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Originally posted by: jasmeet khaneja

Wow that was brilliant.

At last got to read a full FF!!

Now that MJHT has no Nups...MaYur FF's help me to keep attached to IF!!

Pls do write another one ...if u get time.

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyy aruna
Amazing ss yaar
Firstly I was like wat the hell is nupur doing
But then whole truth revealed
Amazing story
Thanx for pm

Aruuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

R a kya ss tha!!!!

Awesome

Mind-blowing

Fantabulous

Loved it sooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

U r just awesome aru.

R a main khel tou tumne khela aru- it was just amazing

Ok main tumko part by part batati hoon-

Part 1

Nups ki condition for helping Mayank

And poor Mayank – he had to agree with it.

Kya kare apni mom and gunji se bahut pyar jo karta hai.

R a yaha se tou nups ki ye behave ki piche kuch bhi pata nehi chala.

Part 2

Hmm finally mayur ki contract mrg ho he gayi.

And nups took blessing frm mom

R a wah nups ne m.mom and gunji ki saath accha behave bhi kiya.

Part 3

Then banaglore assignment

And here nups alwz behaved very badly with mayu

She alwz shouted on him, treated him as a servant.

Not only that- she was fully drunk in this time

And the villain rv to tha he.

Part 4 and 5

Wah wah nups ki behave pehle se thoda sudhar gaya.

She made samuse for tayaji

Obviously our sweet, cute maynk helped her.

Hmmmmm ab tou nups ne Mayur ki bij thoda nazdikya bhi ban gaya

Part 6

The most beautiful part of this ff

In this part u revealed the truth of nups behavior.

R a yaar u r very smart

So ye hain reason.

Nups pehle se he maaynk se payar karti thi.

And she proposed him but mayu refused her

But nups ne ye sehen nehi kar payi.

Kuyun sabne uski saath bahut he misbehave karti thi.

Poor nups- t was very emotional part.

I got tears in my eyes while reading nups explanation.

Bechari ne bahut dukh saha he

Now maynks turn –oh he refused nups becoz he love someone else

Aur wo koi nehi his childhood buddy our payari nupur.

Wah Aruuuuu u hit a sixer here.

Ur ending was awesome

Totally perfect.

I loved each and every bit of it.

Excellent job

Aruuuuuuu thanx a lot for posting the whole ff

R a maza agaya.

A big hug 4 u

Muahhhhhhhhhhhh

Aise he bade bade ss post karte rehna

Take care

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Aruuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

R a kya ss tha!!!! ------------ 😉😉😉😉

Awesome

Mind-blowing

Fantabulous

Loved it sooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ----- 😆😆😆😆

U r just awesome aru.

R a main khel tou tumne khela aru- it was just amazing ---main to khiladi ban gayi matlab 😉😉😉😉

Ok main tumko part by part batati hoon-

Part 1

Nups ki condition for helping Mayank

And poor Mayank ' he had to agree with it.

Kya kare apni mom and gunji se bahut pyar jo karta hai.

R a yaha se tou nups ki ye behave ki piche kuch bhi pata nehi chala.

--------------Haan this was kind of an intro

Part 2

Hmm finally mayur ki contract mrg ho he gayi.

And nups took blessing frm mom

R a wah nups ne m.mom and gunji ki saath accha behave bhi kiya.

---------------she was bad with Mayank rest was ok

Part 3

Then banaglore assignment

And here nups alwz behaved very badly with mayu

She alwz shouted on him, treated him as a servant.

Not only that- she was fully drunk in this time

And the villain rv to tha he.

---------------------RV kitni nafrat hai sabko uske name se hi he he he

Part 4 and 5

Wah wah nups ki behave pehle se thoda sudhar gaya.

She made samuse for tayaji

Obviously our sweet, cute maynk helped her.

Hmmmmm ab tou nups ne Mayur ki bij thoda nazdikya bhi ban gaya

---------------Yes she was ok but still confused

Part 6

The most beautiful part of this ff

In this part u revealed the truth of nups behavior.

R a yaar u r very smart

So ye hain reason.

Nups pehle se he maaynk se payar karti thi.

And she proposed him but mayu refused her

But nups ne ye sehen nehi kar payi.

Kuyun sabne uski saath bahut he misbehave karti thi.

Poor nups- t was very emotional part.

I got tears in my eyes while reading nups explanation.

Bechari ne bahut dukh saha he

Now maynks turn 'oh he refused nups becoz he love someone else

Aur wo koi nehi his childhood buddy our payari nupur.

Wah Aruuuuu u hit a sixer here.

Ur ending was awesome

Totally perfect.

I loved each and every bit of it.

Excellent job

Aruuuuuuu thanx a lot for posting the whole ff

R a maza agaya.

A big hug 4 u

Muahhhhhhhhhhhh

Aise he bade bade ss post karte rehna

Take care

I loved ur comments aur mera to din hi ban gaya isko padkar

luv u faruuuuuuuuuuuu

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Yes all set and finished 😉

Good gal apni bat par kayam

kya bat hai sehr

mujhe bahut jaldi diebit ho hi jayegi

please reduce the sweetness

Tumhe achha laga ye jankar mujhe bahut khushi hui dear

take care

luv,

aru

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

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kia karti chapal jo nhe khani thi na
mjhe to acha lagna hi tha tumne jo likha tha
aur diabetis hogya to no tnsion yr
main hu na

Originally posted by: arunabehere

dekh rahi hu aajkal tum kafi samajhdar ho gayi ho

haan ab Dr hi ghar me hai to marj se kya darna 😃

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

hwwwwwwwww....

i m so sorry i so late in commenting! ------------No need of Sorry Deeps

really di, i m really very sorry i don't know how i missed the updates...

u ended this story 😲 .... so soon --------------yeah just wanted to do something new

i know it was a ss but...... i m sad. -------------are baba no sadness 😛😛😛😛

it was so touching and fabulously written story.

all the parts were so well depicted, i don't know how to put my thots in words.

i m feeling so sad that it ended but i m still happy that now u'll write more 😊

really waiting for u to start something new soon ---------------something will be there but unfortunately not soon dear

love u loads

Me to same Deeps

*deeps*