugs,

Richa

P.S: I forgot to add that I loved this loooooonnnnnnnnggggggggg part. 😃 Don't think I will ever be able to write such a long one. 😃

Edited by richa_b - 15 years ago