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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis





thnx a lot

luv u tooo
sehr and kulsum

dosti mein no thx yaar
lagta hai bhul gayi
luv
mahima
sizzysehrish thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
ha yr ajkal sb bhulrhe hu yr ki karu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

ha yr ajkal sb bhulrhe hu yr ki karu

koi baat nahi
now i am back
aab kucch bhulne nahi dungi
sizzysehrish thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
ye to aur bhi achi bt hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the update!!!.......srry for the late comment!!!!!...........do update soon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum concept and update 👏

i just luved the story and the most amazing part mayur fight as usual 😆 😆 😆 specially ears mein cotton dal ne ke baad ab bolna suru 😆 😆 😆


do continue soon waiting for ur next update...and soory for late comment 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

ok.. i'm gettin ready 2 get sum chappals, rotten eggs, tomatoes thrown by u!!!

i'm sooo late here..i had exms.. so cudnt read ur updates...

so startin wid part.1

it ws awesum!!!!

luv u'll!!!!🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

hiii frndzz
plzz no chaapals to me this tym plzzz
😆i knw m soo late
many of u wuld also have forgotten this ff also
but aynda se i will be regular in update thn if i wuldnt thn u can yrr😉😉
so epi starts here


part 2

it starts when nupur and mayank meet at airport and got to knw each other and their first meeting starts with fight
both becum cruel enemy

ppl say tht pehli nazar me pyar😆
but yaha to ulta hisaab chal raha tha yaha to pehli nazar me nafrat hogye hai ......

chale in ke pov dekhte hai

N(pov): oh GOd ye shilpa aunty ka beta hai ...by god is ka matlab is ke saaath rehne hoga is ke ghar me..i cant imagine...god plzzz help me ..me is akru sadu larke k saath nheee ...kia kismat hai teri nupur ..kaise kaise logo se paala para hai tera yrrrr

M(POV): OH GOd ye larki mom ki frnd ki beti hai...GOd kia meri kismat itni achi thi kyajo ise bigaad rhe ho...waise hi meri life me kuch thik nhe hota aur ab ye mystery girl ...mera to ab upar wala hi bachane wala hai

both after long came back to senses

mayank in his commplete sadu style
M: chale madam
N: (IN MIND) ye larka kuch bhi seedhe muh bol sakta bhi hai kya
N: chalyeee...( making annoying face)

both silently sat in car
both were silent
but were cursing their fate

in half mid way mayank started a song
but humari nupur kumari ddnt lyked it
Nupur stopped d song mayank looked at her in anger...n asked.

M:tum ne song band kyun kardiya??tumhare haath me khujli horahi thi kya??
N:uuhuu haath mein khujli nahi itna boring aur sad song sunn ke mere kaan me khujli horahi thi...so mein ne band kardiya....
M:agar tum gana sunna nahi chahti thi toh apne kaan bhi band kar sakti thi na...
N:arey tum itni si baat pe itni bigad kyun rahe ho..?tumhe ladne ki itni khushi kyun hai?
M:ladta mein nahi tum harkatien hi aisi karti ho ke mein ladne par majboor hojata hun...
N:kya kaha tum ne mein ladti hun no ways dekho tum ho itne sadu akdu ke tumhe har achi cheeze mein keede nazar aate hai.
M:keede mein nahi tum nikalti ho yahi dekho ke thodi dair pehle itni acha song mein sunn raha tha ke tumne band kardiya..
N:by god tum abhi tak usi song ke piche ho yeh lo uske bajaye yeh songs suno aur dekho yeh tumhare booringgg songs se kitne better hai..
She removed a caset from her bag and give it to mayank.
N:try it u will enjoy.
The song starts playing nupur was enjoying the song but mayank turned off d song..
N:ab tumhe kya hua itna rocking song tha by god aur tumne band kardiya.
M:ise tum acha song keh rahi ho hum raaste pe hai ghar pe nahi joh tum aisa song lagana chahti ho..
N:ohh Mr akdu tum toh jawani mein hi budhe hoga ho...hahaha
Mayank shot an angry glare to her..
N:waise mujh me ab aur ladne ki taaqat nahi hai pehle hi safar ki wajah se tired thi aur phir tum..
M:mein kya?
N:pleaseee ab k liye itna kaafi hai...
M:chalo nupur utro ghar agaya.
N:theek hai.
Mayank carried nupur's bag n both moved towards the house.
Mayank rang the bell shilpa aunty opened the door..
N:namaste aunty nupur took ashirwad from shilpa
S:namaste beta jeete raho shilpa hug nupur.
M:kya mein andar aasakta hun maa.
S:ofcourse mayu yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai.
M:toh iss se kahiye ke raaste se hat jaye.
S:mayu kisi se aise pesh aate hai kya?nupur beta andar ajao yahan aao mein tumhe kamra dikhati hoon...tum fresh hoke aajan tab tak mein khana laga deti hoon aur haan pane papa ko bhi bata dena ke tum theek se pahunch gayi ho.
N:jee aunty..


thts it frndz
we know its shor butsoon we wll b back with next part
as now m on mission of completing my ffs na😆


luv sehrish and kulsum
Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago



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So finally u updated my fav FF
thank u so much


Sehr it was mind-blowing update.
very ggod aprt
mayur fight was so sweet n cute- mjht ki tarah irritating nehi

hahahahaa i loved mayur in Car
nups ki hato mao\in nehi kano main khujli ho rahi thi
hehehehee i was laughing after reading this part.

finally mayur reach mayus house
wah ab ayega maza

sehr and kulsum plz tum log ye ff continue karo
plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz its a really very nice n different ff

sehr i enjoyed the whole update
i was sad todsy after watching my mayur in mjht
but ur update made me laugh
thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh



update next part soon
love u loads
take care


Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally updated😆
hmmm pheli nazar mai nafrat 😆
typical mayurish😳
awesum part
hmmm plz nxt part jaldi update kerna😆

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