Mayank-Nupur FF ~Come closer to me~ The End-pg17 - Page 9

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow

so romantic yaar

this upadte was amazing

finalkly nupur ne mayank ko maaf kar diya

aur cousins ko paise...... umm....... aacha idea hai

aur londawla mein akele mayur......... wow

and nupur talli....... aab aur bhi mazza ayega

continue soon

luv

mahima

Tats so sweet Mahima..ThankQ! 😳

Mayank and Nupur sat on the beach.

Mayank- Tensed. 'Nupur tum theek ho na?' Worried.

Nupur- Cupping his cheeks. 'Haan Mayank..' She replied romantically.

Mayank- 'Acha please Nupur kuch khalo..tumhe bhook lagi thi na?'

Nupur- Drunken voice..shaking her head. 'Ab nahin hai.'

Mayank- Opening the box of noodles. He took it in a fork and offered her. 'Please.'

Nupur- She smiled at the gesture and ate. 'Yummy noodles..Noodles mere favourite hain.' Her eyes twinkled.

Mayank made sure Nupur had good dinner. After almost two hours…they were still on the beach.

Nupur- 'Mayank..mujhe ek baat batao..shaadi ke baad tumhe meri sabse achi baat kya lagti hai?' Still in a drunken tone.

Mayank- 'Ummm…jab tum mere tie bandti ho na..mujhe bahut acha lagta hai.' He blushed.

Nupur- 'Hayee..sach? Mere Mr. Sharma.' Pulling his cheeks.

Mayank- 'Ab tum batao..'

Nupur kept thinking for almost 5 mins..still couldn't reach for an answer.

Mayank- 'Mere koi baat achi nahin lagte?' He replied sadly.

Nupur- 'Yaad aa gaya..mujhe yaad aa gaya..' She pushed Mayank so he would lie down. She took his arm and opened it and rested her head on his shoulders and hugged him. 'Mujhe ye sabse zyaada acha lagta hai.' Tighteing the hug.

Mayank- Getting up as he was embarssed. 'Nupur..yahan …chodo.'

Nupur- 'Mayank..itna sharma kyun rahe ho? Raat ke 1 baje hai..yahan hume koi nahin dekhega..' She said in a shrill voice ; pushing him down and hugging him.

Mayank smiled and caressed her hair slowly..'Pata hai Nupur..pure world main tum ek hi piece ho.' He said naughtily.

Nupur- Winking. 'Jaante hun. Bhagwan ko thanku bolo..woh ek piece unhone tumhe de diya..' She said seriously.

Mayank laughed. 'Ya sure…!!'

Nupur- 'Mayu…by the way im sorry…' She replied sadly.

Mayank- 'Its Mayank..!! Kyun magar?'

Nupur- 'Woh uss din maine tumhe neeche sone ko kaha na..mujhe aisa nahin karma chaiye tha.'

Mayank- 'Its okay..mujhe aadat hai.' He replied smiling.

Nupur- 'Kya????'

Mayank- 'Kuch nahin.'

Nupur- 'Hmmm..Pata hai main uss din pure raat soye hi nahin..'

Mayank- 'Kyun???' He asked curious.

Nupur- 'Tumne itni buri aadat jo dal di hai..tum jab tak paas main nahin hote mujhe neend hi nahin aati.' Getting closer to him.

Mayank smiled and thanked god for her being drunk. Otherwise she wouldn't say all this truth.

She continued. 'Actually mujhe na akele neend hi nahin aati..shuru se main aur Gunjan room share karte the..to bachpan se adat hai.' Giggling. 'Pata hai main Gunjan se badi hun..par main khud hi darte thi..' Giggling again.

Mayank smiled and thought. 'Yeh to aaj puri tarah se gaye..'

Nupur- 'Mayank..tum sun rahe ho na??'

Mayank- 'Haan haan bolo..'

Nupur- 'Haan to phir main to Gunjan ko…………….aur phir who….'

Mayank thoughts- 'By god naashe main Nupur ki talking speed triple ho gaye hai...' He laughed to himself.

After a couple of minutes-

Mayank- 'Nupur I think hume abhi room main chalna chaiye..kal tak sab aa jayenge…aur sabne agar tumhe iss halat main dekh liya to acha nahin laga. Tum so jao ..chalo. Lets go.' Getting up.

Nupur- Stopping him. 'Nahin abhi nahin.' Making a face. Thinking. 'Chalo paani main chalte hain..' Excitedly.

Mayank- 'Paagal ho gaye ho? Itni raat ko? No ways…tumhe pata hai yeh kitna dangerous hai?'

Nupur- 'By god Mayank..isme kya dangerous hai. Itna exciting hai. Mujhe jaana hai.' She was completely out of her senses as she was drunk. She started to run towards the water.

Mayank caught hold off her hand tightly.

Mayank- 'Nupur tumhe ek baar main baat samajh main nahin aate hai kya? Maine mana kiya matlab mana kiya.Ab chalo yahan se.' He shouted at her.

Nupur was stunned. A drop of tear rolled down her cheek. 'Shaadi ke baad tumne mujhpe yeh pehli baar chilaya hai..not fair. Chodo mujhe.' She moved his hand away and started walking in a different direction. She walked clumsily as she was drunk.

Mayank- 'Oh shit.' Running towards her. 'Nupur dekho im really very sorry. Mera kehne ka who matlab nahin tha..tum to mujhe jaante ho na..aise hi kuch bhi bakwas karta rehta hun. Im sorry..Dil se sorry.'

Nupur stared at him. Shouting. 'Agar main tumpe aise chilate to kya tum mujhe maaf karte?? Nahin na to main kyun karun?' She started walking angrily again.

Mayank- Running to catch up with her. 'Arre main maaf karta…kyun nahin karta..tum itni sweet aur cute ho..kitni beautiful ho..aur aaj to tum ekdum …ummm..woh..Deepika jaise lag rahe ho. Haan..' Smiling.

Nupur- Stopping in her tracks. 'Yeh Deepika kaun hai..?? Tum mujhe dhoka de rahe ho na Mayank? Mujhe to pehle hi shaq tha.' Tears again.

Mayank- Shocked. 'Kya????? Nupur main Deepika Padukone ki baat kar raha hun. Film actress.'

Nupur- 'Sach main?' Toning down a bit.

Mayank- Putting an arm around her. 'Tum to Deepika se bhi bahut better lagti ho.'

Nupur- 'Sachi?' Falling prey.

Mayank- 'Muchi..ab hum chale?' Very sweetly he asked.

Nupur- 'Par Mayank beach..paani..' She stammered herself confused.

Mayank- 'Kal pakka. I promise.'

Nupur- 'Okay..chalo.'

Mayank thanked every god he remembered. He put an arm around her waist for support as she rested her head on his shoulders and walked.

Nupur- 'Mayank tum mujhe honey-moon pe leke jaoge na??' Acting kiddish in a cute way.

Mayank- 'Haan Nupur.' Still walking. 'Tumhe kahan jaana hai?'

Nupur – 'Ummmm…Mauritius.'

Mayank- 'Okay.' He replied casually.

Nupur- Shocked. 'Sach???'

Mayank- 'Haan..promise. Jahan tum kahoge..hum wahin jayenge. Yeh meri punishment hai..happy??'

Nupur- Smiling. 'Yay!! ILU Mayank.' She said hugging him.

Mayank- 'Love you too ab chalo..warna tum yahin kahin gir jaoge.'

Nupur's chit-chat continued till they reached the room.

Nupur – 'Mujhe to bahut neend aa rahe hai..good night Mayank.' Yawning and lying down.

Mayank- Pulling her up. 'Nupur tumhare kapdon main mitti lagi huye hai..pehle change karo.'

Nupur- 'Kya tum bhi Mayank? Pareshan mat karo.' Drooping eyes.

Mayank- 'Nupur utho please. '

Nupur- Making a face. She starts walking and suddenly takes backward steps. 'Mayank….mere paas to night ke kapde hi nahin hai…Main sone ja rahe hun..good night'

Mayank- 'No problem.' He went and gave her his tracks and T-shirts. 'Yeh lo aur change kar lo.'

Nupur- Angry. 'Hmph!'

She changes quickly and drifts off to sleep. Actually she gets so drunk that she doesn't have any sense of reality.

Mayank comes from outside and sees that the bathroom light was still on.

Mayank- 'Nupur..light to off karo…' He searches for her and then sees her on the bed completely in sleep. He himself had changed and goes and sits next to her. She looked like an angel sleeping in her world of her own. He lies down to the right, head supported with his hands. 'To ye madam so gaye? Nupur bhi na..pata nahin aise comic piece hai..kya karun main iska..' He laughed to himself. He felt so tempted to kiss her..but he was scared , he didn't want to wake her up. But he just softly kissed her on the lip and lied down beside her.

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I know that this part wasnt so great; but I promise the next part-last part would be much better nice and romantic!😉 Thanks for reading..and please do comment!😳

First thing i am angry

Awwwwwwwww mansiiiiiiiiiii
veryyyyyyyy cute update
loved drunken nups a lot
she was so sweet.
i can easily imagine the whole thing
it ws so funny and cute.
and mayu handled her nicely.
loved it
keep it up

Mansi....🤗...again a wonderful part!!!..i love it when anyne of MN get drunk😆...saari sachai saamne ugal k aati hai😉., jo hosh mein ye dono kehn e ko sharmate hain.... Mayank is sooooo caring!!😳😳....Love him, actually i love both of them, n of course loved ur update as well!!!😳

Oh dear i loved the drunk nupur...

It was a treat to read about her!

This part ws wonderful!

I'd be waiting for the next part!

Akansha

very2 sweet update.cant wait 4 the next part....

wow

Nice update

This part rocked mansi

aww ur ending this???

Do write more haan

and do cont soon