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Posted: 14 years ago
enjoy the wedding, update soon, and do add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update soon i cant wait to see the wedding plz yaar update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVE flirtatious Maan 😉 😆 😳
Every single update so far has been wonderful...I'm sure in the future they'll get even better! 👏 👏👏
😆 😆 😆 I'm reeling with shock knowing that Geet thinks Maan is GAY 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Too funny! ⭐️
Can't wait for the wedding and their hopefully, happily married life 😉
Please update as soon as it is convenient for you and please add me to your P.M. list also 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy..i just read ur ff!!i think its soo inersting n its soo funny!!i just laugh the whole time..ur doing an amazing ff!!can u add me to pm list?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was so good! The gang convo......their little bickers and petty fights......lolz.....and Maneet.....Geet kicked him hard......lolz.....and poor guy was scolding himself for flirting with her.......aww......and they both are having an argument through eyes......lolz.......hatke couple! Enjoyed reading this part.......do continue soon.



hiii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha sososo glad you liked the update! and yupp maaneet will just be restricted to fighting for the time being 😆😆

~Naina

Originally posted by: revav

😆😆wow....what an update..............

tht gay part was hilarious...............😃
pls add me to ur PM list
reva



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha so glad you liked that update :) and i shall definitely add you to the PM list!!

~Naina

Originally posted by: neha2005

just read ur ff! its great! cant wait for the next part!



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked my ff :) do let me know if you want to be added to the PM list!

~Naina

Originally posted by: malluangel

alohaaaaaaaaaaaaa do u update at like midnight or wat?!?!? i never get to be the first :(
anywho, loved it naina!
haha geet thinks msk is gay lol. loved the credit card scene... i would totally love for that to happen really with me lol.... im already feeling sorry for my future hubby....
anywho this time u better update faster!
n cannot wait for the wedding!!!!!!!!!!!11



hii aish!!!!!!! :) haha and yes i do update at midnightt. hehe my brain doesn't function during the day 😆😆 so haha next time though, i shall try and update when you're online k?😃😃
sighh. i completely agree yo. i feel horrible for my future husband.. poor guy. his biggest mistake would be to hand over a credit card to me...i LOVE shopping! lmao and updating faster 🤣

i thought you knew me girl! 😉

~Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet

lmaooo!!!!!!!!!! i loved how geet thinks maan is gayy! but i hope the misunderstanding gets cleared up real soon! btw armaan/riddhima (at least in fanfics they will be together :D) and angad/kripa-absoltely GREATTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job!



hii! haha thanks a ton for reading and commenting! hehe yess geet thinks maan is gay 😆😆 and dnt worry the misunderstanding will definitely be cleared up soon😉😉 very soon 😉 haha yes ar will be together in this ff :) and so glad you like ar/ak =D

~Naina

Originally posted by: ShelDev

Hey there

OMG this was an awesome update....
Loved Angad & Kripa...my all time fav jodi...thanks for including them
GAY? haha...that's too funny....
Oh God this is too good....Gee thinking the MSK is gay....😆😆..
Pls continue soon



hi Shel!
thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha soso glad you liked angad and kripa...and yess i completely agree they're my number one jodi too! absolutely love them and miss them completely
haha but dont worry geet's misunderstandings will be cleared up soon😆😆

~Naina

Originally posted by: kinno

really love your FF and thanks for the pm😊



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! and sure no prob with the pms :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Hey Naina...i finally caught up with the last couple updates....love the pace you have set. WOW...so does Geet seriously think that Maan is gay....? No way....would love for her to tell Maan she thinks he is GAY...would love to hear this confrontation....dying to see Maan's reaction....maybe he will do something to prove otherwise......my imagination is running away now!!!

Looking forward to the next part!!!



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha so glad you're liking how the story is going :) lmao and yeesss. geet does think maan is gay =D lmao and yess. you'll definitely see this confrontation soon! ahh i loved writing that part..and completely thouht of this actually happening in the show hehe :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

nice update!!!!!getting three fab couples together............shwing their chemistry.............n maaneet's own talks thru their eyes.........luv this 'coz this is wht maneet speak volume thru eyes!!!! last but not the least...... geet has listen half convo wanna see maan's reactions.....

awaiting 4r next update:))



hiii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! glad you liked the update :) haha and yess i love the three couples 😃😃 yess. maaneet talking through their eyes is something i can actually iamgine happening...hehe and geet half listening will definitely lead to misunderstandings =DD

~Naina

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

omg that was too funny

i cant wait for ur nxt update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
thanks for da pm



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha so glad you found the update funny :) and sure no problem for the pms :)

~Naina


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jaibaniwalia

Heyy...
It was an awesome part...
Bechara maan...geet kicked him lol...
And now she thinks that maan is gay 😲 😆
can't wait for the next part...
Plz cont soon...



hii!
thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked the updaate :) hehe yes geet and maan and their fights😆😆
hope you like the next part too!

~Naina

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

heyy its really fun !! i love reading ur FF. PLease update soon.

and PM me when u update it.



haha hii! thanks a lot for reading and cmmenting! so glad you like this and i'll definitely pm you when i update :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

ohmygosh Naina! That is one twist I did not see coming. It's going to (presumably) lead to hilarity! Geet thinks Maan is gay! haha.

I love your portrayals of Armaan and Angad as Maan's friends. They balance out his seriousness - and will hopefully let Geet see a more fun side of him. Plus adding in Kripa and Riddhima will give Geet some girl friends to talk to, and have some masti with. (:

can't wait for more!



hehe hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! lol so glad that twist came as a surprise 😆😆 lmao yess the four friends were added to include some fun in this...otherwise with only maan and geet, especially during wedding time...it would be like a funerall..with both of them ready to kill each other😆😆

~Naina

Originally posted by: desigurl953

please yaar
dont make MSK gay in Geet's eyes
I can't simply wait for the wedding
please update soon
Thanks
🤗



haha hiii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! lmao dont worry though.. geet will find out soon enough that maan is anything but gay 😆😆 :)

🤗
~Naina

Originally posted by: kooliio

Heyy...
Awesome ff...
Loved it...
Do cont.soon...



hii! so glad you liked this ff :) thanks a lot for reading and commenting!

~Naina

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

Hey, lovely ff. Geet misunderstanding Maan as gay was hilarious. Please continue soon and addme to your pm list



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha geet misunderstanding 😆😆 and i will definitely add you to the pm list! glad you like this :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb!

wow!....long update!
really like the entry of both the couples!=)....
geet thinks that maan is a gay!.....seriously this girl has lost it!....i can't stop laughing!.....
continue sooon!
thnx 4 the pm!



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha and yess. i know this was a long update...everyone's always complaining about the udpates being too short or something 😆😆 ahaha so glad you enjoyed this part :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hiii omg really funny n lovely part

his is going really awesomely
its great that u add Angad-Kripa n AR
with them..its more fun..lol
omg now geet thinks that maan is a ...gay!!..lol
what will happen if maan listen this..!!,,lol
continue soon when u can
see yaaaaa



hiii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked this update and found it funny :)
lmao yupp the sole purpose of AK and AR is for some added entertainment 😆😆

~Naina

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

fantastic......loved it .....a good pinch of comdey n romance ..waiting for the next update ....whats ur plan about it ?



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha so glad you liked the story :) and as for the next update...just wait and see😆😆 (lol even i dont really plan anything out 😆)

~Naina




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

ok ive onli read 3 chapters soo far and i must say this sounds goood!!!!

while i desperately rummage thru to find other parts plz do add me to ur pm list
thankzzzzz



hiii! thanks a lot for reading and commentingg! hahah soso glad you liked this story :) and im so sorry for not updating the index...im quite the lazy one 😆😆 and i will definitely add you to my pm list :)

~Naina



hi aiiiiiiiiiish. -_- girl, you shouldn't be talking😆😆

Originally posted by: Tishuu

well well well ive read it soo far...all good....dnt woz about the excuse........lol i knw hw tough it can get at times besides we wouldnt want a rushed update - we would wait for a blastful update!!

lool at geet for thinkin maan is gay...haha...o deary me
waiting for ur next piece of creative writing
=}




hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! hahah aww thanks for being so patient with me and my horrible updating!
haha hope you like the next part too!

~Naina

Originally posted by: yasu09

am loving this fic....

am loving how maaneet r getting married so quick...
and am also loving ur version of Maan....
can't wait for the next part....



hiii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you're liking this story :) hehe and my Maan is a weird one, sometimes khadoos, and sometimes just 🤪
hehe hope you like the next part too though!

~Naina

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Its k Dear

Take ur own Time😊



hii! thanks a lot for commenting! hehe and being so patient with me :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: kirannaryani

hi i read all part your simply too good please add me in pm list please update the next part cant wait too see the marriage



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked this ff :) and I will definitely add you to the pm list!

~Naina

Originally posted by: NiksAngel

hey cool FF...pm me whn u update



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked this ff :) and I'll definitely pm you!

~Naina

Originally posted by: desigurl953

dont worry we understand,right guys?
take ur time but you have to make it up by giving us a long long long update
enjoy ur cousin's wedding
bye 😊



hii! thanks a lot for understanding! hehe i hope the update is long enough....phew it took me forever to writee! and aww thanks i had a great time :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

hey... no probs at all... do njoy the wedding... bt pls add me to ur pm list...😊



hii! thanks a lot for commenting! and thanks a ton for understanding! and you'll definitely be added to the pm list!

~Naina



hii! thanks a lot for understanding! i do appreciate it :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: uzmam1

hey Naina ..

really enjoyed reading your ff so far ..its brilliant .. could you please add me to your pm please??
uzma😛



hi uzma! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you're enjoying this ff :) and i'll definitely add you to the pm list!

~Naina

Originally posted by: anufa

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooN!!!!



hii! so sorry for the delay...update coming soon though!

~Naina

Originally posted by: LoveManeet

yaar i am eagerly waiting for your next update😳
but enjoy your cousins wedding!! 😃



hii! so sorry for the delay...but next update coming soon!

~Naina

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

enjoy the wedding, update soon, and do add me to the pm list



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! i'll definitely add you to the pm list!

~Naina

Originally posted by: kirannaryani

plz update soon i cant wait to see the wedding plz yaar update soon



hehe sorrryy for the delay...but i'm updating soon!

~Naina

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

LOVE flirtatious Maan 😉 😆 😳
Every single update so far has been wonderful...I'm sure in the future they'll get even better! 👏 👏👏
😆 😆 😆 I'm reeling with shock knowing that Geet thinks Maan is GAY 🤣
🤣
Too funny! ⭐️
Can't wait for the wedding and their hopefully, happily married life 😉
Please update as soon as it is convenient for you and please add me to your P.M. list also 😊



hii! haha this Maan sure is different 😆😆 aww thanks a lot...iyou guys as readers is awesome 😃😃 and i will definitely add you to the pm list! thanks a lot for reading and commenting!

~Naina

Originally posted by: crazzy-girl

heyy..i just read ur ff!!i think its soo inersting n its soo funny!!i just laugh the whole time..ur doing an amazing ff!!can u add me to pm list?



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha sososo glad you're enjoying reading this! and i will definitely add you to the pm list!

~Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Everyone!

Phewwwwww. It's been a looong time since I updated and I completely apologize for the delay. But I'm back with an epicly ginormous update...the Wedding! I hope you all enjoy reading this part....i hope it turned out satisfactorily, even though I'm not completely satisfied with it.

But thanks a ton for all of your support and patience with my delays, I really do appreciate it :) And I updated the index and the pm list on the first page, do check it out!

And hm. Oh yes, for all of those who asked, I had tons of fun at the wedding, hehe and thought of a few ideas for this from my cousin's wedding 😆😆

But I'm not too perfect so excuse me for any mistakes in the order of the rituals or something!

As always, if you want to be added to the PM list, let me know, and don't forget to comment and hit the like button! And any suggestions/ideas you have always welcome.

Oh yes, and check out the comments to your replies on Page 24 😃

Phew. the update?!

Happy Reading!

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Chapter 7:

Recap: Maan finds out Geet is pregnant with his brother's baby, and Dev refuses to marry her and he is kicked out of the house. Dadi thinks Geet is pregnant with Maan's baby and so insists that the two marry each other. Geet/Maan still hate each other, and Angad-Kripa/Armaan-Riddhima introduced as the friends of Maan.


Two Days Later:

Maan stood in front of the mirror, fixing his sherwani, adjusting the wedding turban, you know, finishing the final touches of looking dashing.

"Wooooooow. Look what we have here. THE MSK excited about a wedding. Actually taking time to get ready. Who would have ever thought this was even possible?" smirked Armaan as he stepped into the room, followed closely by Angad.

A quick glare from Maan silenced Armaan immediately, as he saw that his friend, instead of looking happy, looked like he was ready to kill someone.

"Dude. You're getting married. Ma-an. Take a chill pill" giggled Armaan, as he quoted Anjali (Kajol) from Kabhi Khushie Kabhi Gham.

"What did I do to get stuck with friends like them?" Maan muttered to himself, as he stepped out of the room, ready to head downstairs.

*~*~*~*~*


Meanwhile, Geet was seated in front of the mirror, with Kripa and Riddhima hovering over her, adjusted her choli, her simple jewelry, her makeup, hair, dupatta, just to make her look perfect.

"Guys, I look fine, now stop fussing over me" sighed Geet, exhausted with having to get dolled up for a wedding which she didn't even want.

"Arreh shut up Geet. You don't know anything about these men. The prettier you look now, the more fun you'll have tonight" teased Kripa and Riddhima.

Han Fun. Of course. A Gay Maan would fall in love with me, and change his preferences based on how I look.

But before she could actually respond, they heard someone knocking sharply on the door, "Geet Beta, Are you ready yet?" Dadi asked, as she entered the room, carrying what looked like some jewelry boxes with her.

"Han Dadi, I'm done with everything" she smiled, bending down to get her blessings.

Kissing Geet on the forehead, Dadi mumbled a few blessings, before asking her "Geet beta, I have a question. I know it's your wedding day and you want everything to be done according to your wishes, but I have one small request. Do you think you could fulfill it?"

Startled at what Dadi might ask, Geet grasped the older woman's hands in her own, and giving her a reassuring smile, replied "Of course Dadi. Anything you want. Anything at all"

"Woh..woh kya hain na ki...I have some of Maan's mother's jewelry here with me, and I know she would have loved for her daughter-in-law to wear it during her wedding and to have it passed down to her" she answered, opening up the various boxes to reveal diamond studded bangles, a maang tika made of precious stones, and an antique necklace set.

The girls' eyes went wide in response, but once again, before Geet could respond, Angad and Armaan stepped into the room. "Of course she'll listen Dadi. She's not fussy about the wedding, and definitely not the bridezilla that Kripa was during our wedding. 'Angad, the flowers were supposed to be only white, not white with purple dots'" smirked Angad.

"Or..or remember, 'Armaaaaaaan. I told you that the tie for the you and Maan had to be sky blue and midnight ocean blue' I swear. Kripa was a nutcase during that wedding. Heck, I didn't even know that there were that many shades of blue!" added in Armaan.

Riddhima and Geet burst out laughing at the two guys' impersonations of Kripa the Bridezilla, while Armaan and Angad made a quick escape downstairs, shouting out that the panditji had called Geet downstairs.

*~*~*~*~*


Maan sat at the mandap, barely paying attention to the Pandit's words and mindlessly repeating after him. I'm marrying someone. I'm marrying the person who is pregnant with my brother's baby. My brother's child. What the heck is wrong with me? Stupid Dev. Stupid Geet. Idiots. Couldn't they have used precautions?!

He was completely lost in his own train of thoughts, when he heard Armaan whistling in the background, "Oye Hoye! Bhabhi's looking gorgeouss Maanio"

And that was when he looked up. And nearly lost his breath.

There she was, gliding down the stairs with Kripa and Riddhima right next to her, completely different from her usual appearance of a plain salwar, a plain braid, and hoop earrings.

And he just stared at her, not bothering to blink the entire time she made her way downstairs.

*~*~*~*~*


Geet took her seat next to Maan as the pandit told her to do so, and found his eyes on her, his gaze seemingly burning through her with the intensity, and when she finally looked up to meet his eyes with her own, she glared at him.

Simple.

She glared.

Conveying to him how angry she was. How annoyed she was. How much she wanted to kill him for putting her in this position. For literally forcing her into a marriage. Without leaving her any choice in the matter.

In that one look, she conveyed to him the message that he would regret this marriage.

She was Geet.

And she sure wouldn't take this lightly.

*~*~*~*~*


When her eyes met his, with the intense hatred filled in them, he was jolted back to reality. Maan realized who he was staring at. And quickly turned his eyes back to the fire that was burning in front of them.

He wasn't getting married to the woman he loved.

He was getting married to her because of his Dadi.

Because it was his duty to maintain the Khurana heir.

There was nothing between them.

And there never would be anything either.

It was all a pretense.

A fake charade for everyone who was watching. Being a loving couple. And the game would start now.

"Maang mein sindoor" began the Pandit, bringing Maan out of his thoughts.

And with Geet starting into the fire, Maan picked up a pinch of the red powder, lifted her maang tika slowly, and filled the parting of her hair. Then, taking the black beaded necklace that the priest held out to him, Maan reached around her, and clasped the mangal sutra around her neck, brushing his hands against her neck, sending electric shockwaves through the both of them.

And then the pheras.

While most normal couples would just hold each others hands and walk around the fire, Geet and Maan weren't normal. The entire time they were making the rounds, they tried to annoy each other, by pinching one another on the hand, or walking too slowly, or stepping on the clothes to try and trip each other.

In short, they both were acting like immature little kids.

But no one seemed to notice. As they were all too busy thinking happily that Maan was finally getting married. Dadi's face was literally glowing along with Kripa's and Riddhima's, who both had wide grins plastered on their faces, showing every single one of their thirty two teeth.

Oh yes. And before they knew it, Geet and Maan were married.

*~*~*~*~*


Maan stepped out of the mandap, with Geet right behind him, and the first words that came out of his mouth were, "Where are my shoes?"

Armaan, Angad, Riddhima, and Kripa, who were all coming to congratulate the couple, stopped right in their tracks.

"Your shoes?" asked Angad, while Armaan's eyes grew wide with realization, and he turned his head to look pointedly at Krips and Ridzy. "Girls, where are Maan's shoes?"

"Maan's shoes?! Where could they possibly be?" asked Kripa, barely able to stifle her laughter, while Riddhima looked like a deer caught in headlights, not able to hide the secrets from Armaan for too long.

"Seriously guys, can you be any more immature?" asked Maan rolling his eyes. "Just give me my shoes and we can get this over with"

"Woww. Someone's excited to go back to their bedroom" smirked Kripa, "but sorry bhaisaab, sorry jijaji. Paise First. Joote second" she continued, holding her hand out for the money.

Maan was baffled, "Since when did I go from bhai to jijaji?"

"Since we figured that we would get money" winked Riddhima.

"Guyss. Stop it and just give him the shoes back" asked Geet, placing a hand over Maan's and looking up at him. "Give us the shoes and then he'll give you the money"

"Haha No way Geet. Paise first, joote second" repeated Kripa pulling the shoes out from a basket nearby and running away.

Geet and Maan stood rooted to their spot, while Armaan and Angad broke out in song.

Dulhe Ki Saaliyon O Hare Dupatte Vaaliyon
Joote De Do Paise Lelo
Joote De Do Paise Lelo

Dulhan Ke Devar Tum Dikhalaao Na Yoon Tevar
Paise Dedo Joote Lelo
Paise Dedo Joote Lelo

Ajee Note Gino Ji, Joote Laao
Zid Chhodho Ji, Joote Laao
Fraud Hain Kya Hum, Tum Hi Jaano
Akadu Ho Tum, Jo Bhi Maano
Jo Bhii Maano, Jo Bhii Maano
Ajee Baat Badhegi, Badh Jaane Do
Maang Chadhegi, Chadh Jaane Do
Adho Na Aise, Pehle Joote
Pehle Joote Pehle Joote
Joote Liye Hain Nahin Churaayaa Koi Zevar
Dulhan Ke Devar Tum Dikhlaao Naa Yoon Tevar
Paise Dedo Joote Lelo
Joote Dedo Paise Lelo

Kuchh Thandaa Pi Lo, Mood Nahin Hai
Dahi Bade Lo, Mood Nahin Hai
Kulfi Kha Lo, Bahut Kha Chuke
Paan Khaa Lo, Bahut Kha Chuke
Bahut Kha Chuke Bahut Kha Chuke
Ajee Rasmalaai, Aapke Liye
Itni Mithaai, Aapke Liye
Pehle Joote, Khaaenge Kya
Aapki Marzi, Naaji Taubaa
Naaji Taubaa Naaji Taubaa
Kisi Betuke Shaayar Ki Besuri Qawaaliyon
Dulhe Ki Saaliyon O Hare Dupatte Vaaliyon
Joote Dedo Paise Lelo

Armaan and Angad made their way over to their respective girls, trying to trick them into handing over the shoes. But the girls were definitely too smart for them, as they fought back fiercely, not giving up until they got their money.

Meanwhile, Maan and Geet stood still, laughing and watching the two couples dancing around and having fun, without either of them realizing that Geet was still holding onto his hand.

"Maan they're behaving like such little kids na?" giggled Geet, leaning onto his shoulder, and Maan froze, pushing her away from himself, "Hmm yeah" he replied distantly, realizing the little proximity between themselves.

But Geet wouldn't hear of it.

Throughout dinner, and when meeting the guests, Geet constantly kept on holding Maan's hand, smiling at him with a big toothy grin, flirting outrageously with him, just being completely different from what she had been for the past two days.

At one point, after getting Maan's shoes back (don't worry, Kripa and Riddhima got the money before Maan got his shoes), and it was just the six of them standing, Geet even stood on her toes, and leaned over to give her husband a kiss on the cheek, shocking the living daylights out of him.

"He's so cute na?" she commented smiling, as she hugged him from the side while talking to Kripa and Riddhima.

Maan just stood there wide eyed, gaping at the different Geet he was saying.

This girl is truly a mental case!

And now, I'm married to her!

*~*~*~*~*


And soon it was time for them to retire. While Kripa and Riddhima went upstairs to Maan's bedroom to get Geet settled in, Armaan and Angad hung out downstairs with Maan as they sat around and talked.

Once they settled her on the bed and teased her some more, Kripa and Riddhima left the room, collecting some more money from Maan, because of their right as his saalis, and then allowing him entrance.

The minute she heard the door close behind him, she got up and made her way to the closet in Maan's bedroom, taking some clothes out that she could change into, when she felt his presence right behind her, him breathing down her neck.

To his shock and surprise though, rather than turning around and yelling at him, she smiled and gave him a quick hug, "Phew. Finally, the wedding is over. Now we can rest in peace!" she exclaimed, and moved away towards the bathroom.

But he was too quick for her, grabbing hold of her hand, a puzzled expression on his face, but his voice low and angry, "What do you think you're doing?" and pulled her back, placing a soft kiss on her cheek, his beard brushing against her skin, as she giggled from the ticklish feeling.

"Maan, let go" she giggled, trying to pull away, but he wouldn't let her go.

"So you have no problem with kissing me? Or holding my hand? Or hugging me randomly?" he asked, his face contorting into a confused expression, as he wondered what was wrong with this woman who had been ready to kill him the previous day.

"Of course not Maan. I mean, I know the truth. So it's ok" she smiled reassuringly, patting him on the back. "Don't worry though. I won't tell anyone your secret, but it's nothing to be ashamed of. Nothing really."

Maan let go of her, confused beyond belief, as he just raised his eyebrows in question, "My secret? I have a secret that I don't know about but you do?"

She walked over to the window, with him following close behind her, "I know you probably never intended for me to find out, and I realized that's why you're always angry and a Mr. Khadoos. You don't want anyone to find out. But you should realize that gay people are much more accepted today, so you have nothing to fear."

"Where did gay people come into this discussion?"

"I know, Mr. Khadoos, that you are gay, and the only reason you married me, even though I am pregnant, is because you want to pretend that you are not gay in the eyes of society" she spoke softly, not looking at the whole mirage of expressions passing over his face.

And that was a mistake. The next thing she knew, she was being whipped around swiftly, and found herself staring into his dark brown eyes which were glowering, "GAY?! You think I'M gay?!" he asked, his voice laced with disbelief.

And her voice got as quiet as a mouse, "Well I heard Angad and Armaan saying that two nights ago, remember?"

"Miss. Geet. For your kind information, I am NOT GAY." he bellowed, his voice a loud roar.

And suddenly, his mouth twitched into a smirk, as his voice went into a barely audible purr, "And I can prove it."

Not wasting a second, he bent down and pressed his lips on hers, and instantly, her knees turned into jello, as she grasped his arms for support, and he pulled her tightly towards himself. Both of them lost in the kiss, the passion within each other erupting, as they clung onto each other and deepened the kiss, pouring their feelings into it. A slow moan escaped her lips, bringing him back to his senses and he quickly pulled away, heading to the bathroom.

She just stood there, shocked at how easily she had lost herself in that kiss, so different from anything she had experienced, so different from Dev.

"See, I told you I'm not gay. And I had no ulterior motive for marrying you" he turned at the bathroom door, winking at her, before shutting the door behind him.

And she was left gaping. He wasn't gay! OOPS! Big time oops! Oh god, what had she just done. But worse, how DARE HE?!

Furious at his actions, she went and pounded on the bathroom door, "Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, that was completely unnecessary and you know it! I'm going to get you back for this. Don't think you're going to get away so easily. GRR" she screamed in exasperation, as she quickly began to plot her revenge.

Maan just leaned back on the door at the other side, What had he just done?!


Edited by Naina2127 - 14 years ago
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omg i loved it
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THE WAR has jst begun 😉😉

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