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Posted: 15 years ago

osom yer plz pm me when ever u write new os

IshqDewaani thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow..it was sooooooooo nice yaaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was damn good dear
just loved it to the core
really innocent n cute one
do write another one soooon
n sorry for being late
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Posted: 14 years ago

KULSU'S B'DAY OS

The clock strikes 12 at mid-night. A girl is awakened by her parents with a cake.
NUPUR:- Happy birthday kulsu.... (hugging her)
MAYANK:- Love you baby.... (kissing her cheeks)
KULSUM:- Love you both....
She then cuts the cake.
KULSUM:- Mera gift.....
MAYANK:- Kya chahiye...
KULSUM:- Mujhe aapki aur mom ki love story sunni hai...
MAYNK:- Ok....

MAYANK:- Hey Sam, main kal subah Shimla pooch raha hoon...
SAMRAT:- Really?
MAYANK:- Ya....
SAMRAT:- That's great.... Toh kal raat mere saath party mein chalna...
MAYANK:- Party?
SAMRAT:- Haan... Nupur finally ek singer banane jaa rahi hai...
MAYANK:- Really that's fantastic...
SAMRAT:- I know... Esliye kal party hai... I'll miss her a lot... She's like a sister to me...
MAYANK:- I am exicted to meet her... Bahut sunna hai uske baare mein....

KULSUM:- Toh aap log pehli baar party mein mile thae?
MAYANK:- Face to face.... Yes
NUPUR:- Par ek doosre ke baare mein bahut sun rakha tha.....

Party started with full swing. Samrat and Mayank arrived together. Mayank was dressed in blue shirt and blue jeans. They both first meet Benji and Uday.
NUPUR:- Sam (a soft voice called)
Mayank looked up to see a girl dressed in a simple yet elegant white suit.
SAMRAT:- Hey Nups.... (hugging her)
Then he introduced Mayank and Nupur to each other.
After exaching a few words they both went to talk to others but kept glancing at the each other.

KULSUM:- Wow love at first sight....
MAYANK:- No.... Lost at first sight.....

SAMRAT:- Ohk guys.... This is Nupur's farewell party.... We will miss you Nupur....
NUPUR:- I'll miss you all too....
EVERYONE:- Nupur sing..... Sing....
NUPUR:- No guys....
EVERYONE:- Few words....
NUPUR:- Ok....
Nupur takes the mike and there is silence.
NUPUR:-
Tum ko chuke bhi chune ko karta hai dil
Pake bhi paane ko karta hai dil
Awargi hone lagi
Sansoon mein khusboo chane lagi
Dil pe diwangi chaa gayi es kadar
Band ankhoon se bhi mujhko aaye nazar
Kaise kahe humme kitni mohabbat hai
Kitni mohabbat hai.....

Here also Nupur finishes singing.
KULSUM:- Wow.... No words....
MAYANK:- Same was my reaction.... Mujhe tumhari mom ki awaz se pyaar ho gaya

Then came the turn to dance. Mayank asked Nupur for a dance. Nupur agreed. They talked while dancing.
MAYANK:- Your voice is mesmerising....
NUPUR:- Thank you....
MAYANK:- I just loved it..... Never heard such a voice...
NUPUR:- You also have a good voice...
MAYANK:- How do you that?
NUPUR:- Sam told me...
MAYANK:- Should have known....
SNUPUR:- ing for me na....
MAYANK:- Some other time.... (twirling her)
NUPUR:- Ohk.... I won't force you...
They keep talking the whole night hoping the night won't end but time and tide wait for none. Night ended giving way to morning and Nupur left.

KULSUM:- Omg.... Phir kya hua.... Phone par baat toh hui hogi?
NUPUR:- Na....
KULSUM:- Net?
MAYANK:- No.....
KULSUM:- Phir Sam Uncle ke through?
NUPUR:- Nahi....
KULSUM:- Phir?
MAYANK:- Sunno...

Days passed without contact. They both realised they were in love with each other. But were scared to contact as they were afraid to let out their feelings. Both knew that the other felt same but were not fully sure.

KULSUM:- Oh no.... Yeh kya baat hui.... Phir kya hua?

After 6 months Nupur returned to Shimla for Samrat's birthday. At the party Nupur and Mayank came face to face again. Nupur avoided Mayank's eyes. Mayank tried doing the same. Then came a game where numbers decided dancing partners. Mayank and Nupur were paired to each other. They were lost in each other's eyes while dancing. After the song Nupur ran away to the terrace and Mayank followed.

KULSUM:- Finally.... Aab confession hoga....

Mayank and Nupur were on the terrace.
MAYANK:- I'll fulfill my promise today...
NUPUR:- Kaunsa promise?
MAYANK:- Gane ka.... Par tumhe bhi mera saath dena hoga...
MAYANK:-
Teri sansoon se hi meri sansee chale
Tu hi dekhe jab bhi aankhe khule
Sansoon se hi meri sansee chale
Tu hi dekhe jab bhi aankhe khule
NUPUR:-
Dekha falak dekhi zameen
Koi nahi tum sa kahi
Aaa tujhe khud mein main
Es tarah loon chupa
They both hug each other.
Ki khuda bhi humme
Kar na paye juda
NUPUR:-
Kaise kahe humme kitni mohabbat hai
Kitni mohabbat hai
MAYANK:-
Kaise kaheee
Kitni mohabbat hai
Kitni mohabbat hai

Wow.... So cute... Phir?
NUPUR:- Phir shaddi....
MAYANK:- Aur phir tum hamari zindagi mein ayyi....
NUPUR:- Aab so jao... Gud night
Gud night....
Kulsum sleeps. Mayank and Nupur watch her sleep.
MAYANK:- (thinking) love you kulsu.... May all your dreams come true....
NUPUR:- (thinking) love you kulsu.... Yeh bhi nahi bata sakti kitna.... After all kaise kahu kitni mohabbat hai....

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wx7hIMbbacM[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 14 years ago
sizzysehrish thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifull os ryrr
soo lovelyy
after all m fan no 1 of urs writing
soo im ust love itt most coz u and ur writngs are bestest
luv ya mahi
loved allllllllllllllllllllllll in itt
esp part where u added kul was awwesumest
kul mayurs sis awwwwwwwwww😳😳
me uski sis to me bhi mayur ki beti hui na 😆
but loved alll bits of it
and lovelyy mayur pasttt
kya mast dialogue se ending kiiiiiiiiii😉😳👏
luv ya sis
luv ya sis forever and ever
luv sehr
muahhhhhzzzz*******
Edited by sizzlingsehr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
comment on vm 😉
sis loved the vm
esp the song u adddded in ittttt of kmh
the most fav song off mine siss a big hug to u for thizzz 🤗

awesum vm
u shuld open a vm galleryy
u make amzing ones yrrrr😳👏👏👏
each scene u added in it are fabulous⭐️
⭐️loved ur vm a lotttt

let ur exam end thn will request sum awesum vms from u 😆😉😈
Edited by sizzlingsehr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍wow...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍

payal_
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesooome.
Superb.
Fab.
Wonderful.
Terrific.
Loved it.
Thanx for the pm.
--jiya-- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
dat was so cute mahi😃
thnk u so much for the pm
~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful one dear
thanks for the pm

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