MayUr FF: All You Need Is Love-New thrd link-pg145 - Page 50

fabulous part!!!!
newton's laws were amazing 😆 😆
plzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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u knw na i love u! just read it once..gimme some time........i need to read it couple of times more before commenting!
intejer ka phal meetha hota hai.someone says it rightly!

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Ok akki ur FF Update seems Lucky for us!! i was just reading it for the 3rd time when the Big news of rati coming back came up!!!!!!!
& thanks for dedication!!!!!!!!!!!😃 how was ur test?

now coming to ur update!!!!!!!

Hv i ever told u that i m in love with ur writing style?????
oh! i simply love the way mayank & nupur talk with their conscience !!!!!!! it is so so amazing! the battle between heart & mind u wrote just with perfection!!!!!!!

& OMG! what was this!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆
With force equal to double her mass multiplied by acceleration more than a jet plane's, she thrusted me upon the wall. (Force = Mass x Acceleration, was Newton's second law of motion, I remembered.) God! Mumbaities were born with muscles or what? I am going to stay firm on my resolve. Gym calling from tomorrow. I mean, this girl was manhandling me. I was like some dumb heroine of Hindi films and she, the tyrannical hero who later falls in love with the simplicity of the heroine. Stop Mayank, you are talking NONSENSE.

Okk first of al i m not a scienece student & 2nd is i laughed like mad with this dumb heroine & tyrannical hero 's love story in opposite version!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 i loved it!!!!!!!!
& yeah the kiss & the after effects of it....the realization of both mayank & nupur....u hv written it so wonderfully!!!!!!!!
& the way he saw the real nupur.....& promised to his consceince that he will make a future with her..( okk he really need to make a deal with his conscience not to disturb him while kissing😆 ) the way that moment made mayank realize that he can never kiss anyone else & nupur means much more for him than he thought she is...i simply love those lines!!! it was beautifully written!!!!!!!👏 👏 👏
Finally he saw the real nupur!!!!!!! & finally he manage to break the wall surrounding nupur!!!! i love the way he couldn't c tears in nupur's eyes!!! & yeah make him dance that bharatnatayam next time😆 😆 😆
& finally he said that to nupur that he like her...hmmmmmmm wonder what she will do now!!!!!
Thanks a lot for this update akki!!!!!!!!! i so so so loved it...........hmmmmmmmmso when r u updating next?????😆 😆 ok update soon ....this time i will bother u less!!!!!!! ( umm 7days time? thik hai?)
love u akki!!!!!!!!🤗

The update was fab

awesome part akki
really loved it
and ya i just loved the physics description in between
i wonder you still remember those boring laws of issac newton??
omg you are great
i forgot them far before

Amesome.....Amazing........Lovely.......

WOw..That was like AWESOME. I jus LOVED the kiss..and sp. the way u explained it! 😆 Im an arts student..so Newton was greek n latin! I simply love this FF. Too good! 👏

Mayank and his conscience! 🤣

Alright... it was umm, A W E S O M E!! 😆 That is all I can say.

You are a fabulous writer, A! I so need you to give me some writing lessons! 😳

Update asap!! 😃

-Kanky