A wonderful Life...(update on pg 145) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
omg all three updates were amazing
uhhhh poor gunji
oh well she will love her suprise
loved the updates
thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
awsome updt dear cont soon n thnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
cuteeeeeeeeeee cont soooooooooon and pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
sweet update
thanx for the pm😊
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

NEXT SCENE

Gunjan decides that she will hv to forget samrat... She msgs him.. that she is going to marry armaan.. and dat he will hv 2 forget her.... She calls dr.kirti and takes a holiday...

Next day in the morning..

N: gunjan..... happy birthday.. waise ye bday happy toh nahi hai par kya socha hai tune..

G: thank u di... kya socha hai matlab.. main armaan se hi shaadi karoongi di/.. bauji se zyada mere liye aur koi important nahi hai...

Samrat calls gunjan.. she rejects

G: Samrat bhi nahi..

N: gunjan i am proud of u... main tumhare saath hoon...!! Hamesha...

They hug each other...

M: main bhi tumhare saath hoon gunjan... happy bday!! Aur yeh raha tumhara gift...

Gunjan opens it..

G: wao jiju yeh dress toh bahut achha hai...

(it was a red lehenga... and it was also her sagai ka dress..)

M: nupur ne pasand kiya... kal raat hi..

G: kal tumhe pata tha di?? Tumne mujhe pehle kyo nahi bataya...

N: Gunjan tu hospital main thi aur mujhe laga ki tu shaadi ke liye mana kar degi.. Jab bauji ne bataya ki tune haan kar di toh maine kaha ki mujhe use baat karni hai par unhone kaha ki tu so rahi thi...

G: haan di.. kal main jaldi so gayi thi...

Samrat calls again gunjan rejects... then he texts..

" Chashmish aakhri baar mujhse mil lo... sirf thodi der.. main tumhare ghar ke neeche khada hoon"

Gunjan reads it and runs to the window... Samrat looks up and she looks at him.. the both stare at each other.. both have tears in their eyes..Gunjan goes down...

S: Chashmish... Happy bday...

G: thank you samrat... par..

S: shhh! Bas tumhe dekh loo.. phir chala jaoonga...

Bauji comes...

B: gunjan upar jao..

G: bauji samrat bas mujhe wish karne aaya tha..

B: woh yeh sab shaam ko bhi kar sakta hai.. tum aa rahe ho na shaam ko??

S: bauji woh..

G: Bauji woh nahi aayega.. usse force mat kijie

S: nahi bauji... main zaroor aaoonga...Raat ko milte hain..

G: bye samrat!!

That evening....

Gunjan tayaar hoti hai...

G: aajse meri zindagi pori badal jayegi.. main kaise kab kuchh sambhaloongi??Mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai.. party main samrat bhi ayega... uske saamne armaan ko ring pehnana kitna mushkil hoga...

Then nupur enters...

N: gunjan tayaar ho gayi? Dekh abhi rona mat.. make up kharab ho jayega.. chal ab.. neeche sab intazaar kar rahe hai...

G: Di.. Samrat...

N: aaya hai... Bahut udas lag raha tha..

G: tum ye mujhe kyo bata rahi ho?? Bas ab samrat mere life main koi mayne nahi rakhta... Armaan achha larka hai..

N: chalo toh pehle...

When they go down the stairs...Armaan and samrat both go towards the stairs... Samrat puts his hand out for gunjan to hold... Armaan doesnt...

S: Chashmish... bahut achhi lag rahi ho...

G: Samrat abhi sai waqt nahi hai..

S: gunjan YEH HAMARI SAGAI HAI!!!

G: kya??

She looks around and everyone screams surprise...

N: Yeh samrat ka surprise bday gift tha... yeh dress bhi usi ne pasand ki hai..

M: haan gunjan aaj tum dono ki sagai hai!!

A: Yeh logo ne mujhe phone par poora plan samjha dia tha..

Guess whats gonna happen next.. ill update the next one at nite...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
haha!!!
cute part!!!
cannot wait to see gunjis reaction!! i have afeeling she is going to be mad at sammy or she might even pull his leg! lol
continue soon!!
thank,
Sanju
ps thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
nice update and thanks for the pm ...waiting for gunjan's reaction 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
hey sweety fabulous update yaaar cant wait for next part i hope gunjun ka reaction acha ho n continue soooon
urbi!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

That evening....

Gunjan tayaar hoti hai...

G: aajse meri zindagi pori badal jayegi.. main kaise kab kuchh sambhaloongi??Mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai.. party main samrat bhi ayega... uske saamne armaan ko ring pehnana kitna mushkil hoga...

Then nupur enters...

N: gunjan tayaar ho gayi? Dekh abhi rona mat.. make up kharab ho jayega.. chal ab.. neeche sab intazaar kar rahe hai...

G: Di.. Samrat...

N: aaya hai... Bahut udas lag raha tha..

G: tum ye mujhe kyo bata rahi ho?? Bas ab samrat mere life main koi mayne nahi rakhta... Armaan achha larka hai..

N: chalo toh pehle...

When they go down the stairs...Armaan and samrat both go towards the stairs... Samrat puts his hand out for gunjan to hold... Armaan doesnt...

S: Chashmish... bahut achhi lag rahi ho...

G: Samrat abhi sai waqt nahi hai..

S: gunjan YEH HAMARI SAGAI HAI!!!

G: kya??

She looks around and everyone screams surprise...

N: Yeh samrat ka surprise bday gift tha... yeh dress bhi usi ne pasand ki hai..

M: haan gunjan aaj tum dono ki sagai hai!!

A: Yeh logo ne mujhe phone par poora plan samjha dia tha..

Gunjan is shocked...

G: Maine kitni mushkil se apne mann ko sambhala tha.. itna dukh hua mujhe... aur tumlog mazaak kar rahe the... Di tumne toh mujhe rote hue bhi dekha tha tabhi kuchh nahi kaha.. Samrat tumhe bhi ek bar yeh khayaal nahi aaya ki mujhe kaisa mehsoos hoga.. bahut hi achha surprise tha... THANK YOU..

She gets angry and runs upstairs crying...

Everyone is silent... They all expected something else only..

N: main dekhti hoon.

S: nahi nupur.. main jaoonga.. maine uska dil dukhaya hai.. Aap log rukiye main abhi usko lekar aata hoon...

Samrat goes upstairs... Knocks on gunjans door..Then enters...

S: Chashmish... sorry.. (he holds his ears.)

G: Samrat mazaak ki bhi hadh hoti hai..

S: (holding her and turning her round to face him) Chashmish.. sorry.. mujhe nahi pata tha ki tumhe itna bura lagega... Main toh bas tumhe khush karne ki koshish kar raha tha... Promise.. ab phir kabhi aisa nahi karoonga...

G: (hugs samrat) samrat its ok... par agar dobara aisa kiya na toh... Aur mera bday gift nikalo... abhi!!

S: Bday gift toh yeh sagai thi.. aur woh dress aur woh ring jo main tumhare liye laya hoon...

G: Bas.. mere liye itna hi kar sakte ho.... isse achha toh hota ki main armaan se sagai kar leti..

S understands that G is joking and says...

S: achha.. toh kar lo.. Jaise ko woh TUMSE shaadi karega..

G: Samrat... tumse toh koi gussa bhi nahi ho sakta...

S: Woh toh hai!! Ab neeche chalo sab intezaar kar rahe honge...

They walk down together and everyone cheers....

M: aakhir main mana hi liya gunjan ko!!

N: Gunjan ko toh sirf samrat hi itni jaldi mana sakta hai..

A: sorry gunjan... mujhe toh inlogo ne force kiya warna main aisa kuchh nahi karta..

R: achha... mujhe toh keh rahe the ki bahut maza ayga gunjan ke mazaak main...

G: oh! Toh aisa kaha usne... Aur ridhima tum bhi isme shaamil thi...Aur haan... obviously uncle aur bauji bhi phir plan ka hissa honge...

Samrat and gunjan get engaged... everyone is happy but... this isnt the end of it.. samrats mom is yet to come... muahahaha

Hope ull liked it...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
lovely update......
poor gunjan!!!!!!!!!!
do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

--Adya!

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