Aziyat...Sujal&Kashish FF...Last Part...10/06 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

that was a quick update 😃😃😃.............thanks 4 dat 😃😃😃........& yes Happy diwali to both of u & ofcourse to our SK 😃 😃

as 4 part 😕😕........... i am confused ........... coz beginning of part i liked ..........& ending 😭😭😭..........😭😭.....so 4 me its a part which is mixture of emotions 😃😃😃.....njoyed it throughout 😃😃😃............somewhere i was expecting this to happen ........😛😛....coz from beginning kashish was clear that she loved sujal 😳😳..............but sujal ....... always treated her as frnd.......... he was not showing any romantic inclination 😕😕😕.......
as 4 mahi .... i had doubts on her from beginning coz she is with sujal ....she knows him from a long time .....so it was obvious 4 her to develop feelings 😊😊😊.........

feeling bad 4 kashish 😭😭😭.........only hope 4 SK together is hope sujal has realised love 4 kashish ..............but i wonder if that has happened 😆😆😆😆...........

a love triangle 😭😭😭.........i am reminded of KTH .......... only difference instead of piyush here it is mahi 😆😆😆😆.............the barieer b/w SK 😆😆😆😆...........

hope everything gets well soon 😃😃😃............ & try to bring SK together sooner 😳😳😳........
continue soon 😃😃😃........ like u did this time 😃😃😃


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hey puri dear...thank u soo much 4 ure comments...and yes we are trying to update as soon as we can...a belated happy diwali to you too..hpe u had a great time with ure famiily and friends..we are glad you liked the part and felt what we were hoping for you to feel...you will just have to have a little patience to see what happens..and do bear with us..we will try and update soon dear..keep reading and commenting..luv Kashish and SummiEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Not at all surprised...

I knew that this was gonna happen 100%...
I hate this track !!
I dont want them to get married....!

Luv,
Vandu

hey vandu sweetheart thank u 4 ure comments...and we knw currently u wnt be very happy but this is what the story demands...do bear with us a little...and see how the story unfolds...keep reading and commenting..luv Kashish and Summi😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jyothi sweetheart..thank u so much 4 ure comments...glad u liked the part..will surely cont soon..keep reading and commenting..luv Kashish and Summi😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a nice part......and as expected Sujal ne 'yes' keh diya....cant really blame him...he still doesnt hav a reason to say 'no'....but 'yes' kehne ki bhi kya zarurat thi?? I am feeling really sad for Kashish....she has to lie abt her love now...and of course to see Maahi wid Sujal....must be so painful for her.....I wish some miracle happens...and all this doesnt work out....and SK get together sumhow....just sumhow....cant bear to see such pain in love....

However its a very well written part guys.....beautifully done by both of u.....Pls continue soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-7

A week had passed since that day and Kashish had still not overcome what had happened'a lot had changed and she would remain quiet for most of the time'It was weekend and the night of the charity show..everyone was excited to see Kashish dance today and they were all looking forward to the event'It was now almost time for Kashish's dance..she was sat in the dressing room after getting changed..lost in her own thoughts as she looked at the ghungroo infront of her'she felt as though she wouldn't be able to do it'she felt herself weaken as each moment passed and was feeling so nervous..when she composed herself and picked up her mobile calling Sia'

Sia: hello..kaun?

Kashish: main ..Kashish...

Sia: Kashish tum'tum to charity show me thi na aaj'kya hua?

Kashish: abhi bas kuch dair me shuru hoga...lekin muje ...muje nahi lagta main kar paungi....

Sia: Kya!! Kashish yeh tum kya kehrahi ho'main samaj sakti hoon ke is waqt tumpe kya beeth rahi hai par tumhe yeh karna hoga'kya jawaab dogi tum sabko?

Kashish: lekin mere samne Sujal bhi hoga...uske saamne main kaise naach paungi.....tumhe to pata hai maine hamesha sirf khushi ke mauke pe dance kiya hai......

Sia: jaanthi hoon'tabhi tumhe yeh karna hoga Kashish'aaj tum zaroor naachogi'bas stage pe jaate huye ek baat yaad rakhna ke tumne kissi se bohat pyar kiya tha'aur us insaan ko tumne kho diya'aaj tum us pyar ko..us dard ko mitane ke liye naachogi Kashish

Kashish: maahi ko bura laga to...agar aaj use pata chal gaya to main bardast nahi kar paungi,..woh bahot khush hai Sujal ke saath...aur main apne haatoin uske rishte ko todna nahi chahti.....

Sia: aisa kuch nahin hoga Kashish'aur aaj tum sirf apne bare me sochogi..tumhe khud ke dard ko durr karna hi hoga'warna tum jee nahin paaogi Kashish'is dard ko bahar nikalo...

Kashish: mar mar ke jee to rahi hoon main ....ab kya marungi main...hazar maut jo pal me marta hai apne pyaar ko khoke ab use kaisa darr....

Sia: Kashish yeh tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho'dubara marne ki baat ki to main tumse baat nahin karungi..aisa koi kehta hai kya'na to tum kissi se kuch keh rahi ho aur na hi ji paa rahi ho..kaisi zidd hai yeh Kashish'abhi bhi waqt hai..batado sabsko ke tum Sujal se pyar karti ho..bacha lo apne pyar ko

Kashish: yeh woh zidd hai jisme main apne pyaar ko apni tarah se khush dekhna chahti hoon....Maahi ko pane ke bad aaj Sujal ke chehre pe ek ajeeb si khusi hai jo main use wapas lena nahi chahti.....usne khud mujse kaha ki bahot dino bad ab woh apna parivar bante dekh raha hai ab tu hi bata kya main khud uska parivar ke khawab tod doon....Sia main bahot tut chuki hoon lekin khush bhi itni hi hoon un dono ko ek saath dekh ke...

Sia: tum khud se jhoot bol sakti ho par mujse nahin'muje achchi tarah se pata hai ke is waqt tumpe kya beet rahi hai aur tum kitni toot chukki ho..is waqt tum bohat takleef me ho'aur tum Sujal aur Maahi ko saath nahin dekh paa rahi

Kashish: aisa nahi hai Sia...maine kaha na main khush hoon unki khushi ko dekh ke....

Sia: aisa hai Kashish..agar aisa nahin hota to tum aaj khush hoti..par tum duniya ke saamne dikhawa kar sakti ho..lekin mere aur Rohan ke saamne nahin..hum tumhe tumse bhi behtar jaante hain'par yeh tumhara faisla hai..hum isme kuch nahin karsakte'aur agar karna bhi chahte to tum hume karne nahi dogi....tum agar khud ki zindagi barbaad karna chahti ho to hum to sirf tumhe samja sakte hain..par aakhri faisla tumhare haath me hai

Kashish: aakhri faisla to tabhi ho chuka tha ...maine use apni kismat se durr kar diya hai....maine use Maahi ko de diya hai...

Sia: to phir tumhe himmat rakhni hogi..aur apne pyar ko bhulane ke liye tumhe yeh karna hoga

Kashish: koshish karti hoon...shayad aaj muje yeh zariya mile hai apne gumm bhulake aanshu bahane ka.....

Sia: theek hai...ab tum phone rakho...show ka waqt horaha hai...main tumse baad me baat karti hoon...and Kashish...please take care of yourself

Kashish: thik hai...bye...

Sia: bye..

Kashish cuts the call and places her mobile down...she closes her eyes...gathering courage to perform tonight..a moment later she opened her eyes and looked at the ghungroo again..she slowly lifted them and fastened them around her ankles...

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It was finally time for the performance...Kashish who was sat in the dressing room,got up as she heard a knock on the door..she opened it when a lady informed her that it was time for her performance..Kashish nodded her head and then followed after the lady...when she reached the stage and slowly walked onto the stage..the sound of her ghungroos could be heard as she took each step to the centre..when she reached the centre and stopped..she looked around at the hundreds of people that were sat in the audience..when she looked straight ahead..and saw Sujal and Maahi sat together with Abhinav on the other side of Maahi...she stood there for a moment looking at the 2 when the music started..bringing her out of her thoughts

Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana

(Kashish looked at Sujal and then began her dance...)

Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana

(tears formed in her eyes as she thought about her dreams of being Sujal's bride)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi

(she closed her eyes for a moment..letting her tears reach the corner of her eyes..Sujal's image in her mind)

Chaaha tha maine, socha tha maine

(thoughts about how she had seen dreams to live her life with Sujal came to her mind)

Kya kya the armaan dil nadaan ke

(and how those dreams shattered within a moment

aankhon me aansu aaye par koi na aaya

(tears fell down her cheeks as she felt a sense of loneliness forming inside her)

Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana

(she felt a pain inside her at the thought of forgetting Sujal)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi

(she danced with increasing pain...her tears continuously running through her eyes and the pain reflecting inside her eyes)

In aankhon me thi ek raat saji

(she thought about the dreams she had seen of their unison)

Haathon me kabhi choodi si baji

(she ran her hand across her bangles..remembering the time he had placed his hand over hers...the thought still creating a sensational feeling within her)

Par aankh khuli to aaya nazar na raat saji na choodi baji

(She held on tightly to her hand..as the bangles broke..stabbing her in the skin as drops of blood formed on her arm)

Mera toota tha dil, uski jhankar thi

(she closed her eyes as she let her tears flow..her feet creating a painful melody)

Saara voh rang tha mere khoone dil ka

( the bells of her ghungroo broke off as she danced on the broken pieces..her feet starting to bleed)

yeh to hai rona dil ka kaahe ka taraana

(she continues to dance...letting her pain out as her feet were bleeding...but she felt immune to all the pain...as the pain inside her was a lot more extreme)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi

(she looked towards Sujal as she danced..her eyes full of pain...)

Haske bheege palak chamkaana hai

(she plastered a smile on her face...her wet lashes constantly flashing...as her tears slowly escaped her eyes...and she danced feeling no outer pain)

Sooni baahein ada se laheraana hai

(she pressed her hands on the remaining bangles...breaking them..as they fell to the ground...the small pieces of the bangles stabbing her feet too as she danced on them...fire was lit to the curtains that swayed on the side of the stage...as the burning curtains symbolised her life at that point..)

Gham khaake aansu peeke

(She stopped for a moment and looked at the burning curtains...memories of her and Sujal flashing by her eyes..)

Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana

(she saw the memories burning infront of her eyes with the fire of the curtains...tears falling down her cheeks)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana

(she closed her eyes in pain and turned her head away...continuing to dance on the broken bells and pieces of glass...her feet filled with blood)

Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana

( Maahi who was watching her dance in so much pain could not see her condition...she almost stood up...when Sujal placed his hand on her arm to stop her...she looked at him wanting to stop the music...but Sujal signed her to leave her alone..it was important for her to let her pain out)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi

(Maahi stopped and looked towards Kashish...her pain hurting Maahi...whilst Kashish continued to dance..)

As the music stopped...she fell to the ground...she sat there still for a moment...as though her body had froze...the people who were in the audience were silent for a moment...when someone stood up and started clapping...the rest got up too as they clapped loudly...Kashish who heard the clapping looked up at the audience..and then towards Sujal and Maahi...she moved her gaze down and started collecting the broken bells...gathering them together as she held them in her palm...she got up from the floor and headed off backstage in complete silence..her bloody feet leaving red foot prints...

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Kashish slowly walks to the dressing room holding the broken bells in her palm and her ghungroos in the other hand..her feet covered in blood...she walks inside and sits on the chair..she places her head down infront of the mirror...resting her head on her arm..as she cried bitterly...when Sujal and Maahi walked in to the room...they just stood at the door and were shocked to see her state...never had they seen her that way..they just looked at each other and walked inside the room..Maahi walked towards Kashish..and gently placed her hand on her head....she just opens her eyes and moves back looking at them....

Kashish: Maahi tum dono...tum dono yaha pe..

Maahi: bohat dard horaha haina tumhe..apni haalat dekhi hai...tumhare pair khoon se bharre hain..tumne apne aap ko roka kyun nahin Kashish...tum isiliye ro rahi ho na..kyunki tumhe itni gehri chot laggi hai.....kitna khoon nikal raha hai...bahot dard ho raha hai na tumhe..........

Kashish: nahi..aisi koi baat nahi...

Sujal: nahin Maahi..Kashish ka dard is wajah se nahin hai kyunki usse chot aayi hai..yeh dard to is liye hai kyunki Kashish ka dil toot chukka hai

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Kashish: tumne bilkul sahi kaha Sujal...muje dard is chot se nahi hai...haa aaj mera dard bahot gehra hai ...jante ho kyun...kyunki her bar ki tarah in bejaan ghunghroo ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya...chod diya aaj phir se muje akele ...jisne pichle 10 saal saath diyaa aaj ek hi pal me woh saath tod diya ...to dard kaise nahi hoga....bahot hoga....had se jyada hoga...hoga na Sujal....

Sujal just looks towards her..feeling bad to see her in so much pain

Maahi: itna pyar karti thi tum apne in ghungroo se

Kashish: jise bhi khud se jyada chaha usne saath choda,.,....ab darr lagta hai Maahi kisi ko apna kehne se...kya pata kab woh ruth ke muje besahara karke chala jaye...in ghunghroo ki tarah....na hi ise ab istmal kar sakti hoon nahi main ise fek sakti hoon....inti yaadein jo bana deta hai dil me ...jise bhulne pe bhi bhulti nahi main..

Sujal and Maahi just looked towards Kashish..and then towards each other...feeling very bad for her...her pain was hurting them also..

Sujal: we are really sorry Kashish..kaash hum tumhare dard ko kam karne ke liye kuch kar paate...samaj sakta hoon ke aaj tum kitni dukhi ho....

Kashish: main nahi chahti ki mere liye kisi ko bhi dukhi hone ki koi zaroorat hai...muje kisi ki humdardi nahi chahiye...nahi main dukhi hoon aur nahi udas....haa kuch waqt ke liye main bhul jati hoon ki main woh Kashish hoon jo hamesha sabko khush karti hai....so please dont be sad for me....main aaj bhi woh non stop chatter box hoon...

Sujal: aur main chahta hoon ke tum jaldi hi apne dard se ubhar kar phirse hasna seekh lo...aur hasana bhi...waise thank you so much Kashish..charity show ke liye...it was a great hit..tumhare dance ne sabke dil ko chu liya....

Kashish: yeh bhi sirf tumhari waje se mumkin hua hai...warna mere hisse ka dard me kaise logo ke samne bat sakti...thanks Sujal ..

Sujal just looks towards her confused...

Sujal: thanks..aur muje...main kuch samja nahin

Kashish: na tum kabhi samaj paye nahi tum kabhi samaj paoge....isi liye behtar yahi hoga ki is baat ko hum jane de....kyunki jisko samajna tha woh samaj gaya ...bahot pehle..

Sujal was about to say something when they hear the door..they turn around to see Abhinav stood at the door...as he opened it and walked inside..he walked up to Kashish so proudly....

Abhinav: i am so proud of you beta...aaj main bohat khush hoon...sach me tumse achcha dancer koi aur ho hi nahin sakta...aaj jo tumne perform kiya..woh sab ko itna pasand aaya...abhi bhi bahar log tareef kiye jaa rahe hain...

Kashish: dad....logo ka kaam hi hota hai...aaye...dekhe...tarif kare ..aur phir chale jaye...lekin mere liye yeh jaanna zaroori hai ki aapko kaisa laga apni beti ka performance......

Abhinav: beta main bata nahin sakta ke muje tumhara performance kitna acha lagga...sach me...aaj tumne jis tarah se perform kiya...meri to aankh hi bhar aayi...tum ne sabke dilon ko chu liya..aur woh bhi bohat gehrai se

Kashish: thanks dad....dad agar aap ko kuch kaam na ho to aap muje...aap muje ghar chod sakte hai....

Abhinav: kyun beta...hum saath me chale jaaenge na abhi kuch hi dair me?

Sujal: uncle is waqt shayad Kashish ka jaana zyada zaroori hai..usse araam ki zaroorat hai...

Kashish: muje is waqt akele rehna hai...

Abhinav: theek hai...chalo...main bhi chalta hoon saath me...Maahi beta..tum baad me Sujal ke saath aa jana

Sujal: main Maahi ko drop kardunga uncle

Kashish: ek minute dad.....

Kashish opens her drawer and takes out a bag and places all the bells and ghunghroo in it ..

Abhinav: beta..yeh tho toot chukke hain..ab inki kya zaroorat...

Kashish: tut chuke hai...lekin hai to mere apne....saath kaise chodu..

Abhinav: main samaj sakta hoon beta....theek hai beta..tum inhe samet lo..phir hum chalte hain

Kashish: thanks dad..

she gets up and looks towards Maahi and Sujal..and then starts walking slowly past them as she headed off towards the door..Abhinav looks at them and then says good bye to Sujal...following Kashish ater as they headed off towards ther home

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It was late night by now...Kashish was sat on the bed...lost in her thoughts as she silently sat on the bed..the curtains surrounding her bedroom window slowly moving with the cool breeze coming from the open window..when some strands of her hair flew across her face...bringing her out of her thoughts..when she saw the bag with the bells on the side of her bed...she just picked the bag up holding it between her hands as she looked at it carefully...when she slowly placed her fingers inside the bag...and pulled out a bell...

Kashish: I love him....

she placed it aside and then placed her hand inside again pulling out another bell

Kashish: I love him not...

she continues to do this as she pulls out each bell one at a time....tears slowly running down her cheeks as she took out each bell placing it aside...when she placed her hand in the bag...feeling only one bell in the bag...she just stopped for a moment..as she didn't want to pull it out...knowing it would be that she loves him...when she looked up at the door hearing Maahi's voice

Maahi: you love him Kashish..

Kashish just looks at her in surprise....

Kashish: tum...tum kab aayi...

Maahi: jab tum apne aap me hi apne pyar ko yaad kar rahi thi..bohat pyar karti ho na tum usse..

Kashish: hmm...khud se bhi jyada....isi liye aaj uski khushi ke liye main uska saath choda hai....Maahi sab use kyun galat samaj rahe hai...saath usne nahi maine uska choda hai....

Maahi walks in as she was holding bandages and ointment in her hands...

Maahi: galti uski hi hai..kyunki usne tumhara dil toda hai...tum aaj itni takleef me sirf uski wajah se ho

Kashish: lekin is dil ke tutne pe woh khush hai ...kya yahi kafi nahi hai..

Maahi: bilkul nahin hai...usne tumhara dil toda hai aur iske liye hum usse kabhi bhi maaf nahin kar paayenge..woh jo bhi hai usne bohat galat kiya tumhare saath

Kashish: ple Maahi aisa mat kaho use....woh bhi kisi ka apna hoga....jab maine use maff kar diya hai to tum kyun nahi kar deti....aur Maahi mera yakeen karo...woh dil ka bahot hi achcha insaan hai...bas hamari sirf takdir ne saath nahi diya.....

Maahi: tum aaj bhi kaise uska saath desakti ho...how can you Kashish..usne tumhare saath itna galat kiya..tumhara dil tod diya..aur tum aaj bhi ussi ka saath derahi ho

Kashish: zindagi bhar saath dene ka vaada kiya hai maine ab kaise us vaade se main muh mod sakti hoon....yeh vaada tod diya to mere pyaar me bewafai hogi...aur maine koi bewafai nahi ki mere pyaar se....

Maahi: par Kashish..tum aise nahin ji paaogi..ya to usse samjane ki koshish karo..ya usse bhool ke aage bhad jao...kabhi na kbhi to tumhe kissi ki zaroorat padegi na...jo tumhara saath de..tumse pyar karre

Kashish: Maahi...insaan sirf ek bar pyaar kar sakta hai jo main bhi kar chuki hoon.......aur rahi baat pyaar aur saath ki to uske liye uski yaadein kafi hai mere liye...lekin sach kahoon....use bhul ke kisi aur ka haath thamna mere bas ki baat nahi....bahot pyaar jo karti hoon ..

Maahi: par usne tumhe utni hi chot pohanchayi hai...maine tumse kaha tha na ke yeh sab kahaniyon me hota hai...ab muje dekho...main aur Sujal dost the..ar ab hum pati patni banne jaa rahe hain..hum dono ke beech pyar ka ehsaas to nahin tha..kyunki mera maan na hai ke pyar shaadi ke baad hota hai..kaash tum bhi aisa sochti..to tumhe chot nahin pohanchti

Kashish: Maahi...insaan ki soch insaan ke paida hone ke saath janam leti hai jise badla nahi ja sakta...haa main manti hoon ki hum behne hai...lekin hamari soch kabhi ek nahi ho sakti.....main aaj bhi shaadi se jyada pyaar pe yakeen karti hoon....kyunki pyaar ho to ek kaamyab shaadi ban sakti hai...warna shaadi sirf naam ki reh jati hai....pyaar se rishta banta hai....bina pyaar ki shaadi jabardasti ka rishta hai mere liye..

Maahi: to kya tum phirse pyar kar paaogi?

Kashish: nahi...yeh mumkin nahi hai mere liye...

Maahi: to phir tum kaise kissi insaan ko apnaogi..kyunki pyar ke binna to shaadi nahin karogi tum

Kashish: jis din samjota kar paungi khud se tab karungi shaadi...pyaar se na sahi samjote se hi....

Maahi: tumhe samjana aur samjna bohat hi mushkil hai..main koshish hi kyun kar rahi hoon...ab yeh sab jaane do aur theek se betho..main tumhari patti kardeti hoon

Kashish: ab uski kya zaroorat hai....khoon to ab nahi beh raha na....tum khamkha pareshan ho rahi ho...

Maahi: par chot to aayi haina tumhe..kya zaroorat thi khud ko itna dard pohanchane ki..ab binna kuch bole tum mujse patti karwa rahi ho..bas..

Kashish: thik hai...ab ek shabd bhi nahi bolungi..

Maahi: hmmm...good

Maahi just looks at her and then takes out come cotton wool as she took some antiseptic on the cotton wool...wiping the blood away on her feet...Kashish just sat there still not feeling any pain at all...Maahi looked up at her seeing her and tried to be extra gentle whilst bandaging her..she placed some antiseptic cream on her foot and then wrapped a bandage around it..she placed everything away

Kashish: thanks Maahi...itni raat ko tumhe pareshan karne ke liye...

Maahi: kyun..kya yeh mera haq nahin hai? main tumhari behen hoon..agar main tumhare liye nahin pareshan hungi to kaun hoga

Kashish; hmm.....tumhe pareshan karna ab aadat ho gayi hai..

Maahi: aur main bhi yahin chahti hoon ke tum humesha muje pareshaan karo...jabse tum itni chup chup rehne laggi ho..kuch acha nahin lagta..tum jaisi ho..main chahti hoon ke tum hamesha waisi hi raho

Kashish: woh Kashish uske pyaar ke saath chali gayi...ab se yeh nayi wali Kashish reh gayi hai jo purani wali ki tarah banne ki koshish karegi.....

Maahi: main samaj sakti hoon...aur main bhi bhagwaan se yahin prathna karungi ke hume humari pehli waali Kashish waapis miljaye...ab chalo..tum araam karo..aur pain killers bhi le lena..jaanti hoon...tumhe dard nahin horaha..par muje horaha hai...hosake to mere liye le lena...goodnight

Kashish: goodnight....Maahi...sone se pehle ek bar Sujal se baat kar lena...use achcha lagega......

Maahi just covers her properly into bed as she pulled the duvet over her...

Maahi: main baat karlungi...ab tum so jao...goodnight....

Kashish: good night...

Maahi pickes up the spare bandages and cotton...and leaves from their..as she turns off the light of her room...closing the door behind her..Kashish just looks towards the door as she saw Maahi leave...she lied down in the bed..her eyes wide open as she lay there thinking about today..she closed her eyes...tears slowly falling down her her eyes...wetting her pillow...

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Maahi walks back to her room and sits on the bed..when she thinks of what Kashish had said...she looked at the time and it was already 11.45...she didn't know if it was right to call Sujal at this time or not...but Kashish had said he would be waiting for her call...she looked at her mobile for a moment and then got up from the bed,,,sitting on the opposite side next to her bedside table..as she picked up the phone and dialled Sujal's number..Sujal who was sat at his desk looking at a file...hears his mobile ringing..he puts his file down and looks at his mobile..he was surprised to see Maahi's name flashng..he picked up the phone..answering it...

Sujal: hello..Maahi...tum

Maahi: haa...tum..tum so to nahi gaye the na..

Sujal: nahin to...main to jaag raha tha...

Maahi: I hope maine tumhe disturb nahi kiya...

Sujal: nahin...bilkul bhi nahin..main kuch..kuch khaas to nahin kar raha tha...tumne aise hi call kiya ya kuch kaam tha?

Maahi: bas aise hi...woh...woh aise hi neend nahi aa rahi thi to socha tumse baat kar loon..

Sujal just smiles as he hears her words...

Sujal: bohat acha kiya tumne...neend to waise muje bhi nahin aa rahi thi..shayad ab aa jaye..

Maahi: kyun...tum to waise bhi jaldi sote ho...

Sujal: haan par aaj kal main khuli aankh kuch zyada hi sapne dekhne lagga hoon

Maahi: matlab...main kuch samji nahi..

Sujal: mera matlab...aaj kal muje humesha apni hone waali biwi ke khayal satate rehte hain..phir chahe woh din ho ya raat

Maahi just shys hearing what he said...

Maahi: tum bhi na....kaisi baatein kar rahe ho..

Sujal just smiles knowing she is embarassed

Sujal: kyun...mine kuch galat kaha

Maahi: nahi to..

Sujal: ohh..to maine sahi kaha phir right?

Maahi: hmm...I think so..

Sujal: think so matlab..haan ya na me jawaab do....warna

Maahi: warna kya..

Sujal: warna..main koi aur dhund lunga apne liye

Maahi: koi nahi milegi tumhe..

Sujal: kyun...kya main itna burra hoon...

Maahi: maine aisa to kuch kaha hi nahi...sirf itna kaha ki mauratitus ki koi bhi ladki tumse shaadi nahi karegi kyunki woh sab janti hai ki tum kitne boring ho...isi liye yaha to koi chance nahi..

Sujal: to tumne kyun haan kaha mujse shaadi karne ke liye..kya tumhe aisa nahin lagta ke main boring hoon?

Maahi: main khud bhi to boring hoon..

Sujal: haan ho to...tabhi thn hum ek doosre ke liye bilkul perfect hain

Maahi; haa...warna tumhe kisi pagal ke saath shaadi karni padti..

Sujal: kar to leta...par main to pehle se hi tumhare saath khush hoon...isliye shaadi to main tumse hi karunga

Maahi: badal to nahi longe tumhara faisla...

Sujal: kahbi nahin...maine faisla kar liya hai..ab to yeh kabhi nahin badlega

Maahi: thanks Sujal...

Sujal: thanks kis liye?

Maahi: bas aise hi...

Sujal: hmm..tum aaj kal thanks bohat kehne laggi ho..

Maahi: Kashish ka asar hai...

Sujal: woh th nazar araha hai muje..waise woh hai kaisi?

Maahi: pata nahi...uski behen hoke bhi main kuch samaj nahi pa rahi...kehti hai ab kabhi kisi se pyaar nahi karegi....aur shaadi karegi to samjote se.....pata nahi lekin muje uski bahot fikar ho rahi hai..

Sujal: tum fikar mat karo Maahi...bas tum sab kuch waqt pe chod do...waqt sabse bada marham hai...aur waqt rehte sab theek hojayega..tum bas kissi baat ki tension mat lo

Maahi: tension kaise na loon....main abhi tak yeh pata nahi kar payi ki woh insaan kaun hai .....kaun hai jo use uski neend me bhi rulata hai....kaise parshan na ho.........

Sujal: jab Kashish is baat ke liye mentally prepared hogi thi woh zaroor batadegi..lekin tension lene se kya hoga..kuch thodi na badlega...isse kuch nahin hoga..tum bas khud ko takleef pohancha rahi ho jab tu jaanthi ho ke hal koi nahin

Maahi: koshish kar rahi hoon sab kuch sambhalne ki..

Sujal: sab sambhal jayega..tum bas waqt pe chod do..aur haan ab kuch apne baare me bhi sochna shuru karo...hamesha ya to kaam ya ghar

Maahi: shaadi ke bad tumhare saath apna sochungi...

Sujal: phir to main chahta hoon ke jald se jald shaadi hojaye humari...taki tum khud ka sochne lagge ho

Maahi: waqt aane pe woh bhi ho jayegi...

Sujal: haan woh to hai..ab raat kaafi hogayi hai...tum jaa ke so jao

Maahi: aur tum so jana...main kal tumse baat karti hoon..

Sujal: theek hai...apna khayal rakhna...and thanks for calling......

Maahi: Kashish ki aadat tumhe bhi lag gayi...

Sujal: haan ab itna waqt saath rehne ke baad aisa to hoga hi..par muje tumse laggi hai...

Maahi; achcha ab main rakhti hoon...Good Night..bye..

Sujal: goodnight Maahi..sweet dreams

sujal cuts the call with a smile and gets up from there...he sighs and then places his mobile aside..he was about to pick his file again..when he stopped thinking over Maahi's words and got up to go to bed....Maahi just sat on the bed with a smile unaware that Kashish was stood at the door listening to the conversation...she had got up to get tablets from Maahi when she had heard them talking and stopped...she saw Maahi smiling and then walked away silently

Edited by goodkashish - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing but a sad part.......

why arent sujal n kash together????

pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its soooooo sad.....mujhe bahut bura lag raha hai....why cant Sujal love Kashish bak?? Uff....I am sounding so stupid....but am not able to see Kashish in so much pain....she is getting hurt every moment....but then she has to be happy as well for her sister....its too painful. And Sujal ko bhi kya kahu.....he just doesnt love her...😭.....and guess am a lil choked......cant say any more!!

Lets see wat happens ahead....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.....................
oh cant see kashish in pain and sujal still hasnt got any feelings for kashish...........hes happy with maahi.....................ohhhhhhhhhhhh do something yaar....................cont soon...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
sujal ko maar paregi ab bus bahuit ho gaya sad part i feel bad for kashish
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooooooo i loved the story amazing

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