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Shruti_0505 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Sajan

hmmmmmm great!! 🤣 🤣

thnx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan

wow
so many praises
thanku
this pic is also ine of my favourite
mayu is luking so cute
cuteness redefined

yes...our mayu is aussum..
i love him...
he is so cute..
mai to mayu par fida hu..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
hey very very nice concept
but i have to say you something that you have to give title with mayurs name or mn so it easy for new comers and for those who only read mayur ff
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: aancchal

hey very very nice concept
but i have to say you something that you have to give title with mayurs name or mn so it easy for new comers and for those who only read mayur ff



thanx
ill update the topic
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
how sweet
loved the concept
update soon and pm me too plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Wow Shruti

Loved the update

Next part kab post karogi?????????????/

Plsssssssssss update soon

It was so sweet and cute start dear

thanks for Pm

Love,
$hrey@

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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

how sweet
loved the concept
update soon and pm me too plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thnx dear
ill update asap n will pm u
sry for the delay
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: mayurlovers

Wow Shruti

Loved the update

Next part kab post karogi?????????????/

Plsssssssssss update soon

It was so sweet and cute start dear

thanks for Pm

Love,
$hrey@

hey shreya
yaar main next part jald se jald posr karungi.
all the crap in my life is happening in this week
first my interview then i fell ill then my sis shes admitted in the hospital
so all in all not a gud week
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Part 2

MAYUR meet for dinner at nupurs home. MAYUR live next door to each other and even their parents are best friends

M: mom dad main is chuhiya se pyaar karta hun aur isse se shaadi karunga

The parents are stunned by this sudden outburst and start laughing. In anger mayank leaves the table. Nupur goes after him to the terrace as she knew that he will be there.

N: bandar tu table se uth kar kyun aa gaya? Kitni baar tujhe samajhaya hain ki apne gusse ko control kar aur aise khana chod kar nahi aate. Mummy kehti hain bhagwanji humse naraaz ho jate hain.

M: sorry nupur lekin main tumse sach main pyaar karta hun aur tujhse hi karta rahunga

N: acha chal ab khana kha leaur phir yeh dekh main teri liye mango bhi layi hun. Tere favourite

M: haan…lekin ab mujhe kuch aur pasand hain

N: kya??? Mango se bhi zyada acha kya hain? Mujhe bhi toh pata chale

M: wahi jo tune mujhe subah diya tha…

N: kya

M: yeh and he kisses her

Nupur goes maroon but is unable to understand by she is blushing so much( after all chote bacche hain)

M: chuhiya tu itni laal kyun ho rahi hain? (innocently)

N: kuch nahi (confused) ab khana kha le

Soon mayank and his parents leave with the adults barely giving a thought to mayurs behaviour.

Life goes on for mayur- a happy life but mayank still could not shake off the feeling that something bad is going to happen. He was still getting weird thought and becoming more paranoid by the day.

After a week

M: chuhiya tu janti hain na ki main tujhse bahut pyaar karta hun

N: haan bandar…lekin aise baar baar kyun keh raha hain? (from the past week mayank is continuosly telling nupur that he loves her a lot and will only marry her)

M: who chuhiya…baatyeh hain ki…mera matlb…ummmmmm…

N: arre bol na…main konsa tujhe kha jaungi?

M:………………….

N: ab bol bhi (getting angry)

M: woh nupur…papa ka transfer ho gaya hain mummy keh rahi thi ki UK main hua hain

Silence prevails between the two

N: kab ja raha hain tu?

M: agle hafte

N: mayank…yeh mera bracelet le…mera favourite bracelet hain hamesha apne paas sambhal kar rakhna isse. Jab tu wapas aayega aur hum dono bade ho gaye honge tab is bracelet se main tujhe pechaan lungi. Tu wapas aayega na apni chuhiya ke liye?

And she starts crying mayank consoles her

M: nupur agar tu aise royegi toh main kaise ja paunga? Please rona band kar warna main tujhse naraaz ho jaunga…

N: ro kaun raha hain? roye mere dushman...tujhe kya laga ki tu jayega aur main udas ho jaungi. main toh kush hoon, chalo, musibat tali

M: acha abhi batata hun

and they start running after each other and it seems that even God does not want these two lovers to seperate and it starts raining.

after sometime

N: waise bandar mujhe bhi kuch kehna hain. papa ka bhi transfer ho gaya hain aur hum bhi next week US ja rahe hain.

M: acha bachu! isliye tujhe gussa nahi aa raha tha. khud mujhe chod kar ja rahi hain

N: mujhe ek baat batao mayank...koi apni zindagi ko chod kar kaise ja sakta hain...koi saansen lena kaise band kar sakta hain? jab tak tum mere paas nahi ho pata nahi main kaise zinda rahungi?

M: nupur aaj ke baad tum aisi baat kabhi nahi karogi samajhi

N: sorry...( mayank is still angry) actually sorry...dil se sorry...duniya main jitne sorry hain sab sorry. aaj ke baad main aisi baat nahi kahungi

M: now thats like my girl

nupur feels shy on here these words.

mayank starts singing their favourite song


Yaadon Ki Baraat Nikli Hai Aaj Dil Ke Dwaare
Dil Ke Dwaare
Yaadon Ki Baraat Nikli Hai Aaj Dil Ke Dwaare
Dil Ke Dwaare
Sapnon Ki Shehnai Beete Deeno Ko Pukare
Dil Ke Dwaare
Ho O O Chedo Tarane Milan Ke Pyaare Pyaare
Sang Hamare

Badle Na Apna Yeh Aalam Kabhi
Jeevan Me Bichadenge Na Hum Kabhi
Ho Badle Na Apna Yeh Aalam Kabhi
Jeevan Me Bichadenge Na Hum Kabhi
Yunhi Jaoge Aakhir Kahan Hoke Hamare
Yaadon Ki Baraat Nikli Hai Aaj Dil Ke Dwaare
Dil Ke Dwaare
Sapnon Ki Shehnai Beete Deeno Ko Pukare
Dil Ke Dwaare

Aage Bhi Hoga Jo Uska Karam
Yeh Din To Manayenge Har Saal Hum
Apne Angan Nache Gaayenge Chanda Sitare
Yaadon Ki Baraat Nikli Hai Aaj Dil Ke Dwaare
Dil Ke Dwaare
Sapnon Ki Shehnai Beete Deeno Ko Pukare
Dil Ke Dwaare

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
Such a sweet update and yippie me first

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