New Mayur FF: Love Undefined (NOTE on pg17)

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

hey varsha!!!congrates for the new ff really love the storyline looking forword to it & im sure u ll do great

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Aastha

@-Aastha_Mohit-

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

wowwwwwwww

awsomeeee CS loved it a lotttt

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar
hey Varsha
congrats to u for the new ff
i really liked the concept
plz do add me to the pm list
and update soon

pooja

hey.... hi pooja...😊

thanx a lot for commenting dear..😳..... it really means a lot to me....😛

i'm so glad u liked it.....😳

u r already in my pm list dear.....😉

will definitely update soon dear....😉

thanx again....😊

love u...🤗
varsha

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Sarahh-
OMG Varshu, it was awesome yaar! loved it so much! awesome intro and loved the character sketches!and, the concept is gr8!
Update soon and do PM :D

-Sarah

hey hi sarahh ... my sweetheart....😳😳

i'm so so happy to see you here darling !! 😊😊

aww.... thank u so much dear.....😳😳

i'm so glad u loved it....... ur comment really brought a big smile on my face....😃

frankly speaking i didn't expected u here.... but u gave me an awesome surprise jaan....😍

thank u so much for this lovely comment... it really meant a lot to me....😛

yup... i will update it soon... n i cant ever forget to pm u....😉

keep commenting..... n do updating me about my mistakes...😆

love u...🤗
varshu

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

hi
varsha
sorry for little comment
congrats for new ff
don't forget to pm me

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Nice cs and concept do pm me

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

hi.... nice character sketch n concept...do update soon....

p.s.: already waiting for mayur to fall in love...:):)

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

**edited by me**😉

i dont know wer to start with...am struck u no...

i am with swing like whether to ask sory first..or thx...else appreciate...am mixed with full emotions now...!

dese r some of my present emotions...!

dat was really cute surprise from u chweety..!love u a lot for it...i couldnt express though am not good at expressing views like you i would try my level best for showing my happines....!

am sorry for commenting late....!

u noo am not at all wrong in forcing u to start an ff...

ur absolutely fantastic...!

your character sketch...!

mmmh what should i say...i knew your so good...!

nupur character is just like u...as u can make all smile in seconds...specially me...!

u make me smile a lot with cute and big surprises...!

nupz and gunjan bonds are so beautiful...

simply special as our bond right....!

give me big tight hugs chweety...!

mayu's so lovely and friendship wid nupz wow...!mmmmh........!

samy too nice yaar...!but i want more on mayur...! 😉our one and only mayur..yet am ready to read on sajan too...!

shilpa is mom..too goood....this point sooooo nice...

i am waiting to know about mayur bond more...i cant sit..now...

lovely and exciting concept..and varshu...u wer playing wid me on dat day right...u had started absolutely stunning....!and what u told u cant write mmmh....

now what you say???i can bet anyone...my sweety is a excellent writter...!

i have a doubt...😃😃

ur singer....! 😉

am sure u can do that tooo...!ur too cute...!

now wer is the update...i was searching for it...!arey wt yaar...?do update fast...i cant wait longer now...!ur making me gooo crazy now...!

am gonna make a commity for u now....!😉

i have big list for my support mmmh..better be careful and update faster okay...!

me....mahak , faru, adi r there to make u active....isnt it dears..!

so better update faster darling,....!

ohh u think i will stop my comment without ur gifts....!

u d princess update soon...

this is for u...!

am not gonna give ice creamz...i dont want u to get ill...den who will upd...sooo...no ice creams....😆

hope u like my comment...yet its not like ur comment, u r amazing writter and appreciating doll...yet here i tried to showed my excitement here...!

loves

jeni...!

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

mmmh u and faru had big discussion about my lazyness huh...😆

thx mahank for appreciating me...!i know i had done great job...!😎

jaanu am sooooooooo sorry for being late...i had bit little work in sudden i will say through my pm.....dats realy a very chweet surprise ...once i opened my pm box i opened ur mail for first...big surprise from u totally unexpected yaar....so cute......

i cant control me now....

am gonna rushing to read it...

i took a quick view on ur comments first...more than you am the one getting more excited about your ff ... u had written first time so am the most happiest one so i wanted to know other reviews too...i know ur absolutely cute and brilliant writter...

anywaz now i will read and get back to u soon...!

now u wait for my comment a bit...!

loves

jeni!