The Hard Reality of Life (AR FF)Note - page 122 - Page 25

Originally posted by: lucario

awesome second part.

Originally posted by: armaankashridz

bhai it was awesome
too gud love itttttttt
plz continue soon
and luv ur concept
do pm me

luv
sis

Originally posted by: cute.arsh

great part

finally armaan spoke to riddhiam

woh kaun that jiss ko riddhiam ne kick kiya

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice FF.
continue soon


love
Riddss

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

omg
that was such a wow part
truly rocking
i really love the whole scenario
n tht last part
it left me amazed
who cud tht person be
was it sid?
i dont think so
thanks for the pm
do update soon

pooja

Originally posted by: sangii

PJ.. papa.. how si that cheap person?? is it sid?? i am breaking my head.. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee tell me... dont forget to PM ok.. pleasee.. awesomee update.. take care... ok al the best.. awesomee...

sangii

Originally posted by: sangii

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,,, thank you sooo much...

but tell me who hugged ridz.. was it sidddddddddddd???????? if yesssssssss i hate himmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm😆....

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

Awww.. such an lovely part, but i got a complain against u.. part itna chota kyu tha ?
sis mein roz ek part update karta hoon islia, agar part bara chaiye to ek week mein ek part hi update kar payunga, tum hi batao kaisey chaiye😕............bolo bolo😆😆😆

abhi abhi to itna maja aaraha tha aur part khatam hogaya..... itna chota sa part likhte ho aur comment mahabarat chaiye huh ? not fair ... i better get long update next time.

actually no, u can do that after ur exams. 😆😆
well part 1 line ka hi kyu na ho tumhe mahabhrat likhna aana to chaiye na😆😆😆..........miss mahabharat queen agar tum bara reply nahi likhogi to kaun likhega😆😆😆😆.........well agar 10 din wait karo to issey 5 times lamba update kar dunga...........agar part lamba chaiye to roz update nahi kar payunga😆😆😆

well chalo abhi iss part ki baat karte hai so Mr. Liner ek baat batau mujhe...

so mai bohot hi gusse wali lagti hu right ? ROFL ... well sach mai liner remember maine tumhe kaha ta ki yeh ff parne k liye bohot hi fun hai, like really i was craking up reading some parts there. and yeah mujhe twinzy se agreee karna padega ki i m lovin' ur character "shin n sani" n as she told it, its not coz that is us but coz u have like just made then so fun to read about.

apart from that i loved the AR talks... jeezz meow meow n bhau bhau .. ab yeh yaha bi suru hogaya 🤣 vini... hmm omgsh she is just so parandas yaar... too serious....

man i hope shin sane na hojaye itni serious larki k saath kaam karte karte ... and hmm nattu ROFL she sound like a friend more then a trainer but its gonna be interesting to see wht she punishes them when they are late... hmm ab kisko miss kiya maine ...

hmmm n yeah sid man he is always a KMH no doubt in that...

and @ the end poor ridzy kaun tha wo kamina ? URGH ...

anyways nice cliff-hanger i must say..... over all i LOVED it 😃
well sis maine sabko unke nature ke hisab se hi dislogues diye hai, maine jaisey ki kaha tha ki maine kuch special nahi likha bas jo jitna special hai uska character bhi utna hi special ban jayega na........haan ab AR FF hai to AR ka convo to hoga hi na😆😆😆..........oye meri gusse wali sis abhi to sid ne kuch nahi kiya, apne comments uake liye bacha ke rakho😆😆😆..........waisey vini ka character bhi sughar jayega jab nattu ke saath dosti ho jayegi to😉😆😆😆😆😆😆..........well canteen mein kaun tha yahi to suspense hai wait karo😆😆😆😆

Well after reading my comment on the part, you must have already realized how great I feel reading it. So, since I enjoyed reading this part, I hope you enjoyed reading my creepiest comment on the part. I really love ur concept of including every single character in ur every part. that really makes the reader feel like it's really happening and a story of an entire day.

sis i just loved ur comments and i appreciate that u like me including all the characters in all the parts😃

Love ur concept bhai. Okay overall a super-duper cute part.

continue soon. Will be waiting..
ok sis i will try to update as soon as i can😃

Love yaa' <3