T h e h u s h i n g s c r e a m s(np2)IMP p19!

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Im takinq it slow,feeding my flame
shufflinq the cards of your game
and just in time
in the riqht place
suddenly i will play my ace...
Hey friend's, this is my very first written FF. Basically the idea of it prompted in my mind when I watched some of the very first scene of NP2 (almost 3 yrs back). As u can see, it took me forever to finally decide to post this down. However ,since my FF is already done till chapter 12 or so, I guess I'll be updating quite frequently & see if i'll continue afterwards.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KoSzhxJ-znk[/YOUTUBE]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KoSzhxJ-znk

I N D E X

CHAPTER I ....... p.1
CHAPTER II ....... p.2
CHAPTER III ....... p.4
CHAPTER IV ....... p.5
CHAPTER V ....... p.6
CHAPTER VI ....... p.6
CHAPTER VII ....... p.8
CHAPTER VIII ....... p.8
CHAPTER IX ....... p.10
CHAPTER X ....... p.10
CHAPTER XI ....... p.12
CHAPTER XII ....... p.13
CHAPTER XIII ....... p.13
CHAPTER XIV ....... p.14
CHAPTER XV ....... p.15
CHAPTER XVI ....... p.15
CHAPTER XVII ....... p.16
CHAPTER XVIII ....... p.17
CHAPTER XIX ....... p.18
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CHAPTER XX ....... p.
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The character sketch:(compressed)

Prena Basu:

Gorgeous and breathtaking she is undeniably the princess living on her far away castle. Her dad often calls her rose. Why wouldn't he? She is beautiful, pure and fragile. Prena's wide hazel eyes, deep silky hair with some pale red stands accentuate and highlight her pinkish cheeks. God has gifted the most angelic smile. People often label her extremely pampered. And Prena can't deny this following fact. Her dads always fulfilled every single desire of her. And in return she cherishes her father to death. Deep inside, she knows that she will continue her family legacy with pride. However, guys go nuts over her. But gosh she's hard to get! She promised herself that only her dad would choose her soul mate.
Nihaal Garewal:
What was he hiding over these mysterious grey eyes? Any guy would unpleasantly envy his killer look, his well toned body and his tall figure. Girls drool to get a glance of these precious dimples featuring the cutest and innocent smile under the slight stubble covering his chin. Indeed he is the ideal synonym of die for! Yet he always somehow remain reserved perhaps arrogant. Who knew? He always maintains a boundary from the other. Which made him even more irresistible. Conversely Nihaal could easily lose his thundering temper especially if it concerns his family. However Nihaal is the youngest son of the famous business tycoon RK Garewall. Currently he is in his second and final year of college.
Anurag Basu:
The most successful layer in town. Rich and powerful but broken inside...Alas Prena is his only reason to live in this merciful life. He always fulfills every unspoken desires of her and would rather die than letting any spine touching his angel.
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Prena's uniforms & accessories:
Nihaal's uniforms & watch (random :P):
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The Basu's house(frontside & backward):
The Garewal's house(frontside & backward):
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Chapter I :

The rose of repentance, has blossomed. With each petal
drowning in anxiety while the thorns bleed coldly...
It was a rainy day. The entire mansion was covered by a fogy atmosphere. As usual Anurag took a quick zip of tea and order the maid to wake his daughter up.
In a dark huge room fully covered by white curtains, a peaceful girl was still sleeping with a dreamy smile on her face, as if the various carillons near the balcony were singing her some magical lullaby. Her face was fully covered by a thin satin sheet. When suddenly someone knocks her door.

-Maid: Prena beta you have to wake up love. Have you forgot ? Today is a very important day.

After a few more alerts, her efforts were still in vain and she finally decided to call her master. As usual Anurag was on a hurry but he could never leave his house without seeing a glance of his lucky charm. He sincerely believed that all his achievement goes to his late wife and of course to his angel Prena. He entered his daughter's room and started caressing her hair. Slowly Prena uncovered herself from the satin fabric.She opens her wide dazzling eyes and gave him a small serene smile.

-Anurag: Prena you know it's almost 6 o'clock and you still haven't woke up yet! Have you completely forgotten that it's your very first day at your college?

Prena started mumbling almost imperceptibly.

-Anurag: Enaugh Prena wake up

And he printed a tiny little kiss on her forehead before leaving his mansion.
All of a sudden Prena abruptly realises what day it was, and starts jumping and panicking. Hopefully her maid calms her down and informs her that all her stuff was already ready. Prena gives a small kiss to her maid that she genuinely considered as her own mother.

-Prena: Thanks Gayatri aunty

She rushes in full speed to the washroom and take her bath. Then quickly dresses her according to the uniform. Hence, the while envy blouse and her grey skirt made wonder to her fair skin. She adjusts some few accessories to match things up, brushes without thinking her silky hair and runs downstairs.

-Gaya: samal ke Prena

-Prena: haan haan aunty but you know naa I'm terribly late.

In front of her entrance the black Cadillac was still waiting for her. Unfortunately she couldn't drive therefore her driver drove her to the St Xavier High Academy.

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The St Xavier High Academy is the most high-status and renowned college in the whole Mumbai. In essence only few students thanks to their upper cast family with huge amount of money could attend this college. Prena got out of the car with an ecstatic look on her face. Her friends rush and gather in front of her and give her tight hugs. And they all start blabbering.

-Prena: can't you believe guys we are finally in coll!!

-Sapna: I know na. I still can't believe it. Pinch me it might be a dream!

-Rahul: indeed and if we don't hurry up and enter the hallway. We will all get suspended at our very first day! And believe me your dream will soon be transformed into a living nightmare.

Prena gives a fake and overreacted concern look .And they all in full swing laugh and finally enter the hallway. When suddenly someone calls her name.
-driver: miss Prena you forgot your handbag.

-prena: ohh gosh yeh to maine bhul hi gayi.You guys carry on, I'll catch you in a sec.

She is about to leave the colossal entry when all of a sudden it starts to rain heavily. Prena sighs and runs toward her car. She became all drench up when she finally reaches it. All of a sudden a sturdy wind strikes in Prena's back forcing her to turn up and straightaway she felt an unknown pulse dragging her ...
Edited by noha450 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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SUPERBBBBBb yaar this one is one that im looking forward
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nohaaa! this shocking...u are writter!wow

this awesome ,,,i m so looking forward for this!!!

thanks fro the pmmm..and best of luck for ur first ff.......🥳

Edited by Deizy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sallu_lover

SUPERBBBBBb yaar this one is one that im looking forward

aww thanks yaar,will try my best not to disappoint u😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deizy

nohaaa! this shocking...u are writter!wow

this awesome ,,,i m so looking forward for this!!!

thanks fro the pmmm..and best of luck for ur first ff.......🥳

yeah first and last fc😆. But thanks sunshine🤗
ps:u know i cant even remember about what i wrote back then,it was saved on my comp for soo long i just copy/paste it.
tc
Edited by noha450 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very awesome start, can't wait for the rest 👏 and plzzz don't say it's your first n last, you're such an awesome writer!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: noha450

yeah first and last fc😆. But thanks sunshine🤗

ps:u know i canteven remember about what i wrote back then,it was saved on my comp for soo long i just copy/paste it.
tc

hey don't say last ff😉😉

copy- paste..heheh niceeee👏

👏so plzz paste the next chapter....👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lola610

very awesome start, can't wait for the rest 👏 and plzzz don't say it's your first n last, you're such an awesome writer!!!

AWWW thanks yaaar🤗.u are adorable.
And lol i doubt me beeing an awesome writer cuz im mainly into french hence i'll have million of mistakes on my updates😆
luv yaa

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