KYA PYAAR HO JAEGA(new ff)

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#191

part 4-

that sounds really interesting

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cuteangelgirl95

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Posted: 15 years ago

#192

nice updt

loved it

continue soon

n thanx 4 the pm

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#193

Oh gosh hazra you know how I hate it when you make N the villain of everything, if M doesn't love her, N should leave and apologise and move on with her life, she should be with someone who loves her and she needs to get some lessons big time.

Well written as always though!

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Monica

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Posted: 15 years ago

#194

awesome part hazra

i really hope all will unde

.rstand soon

great work

see yaaaa

love yaaaa

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Swathi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#195

hey fantabulous parts
sry to read nd comment so lately
anyway the parts wer superb,
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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hazra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#196

hi guys..updated 5th part..i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..read n njoy..

she cuts the call...samrat's mom listen everything..gunjan was shocked to see her..

g-maa...ap..😔

she went to gunjan..

sm-beta..ye tumne bohot acha kiya aur agar ab vo tumhe phone kare na to phone kaat dena...hmm..

g-ji maa..😔

other side..

m to himself-nahi..ye meri gunjan nahi ho sakti..mai bhi dekhta hu ki kaise ye samrat ke sath khush rehti hai...😡

mayank calls samrat...samrat receive the call..

s-hello..

m-samrat...tum...dekho samrat..ab mai gunjan ko bhulna chahta hu par gunjan hai ki mujhe bhulna hi nahi chahti hai..abhi bhi uska phone aya tha aur usne mujse kaha ki vo aj bhi mujse pyaar karti hai..ab tum gunjan ko samjao...

s-mayank...mujhe isse koi farak nahi padta hai..😡

samrat cuts the call...

m to himself-ab mai bhi dekhta hu...samrat ko thoda to bura laga hoga ki uski patni kisi aur se pyaar kare...thoda to bura lagega use..ab samrat aur gunjan mai jagdaa hoga aur gunjan hamesha ke liye meri ho jaegi...😊

other side..

s to himself-mujhe phone hi nahi uthana chahiye tha...ye gunjan...mujhe kehti hai ki mai nupur ko bhul jao aur fir khud hi mayank ko phone karke kehti hai ki vo mayank se pyaar karti hai...shakal se to bohot bholi lagti ho tum gunjan par ander se utni hi chalak ho...😡

after sometime..in sanjeevani..

mu-riddhima..dr. sasank tujhe operation thetre mai bula rahe hai..vo sonia ka operation...

r-pata hai mujhe muskan par..mujhe bohot dar lag rahi hai..mai..😔

mu-riddhima..tu fikar mat kar..sonia ko kuch nahi hoga..

ra-ha riddhima..ab jao varna dr.sasank gussa ho jaege...

r-hmmm..

riddhima went in operation thetre..they started the operation...other side...nupur is in kitchen..

n-maa..😊

mm-ha beta..kya hua??😊

n-maa vo...vo..mayank ki favourite dish kaunsi hai??

mm-mayu ki favourite dish hai chola puri..use chola puri itni pasand hai ki kya batao...😊

n-chola puri..maa..mai mayank ke liye uski favourite dish banana chahti hu...😊

mm-aree wah..ye to bohot achi baat hai beta...😊

n-maa...ab mai mayank ki patni hu..apna beeta hua kal bhul jaana chahti hu...

mm-aur mujhe apni bahu par pura bharosa hai..mujhe yakin hai ki tum mayu ko zarur badal dogi..😊

then they both hugged each other..then nupur started preparing to make chola puri for mayank..

n-maa..ap jaeye..mai banaa lugi..😊

mm-par beta akele..

n-maa..mai banaa lugi..ap jaeye..😊

mm-r u sure beta??

n-haa maa...😊

mm-thick hai aur agar koi bhi chiz ki zarurat ho to mujhe keh dena..😊

n-thick hai maa...😊

mayank mom went from there..

n to herself-aj mai pehli baar mayank ki favourite dish banaa rahi hu...aur mujhe pata hai use zarur pasand ayegi..😊

after sometime..in sanjeevani...operation was successful..riddhima and all were very happy..

ar-dekha riddhima..maine kaha tha na sonia ko kuch nahi hoga...😊

mu-arman ki baat kabhi galat ho sakti hai kya...😊

r-mai aj bohot khush hu..mujhe to uske hosh mai ane ka intezar hai...mai bohot khush hu..😊

ra-par riddhima..tum operation thetre se itni jaldi bahar kyu aa gayi..

r-vo..mujhe..mujhe uski haalat nahi dekhi jaa rahi thi to maine dr.sasank ko kaha ki mujhe bahar jaana hai..mai unki help nahi kar sakti..mujhe uski haalat nahi dekhi jaa rahi thi aur isliye mai bahar aa gayi..😔

mu-par ab sab thick ho gaya hai..ab no tension..ab jab sonia ko hosh ayega to vo kitni khush ho jaegi na..😊

r-ha..😊

after sometime..arman went in dr. sasank cabin..dr.sasank was not knowing that arman is listening him..he was talking to dr. kirti..

dr.kirit-dr.sasank apne riddhima se jhoot kyu kaha??

dr.sasank-kehna pada..agar sach keh deta ki..ki sonia ke paas sirf do din ka waqt hai to vo..vo ye bardaas nahi kar paegi..😔

dk(dr.kirti)

ds(dr.sasank)

dk-par...

ds-hamne bohot koshish ki par...ye bimari ka koi ilaag nahi hai..ab sonia ke paas sirf do din bache hai..uske baad vo bhawan ko pyaari ho jaegi..mujhe bhi bohot dukh ho raha hai..us masum si bachi ne abhi dekha hi kya hai..pata nahi bhagwan hamesha ache logo ko apne paas itni jaldi kyu bula lete hai...😔

dk-mai samajti hu dr.sasank par riddhima ko jab pata chalega to vo...😔

dr.kirti saw arman...

dk-dr.arman ap...😔

dr.sasank turned back..

ds-arman tum..😔

ar-itna badaa jhoot...😔

ds-arman..dekho pls riddhima se kuch mat kehna..vo ye bardaas nahi kar paegi..😔

ar-par dr.sasank ye galat hai...riddhima ko bata dena hoga..😔

ds-arman..tum samajte kyu nahi ho..riddhima ye baat nahi bardaas kar paegi..mai riddhima ko bohot ache se janta hu..vo kisiko is tarh nahi dekh sakti hai..uska dil bohot naazuk hai..tum samajte kyu nahi ho..😔

dk-dr.arman...dr.sasank thick keh rahe hai...riddhima koye baat nahi pata chalni chahiye...

ar-aur jab use pata chalega tab..tab kya vo bardaas kar paegi...😔

ds-thick hai..tumhe jo thick lagta hai tum karo..😔

dr.sasank went from there..

dk-dr.arman..ap sonia ke paas jaeye..use hosh aa gaya hoga..

arman went in childrens ward...she went to sonia..

ar-sonia..

so-arman bhaiya..mai thick ho gayi..😊

ar-...

so-boliye na arman bhaiya..ab mai thick ho gayi na..😊

ar-ha beta...(with a sad smile)

so-mujhe riddhima didi ne kaha tha ki mujhe kuch nahi hoga..vo kaha hai arman bhaiya??😊

riddhima came..

r-mai yaha hu..😊

so-riddhima didi..😊

riddhima came to sonia..she brought a teddy for sonia...

r-ye tumhare liye..ye bhi tumhari tarah bohot cute hai..😊

so-thank u didi..ap bohot achi hai..😊

r-dekha na..maine kaha tha na ki tumhe kuch nahi hoga..ab tum bilkul thick ho..tumhara operation bilkul successful tha..😊

so-didi..par mai fir bhi sad hu..😔

r-kyu...

so-didi...mujhe meri teacher kehti hai ki jab log mar jaate hai to vo bhagwan ji ke paas chale jaate hai aur mere mummy papa ko bhagwan ji ke paas hai to mujhe bhi apni mummy papa ke paas jaana hai..😔

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r-nahi...pls aisa mat bolo...😔

so-maine kuch galat kaha kya didi..😔

r-...sonia..ye sab baate chodo na...tum kya khaogi..aj tum jo bhi bologi vahi tumhe milega..bolo kya chahiye..😊

so-mujhe jo chahiye vo mujhe milega??

r-ha...😊

so-to mujhe mere mummy papa chahiye..

r-sonia..tum...😭

so-didi..ap ro kyu rahi hai...😔

r-kuch nahi..😭

riddhima went from there...

hey guys...i know this part is very boring..so kya hoga jab riddhima ko sach ka pata chalega??kya hoga kal airport par jab milege samrat gunjan mayank nupur??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..

hazra

Edited by hazraluvsalman - 13 years ago