life changed when i found u mayurff part 3 pg 23 - Page 13

Originally posted by: arunabehere

main to bhul hi gayi thi ki ye koi ff hai kya hai na update aate aate mahino lag jate hai to dimag bechara thak kar bhul jata hai aur so jata hai

kyon mahi sahi hai na????

phir jab update aati hai to itni short hoti hai ki shuru hoti nahi khatam pahle ho jati hai

uske bad end me ek line hoti hai ki i know it is short but i will update

SOON ,par wo soon aate aate mahino lag jate hai

I guess dose bahut ho gaya hai

so cut to update

Loved it dono ke dono akdu hai

Nupur janti nahi hai ki mayank kis phase se gujar raha hai

i guess she will be soon good to him

and mayank ko bhi thoda achha hona chahiye

so please update when you have time no compromise with studies :)

Take care

Aru

ohh aap bhool jate hai toh aapko previous update padhleni chaiye thi na.. 😆
Aage se mahine nahi lagenge bas kuch hafte din lag jaenge... 😉 😆 😉 . 😆
Hame lagta hai di dose kafi nahi bahut kafi hogaya bt we loved ur dose.. 😃
Haan dono jald hi ache hojaenge,.

Sehr hav vacations na update wil come soon IF mein apni half update jaldi doon tohh.. 😛😉😊

Luv
Sehr&kul

nice part!!!
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

grr88 job..

LOVED IT

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

OMG Sehru this part is chooo cuteeee

sachi mein I just loved it from the starting to ending !!!
the way u described everything

superb betaaa

sachi mein em speechless wat to say

the Mayur scene in the car

where he playzz old songzz n she closes it😆

n then their convo

how cutee yaar

n n he playzz too rocking songzz

I just love love love it sis !!!
but but how come itzz soo short???

parhne se phele katam ho gaya😭

plezz plezzz plezz make the next part soooooooooo long ??!!!
theeke na??

u know I really love this FF itzz so interesting

just can't wait to read more when Mayur getzz to know each other better

n haan Shilpa auntyzz soo nice =D

plezz plezzz plezzz continue ASAP na

abhi ke abhi

muahhh

love ur mommy🤗

oh mom luvu lottt
thnx a lot
m gladu lyked it
apka hukum sar ankhon pe
nxt update wuld b longer oneeeeee

awesome part
thanx 4 d pm

-Tasheen-

Hey dear
amazing part
loved it
waiting 4 the next part
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

i saw the reserve for my comment..... so sweet of you sis

mahima