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awesome part plz jaldi se mayur ko milva do plz and thx alot for the pm
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awesome promo plz update soon and thx alot for the pm
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lovely part...so great want to read the next part
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loved the charactr sketch....
its really nice..
loved all the characters...
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hey realy loved ur first part..
and loved mayu a lot..
wow..
its going to b very interesting..
pls continue asap..
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its so superb ff..
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lovely promo
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first part was awesome n amazing...
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sorry guys for late update will update tomorrow

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HI GUYS I KNOW YOU ARE ANGRY THAT I AM UPDATING SO LATE SO

I HAVE POSTED A LONG PART + A PROMO PLEASE FORGIVE ME GUYS

PLEASE

HOPE YOU'LL LIKE THIS PART

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Part #2

Excel Mumbai

Three Days later

Sam called up Nups early in the morning''''

Exams were over nd all her submissions were done so she slept at night and was awake in the morning'''''''..

S to Nups: heyy aaj bhai aa raha hai ''''. Tum chalogi airport mere saat'.. bhai ko receive karne?

N: sorry yaar''''.i'll not be able to make it today''''..mujhe aaj Fresher's ke hostel placement ke liya'''.. Kapoor Ma'am ke saath Library mein rehna parega'''''''..

S: achcha theekh hai toh cafeteria mein milenge '''' aaj koi class toh nahi hai na?

N: nahi ''. Classes toh kal se start ho rahi hai''''''.par haan''.. aaj professor's ka wo intro ka class hai''.

S: arre haan'' wo first half mein hai kya?

N: nahi second half mein'''.. kyun?

S: nahi ''. Wo kya hai na '''.. bhai aur mera room same ho is liye maine application diya tha toh usko hi certify karwate karwate 2nd half ho jayega '''

N: oh haan tere room mein toh ek bed khali hai na?

S: haan '''' tere room mein bhi toh ?

N: haan pata nahi kaun si 2nd year wali item aayegi?

S: hmmmm''' newys main rakhta hoon haan ''.. mujhe airport ke liye nikalna hai'''.. bye''''

N: ok chal bye''' tera bhai aajaye toh mujhe khabar karna''''.

S: haan sure'.. chal bbye

N: bbye '''..

They disconnected

Nups went into the wash room

And Sam woke up Benji'' his roomie '' and also bst frnd of Nup's and Sammy..

Ok before nething lemme introduce all of you to Nup's and Sam's Group

It was one of the most popular groups of the college

Sam, Nups, Benji, Dia ,CJ and Uday'''and they are all best frnds ''.

Ok now getting back''''

Sam left for the airport after waking up Benji''''

Sam took a cab from the nearby stand and started for the airport.. it was at a distance of 30mins from Excel Engineering College'''..

Sam reached there '''''. And saw the arrival board'''..

S: great'' bhai ki flight ek ghanta late hai'.. good''..aisa hameshe mere saath hi toh hona hota hai'''''

Just then

Sam's phone rang''.

S: bhai? Par wo toh flight mein'''.

Picks up the phone'''..

S: hello'''. Bhai''..

M: haan sun meri flight bas abhi abhi land hui hai ''. Main aadhe ghante mein nikal raha hoon''. Tu kahan hai?

S: tum kis flight se aaye ho?

M: IX 9A91'''' kyun'..ma ne kya kaha tha?

S: ma ne IX 8A91 kaha tha jo ek ghanta late hai''

M: ma ne ticket theek se nahi dekha hoga'''newy main conveyer tak pahunch gaya hoon ''''.bus luggage milte hi nikalta hoon ''..

S: ok bhai'''.main bahar hoon'''

They keep the phone ''..

Mayu gets his luggage after sometimes''''''..he comes out''.Sam sees him and waves'..

Mayu and Sam meet

S: bhai'''''(hugs)

M(still hugging) I missed you so much ''..

S: achcha bhaii'.ma ab akeli rahegi?

M: nahi'''..kavita masi ab se ma ke saath rahegi''''..

S: achcha hai'''' ma ke liye bhi aur masi ke liye bhi''''..waise bhi masi office quarters mein akeli rehti thi'''.. dono saath rahengi toh dono ko ek doosre ki company milegi'''..

M: hmmm'''.. newy ab chaley''.. mujhe apna naya college dekhna hai'''''.

S: haan chalo bhai ''''

Sam and Mayu reached their college in the next 1 hour ''

S at the College Office'''

S: Sir '''. Mere permit aapke paas hai ''..

I(sir): haan '''.ek minute''''.haan, tumne room settlement ka application dia tha''.

S: ji sir'''.

I: haan toh kiske saath room chahiye tumhe''..

S: sir , Benji aur Mayank '''.. Mayank Shergill ''''aaj hi join kiya usne'''..2nd year ''..

I: haan''..ok theekh hai''''..

He gave him a permit that certified the change of room'''.

Sam took Mayu to his room''''

S: bhai tum rest karo'.mujhe books library mein submit karne hai''..main kuch der mein aaya''''..

Benji came in just then''''

B: hi sam'''..

S: oh hi Benji'''..heyy yeh hai bhai''''I mean Mayank''..

B: oh hi '''.Mayank''''

Mayu and Benji shook hands

B: Benji'''

M: hi Benji'''..

S: heyy guys main zara library se aaya ''..

B: haan sure''''..

Sam left ''and benji and mayu started chatting'''..alos Benji helped him to unpack too'''..

Sam went to the college building'.and then to the library ''''.

S: heyy Nupur'''

N: hi tum wapas aagaye?

S: haan bhai ko room mein chor ke aa raha hoon''''

N: oh '''newy mera yahaan kaam khatam ho jaye toh apne bhai se milana'''.

S: theekh hai''.main books submit karke room mein ja raha hoon''. Tera ho jaye toh phone kar dena'. Cafeteria mein milenge''''

N: ohk''.

Sam submitted his books and went to his room'''.

JUST BEFORE LUNCH TIME '''..

Nups called up Sam

N: hey ''.you'r coming?

S: haan''.bas fifteen minutes mein''..kyun?

N: oh wok ya hai na mera kaam khatam nahi hua hai so I guess I'll meet you guys in the intro class ''..

S: ok '.toh main bhai ko baki ke doston se milwadeta hoon ''..tumse class ke baad hi milwaoonga''

N: Great'''ok then bbye'..gotta go''.

S: bbye'''.

Sam and Mayu went to the college cafeteria''''Sam introduced mayu to all his other frnds

S: guys''..yeh hai Mayank''''mera bhai'''..and bhai yeh hai''Dia

D: hi Mayank''

M: hey'..hello'..

S: yeh Uday

D: Dodo''..mera genius bhai'..

M(laughed a bit with the others: hi'mere liye Uday hi theekh hai'''

U: hi mayank''.

S: this is CJ'''.

CJ: hi Mayank

M: hi''..

S: aur Benji se toh tum mil hi chuke ho''.

M: yeah''..

They chatted for sometimes''and also had their lunch''.

D: Hey guys abhi toh wo intro classs hai na?

B: haan''..

CJ: chalo hummein chalna chahiye warna last benches sab full ho jayangi

They all laughed and went inside their respective class'

All of them were architecture students so they all rushed in''''.

Sam: hey guys thodi doori par bauthte hai'..ek saath baithenge toh comment kaise paas karenge'''.

They all sat at different corners of the class room

Sam's Group was the naughtiest but the most brilliant group''.and now mayu was a part of it'..although he was determined not to pass any comment because he was new and he was not used to being naughty ''''.

Newy getting back'''''

S: bhai tum aaj 1st bench pe baith ''..naye student ho professors tumhe hazar baar tumhare marks poochenge toh ''.1st bench pe rahoge toh humare or unka dyaan nahi jaayege''''.

M: ok ''cool

Mayu went to the 1st bench''he found a place next to someone who had a newspaper opened up infront of him/her''.but he/she was sitting at the corner and if mayu wanted to sit there he/she had to either move in or move out and allow mayu to sit inside so'..

M: excuse me''.

The person folded up the paper so that only her eyes could be seen by mayu''.

M( to himself): wow'''..kitni khoob soorat aakhen hai is ladki ke''..

M( again to himself): abe e Mayank pagal ho gaya hai kya? Aate hi ''nahi baba mujhe padhai pe dhaay dena padega'''..no Mayank no''..

The eyes were of none other than nups

N: yes'..??? aapko kuch kehna hai ya main paper padh sakti hoon'..

M: hmm''..haan ''sorry wo ''.wo agar aap hatengi toh main andar jaa sakoon''''..

Mayu was just infront of nups''nups kept on holding the paper infront of her she turned to the other side to make way for nups to get in'..mayu walked upto nups''

M: thnx'.

And got in .

N: your welcome''..

M: (to himself)her eyes''.her voice''''they are so beautiful''.

Nus finished her reading folded the paper and leaned back'..

Mayu was totally lost in what he had seen just now'..

He was fighting within himself '''..

Everytime the romantic part of mayu admired nups eyes and that very moment the padgaku mayu scolded him''

N: umm''''tum naye ho?

Mayu was lost and he did not hear her'.

N: nups cleared her throat''''''.umm''toh'.tum naye ho?

M: aap mujhse baat kar rahi hai?

N: ji and smiled''

M: oh I am so sorry I was thinking something else'''..

N: oh that's ok'.

M: toh aap kuch keh rahi thi I guess'''.

N: haan main pooch rahi thi ki tum naye ho ?

M: haan main aaj hi aaya hoon''..

N: oh''toh tumne 1st year kahan se padha hai?

M: exc'''..

The group of professors entered and they all stood up'..

N: aagaye '''.. good afternoon professors''..

The professors started their intros

Shukla Sir: Namaste vidyarthiyon

S: vidya rathiyoon?

B: nahi nahi''vid yaar''..thiyon''..

All laughed at this'''..

N: lo shuru ho gaye ''''

M: yeh log har class mein aisa hi karte hai?

N: yup almost''..

M: toh padhai kaise hota hoga?

Nups was shocked

According to her college was fun and place to do masti''.

N: kya tumhe cafeteria se zyada library pasand hai?

M: haan tumhe kaise'''

Nups cut him in between

N: kya tum apne pichle college mein 1st hue they?

M: haan par'..tumko''''

N: toh tumhara chashma kahan hai? Aur tumhare baal''.wo bhi tel se chip chip nahi hai''.tumhere daant''

M: mere daant kya''..

N: wo bhi bahar nahi hai''aur tum''.. tum toh champu types ke nahi lagte ho''.. phir tum geeky kaise ho sakte ho?

M: kya?

N: ignore ignore'''. Tum padhai karo'..

M: kya?

Mayu to himself: itni khoobsoorat hoke itni stupid tujhe is pagal se door hi rehna chahiye beta Mayank''

They did not speak a word through out the whole intro class in the mean time''

A scene at the airport''

A girl wearing a light blue salwar kameez '' hair tied up at the back with a small clip

She came out of the departure''.. pushing a trolley'' a guy waved to her and she waved to him and smiled''.

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PROMO #3

A scene in a library'''.

Many people sitting and reading books

The camera zooms to a girl in pink salwar suit '''. Making notes and there are five to six books spread open'''..

She stands up from her place and goes over to a book rack and takes out five to six more books'''.. comes back and sits on the table and opens these books'''.. among those books one of the book was named "A sister like you"'''..

She opened that book and read the first page.

She closed it '. There was a smile on her face ( it is Gunjan) '' she removed the books and got out a dairy''' she opened it and took out a picture'''' she gently moved her fingers over the pic''''

G: main aa rahi hoon di aapke paas bahut jald''''.. I miss you so much''.

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