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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome remembered gud old dmg!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Hey Jenn! :)
I love the concept... Angrezi version. 😛
Introduction was really well-written. 😃 Continue soon... this looks promising and fun! 😉
Ishaan.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🥳 😃 CONGOOOOOOOO ON NEW FF!!! 😃 🥳
AWESOME WORK SIS!!! AMAZING FOR FIRST FF!!! 😃...JUS TOO GOOD!!!...LOVED RIDZZ ATTITUDE!!! 😉...😆...AMAZING!!!...THNXXX 4 PMIN ME!!!...PLZZ DOO WHEN U UPD8!!! 😃...TC SIS!!! ❤️ U!!!...BYEEEE 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!
woohoo
ii am proud of you JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN :D
ii am glad you posted this here
yayayay
watch everyone loving your ANGREGII version of DMG :D
I loveyou
and keeeep it up :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Jenn!! 😊
Congrats on your new FF! I ❤️ your concept!! You did a GREAT job! 😊 I really like your introduction part! its really amazing!! Thanks for the pm and please update soon! 👍🏼👏
~Alisha~
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome..looking forward to dis one babe!!!!thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved.. sorry jenn.. i will edit it later.. running out of time.. tata..
sangii
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW a wonderful FF.
Refreshing memories of KaSh loved it .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Gosh...yhu are the SWEETEST:) ! Thankkyhu soo much for those sweet comments...&& I'm extremely sorrii that ii can't get back too all of yhu at the moment...but ii promise to thank each &&everyyone of yhu at one point !



Soo..what are we waiting for ..!? Here is the next chapter:) ! Enjoy readingg && don't forget to tell me ur VIEWS..&& COMMENT:D !



Basketball Game- Ch.2
*Jenny*
I walked back to him, while he was just looking into my eyes, and obviously I had my plan ready…the more I got closer the more he kept searching through my eyes…and WHOOSH…as I run for the basket with the snatched ball from his hand, I make the basket followed by a small yet elegant bow.
A tiny beam of smile appeared across his face, which made me realize that, he maybe good at heart, but filled with loads of mischievousness. "Not bad", pulling his shades down, "but now…", he grabs the ball from hand, before I can even take my eyes off, "it's my turn", as he makes his slam dunk.
"Not bad", I said, but you might want to work on those jumps, they look a little weak", I said with a glint of confidence in my voice.
I took the ball and held I held it halfway, so it was right at out waist level. There he was standing right in front of it, and there I was, at the exact opposite. As I was about to throw the ball up, we both heard rings.
I looked down to see my pager was ringing, and he looked at his wristband, which he'd attached his pager too. "OH SHOOT", we both yelled at the same time.
"Why did he have a pager", I wondered, but without any further investigation I just ran from there!
I dashed from there, until he called for me.
"YO, tell me your name!", he yelled across the court.
I didn't bother to turn back, which made him yell again.
"Yo, hello Basket, what's your name??? ", he yelled once again
"Did he just call me Basket?...what's that supposed to mean", I again investigated in my mind.




Okk then..! That was it for today:D ! Hope yhu enjoyed it.!
I do realize that the parts are quite short....but uhm, if ii get good feedback on this, then ii will consider putting up maybe 2 parts up at one time!


But for todayy..this is IT:D !
Comments..concerns..questions are ALL welcomee!
Don't forget to press the LIKE button!
Thankkyhuu:) !
Mauhzz...xxx.


-Jenn:) !

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Posted: 15 years ago
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res
m first. nikki's #1! yipee
coffee
yaar wat a small update
but i must say i luvd every bit of it❤️😳
u better update a longer part next time.
warna coffee thandi ho jayegi😈
u don't want tat now do u😳
luv the part
continue soon
luv ( u better😉)
choco😛
Edited by Nikki_19_luv - 15 years ago

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