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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naina4MAYUR

awe it's so cute....
i m sure the ending will definitelly b happy.....😳
waiting 4 next update.......:D

ur so confident then i think i shuld change the story line right😆😆😆
will see what is gonna happen
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

hey jeni.....it was a wonderful update...and pls dear...dont make it a sad ending...am juz in love with our mayur of this ff..they r soooo cute...........

😉😉😉
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jeni👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Jeni
how r u buddy?
hope fit n fine. absolutely am fine honey...!

hey jeni i read ur update
and i loved the both part a and b
r a yaar what an imagination dear?

hehehehehehe totally loved the reason behind mayur marriage.

Aww maynk was so sweet though he try to irritate nups but I liked it.

R a itna haq tou banta hain na!!!!!!!!

Wah so maynk love her from past year.

And he was mesmerized by her beauty.

Maynk loves her a lot.

Hope nups will fall in love soon

Awesome part jenny.

Wonderful

Keep it up

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jeni!
😉😃😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

wow
i so really loved the part
just awesome n amazing
thanks for the pm
love
pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: i_clueless

too goodd Jeni! but yaar i want the end..and a happy one for that...😈 and a nice epilogue too..! and this part was super romantic..MaYur were adroable as always..😛 and Mayank my jaanu...loved his story] Nupur beta i have some advice..isse accha ladka nahin milega tujhe..😉 pakkad ke rakh isko..don;t leave please..😭

see i have some special surprise for u wait for it...!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pagli91

Hi Jeni 🤗 Waah yaar kya update tha! I loved it... waise Mayank left the room na toh woh waapas kab aaye? Not that i am complaining. 😆 That first part was very nice, loved the way that Nupur just gave in and ended up falling asleep in his arms. 👍🏼 And OMG, Mayank was in love with Nupur for past year? 😲 He has been following her? 😲 He knew what he was doing when he signed the papers, he knew he was marrying Nupur? 😲 How did he already know Nupur tho? Kaha se? Kab? Kaise? Lol i was really shocked at this revelation but i am happy about it because then at least Mayank had his reasons and his act can be justified... but Nupur? Why did she run away, she married the guy so obviously she would have had to stay with him or get a divorce... thank god Mayank found her again, smart guy. 👍🏼 Ohhh why did Nupur walk out like that? Even she likes him na, she should at least give it a try, but i won't get too depressed coz i know u will give a happy ending right? Update last part soon. 😃

thats secret how mayu entered is 😆😆😆i forgot about saying that ..okay i will say it now he entered once nupz slept...😆
okay that u have to read in my next part honey😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

wowwwwwwwww
awesome update
mayank is totally a majnu in ur ss........
he is such a sweetheart
n nupur is darling

and he was following nupur fr 1 yr
he luvs her so much
cont soon
n tnx fr pm dear

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur


</div>pooja and shwetha thanks u guys...love u a lot...😳😳
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pooja this is specially for u...


loves

jeni






Hey Jeni,





Dats so sweeettt of you.....
Thanx....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey......

Your post on pg.54.... Its waiting eagerly to be unreserved by you so that all of us will only look at that post and go on pressing the like button...... The post that you reserved is telling you to unreserve it fast so that it can enjoy the feel of being liked by everyone and being commented on.....!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol... Lol.... Lol.... Lol... Lol.....

I jus wanna say "Update soon"....... 😊

- Pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
Last past

Am bit sad am ending this lovely ss, it had been my favorite too .'.i will try to write an epilog'

After a week (super fast😆)

After one long week mayank entered his office room sat on his chair , just like whole week he couldn't concentrate on his work'he relaxed back on his chair closed his eyes painfully...he couldnt simply leave like nupur, she just walked away...😭

Nupur 'the girl who had crossed his minds and arrested his heart in seconds'even saying her name makes him happy!

how can he even think of leaving her...!

He still remembers when and where he met her for the first time? he had been melted with her cuteness.... He never believed in love, until he had met nupur'

😛😛😛

He had met her in the excel college , where he had been invited as the chief guest for their "tech meet 10". When he walked inside the hall suddenly a basket ball hitted on his back making him cry out of pain. turned angrily towards the person who throwed on him....He looked at the girl who was wearing a white chudi with her dupata tied round her waist beautifully, he looked at her face which was sweating yet she was looking gorgeous ,he felt his anger dropped out looking at her... she was fearing of the mistake and preparing herself for getting scolding'.😉

He without having a glance moved near her handed over the ball in her hand looked at her eyes which teary'

He captured her face in his heart'.that second had been his best day ever in his life..😃😛

With a broken tone she tried to say ...sorry sir actually without knowing'she stopped

Mayank said just it is , okay ms'.he dragged for her to say the name, but she was busy fighting out with tears...he couldnt see her worrying

Nupur bushan said a girl who was standing nearby her'

"Nupur" he smiled saying it inside his heart'

****

Mayank opened his eyes in sudden as the cell phone started to ring

hello Mayank Sharma here..!he tried to sound normal...

Mayu you remember your mom is still alive'

Mom 'he leaving some minutes gap continued'I ' really missed you a lot mom'! Love you'.

me too'love you'so you had planned to settle ther itself huh, and ya were is nupur you told you will get her to our home soon but'listening to his silence she asked with a real concern is everything ok mayu'

He told her how nupur left not even replying..mom she doesn't like me' he said with the cracked tone

Ohh my dear boy if nupur is not willing then nothing can be done'you should slowly try to forget her'

Mom what are you saying, please don't even talk like that..its like killing me..I can't live without nupur'only one girl in my life is nupur...!

withing 15 days my son had changed a lot....now stop being filmy come to delhisoon...

But I had promised I will get back to delhi only with nupur right ..

soo you forgot , tomorrow is my birthday so I thought my son would celebrate with me'she dragged...!

mom sorry I forgotten am really sorry...he said worried....i promise... for sure i will be there in the morning.'!

***

In delhi'😉

He entered his house shouting mom , dad'where are you?

One servant came front said sir they had went for temple will get back within 2 hours'you go and change your suit sir we will prepare your breakfast ...

He without showing out his anger moved to his room showed the anger on the door by banging it'.he went and fell on his bed 'he was more angry now, he couldn't do anything normally as he was madly deeply in love with her'😆

He had many memories within him 'once when he was in the millennium mall , she was purchasing her products when he was busy in starring at her she just turned towards him smiled at him cutely, he stood there like shocked just then he noticed that smile is not for him but for the baby who was smiling behind him'😆

You will get angry this soon huh..

He sat on bed as he heard a melodious tone from his room, he looked at nupur standing there inside his room..hecouldnt believe his eyes...is that dream..he moved towards her

Aunty said you will not come to delhi without me'

Just then he realized she is really standing there inside his room'.without giving further thoughts he hugged her tightly, nupur was totally shocked of his gesture was little uncomfortable with his sudden nearness'😉

For little more seconds he tightened his arms around her kissed her neck passing the shiver within her'she eased out his pain which he was undergoing for a week.

he realized nupur not feeling comfortable of his hug he slowly left her hold looked at her blushing....

mayank slowly gave a look on the dress which she was wearing'she was in her lavender color chudi looked stunningly beautiful with simple costume, he was in higher most emotional terms'.he glanced at nupur who was looking down blushing cutely'he couldnt still believe....

seeing him once again coming near her she moved a step back making him stop with a distance...she slowly looked at him raised her hands before him said am here for getting back my scooty pep key'.

Smile with Tears rolled down on his face '

She looked up at mayank smiling ...did i said any joke

What?

Then why are laughing am here to get my scooty key ,she tried behave harder as she couldn't continue she turned to move out of the room shyingly'

Mayank holded her hands pulled her towards him, she had fallen on him with the same force, they were lying down on the bed face to face closer, mayank starred at nupur trying to avoid blushing'

You look cute whenever you blush 'he said making her attempt fail by moving from his hold..as he had used his full force , she tried to hide herself in his neck as he was continually looking at her'

She slowly murmured please leave me'

Answer me first he said making her fall on the bed side as he moved on her top'say why you left me on that day'he asked trying to get an answer'

Why didn't you stop me?she sounded like a child...

I thought you were not liking me'so..he sat up leaving her hold fully...let us talk first ..he said winking at her'she continued sitting on the bed tried to leave a space as mayank stopped her pulling near his hold'not once again, I can't manage..she smilingly sat on his hold continued

Mayank do you thought of my situation'

Your not feeling comfortable within my arms but soon you will get used to it he said seductively moving near her lips...was about to capture it...

Mayank looked at her warning hands moved and said ok just go on'

she continued you know how I felt on that day'I mean all the girls would have lots of expectations about their future and for me it is harder to understand the sudden type of changes,'.and you.... she looked at him angrily said you never gave me a single chance to think nor choose'.you were simply arrogant'

arrogant..am I'but girls used to say am smart'mmh better I will change your opinion sooner dear'I would change all thing as per you like it'even I may change myself as you like'But I wanted only thing is your happiness'I wanted you to stay with me forever until I die,

She stopped him holding his lips shutting his mouth not to talk further'..

He bitted her hands which were shutting his mouth and made the moment go easier'.

Now nupz you say how did you come to delhi'?

Uffo she stood there turned what to do all is my fate'if am not living with you then this whole world would never forgive me, she was too filmy😉

she looked at him glarring at her said...actually tried to make him happy she continued.... i started to feel something when i met you in you office...
that were i got the truth...he said coming more closer...
'.you no what my friend miya told ⭐️(your comment point honey😆😆i had modified a bit😆)

What asked mayank in eager...

She said not to loose a idiot like you'.no one would be there this much mad in this world'.!

you didnt say when you reached delhi?
wait am continuing nah...i thought you would stop me but you never did that so i took flight to delhi reached your home pulled aunty and uncle for my help...she smiled happily
so all had been planned before....
she nodded her head ....by the way i think i cant leave you that easy...😉 just like you did....

You nupur .you think i would stayed much longer i was planning to do something.........

once again kidnapping she laughed....
he pulled her towards him caught her nose making her cry a bit in pain'.
****
They heard a knock on the door they moved from each other hold, looked at the door mayank went in surprise...
Mom'he went and hugged her smilingly'

Mayu how is the surprise'

I love it mom'.he said kissing her cheeks'

get changed and come to have your break fast soon mom ordered his son tried to move out of the room ...come nupur let us go...he holded her hands not leaving her from there'

Now leave her hands'mom...he said rolling his eyes'.

You have to wait for nupur'.

What???how much time he said trying to act normal..

Time shilp said wait for the correct ceremonies taking place'she said taking nupur with her making him suffer'nupur turned towards him winking at him'..

The end'happy days ahead'..

will post epilog tonight'!👏👏👏👏
hope you enjoyed this ss....!😆😆😆super fast ending right...!
Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago

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