Baatein (MayUr) Last Part:Kahaani | Pg99 (08.8.10) - Page 16

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update sonam!
continue soon
nd thnx 4 the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww
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beautiful part
just awesome n touching the heart
i really loved it so much

thanks for the pm

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sonammmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Fabulous yaar!
Waiting for Mayur shaadi! But Shilpa Aunty gonna die! *sniff**sniff*
Continue soon...
Love
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Posted: 15 years ago
Umeed


Nupur slowly entered her room, pulled her dupatta and threw it on the bed ... she went to the washroom and splashed water on her face number of times ... she looked in the mirror at her face ... she could not think of anything else .... she moved out, wiped her face ... It was already 12:00 AM ... but she could not sleep ... it was impossible for her .... she went and sat on the window pane .... her hair flying and coming on her face but she was too busy in staring at the night and didn't remove it ...

Mayank was driving but his mind was not with him, he called Dr. Singh ....
Dr. Singh - Yes Mr. Sharma?
Mayank - Doc, maa kya kar rahi hai?
Dr. Singh - Wo so rahi hai, aap tension mat lijiye ... Dr. Rahul poore waqt unke saath hai ...
Mayank - Hmm ... doc, mujhe aane mein der ho jaayegi ...
Dr. Singh - Aap fikr mat kijiye ... hum sab hai yahaan ....
Mayank - Thanks doc ....

He went to bandstand and sat there ... as usual no one was there at this hour of time .... he was just staring at the never ending sea, his eyes had nothing in them ... no emotion, no feelings ... zilch, nothing on his face either ....

Nupur shut her eyes, a tear rolled down her cheek Khudaya Ve ... Mayank closed his fist and hit it on the ground ... Hayye … Ishq Hai Kaisa Yeh Ajeeb Re Mayank for the first time was confused about his life Khudaya Ve … Nupur slowly opened her eyes, tears in her eyes reflected her pain Ishq Hai Kaisa Yeh Ajeeb Re ... Both didn't know what was going to happen in the future ... they couldn't understand what was stored for them .... Dil Ke Kareeb Laaya, Dil Ka Naseeb Re ... Was this their destiny, did they have any choice .... Dil Ke Kareeb Laaya, Dil Ka Naseeb Re ... Khudaya Ve ... Both were confused about what was going on in others' mind Hayye .. Ishq Hai Kaisa Ye Ajeeb Re ....

Nupur moved out to walk in the garden ... Mayank started walking to calm his mind ..... Nupur had many dreams about her life, but the most important person in her life was going away from her ... she felt shattered completely Aankhon Se Khwaab Roothe, Apno Ke Saath Chhoote .... Mayank had his aims set, but his backbone was cracking ... Tapti Hui Raahon Mein, Pairon Ke Chhaale Phoote ... Nupur broke down and sat on the grass and her eyes shut ... Pyaase Tadap Rahe Hai, Saahil Kareeb Re ... Mayank was stanidn on the beach, the waves touching his feet, but he was burning inside Pyaase Tadap Rahe Hai, Saahil Kareeb Re ... Both thought how was the other handling the situation .... Khudaya Ve ... Ishq Hai Kaisa Ye Ajeeb Re .... They had so much inside them, but nothing could make way to come outside Khudaya Ve ... Hayye .. Ishq Hai Kaisa Ye Ajeeb Re ...

Nupur lied down on her stomach on the wet grass, her left hand stretched while right one folded from the elbow, her head buried in her hand .... Mayank was walking barefoot on the beach, his head lowered ... it started raining heavily ... as if God was with them to hide their tears ....

Nupur could not hold back her tears and started lamenting .... she could not understand what was the future of this alliance ... Aansun Namakh Se Laage, Rishtey Hai Kachche Dhaage Mayank for the first time was feeling that his decision could ruin everything ... he never had felt so helpless ... Reth Pe Apne Saaye, Khud Se Kyun Door Bhaage .... Nupur was afraid of her future, with a man she barely knew and he was was older than her .... how was she going to sustain in the future Kheench Ke Hum Ko Laaya, Kahaan Pe Rakeeb Re ... Mayank was pondering on how his life was becoming one huge puzzle, of which now a girl whom he called a kid days back was going to be part of ... he just couldn't imagine it ... Kheench Ke Hum Ko Laaya, Kahaan Pe Rakeeb Re ...
Both closed their eyes and prayed God to support them for what they were doing was all for one woman whom hey loved more than themselves ... Khudaya Ve ... Hayye ... Ishq Hai Kaisa ye Ajeeb Re ...

Mayank sat in the car and came back to the hospital all drenched .... Nupur felt asleep there in the garden all drenched ..... both had a hope that everything will turn out good for both of them ... they just wished that the other would have handled better than how they did .....

Mayank - Ye sab jo ho raha hai, pata nahi sahi hai ya nahi ... par main ye sab sirf maa ke liye kar raha hun .... main jaanta hun, wo bhi maa se bahut pyaar karti hai, isliye raazi huyi hai ... bas ab wo apne aap ko sambhaal le .... main kisi ki zindagi mein aansun ki wajah nahi banna chaahta ....

Nupur - Wo ye sab maa ke liye kar rahe hain aur main bhi ... wo mujhse behtar tarah se is se deal karenge wo emotionally bahut strong hai, ye main dekh chuki hun .... bas main yahi chaahti hun ki , main kisi ke liye bojh na banu .....


Precap :
Maa - Sagaai ki date, agle mahine ki hai aur shaadi ki chaar mahine baad ki ...
Mayank and Nupur smile at her while having a turmoil inside ....

Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
baatein kuch unkahi si...kuch unkahi si hone lagi...kaboo dil pe raha na...hasti hamari khone lagiiiii....

Ho...hooooooo! Shayad yahi hai pyaar! Fallen in love with this ff di...


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Woh!!!!! I can just imagine what they might be going through..But then these innocent souls are only hoping the other one would be fine!!!!

Pain...Pain binds you stronger than love, i believe!!! I hope this pain helps them to bridge their destiny so that their realtionship could handle the times of distress!!!

Please do continue soon..=)

Love,
Akansha


p.s. @ Jess Di...Di., Oh! Yes! Me and Sonam di have a secret deal going on!!! Or it could even be for the fact that i keep wandering around this thread!!! LOL!! Makes it 13-9 di..Buck up!!! I am sure you are gonna do that soon..!😊 See, how encouraging a person i am!!! Thats called a true sport!!!! LOL!!! I should run from here before my boasting self receives a smack..*runs*
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Akki... looks like Sonam tells you about her update before she PMs us... good for you....
Sonam,
Will comment on your update after I read it... LOL'
EDIT:
Sonam, your every update says something different...something new... this one has title Umeed.... Hope... very approapriate... both are hoping that the other one is dealing with the pain better... both are hoping for each other's happiness... and more so their Maa's happiness...
@Akki - very well said dear... pain binds people stronger than love.... I can grant you extra point for that.... but I won't....😆
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

really interesting the way u showed their turmoil..

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Posted: 15 years ago
Senti part
Mayur are jus thking of each other indirectly
Hop they dnt regret their decision
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww..dat was so sad :( Khudaya Ve is one my favourites song..and very beautifully picturised :):) Amazin chap. Update soon! :)

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