New Mayur FF: Love Undefined (NOTE on pg17) - Page 2

Originally posted by: achoose

yuppie...1st to comment......waiting 4 the update dear............

Originally posted by: achoose

the character sketch was so cute...so mayur r best friends...waiting 4 them to fall in love...pls update soon dear...waiting 4 ur 1st update........

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Varsha .....hi fariaa dear...😊
2nd one to ommnet
yeeeeeeee- jeni first na sahi but main 2nd ho gayi ...... congratz dear....🥳


Varsha a new ff on mayur
wah wah Congrats dear .....

aww... thank u so so much.....😳😳


i loved ur concept and CS
sajan r already couple and mayur r best frnd
Excellent concept

Aww.... thanks a lot again.... I'm glad u liked it....😊😊
your comments are very precious for me..... so plz keep commenting... 😊😊
criticism is also welcome... so plz feel free to do so...😉😉

plz update 1st part soon
eagerly waiting 4 ur update.

yup... i will update it soon....

And add me to ur pm lst .....

would love to dear..😳😳.... it will be my pleasure...😊

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

Sabse pehle toh i love the fact that i am the FIRST one to receive a PM from you..... yaar u had to... main tujhe kaise bhool sakti hoon... after all.. teri aur jeni ki wajah se hi toh likhna start kiya hai...
😊

I love you beyond words..... same here darling... n u know that...😉





Congo for YOUR ff! .... aww... thank u so much swthrt..😳😳. was eagerly waiting for urs only...😛😛

by the way... i loved this dancing monkey... its so cute....😳😳... thanx a lot !!

And thanks a lotttttttt for this beautiful marvelous surprise! no need to say thanx dear.... i'm glad u like it !! Hope ise padhkar tu bore nhi hui ho....😕😕

I am so happy! .... and i'm happy to see u happy my jaan...😃

tu sirf comments likhti thi? ya phir woh hum logon ko blush karane ke liye hote the? .... yaar main toh sirf comments likhti hoon.... blush toh tum apne aap karte rehte ho...😆😆

yaar tere comments padhkar hi lagta hai that u can write brilliantly! happy... if u think so...😃😃

Jeni tune yeh kaam bahut hi acha kiya hai! i am proud of u dear! hmm... woh toh hai..... love jeni for this..🤗.....its bcoz of her that i got so much courage to start an FF on my own....😊

Aww.....i am so touched! .....😳😳

tera first ff and that too dedicated to both of us! .... yup.,.. i had to my jaanu...😊😊

Thank u sooooooooooooooooo much! .... now don't say this much ''thanku's''..... otherwise i'll not update..ok..😆😆😆

and the poster is too good! .... all credit goes to liana...

The character sketch is brilliant! thanx a lot my dear....😊😊

and The concept is rocking! ... thanku so much jaan... ur comments really means a lot to me....😍

And best of luck from my side for this ff! thanxxxxxx a lot.... i really need it...😆

And kyunki yeh tera first ever ff hai, jab bhi tujhe meri koi bhi help chahiye......u know i am there! .... yup i know dear..😊..... n will soon knock ur doors for help....😆😆

And i wud always be there for u.....thanx ... i know... n same here....

Love u too much! same here darling....😃

Rocking concept and superb style!

u think so.... then i'm glad...😊
yaar ur comment really made my day.....thank u so much... loved it..😳😳
now i'm having a big smile on my face...😃

do keep commenting.... n telling my mistakes...😊

love,...a lot 🤗
Mahak.... ur varshu

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

mere waale ka reply kahan hai?

Originally posted by: cute_luv

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