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Posted: 14 years ago
heello:)
very veryy well written!:)
nihaal left his wife 😳...but it was sweeth that he meet p2 before going:)
waiting for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pul18

nice update 😍 bt too short yaar....🥺

bt it's ok....study hard.....👍🏼
hv a nice week...😊

thx hun and im planning to do exactly that*study till death
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deizy

heello:)
very veryy well written!:)
nihaal left his wife 😳...but it was sweeth that he meet p2 before going:)
waiting for next update

thanks shona,love the fact that u liked the way i write😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

C h a p t e r X V I I I

Its night and Prena feels weird. She falls into the bed and the emptiness is still lingering. She closes the light and tries to sleep but it doesn't feel right. After a while she lights up the lamp and perceives her mangalsutra. As usual, she took it off before sleeping but tonight Prena adorns it back. She goes back to sleep clutching her necklace tight and slowly the emptiness fades away.

****

It's a hot afternoon in Europe. Nihaal shakes his lawyer's hand in approval of the contract and leaves his cabin. After ages, Nihaal feels truly awake and motivated. The thought of his dad by his side, in a couple of days, makes him ecstatic as he goes back to his hotel.
Back in his luxurious accommodations, Nihaal incapable to stay still, jumps off his sofa and leaves shopping for his mother, like Vardhan use to do so often.
At night, hands full of gifts, he enters in his room. He yawns and let himself fall on the bed. But as he turns around his left, it feels so strange, not seeing Prena sleep peacefully. As he glares at her photo which he mistakenly put in his wallet, Nihaal smiles knowing exactly what to do when the first ray of sunshine will arise.

****

Prena goes to her kitchen and at her surprise sees Diviana waiting for her, in the dinning table.

-diviana: toh Prena kya logi

Prena nostalgically realises that it's the very first time in her life where she won't be breakfasting alone. She tries to eat but she's way too intrigued about something else.

-prena playing with a strand of hair: ma when is he suppose to come already?

Prena accentuating the he part a bit more perceptible.

-diviana mouth full of strawberries: kaun beta?....ohh nihaal ,well tumhein yaad nahin hai? He will be back in 5 dayz

-prena: KYA PAACH DIN..I mean ohh yeah, mujhe abhi yaad aya

****

In the morning, Nihaal hastily takes a bath and rushes to the mall again. However, this time, he goes to a very classy and elite Indian designer's boutique.

Taking off his sunglasses, he tells the salesperson to wrap up every single blue saris from the new collection. After that, he asks to show him the prettiest and costliest dark red sari that they have in their boutique. In the meantime, the girl blushes realising that such a cute guy is actually talking to her. On the other hand, in the back of her mind, she agrees with herself that this customer surely had a fashion sense. Indeed, he is wearing a grey suit and pant along with a pale pink shirt underneath, obviously from a trendy designer's store. His silky hair is gelled and his chin covered with slight stubble.
Highly satisfied with the gorgeous sari that's she displays after a while, he orders her to wrap it up along with the others.

The salesperson keeps gazing at him, when suddenly Nihaal looks back with annoyance. Gradually, her thoughts starts rumbling and she sceptically stares him back because no one before this gorgeous hunk, ordered to buy soo many saris in one shot. Therefore, thinking that he may be someone renowned from the TV trying to play a prank, she shows him the receipt.

Nihaal, not even bothering to glance at it, brings out his wallet to pay.

-Nihaal looking at her face: are u alright? u seem umm...nevermind

He calls his driver to enter the boutique to help him with all the dozen of packets. He hops in his car, his face gleaming with satisfaction.

After a while his cell vibrates.

-nihaal: heah hello

-person in the phone: sir we have good news, everything is fixed, so u could leave right now if u want

Nihaal hangs up his cell, wondering if his day could have been better started than this. Knowing the answer deep down, he dispatches to his hotel, gathers his stuff and runs off to the airport.

Arriving at India, instead of feeling tired, Nihaal feels a bit too energetic. Thus, he doesn't even call anyone from home to pick him up. As an alternative, he calls at his office and ask for his other driver to do it. While coming home, Nihaal starts glancing at the road and abruptly demands to stop his car.

In a glimpse, he crosses the entry of the jewellery store and returns in a blink. Back at his car, he puts something shiny in his pocket.

****

The moon is high in the dark sky .Despite the cold night breeze, Prena wearing a black silk sari, is sitting with both of her feet up on her swing. Listening to the crickets chirping on her wet garden, she gradually closes her eyes.

****

Walking thru the gate, Nihaal advises his driver to take everything inside while he notices his angel leaning on the swing. Cautiously walking to her, he bends down and slowly brings out the payels he bought for her and carefully put it in her feet. The payels sparkles as Nihaal approaches to her lips. Recognizing his scent, Prena precipitously opens her eyes. As she gazes at him, she smiles and turns her face blushing, knowing that he won't come home in days and that she's dreaming. After a few more heartbeats, her sweet dream is still intact, as Nihaal is still there, looking at her with an amused smile on his face. As she perceives her feet, she gradually realises that his presence isn't a fantasy. She dares glancing back at him as he removes the strand of hair which is slightly hiding his angel's face. Shy, Prena pushes Nihaa l and starts running till her haveli, at the same time as her payels start humming their melody. Nihaal smiling holds her bangles but she easily slips away from his grasp.

-nihaal: prena rukho toh sahi

Listening to his voice fades away, Prena turns around and glances back at him before starting to run till the entrance. When suddenly she bumps into someone.
As he looks furiously into this unknown face,Prena feels insecure while nihaal comes back.
Shaken Nihaal, keeps looking at him shell shocked...while Prena presentiments that nothing will remain the same....
Edited by noha450 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi!
just awesome update noha!
woho nihaal really brought all that amount of sariies for p2!how sweeth:)
looking forward for some np2 scenes......take care

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW SUCH A NICE STORY LINE ....
they were missing each other...
well der is a song that suits perfectly (NP2) in background song

😊 Aadha Ishq adha hai 😊

Ek namkeen si baat hai, har nayi si baat mein
Teri khusboo chal rahi hai jo mere saath mein
Halka halka rang beete kal ka
Gehra gehra kal ho jayega
Aadha ishq adha hai aadha ho jayega
Kadmon se meelon ka wada ho jayega

Beshumar raatein, behisab baatein pass aate aate ghum ho jati hai
Bekhudi mein dhalke, bekali mein jalke
sau hazar yaadein nam ho jati hai
pheeka pheeka pal beete kal ka
mehka mehka kal ho jayega
Aadha ishq adha hai adha ho jayega
Kadmon se milo ka wada ho jayegaa

ishq..
Intezar sa hai, imtihan sa hai, itminan sa hai, kya hai na jaane
Itna* nahi hai, iqteda hui hai, intiha hui hai, na jane
Chhalka chhalka pal beete kal ka, thehra thehra pal ho jayega,
Aadha ishq aadha hai aadha ho jayega
Kadmon se milo ka wada ho jayega..


❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pul18

WOW SUCH A NICE STORY LINE ....

they were missing each other...
well der is a song that suits perfectly (NP2) in background song

😊 Aadha Ishq adha hai 😊

Ek namkeen si baat hai, har nayi si baat mein
Teri khusboo chal rahi hai jo mere saath mein
Halka halka rang beete kal ka
Gehra gehra kal ho jayega
Aadha ishq adha hai aadha ho jayega
Kadmon se meelon ka wada ho jayega

Beshumar raatein, behisab baatein pass aate aate ghum ho jati hai
Bekhudi mein dhalke, bekali mein jalke
sau hazar yaadein nam ho jati hai
pheeka pheeka pal beete kal ka
mehka mehka kal ho jayega
Aadha ishq adha hai adha ho jayega
Kadmon se milo ka wada ho jayegaa

ishq..
Intezar sa hai, imtihan sa hai, itminan sa hai, kya hai na jaane
Itna* nahi hai, iqteda hui hai, intiha hui hai, na jane
Chhalka chhalka pal beete kal ka, thehra thehra pal ho jayega,
Aadha ishq aadha hai aadha ho jayega
Kadmon se milo ka wada ho jayega..


❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

aww thanks jannu and such a cute song!
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Posted: 14 years ago

C H A P T E R XIX

...

As Mr Garewal's eyes lays on her, a burning sensation catches every particle of her body. She keeps looking at the ground in anticipation of Diviana, who after a while, comes from upstairs.

-mr garewal very calmly: yeh kaun hai Nihaal?

Nihaal stays quiet, not fully realising that he is really there, standing in front of him.
-diviana huffing: oho ,tum ao na,u have to tell me everything, I want to know why Vardhan isn't answering my calls?

-mr garewal: nihaal im not waiting for you to talk, I am demanding it, whether u want to talk or not, comes secondary to my problems so ..

-diviana with annoyance: ouff .. this is our daughter in law, khush!.....Now come with me

-Shocked Mr Garewal: ky..aa?

-divina annoyed: u know kids!! They ran away since they thought we wouldn't agree with their union..

Impatiently, Diviana looks at her husband.

-Mr garewal shaken: what is this nonsense, what the hell is going on my house..

After a couple of minutes.

- Mr garewal : and you, are u waiting that I greet with flowers or you will open your mouth by yourself and tell me who u are

Prena stays hushed and Nihaal intercepts.

-nihaal: dad her name is Prena

-mr garewal screaming: U SHUT UP... I am asking her to talk but it seems she is following the same pattern like u and keeping her mouth shut when an elder asks for something
-prena shaken, and like a whisper: Prena..

-Mr. Garewal rebuking: Don't u have a family name like normal people do? Or are u a bazaar ki lardki..

-prena, crushed: Prena..Prena Bassu

Instantaneously, his eyes set on fire. Disgusted, he scurries to his room, leaving the place behind like an aftermath of a storm.
-Mr Garewall while leaving: Nihaal I expect u to be in my office at 7 o'clock sharp.
-nihaal: yes dad

****

Nihaal is about to leave his house when his mother stops him to do so.

-diviana: not so fast, I want my gifts

Nihaal smiles and both enter her room. Along the way she grabs Prena's hand and obliges to join them as well.

Nihaal joyfully brings out all the gifts and displays them in the bed, including the sari he bought for Prena. Diviana cheerfully hugs her son and touches all the saries.
In the meantime, Prena keeps longing impassively at the window, cringing something is amiss. All of a sudden, Diviana looks at her son with annoyance and Nihaal smiles, fully enjoying the scene.

-diviana: nihaal, what is this, u know how much I hate other colors except blue.
Nihaal plasters a fake disturbed look on his face as if he is deeply concerned.
-diviana: now I'm stuck with this sari'

Nihaal counts the seconds in his head while the thoughts of his mother trails off. Out of the blue, Diviana's face brightens up.

-diviana: beta plz don't mind if I give this sari to Prena, besides red suits her very well

-nihaal, in high spirits inside, lies: do whatever u wish ma, I don't care I have go catch dad

Diviana shows the fabric to Prena, who dimly smiles. Deep down, she knew from the beginning it was intended for her but somehow, something in her mind keeps cautiously intercepting her to be pleased.

Before leaving the room, Nihaal kisses his mom on her cheek and steals a secret glance towards Prena. In the meantime, the pang of anxiousness kept haunting her.
****

Nihaal opens his door and joins his dad. His dad keeps glaring at her son and in pure wrath, abruptly slaps him with all his force.

-mr garewal : How dare u..How dare u run after that s**t when ur own blood ,ur own brother past away. How could u be soo shameless and perverted Nihaal.

-nihaal shattered: dad aap plz ,aap mere baath toh sunniye

-mr garewal: Ji karta hai I cut her pretty throat and then slice here in pieces. How could u marry his daughter when he slaughtered your own brother? HOW COULD U.HOW COULD U RUN AFTER HER AND NOT THINK ABOUT US,ME UR MOM AND VARDHAAN!!!!!!!!!
-nihaal gulping: just listen to me dad.....believe me,I was mad , I was blind by everything. Apko pata hai, I married her to make him suffer ,so that he could be shamed.. so that he could......But then I thought....
--mr garewal intercepting him: k..yaaaaaa ...
****

Half an hour later, Mr garewal gives a glass of water to his son and holds his shoulder from behind.

-mr garewal: I knew it son, I knew u could never do this to me

-nihaal smiles and take a sip of water: dont worry dad, I know exactly what im doing..
****

Prena feels dizzy and she goes downstairs .She sees a maid cutting the vegetables.
-prena: give it to me, I'll do it

As she slices, she mistakenly cuts her finger deeply. Blood starts spreading around her sari as she runs till the basin. She wimps in pain, yet does not utters a single word. But soon, even her own tears won't belong to her to prickle down her cheeks.

:.PRECAP:.
...

Kya Prena u don't believe me..nahin magar... n i h a a l a p p r o a c h i n g t o
h e r b a c k a n d p u t t i n g h i s c h i n o n h e r s h o u l d e r , plz Prena... acha i'll go to that place .
P r e n a c l o s e s h e r e y e s a s h e v i c t o r i o u s l y s m i l e s .
Edited by noha450 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

NOTE:

Ok guyz this update was where i stopped writing. Therefore, I will not post chapters(cuz i have no updates in reserve) and during december break, i will write and
start start updating regularly during jan.
Hence, this is like an intermission* and i feel like posting the trailler again :P Give me ur feedbacks and feel free to tell me what u like/dislike.
tc
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KoSzhxJ-znk[/YOUTUBE]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KoSzhxJ-znk
HAPPY HOLIDAYS...mouahh and lots of love
Edited by noha450 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...i think evrythings is going nw AdHa AdHa..😆
ADHA ishQ, ADHI kahanI..😊

what i lyk - EvErYtHiNg ( ur writing)🤗
dislyk - this intermission(bt never mind "BrEaK BhI HaI JaRuRi") 😃
m gonna miss "u" n ur "update".. 😊
n HaPpY HoLiDaYs 2 u ToO
HaVe FuNnNnNn 😊 ❤️ 😊
TaKe CaRe 😊 😊

Edited by pul18 - 14 years ago

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