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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Mehak_Luvs_Rani

OMG awesome chapter!!!!! I loved it.

I think I can make out what willl happen next so do update me through PM! :D

Hey mehak
thanks sweety!!!Will update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

wooowww wat a ff..........
superb...amazing story.....
looking forward for it.....
plzzz do update soon....
n add me to ur pm list.........

thanks a lot !!!I will update n soon pm u...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
OMG I just came across this and it is AWESOME!!!!!
Plz doo add me to ur Pm list I'd LOVE to read ahead!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Miracle_sweet

OMG I just came across this and it is AWESOME!!!!!

Plz doo add me to ur Pm list I'd LOVE to read ahead!!!
Mira

thanks a lot Mira...I am glad tht u liked my FF!!!I will add u to the pm list n pm u on further updates!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
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Edited by ishuKSGKAJEN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
awesome work!!! esp for first ff!!! 😃...mind blowing!!!
do add me to pm list plzz!!!
continue soon!!!
thnxx 4 the pm..
tcc ❤️ byeeeeee 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

@Ishu-Omg!!!THanks a lot sweety.I will update today!!!

Sorry for the delay...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: naina.sweety

awesome work!!! esp for first ff!!! 😃...mind blowing!!!
do add me to pm list plzz!!!
continue soon!!!
thnxx 4 the pm..
tcc ❤️ byeeeeee 🤗

thanks a lot sweety!!!
I will add u to the pm list n pm u soon......😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

PART II

Recap:

Riddhima comes across a report in Armaan's cabin which makes her upset and heartbroken and then she finds Armaan in the Fire Escape and questions him about the report.

Part 2:

Riddhima : Tum apni basket se joot bol rahe ho???Kya mein itni paraye ho gaye hun?Kya mein tumhare dil ko aur ankhon ko nahi pad sakte hun?

Armaan: Basket,Tum kyun is baat ko itna seriously le rahe ho?Yeh toh sirf...

Riddhima: Sirf kya Armaan?Tik hai mein tumhari bath maan lete hun par tum yahi baat mujhe dekh kar bolo.

Armaan urns towards Riddhima and tries to hid his tears.

Armaan:I am sorry Riddhima ki maine phir se tumhara dil dukaya par main tumhe dukhi nahi dekh sakta.Haan,yeh sach hai ki Yeh report main jo ha woh sach hai.

Riddhima:Tumhe cancer hai Armaan.(she cries badly) aur tume abhi bhi sirf meri chinta hai.

Armaa:Nahi Riddhima!!!Mein tik hun.

Report flips down off Riddhima's hand and the papers start flying away.Riddhima holds Armaan's shirt by its collar and slowly comes down on her knees with her hand in Armaan's hand.

World seems so beautiful to Riddhima just by laying her hands into Armaan's hands.

Hum Toh Chale The Dost Banke

Jaane Kahan DILL MILL GAYYE.....

Armaan tells Riddhima to get up and she immediately gets up and hugs him.She feels that if she leaves him he would go away from her forever.

Armaan:Mujhe kuch nahi hua hai Riddhima mein abhi bhi tumhara wohi Armaan hun jise tumne pehli baar Basket Ball court mein dekha tha...

Riddhima is not able to stop her tears.Suddenly,The pager rings and both are wanted I the I.C.U to attend the paitent.As Armaan makes Riddhima sit there as she is not in a state to treat the patient.He leaves...

Riddhima is still her in her thoughts and is still thinking about some of the moments they had together...

The Basket Ball Matches...The fights....The patch ups...The naakras...The fun...The dances...The Cute hugs!!!

She comes and stands before the Ganesh statue where she always comes when she is in deep trouble.

Riddhima:Hey bhagwan, apne Armaan se uski saari khus ek ek karke le le...Phir bhi usne apne liye aap se kabhi bhi kuch nahi manga.Usne apne se pehle hamesha doosro ke baare mein socha. Usne aap se kabhi bhi apni khush nahi magi aur aap se kabhi kisi baat ki bhi shikawat nahi ki toh phir aap us insaan ko hi kyun itna dukh de rahe hai.Use jo bhi khush milni chiye use kabhi nahi mile.Aur aaj mein aap se prathna kart hi hun ki aap mere haq ki saari khush bhi use dede.

She again starts crying and starts moving to the ICU.

She sees him treating the paitent standing in the corner of the room with bloodshed eyes still wondering how could a person always think about others.

Armaan comes and decides to drop Riddhima back home as Siddhanth is not in town.

At Riddhima's House,

Armaan:Tum kisi bhi baat ki chinta mat kao aur soo jaoo...

Riddhima(in a low voice):Tumhari is halat ki waajah mein hun na???

Armaan:Tum...yeh ho hi nahi sakta hai Riddhima.Tum meri Zindagi ho aur zindagi hamesha jeene ki waajah hoti hai.

Armaan gives Riddhima a letter and leaves to his house.

Armaan is hurt as his life,Riddhima is sad because of him.

What's in the letter?Stay tuned to know what happens further.

Will Armaan ever live for himself ?Is life being very harsh to the most beautiful soul who thinks only about others happiness???

Please give in your valuable comments and suggestions for improvement.

P.S: I am very thankful to you all for appreciating my work so much and liking it!!!I am glad about it.Thanks for all your beautiful comments.

Edited by cute_n_sweet - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have pmed everyone on the pm list.By any chance if I have left anyone out please let me know.
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