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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Beautiful title

and lovely update i was just lost in the campus it was reminding me all my school days

there talk was lovely

Mayank's curiosity about nupur

deepika feels bad for mayu though she is nupur's friend and wants her to change her behaviour

No idea why nupur is so tough must be something so no guessing

Mayank knew that he is gib time fool still repeating he suppose not to do 😆😆😆😆

Loved Ankit ,Gunjan and Samrat too

Luv,

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

ressssssss
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you freak!!

ankit... ankit.... ANKIT!!! yaar ab tu mujhe confuse na kar... i was falling for mayu in this ff and now.... GOOD LORD!!

yes, now i know its me only, though with "kesh kala" in my hair and lens in my eyes!
ankit...*sigh*... i gotta kill u in real, go make me dream more woman.

and whats up with this extra rude nupur, can't she be 1% nice? i hope u reveal her pboblems in next or coming parts... real tension now.

aisa hua kya that she became so rude and unsocial!?!?!

i told u this POV style is awesome and so is the title. beetle's song, i haven't heard yaar. dumb-ass u see!

this was mast part but very short (as per ur past parts and stuff 😉 )

i want loooonger one next time and sooooooooooon too

love u loads....
*D*

p.s.- sorry i wasn't the first to comment 😭

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Did I tell you you are awesome writer? Did I? 😉

The whole thing is written GORGEOUSLY! 😃 And Nupur, aaish . . I dint like it no . . she hurt Mayank! That poor thing! I like Samrat and Gunjan here. Gunjan is just the same as in the show, though. 😳

Commendable job, you've done. Absolutely! 😛

-Kanky

Edited by Jiah.Angel - 15 years ago

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pari sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

wowwwwwwwwwww

wat an update

so nupsi turned back hn??

poor mayank..

wats the problem with nupur/

will wait for the answer

update soon

thanx for the pm

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naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

She turned around to look at him.I couldn't help my smile.

Thats my favourite line...😳

the reactions,thoughts are spot on..exactly what goes on in one's mind..i mean even i have the habbit of thinking like this..u knoe..talking to myself.thats why am enjoying this thoroughly..

I liked the Nupur-Samrat convo here..though they were silent..it shows their friendship..the hug was very sweet

Mayanks interaction with Gunjan,Ankit were apt..esp loved Mayanks restlessness😉 n Deepika startling him with her answer was fab😊

On seeing Nupur..he actually had the guts go stand right in front of her??n then look her in the eyes??Boy!he is gutsy😆

cant wait to see what happens next..will mayur be friends??they will sit together right??

will wait for the next update for the answers..

great goin gal!!!u just keep gettin better n better👏

🤗

p.s-you are welcome

p.s.s-thanks!(u know why)😉

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Asmara.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Amazing work....

asusual loved it....

Continue soon.....

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-Sindhu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Hey Akansha!

That was wonderful. I loved it. Well, I don't understand what's the problem with Nupur. She is so weird!! Samrat and Nupur's relationship... no comments. Mayank and Nupur's eyelock!! And Nupur broke it? 😡 But she turned back to look and him but he didn't notice? Aww... poor Mayank! Continue soon.

- Sindhu

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

nice update.........
why nupur behavior was so weired????
mayank is so sweet
cont soon
n tns fr pm

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Prachi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

Its just awesuumm.

But y nupur is so rude to such a cute n nice mayank???

Hope u reveal her problems in the next chapter.

Do continue soon

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Loved the update Akanksha

Loved SaNu friendship too

Oww.... Poor Mayank.. hurt once again

And yes, mujhe bhi apni canteen ka food yaad aa gaya... BY GOD. 😆

Pls update soon

Love,
$hrey@

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