new mayur ss - once met married..pg 58!end & eplog - Page 43

nice ending

Jeniiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Jeniiiiiiiiiiiii

Januuuuuuuuuuu beautiful ending

I loved nups plan

Wah M.Moa helped her

Kya mom hai.

I loved mayur sweet convo

It was simply very nice and fantastic

Very very good update.

Yah me gonna to miss this ff

Now I m waiting for ur epilogue

Hope it will b fully mayurish

Loved ur update jana

Try to update ur other ff after returning form training

Or if u can manage some time then u can update ff in the training period also.

Will update about epilogue later

WOW

lovley update
i will edit soon

k wat to say
hmmm
i just LOVED it
front the start of the part i was thinking "here they r getting 2gether" then again "here they r getting 2gether" but at the end u made them 2gther at an unexpected moment
it was awesome
luking forward to epi... so jaldi
will check it 2night

Hey Jeni,

Oh.. Even you are sad.... Even I am sad that you are ending this ss but anyways you have already promised that you are gonna write a new story...... So, *Cheerful again*....!!!!

The last part was just awesome.....
Nupur gave a surprise to Mayank combined with MM and MD..... Thats so sweet of Nupur and a big surprise-cum-shock for Mayank...

Wow..... Very Interesting... So, if you sum up the whole story it comes like this - Mayank and Nupur had met in Excel college where he remembers her but she forgot him.... He is in love with her but she does not know him... Then, due to Nupur's haste they got married...
So, basically Mayank got his love.... But when he proposed she rejected but even she is in love with Mayank and so surprised him..... Wow.... What a different and unique story yaar.... Seriously, a very beautiful story with some sweet twists and surprises.... Thats just great.....!!! 👏

Loved the whole Mayur scene... I can't even say the parts and dialogues that I liked because I just LOVED the whole part..... Truly Awesome.....


Epilogue...

What??????? Nupur was preparing lunch on their honeymoon.....!!!!!!!!!
Well, I don't think I can comment anything on the next few lines of the epilogue because it was just ........................... *Blushing*....... Awesome work...... Great going Mayank...!!! Lol...

Ha ha .... When Mayank saw other girls, Nupur took revenge by seeing other guys...... Very Smart...!!

What made you love me?
nice question...mmmh answer is simple ...he looked at her eyes said god had sent me some message through your eyes….he smiled childishly, that day seeing your eyes with tears i was hurt….
I just loved this answer of Mayank.....



Overall, Perfect update and epilogue.... Loved each and every part of it.......
You have written very perfectly..... marvellously... fabulously.....!!!
Great,...!!!


So, when are you planning to write a sequel to this ss????? *wink* 😉

Waiting to hear more from you,
Love,
Pooja

wow

I just loved this ss ... mayank loved her since such a long time and the way everything rolled was just brilliant .... i loved this ss ... you are amazing .... mayank was so adorable and nupur was so smart and yet so innocent ... the whole story was filled with innocence .... this is my one of the fav ss too .... you rocked!!! 😉