Pyaar Ka Safar-Ek Rasta Aisa(PH ff) Pg20 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
hey that was great!!! personalyy i ust luved ur concept ....... i always wished somone wud think same as u hav came with!!!!!!
plz PM me!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: tantrums..

hey that was great!!! personalyy i ust luved ur concept ....... i always wished somone wud think same as u hav came with!!!!!!

plz PM me!!!

oh thankzz swwety for loving it sho much

Originally posted by: tantrums..

i always wished somone wud think same as u hav came with!!!!!!

so y dint u start ur own ff i mean Y should alsop try and write
u shud start an ff of ur own yaa with this kind a concept
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Hajz95

Pyaar
Ka
Safar
Ek
Rasta
Aisa

hows the pic
its nie nah kuzz it is not my creation and the title too i copied title and the pic too from one of old complete ffzz over deh forum
but storyline yeh meri apni he
lolzz😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Chapter iii
***i hope u dont come with your sandals and belans to beat me after this short update***
All left to their rooms leaving PH together. Prem looked at Heer who after glimpsing Prem looked somewhere else. Prem moved closer to her. Prem moved closer to her. Heer seeing him turn so close she stepped back. Prem curved his arms around her back likely hugging her. Heer looked at Prem timidly.

Heer: Prem kya ho gaya he tumhein [Abhi koi aa gaya toh…….

Prem: Q shaddi karney wala hun to mera itna huq ni he kya tum per(😆shetaan kahin ka mr. cuppa rustam)

Heer: Ni he

Prem: 5n😡

Heer: Tum gusa ho gayye Abhi meri baaat khatam ni hui thi

I was saying

Ni he balkay is se ziada hai.

All yours---- shaadi k baad😳😳

Abhi chalo

Waisay b tum meray dost ho

She takes hold of his hand into her hand. They move upstairs to room next to Maher's but then a servant comes on Heer's call as the door was not opening he tells them that the locker of that room was damaged somehow and the remaining open rooms were occupied by others (Meet, Ashlesha, Nihaal) and keys of other empty rooms were in this room which was locked

The servant left

Heer: Prem aaj raat tum un mein say kisi k paas ruk jaao

Prem: Ni who bht pareshaan Karen gay mujhay

Heer: To phir

Ash: To phir hum toh Prem ko bht pareshaan Karen gay nah Heer to tum ni karo gee so He's wid u tonight.

Yahan aa Heer (Prem glares over Ash) Tum jaao apnay room may I have to talk to Heer

Prem leaves but does not feel good of Ash's behavior

Ash: Heer tu bht ht simple he yaar. Dekh us ko teray sath rehana hei isliye aisa keh raha tha woh teray sath wakt bitana chahta he. So have fun tonight just U AND YOUR PREM

All youngsters are damn sure about their room plan to happen as expected.

Then their food arrived and they all fell on food like they had been hungry since they were born esp. Preet and Maher.

Downstairs Teji, Gaya3, Ballu and Lallu were having Dinner tslking optimisticly abt PHz marriage and engagement.

Then it shifts to Prem whose being greatly perplexed in his mind, heart and eye thingy. His mind commends to control him his heart says just b happy and do what u want and his eyes they turn full of wildness seeing Heer. But confsion was

He wanted to

Control his desires

Turn closer to Heer

Avoid Heer

Like Heer more and more

All four different jobs

Just then he hears a knock on the door. He opens the door and sees food and then sees all four elders having food together

Prem: thinking: Mujhay r

Heer ko neechay jaa kar khaana khaana chahiye. Ni shayad who koi zarruri baat kar rahey hon r aisay m humara jaana sahin ni he isiliye shayad unhon nay yeh khana bhijwaya he. Ya phir yeh khana Preet nay bheja hoga taa kay mein r heer ek sath time spend karein

Just then Preet comes

Preet: looks kya day ri ho Go in Bhabhi say baat karo unhein apnay haath say khana khilao Bhaiyaa

Prem shuts the door and he sees Heer taking out his things from his bags setting them in her cupboard

She just then takes out his joggers from his suitcase

Heer: Prem who packed this bag

Prem u did right

Tumhein kaha tha na k sandals shoes in sab ko alag bag may per tum nahin suntay ho meri kabhi bhi hamesha apni marzi.

So Mr. Careless Prem Juneja

Why r u grinning

Prem: Heer u r behaving so typical wife type yaa.

Prem just cannot stop himself from taking her into his arms He moves his face down such that his chin meets her neck. He moves his face to the left and kisses her cheek Heer's eyes turn wide open as Prem says

Prem: tum bht achi ho I like like you

Prem after saying so realizes the fact that what he just said

Prem: thinks: Pehlay tu ussey itna gareeb lata hai ussey aisay hug karta hai

Phir tu issey aisay yun kiss karta he

R climax point tu ussey kehta he ki

tum bht achi ho I LIKE U
Prem yeh kya keh diya
agar us nay slap kar diya ya sirf ghusa he kar diya toh

Just be normal just like be4 dude

Sub pehlay jesa hai. Wohi tu wohi Heer

Heer remembers Ash's words

Dekh us ko teray sath rehana hei isliye aisa keh raha tha woh teray sath wakt bitana chahta he. So have fun tonight just U AND YOUR PREM

She smiles

Heer: thinks: Heer yeh kya kar rahi ho hans ri ho

Ni

Do not smile do not show that u liked what he said. Just be normal just like be4.

Ek second kya mujhay who acha lagta he

He'z my frnd r hamary frnds to wohi hotay hen jinhein hum pasand kartay hen that's it

Sub pehlay jesa hai. Wohi tum wohi Prem

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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
this is my first heer prem ff i m reading haju n it was beautiful
really loved it yaar
n no i wont cum with sandals for swuch a shprt update
i plan to cum with tomatoes for this monstrosity
haju duck
here cums the first tomatoo
ps==pls update soon n ya i read this part first n then read the others hee hee
n du pm me
lov
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

of course

doll
:-) my pleasure
nd that tomato spoiled my clothes hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
liana deesss siggies r always rocking this too
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Hajz95

of course

doll
:-) my pleasure
nd that tomato spoiled my clothes hehe

i was aiming for nose😆
shit
i am such a bad aimer
chalo kahin to laga between do update soon it was a pleasure reading it
wow i am so formal
actually i am not pehli meeting mein hi tomato maarr diya😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Hajz95

liana deesss siggies r always rocking this too

god haju i agree she is one of the sweetest person alive n what more she surprised me with three sayank siggs
for me imajine that i was soo pleasently surprised
mast hai liana
my rockstar
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Posted: 15 years ago
wahi prem wahi heer hai
but now its premeer!!
lol nice one

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