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@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Hello, Ria madam....hehehe
bahut hi accha start tha....sorry, yaar i am not able to comment on the other one....i have not read it till now....i hardly get time....maybe in holidays after the posting thing settles.... B/w woh ghabrayi, darri sehmi ladki Naina hi thi na....??? i hope sooo...,..and raj toh hai ki apna sharukh, salman....hehehehe....amazing.... But, ek chota si request....maybe i am wrong par thoda easy ho jata hai padhna agar paragraphs thode chote hote hai.....just see....maybe its just me....i have a tendency ki i lose track on the comp ki main kaun si line padh rahi thi....😆😆😆...
plzzz Pm me the next time u update....

Love...

Rajita....

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@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Puri_2711
awesome start.........👏 👏 👏....................
good to know u started new one.............
lets see how RN relation shapes up in this one.........😳 😳.............
👍🏼

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@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

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bohot muskilo bad finally humare raj ko raat guzar ne liye ek lodge mein jaaga mil toh jaate haai par lodge mein ek he kamra khali haai sunke raj uljhan mein par jaata haai usse samah mein nahin aata haai ke woh yeh baat kaise us larki ko baataye par phir uske pass aur koi dusra raasta bhi toh nahin haai isliye raj heemat kar ke us larki ke pass ate bhaai jo ke lodge ke bhar khare the raj larki aake kaheta haai"suno hume yahaan rahene ke jaaga mil gaye haai par "

"par"kya hua koi problem haai kya larki raj se ghbra ke pucchte haai

raj ab heemat karke ek he saas mein us larki se kaheta haai"hume ek he kamre mein rahena hoga i know ke tumhare liye yeh bohot he muskil ke baat haai par "

before raj could complete his sentense woh larki raj se kahete haai"chaliye kamre mein chalte haai" raj toh larki ke baat sunke surprised ho jaata haai kunki kuch dar pahele yehi larki raj ke saath anne se ghabra rahe the aur ab wohi larki uske saath ek he kamre mein rahena cha rahe haai raj ko samajh mein kuch bhi nahin aa raha haai woh yehi sochne laag gaya ke itne jaldi is larki mein itna badlav kaise a gaya raj aapne yehi soch mein dubba hua hota haai ke woh larki ab raj ke samnne aapna finger click karte haai click ke awaz sunke raj ab hosh mein aata haai aur larki ke taraf haairani se dekhte haai

larki-jee chale

raj-hmm(raj nodded his head)

raj aur woh larki kamre aate tpoh haai par raj ke mann mein us larki ko leekar hazaro swaal utth rahe the aur jis ka jabab jaana raj ke liye bohot zaruri tha isliye raj ab us larki se kaheta "suno mujhe tumse kuch pucchna haai?"

larki darr aur ghbra ke raj ke taraf dekh ke kahete haai"kya?"

raj-dekho i know mujhe koi haq nahin haai yeh pucchne ka par i wan to know tumhare picche woh gunde kun paare the aur tum itne raat ko us jungle mein kya kar rahe the?"

larki raj ke sawaal ka koi jabab nahin dete haai isliye raj phir se usse pucchta haai"kya hua tumne koi jabab nahin diya mere sawwaal ka"

ab woh larki aapne dhimme hue awaz mein bolte haai"humara naam "naina" (so she is the heroine humare naina jee )haai hum aapne ghar se bhaag aaye haai"

raj-what?(raj gets shocked to hear this)tum aapne ghar se bhaag aaye hu par kunnnn

ab naina thore hyper ho jaate aur raj se kahete haai"kunki is ke ilava humare pass aur koi raasta nahin tha humare sasural baale hume aur humare bacche ko maar dalna chahate the

raj-kyaaaa par kun

naina-kunki humare sasur jee ne maar ne se pahele aapne pure property humare aur humare bacche ke naam kar de the

raj-toh is mein problem kya haai

naina-problem ab yeh haai ke ab humare devar jee aur baki log hume aur humare beti ko maar ke pura property ke leena chahate haai ab aap he baataye hum kya karte ?

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 15 years ago

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

nice part
continue soon and with a long part
luv preet

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj ko finally raat guzaarne ke liye ek lodge mil jaata hai and it has only one room available!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj is hesitant to tell Naina this but Naina doesn't mind!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is surprised to hear that and is wondering about the change in her!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj asked her about herself and she said her name is Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Just as I had guessed that she is Naina!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is shocked to hear that Naina has run away from her house!!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

She has done this to save her and her daughter's life as the people of her husband's family want to kill them for the property!!!!!!

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Hey Ria

nyc update
do cont soon

Luvs
Naina

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385641

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

nice start.

please do continue.😃

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-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Hiii Riya..

Nice part

please contniue soon

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

that was good
but itna chutku sa update
plz continue soon

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Nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Nice part Raj is hesitant to stay with naina in the same cottage...but naina does not mind Raj is shocked to hear that naina has run away from her home to save her and her daughter's life. but where are her husband and daughter. please continue soon

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