SaVni together...FF...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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SaVni together..


Part 1..


D: Chalo na Avni...

A: Magar kaha?

P: Woh aaj mera chota bhai aara hai London se...Sameer...

A: Thike...

D: Roshni kiddar hai?

P: Woh Varun ke saath gayi hai..

D: Ohh...Chalo Avni..Jaldhi se jaake tayaar ho jao...

A: Okey dii..

Avni goes up to change...

Then Prithvi gets a call...

P: Helo..

S: Helo bhai..

P: Sameer tu kaha hai?

S: Main Airport pe hoon....

P: Thike...Hum abhi Nikklane hi wale the..

S. Acha Bhaiya...Flight ka waqt ho gaya hai..

P: Thike..Bye..

S: Bye..

Avni comes down..

D: Chalo, aab chalte hai..

P: Haa..


They sit in the car...


At the airport


P: Yeh Sameer kiddar re gaya??

D: Woh aata hi hoo ga..

Then Sameer comes...

S. Hii bhaiya...

P: Hi..Inse milo...
Yeh hai Damini..Meri wife...

S:Aap ki shaadi bhi ho gayi??


P: Haa...

S: Aap ne mujhe pataya kiyo nahi?

P: Hum ne sojha ke yeh surprise ho tumhare liye..

S: Anyways...

P: Aur yeh hai Damini ki behein..Avni..

S: Hii...

A: Hii..

They go home....

At the night, Avni goes to the garden...

Sameer can't sleep, So he goes to the garden to get some fresh air...

Then he sees Avni...



Sameer can't take his eyes from here...

But the he goes back to sleep...

He can't sleep..

All he sees is Avni....


S: Yeh mujhe kiya hora hai??



At the morning...


P: Sameer....Orto...

S: Bhaiya tora aur soone de na..

P: Bhohat soo liya hai tumne....
Aab orto...

S: Thike...

P: jaldhi aana...Breakfast ready hai..

S: Hmm..

After 15 minutes, Sameer comes down...

Damini gives breakfast to him..

S: Mmmm...Yeh breakfast kisne banaya hai??

D: Avni ne...

S: Yeh khanaa boot delicious hai..

A: Thanks...

Sameer gets finish..

D: Avni, kiyo na tum Sameer ko gumaane le chalo??

P: Nice idea..Aur Sameer hamara desh bhi dekh le ga...

S: Bhaiya, Aap to aisi baat ke rahe hai ke maine jaise India dekha hi nahi hai..

D: Sameer, tumne kabhi paani puri kai hayi India ki?

S: Nahi..

D: Dekha..Tumne agar paani puri nahi kai to kuch bhi nahi kaya..

S: Chalo, aap woh bhi chak lo ga..

Everyone begins to laugh...

Avni and Sameer goes...

Avni takes him to eat Paani puri..

S: Mmmm..

A: Kiya hua?

S: Kuch nahi...

A: Gola kaoge?

S: Gola?? Woh kiya hota hai?

A: Tumhe gole ka bhi nahi pata..?

S: Nahi..

A: Chalo..

They both goes to eat gole...

S: Gola kaane ke baad hum kaha jaare hai?

A: Taj mahal dekhne ke liye...

S: Ok..

Sameer begins to eat his gola..

While eating, Avni sees him..

She smiles...

Sameer looks at her..

S: Kiya hua??

A: Oh..Kuch nahi..

they get's finished...

S: Aab Taj Mahal..

They go to Taj mahal..

Avni's fot get's hurted, and she falls on Sameer...

They looks at each other a long time...






Precap: Avni at the hospital..
Sameer worried for her..


Hope you all liked it..

Gonna cont soon..

Please comment, and hit the LIKE button..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
yuppy
first of all thanx for giving us one more SaVni FF🤗
n ya
awesome start...😊
i m falling more n more in love with SaVni😳😳😳
juss cant wait for the next part😍
the precap omg avni in hospital tht makes me worried but i hopoe she ll b ok😊

thanx for the pm😳😳
cont. soon!!👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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First of all, I am so happy to read a SaVni FF!! Miss them so much!!
And, for this writing, I really liked your simple yet convincing language.

The precap is so engrossing!! God and you only know what has happened!! Continue soon and thanks for the PM!!

Love,
Nidhi.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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luvly hina,......m 2 agree wid juhi di...
i m soo glad u cm up wid nother savni ff.....
really gr8 job .....👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: juhi_karneet

yuppy
first of all thanx for giving us one more SaVni FF🤗
n ya
awesome start...😊
i m falling more n more in love with SaVni😳😳😳
juss cant wait for the next part😍
the precap omg avni in hospital tht makes me worried but i hopoe she ll b ok😊

thanx for the pm😳😳
cont. soon!!👍🏼




Thanks for liking it Juhi...
Glad that you liked it..
It all just comed in my mind, so i started a FF about it...
Gonna cont soon...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Glad that you liked the FF...
Gonna cont soon...
😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: marie1994

wao..............
loved it cont. soon



Glad that you liked it Deepi...
Gonna cont soon...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Alishaa1

Wow cool ff.Do continue...soon....




Glad that you liked it..
Gonna cont soon..😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: nidhi4gud

First of all, I am so happy to read a SaVni FF!! Miss them so much!!
And, for this writing, I really liked your simple yet convincing language.

The precap is so engrossing!! God and you only know what has happened!! Continue soon and thanks for the PM!!

Love,
Nidhi.




Glad that you liked it..
And i miss them too...
I did make it very simple one..
You gonna now about the precap very soon dear..
Gonna cont soon..😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: dcpisj

luvly hina,......m 2 agree wid juhi di...
i m soo glad u cm up wid nother savni ff.....
really gr8 job .....👍🏼




Thanks for the lovely comment sweety..
Glad that you liked it...

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