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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#501

aaaah my fav ff ..sigh 😍

I m wiping ansoo now.. khushi ke nahi..mere ..

this is my abs fav FF..yet yet..I never get a dedication in it
ever ...*cries some more* (may be I m inspired by Gunjan ..errmm...noo
I m inspired by nupur in this update ..😍 )

ok, enuf of the nautanki..
this was AWESOME
u do amazing justice to their dil ki awaaz!!
And their emotions
and the kiss
and to newton's laws
and my fav physics laws
sigh..i love those days
there i go again
i love this FF sweety :)
do update this sooner :)

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#502

omgg the kisss was so special.
loved newton's theories in b/w them & the calculations of mayank.
omg i was laughing hard reading mayank & his conscience's convo.
this was totally rocking update.
continue soon.

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#503

im sure nupur is crazy thats why she kissed him.....
very nice update
well written
n ya u made me revise the entire physics too
update soon

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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#504

OMG yaar dis wz soooo beautiful sweety

i luvd dis whole ff

u wrote it so beautifuly de feelings were so clear i could feel nupur's pain i hav no words 2 describe it reli

luv

fiza :)

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#505

wow akansha !! tht was fabulous !!
loved it.....

the whole Newton thngs was awesome !!
ah good to knw u r applyn newton kahin toh...
he was one crazy scientist !! yet i like him n his theories... 😊

and the kiss....omg tht was.....undescribable 😳
beautiful is wat i feel !!

nice one really !!

tc
fatima

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#506

wowwwww man.......
awesome update.....amazing
u write each n everything in a very smooth way....ahhhh their first kiss in dis way....cool
i luved the war with conscience..........dats mind blowing
u remind me newton's law again n i luv mayank nonsense......want 2 know more about nupur
cont soon
a big tnx fr the pm dear

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Prachi

@preitygal99

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#507

Hey Akku,
Wat should i tell u.
Ur updates always leave me speechless.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was just an extraordinary update.
Those Science formulae alongwith fight with the conscience and beautifully blended with the mention of Bollywood Hero n heroines.
I love u sooooo much for this.
I can go on n on n on praising you.
I cant believe that u are of under 18 age group.
ur writings just not support ur age group.
U shuld seriously think of turning into a professional writer.
The kiss incident was beautifully described in the update.
But i hav a complain that u just keep ur readers longing for the another update.
I m just dying to read further after his confession that HE LIKES HER.
I want to read about her past.
I want her to clear his insecurity of she being with samrat.
Plzzz Plzzz dear continue soon.

LOTS OF LOVE

-Prachi

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#508

Akki *tsk tsk tsk*

Are you planning on sending my vocal cords into as state of permanent shock?? Ok, but I just can't help...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *screams more than humanly possible*

God, how in the world do you write so well girl? *bows down*

I was stuck between the decision whether to laugh like an idiot or smile incessantly??🤪

It was a beautiful update hun. Again I feel short of words yet I just wrote so much 🤔

You amaze me simply beyond words Akki. I totally love both your FFs

And you <3<3<3<3

Ok, still smiling silly and shouting 🤪

This was just F A B U L O U S Akki. Simply WOW!

Edited: Wait, wait I just have to mention the way you added Newton's three laws here was genius. 🤣 Me, being a science student and having had to bear with this all made it all the more fun 🤣🤣 And Mayank's conscience: I am loving more than Mayank 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ok, I'm done 😳 Love ya <3<3

Edited by -Daania- - 15 years ago

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#509

Okk..... Officially this time..... I am not gonna spare you..... How could you leave at such a point.... I agree it was quite long but then AT THAT POINT????????? 😲

Well, this time I could not control my self so isliye starting mein hi complaint shuru ho gaya........ LOL.....

Now, can you pls confirm one thing..... Did that really happen or am I hallucinating??? I really think I am dreaming......( How much I dream about Mayur na...!!!!)
Wait let me pinch myself...... *Aaaaaaahhhhhh.... * *Oucccchhhhh*........ Nahi yaar.... I am not dreaming....... !!!!! *Screaming "WOW"* Warning - Please close your ears......

NUPUR KISSED MAYANK.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MAYANK CONFESSED.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think Mayank has gone insane completely..... HIS girl is kissing him and he is thinking about Isaac Newton's three laws and imitating Shah Rukh Khan by saying k-k-k-k-kiss and h-h-her and t-t-tears and fighting with his oh-I-speak-the-truth conscience...... His thoughts should have been blocked na.....

Again, I loved both their consciences..... I am getting this crazy thought that after Mayur confession, probably their consciences will also confess to each other.... Wow... How beautiful na.... Now, let me tell you that this update of yours is wholly and solely responsible for this craziness of mine.....

Wow.. I am so happy.....!!! *gleefully rubbing the palms* .......

Akansha, you can't make me wait more..... Arey, pls yaar..... PLS UPDATE SOON..... VERY SOON....

Waiting eagerly......