New Mayur FF: Love Undefined (NOTE on pg17)

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

It was not boring at all, Varsha

In fact,. I loved the start And liked Mayank's and Shilpa aunty's bond soooooooooo much dear

Ok, I will be waiting for longer update next time, if you can manage it...

Love,
$hrey@

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Aastha

@-Aastha_Mohit-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

wowwwwwwwww

such a cute updt..

loved it a lottttt

keep it up...

continuee soonn...

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Nice strt jana

Mayur really fght lik small childrens

Shilpa aunty was jus sho shweet n caring love her

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

hi varshu
yaar now i think jenni will take revenge by bugging you for updates how we bug her and the update was not boring understand buddy
lovely update
and well i will wait for the next update
and i love the bonding of shilpa aunti and maynk
which i miss in the show
lovley update
and sammy's lovely dialouge

Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

hey varshu!!!!!!!!! wonderful 1st part !!! it was so cute . shilpa aunty , mayu , nups , sam and gun. perfect yaar !!'our famous cat fight and junglee billi are back!!

yhey are just to adowable!!!

update soo...... oh ill have to wait for 1 week

try to update soon!

pebbzz

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Varsha sachi mein

I just loved this whole part

with Sayank knocking at their door in the morning n

Gunjan getting the door!
n then

wow Sammy's compliment 😆

" I know chashmish but jab saamne itna khoobsurat chaand ho toh suraj ki roshni kaise dikhai degi !!"

n Shilpa like Mayu's mommy

n Mayu chooo sweet na !

just love his character !😍

n how u describe Nupur

uffff uff ufff I could picture her perfectly !!

u'r amazing writer u know sis !

n as usual Mayur fight's

he calling her "Jungli billi" n she calling him "Monkey"😆

n Sajan in their own little dream world😆

do cont ASAP na !!
n dunn ever say it's boring !!!

warna.....

this is the best FF ever !!
me in luvv with it !!
now plezz plezz plezz

I can't wait

do cont na !!
luvvv u 🤗

-Lina-

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pooja

@pooja007_ArTi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

ur writin very nicely sooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon as u've made me very excited n i've sent u a frns req soo plzzzzzzzzzzzz accept it n send me a pm once u update :D

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

awesome start dear...loved it to the core..this mayank and nupur remind me of my best friend rohit, me and our fights.........

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Hi Varsha
aww sweety i loved ur sweet and nice update
it was beautiful update.
i loved nups mom and mayanks bonding
maynk loves and respect shilpa aunty a lot

wah so mayur ki bij gight start hogaya
wah wah good good very good
mayur and ladai ka janam janm ka rishta hain
i loved their cute fight
when nups called maynk as monkey and mayu called nups as jangli billi - i just enjoyed it
but mayur part was too short.
i want more and more mayur - samjhi

excellent update sweetyyyyyyyy
keep it up
and no way -not once plz try to update at least twice in week
and one more thing it was not boring at all
it was totally rocking update.
and about ur mistake- i dint find nay mistake
so be confident and update soon.

take care

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403848

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Hi! 🤗

Nice start . .

You have committed your share of mistakes but with every part you'd improve, I'm sure. You are really good at this.

And as for the update, it was cute! Ekdam Hindi TV soaps ke jaisa! 😆 I liked it a lot on the whole. Keep up the good work. 👍🏼

-Kanky