The train journey ... mayur SS ( P 6- pg 15 )

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Radha

@rads14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

loved both the parts..!!
really amazing..
cont soon

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fahi

@fahi91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Hi Prerana... yaar both parts were sooo cute, i really enjoyed reading it, was so sweet. Firstly, love the exchange of numbers and sms and also she woke him up in morning to call her to him. I liked the fact that just because she wore brown he changed his mind about the colour. His jealousy and curiosity when it came to the phone calls. Thanks for making that other guy engaged, what a relief. The second part was even cuter.... i dunno how to praise it enf but its clear to see how much their relationship has progressed in the day they have spent together... and the end part.. wow now i can't wait for next update.. plz update soon. 😃

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#83

both da parts r to gud
luved it
cont soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Both the parts are fab

Loved it

Both were getting close

Mayu was jealous of that guy😆😆 But thank God she said he is engaged warna Mayu ka dil toot jata😆😆

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prerana_mjht

@prerana_mjht

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
part 4-

this is so cute yaar

first the berths scene were amazing

then mayank getting jealous abt the phone calls

omg so that guy is engaged... let's see wat happens next

Thanks a lot 😊
Jalasi hi tho pyaar ki pehli shuruvat hoti hein 😊

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prerana_mjht

@prerana_mjht

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
part 5-

this was more cute

i relaly loved it like anything

amaazing update yaar

nupur crying was so touching

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update soon

luv

mahima