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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: pul18

ya ri8 DAIZY a fantastic update.......👏 👏 ❤️ ❤️ 👏 👏

really sad 4 PREENA......plz NEHAAL thoda toh taras khao bechari pe🥺
⭐️update soon dear.....👍🏼

how u did that heart thingy its soo cute😳 and thanks shona for commenting
Edited by noha450 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

note: * First off, im terribly sorry for being soo annoying and not updating weekly but kya karoon,my scheduale is soo freaking tight..but still i know theres no excuse,like common i only have to copy paste an old texts..So from now on I PROMISE ill upate once a week (every saturday).

* Also,this updating is really dull & short .It leads nowhere !!but hopefully the following ones will be better
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Chapter XII
The untamed wind keeps blowing while an aimless Prena falls down on the ground holding her door handle tight. Her head leaning on the door, she knows her world came to an end. As much as she tries to ignore, the harsh reality keeps re-emerging like a knife cutting her veins, portion by portion. Every single word keeps vibrating in her ears, sending echoes of despair in her quivering body.
****

Nihaal draws back a few feet away. His head hammers with continuous noises. Incapable of breathing, he seeks for help to the rain. He walks, until he is fully uncovered from the roof and let himself soak by the frizzing droplets as if it will wash his sins away. Holding his hair with his hands, he closes his burning eyes.

Wasn't he supposed to be delighted, now that Anurag paid his deed? Wasn't he supposed to feel free from the oppressive weight on his chest? Then, why did it alleviated even more? The mix feeling of victory and defeat drives him berserk. Alas, his cursed faith seems remorseless, always wanting more pain and sorrow...

****

Closing her eyes, she prays for her dad to hold her tight and tell her it's only a nightmare. As much as she pleads, deep down she knows to well that her reluctant father would never look back to her.

After all these years, once again, her open wounded heart is still bleeding. Again it's punctured and stabbed. And this time its cant be sewed. Since her mother past away, wasn't her dad who promised that he will always remain by her side? Alas, another broken promise, another destroyed tie.

But abruptly, the urge to hold onto these lies altered as the reason to keep breathing. Otherwise, the remaining of her essence will be ripped off and only the emptiness will sustain.

In the same time, the colossal door reopens and an unanticipated ray of hope glimpse in Prena's face. Unfortunately, it's not her beloved father who comes by, but his driver and slowly, her dim smile fades away.

-driver: Prena mem,aap yahan nahin rehey saktey. Mr Anurag ka order hai ,joh bhi ho gahar ke samne,ujhey dhakey mar key nikal ko hai

Tears wave down her face as she tries to utter a word. Her gaze totally lost staring at the ground.

-driver: PLz mem,aap yahan sey jayey,varna sir mujhe majboor..
Sudddenly, everything starts looking blurry and unclear. Feeling dizzy, the ground seems to be shaking.

-Driver: aap plz mujhey..

At the same time, hearing the driver's statement, Nihaal moves towards them.

-Nihaal: Utoh.

After a while

-Nihaal: Prena utoh,tum yahan nahin rehsakti

Still no answer. Hence, Nihaal grabs her hand and tries to lift her up while she tries to defy. Once obliged to be standing on her feet, she doesn't think twice before slapping in his face.

-prena: aa kya chateho tum, u've reached ur goal right.... Then what do u want more,what can u possibly ask for more...

She clutches his shirt.

-prena: kyun nihaal?..kyun? why should I pay for ur sins?

Impassive, he grabs both oh her hand and looks away. Gradually, he feels her falling down and he instinctively tries to hold her. But she just closes her eyes as she faints, her head lies down on his chest. Not knowing what to do, he follows his intuition and lifts her up in his arms.

At the same time his cell starts ringing therefore he brings her back into his car and gently puts her in.

-phone: sir appl plz ghar mein ajayey. We called several lawyers for mr Anurag and they need to talk to you.

Hearing his dad's name, he quickly gains his composure and activates his car.

After an hour,Prena indolently open her eyes. The blurry face of Nihaal appears to her, looking so focused while driving. Then, as she pays more attention to the details, she glares at his window and what she sees makes her awestruck.

A humongous white building with 8 pillars is coming nearer to her. In front of the gate two men with guns in their hand are standing strait. As Nihaal parks in front of the gorgeous haveli, Prena remains frozen...
Edited by noha450 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
As much as she tries to ignore, the harsh reality keeps re-emerging like a knife cutting her veins, portion by portion. Every single word keeps vibrating in her ears, sending echoes of despair in her quivering body

beautifully written. Amazing 👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏loved itttttt

waiting for next
saturday........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
DAY BY DAY YOU R DOING A GREAT JOB.....DEAR.....🤗 👏

As much as she tries to ignore, the harsh reality keeps re-emerging like a knife cutting her veins, portion by portion. Every single word keeps vibrating in her ears, sending echoes of despair in her quivering body
N THIS LINE IS SO SO......TOUCHING....😭
THANX 4 THE UPDATE...NOW WAITING 4 NEXT UPDATE....👍🏼
AAGE DONO NP2 K BICH KYA HOGA 😍

DARK CLOUDS IN THE SKY R ALWAYS THE ONE'S WHICH GIVE GOOD RAINS.....
SIMILARLY, DARK DAYS IN OUR LYF WILL ALWAYS BRING HAPPY DAYS.......... 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: noha450

how u did that heart thingy its soo cute😳 and thanks shona for commenting

THAT HEART IS MY LOVE 4 NP2 YAAR....❤️
WO BANTE BANTE BAN GAYA.....☺️
N THANK U 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Deizy

As much as she tries to ignore, the harsh reality keeps re-emerging like a knife cutting her veins, portion by portion. Every single word keeps vibrating in her ears, sending echoes of despair in her quivering body

beautifully written. Amazing 👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏loved itttttt

waiting for next
saturday........

thanks!❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: pul18

DAY BY DAY YOU R DOING A GREAT JOB.....DEAR.....🤗 👏

As much as she tries to ignore, the harsh reality keeps re-emerging like a knife cutting her veins, portion by portion. Every single word keeps vibrating in her ears, sending echoes of despair in her quivering body
N THIS LINE IS SO SO......TOUCHING....😭
THANX 4 THE UPDATE...NOW WAITING 4 NEXT UPDATE....👍🏼
AAGE DONO NP2 K BICH KYA HOGA 😍

DARK CLOUDS IN THE SKY R ALWAYS THE ONE'S WHICH GIVE GOOD RAINS.....
SIMILARLY, DARK DAYS IN OUR LYF WILL ALWAYS BRING HAPPY DAYS.......... 😃

thanks pulikita😳 and wow such a nice line yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter XIII:

The first light of dawn streaks the night sky with pink and whitish clouds, as Nihaal parks his car in the entrance. Quietly, he turns and check to see Prena. At his surprise, she appears to have regained her consciousness; her gaze pained and mesmerized seems unfocused, looking outside. Unknowingly, Nihaal's eyes are still locked at her direction. As if he is disconnected from the reality .Amazed, he realizes how different she looks from the first time they both met. He remembers him thinking that he must be day dreaming, that only an angel could be so beautiful. Hours ago, when the obscurity enveloped her entire room, her reflection appeared in the mirror, like a mirage in the desert, blurry but divine.
At this moment, it's the same appealing eyes, the same dark silky hair with the red strands but also a new red sindoor blazing at her front. It was no longer the astonishing girl but his beautifully broken angel. His own disconcerting thought outrages Nihaal, as he regains his common sense. Automatically, it's no longer Prena, but Anurag's precious reason to be alive. He can't foretell what destiny had written for her or for him but he is determined about what would have to happen to his dad. He would do anything to get him released and all the hurdles of the universe could wait in the meantime. He quickly gets out of his car and opens her door.
-Nihaal: mere saath aao

Without replying, Prena slowly strolls outside, knowing she doesn't have another choice. As both hesitantly enter the lavishing Garewal mansion, everyone inside stops talking. The house is packed with lawyers and maids. Suddenly,a women peeking from upstairs starts running and tighly hugs Nihaal. Apalled and scared, Prena could feel everyone staring at her.

Gradually, releasing her son from her grips, Diviana turns around to face Prena while she is still looking at the floor.
-diviana:yeh kaun hai Nihaal

No one speaks.

-Diviana:mein tumhein kuch pooch rehi hoon

-Nihaal avoiding his mom's gaze: m..

After a couple of minutes, Diviana noticing the red sindoor on Pena's forehead,

-diviana cluching Nihaal's shirt: beta tunein yeh kya kya. U DESTROED EVERYHTING, ALL MY DREAMS, ALL MY HOPES, U SHATTETRED EVERYTHING NIHAAL...EVRYTHING I WAS DREAMING FOREVER.MEIN NEY KYA NAHIN SOSHA THA,KYA NAHIN ...!!WHERE DID I GO WRONG WITH U.

*After a while*

-diviana in a more clamer tone, breath in and breath out:Itni bari decision, aur hamein bataya bhi nahin .. yeh toh bohot hi khubsurat hai,bilkul ek pari jaisi...aur tu toh uski puri zindegi hi kharab kar dedi,I mean look at her,shes trembling.. Tu toh puri tara sey pagal hogaya hai Nihaal.

-nihaal despairingly: maaa mein kya karta,I was berserk

-diviana:shup nihaal,tuney kya sosha,tu itni easy sey sab kuch kahatam kar lega.You thought we wouldn't accept you getting married before Vardhan so you ran away! .....Beta you should just told me once!! ....and besides toh kya huwa, u liked someone before your brother did..Vardhan bad mein shadi kar lega.

Nihaal stomach churns upside down. He looks at his mom appalled,while she continues her nonsense.

-diviana: jab tak tera dad, vardhan aur mein zinda hoon,hum tujhe chorein gey
nahin.Tujhe phir shadi karna hoga.At least for her sake. Akhir shes the dauther in law of the Garewal's.

-someone: mem im sorry to intervene but we really need to talk to mr Nihaal
-diviana:haan haan ,magar jaldi karna.i have a lot of thing to do..

-diviana excitedly: You know what Nihaal, i have a brilliant idea ..let make you two married tonight or should I say remarried! Lemme see if I can make all the arrangements... OUff Vardhan's face will be priceless. After such a long flight from Italy, he will be sooo ecstatic to see his new bhabhi.

Nihaal is frozen at his place. Tears roll down his face, as he glares his mom. Obliged to turn around to meet all the lawyers, he trails slowly to them. At the same time, Prena's heart skips a beat when Diviana holds her arm.

-diviana: pagli,ur still crying.Acha choro yeh sab rona dhona ..aur mujhe batao tumhara naam kya hai

Incapable of talking,Prena keeps crying.

-diviana: ok ok beta,abhi bhi itni dishearted! I know nihaal has disappointed both u and I. I'm sure it was his idea to run away from home...but joh huwa toh huwa. I will make everything perfect today and ur wedding will be the most gorgeous wedding people will ever witness. Chaalllo challo we have a very busy schedule to maintain ..chalo chalo hurry up.

Diviana brings Prena at her beautiful room.

-diviana:beto naa

Sha takes the phone and keep talking and talking. After a while, she opens a humongous closet and brings out a huge luggage.

-Diviana: Thank God I have that. You are very lucky young lady that your mother in law is soo well organised. Tum janti ho yeh kya hai? This is all the stuff I bought for my daughter in laws. Now that my first daughter has come home, this is all yours.

Prena keeps glaring at the women in front of her. Somehow her motherly love still finds a way to bruise her broken heart even more.

At this moment,two ladies enter the room.

-ladies: we are here mem

-diviana:good,decho u have to prepare her for her wedding.u are in full charge of her,so don't mess it up.

-Diviana touching Prenas cheek:challo jaldi sey nahalo

Then she quickly leaves the room and the 2 ladies dispatches at Prenas direction.
****

As Diviana goes downstairs, she orders everyone to quit the house .Nihaal is busy with bureaucratic stuff but she intervenes and throws all the papers away. Nihaal tensed, tries to go away but she holds him tight.

-diviana: where are u going

-nihaal:mom its very urgent.mujhey jana hoga

-diviana:baas u still haven't taken ur bath,what is this nonsense

Soon, 3 people take Nihaal into his room to make him ready despite his efforts to stop.
Subsequently, the, maids starts running everywhere while others enter the house with hands full of decorations. Makeup artists runs and everlasting rows of shopping bags enters to Diviana's room whereas other with nihaals sherewani and other stuff dispatches to his room.
Within a couple of hours, the entire mansion is unrecognizable. It beams with red roses and scintillating chandeliers .Also a huge mandap is soon placed on the middle of the living room.

As time passes by, the sky adjusts it colors into a deep black while the maids finishes the final touches.

A subdued scent of roses perfumes every corner of the haveli .All the red roses fusion perfectly with the white dcor. Diviana dressed in a light blue sari exclaims seeing her son wearing this white Indian outfit. Diviana who is always very proud of Nihaal is even more arrogant tonight. Indeed in this attire her son looks more like a model than anything else tonight.
As the pandit sat in the mandap, he orders Nihaal to sit. Then he advises Diviana to call the bride while Nihaal's gaze is lost in the fire in front of him. When slowly Prena's reflection appears in his visual field, he longingly raises his gaze. Prena is wearing a gorgeous deep red lehenga, fully decorated with embroidery. Her hands are full of golden bangles, on the middle of her forehead a maang tikka (tikli) along with heavy long earnings and a golden necklace. Also for the first time Prena is wearing a nose ring like brides usually wear. Compelled by her striking beauty Nihaal tries hard to turn his head but he can't take off his eyes from her. Her piercing stare is accentuated even more with the deep kajal in her eyes.
From outward, Prena looks like a flawless statue, outstandingly gorgeous. Alas, underneath Prena is impassive, no pain or sorrow is longing on her chest since she her soul has passed away. Diviana beams with joy looking at her daughter in law. She whispers to herself that God has made this jodi in heaven.
Edited by noha450 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
at this point of tym der's only one thing to say......😊
instead of "RAB NE"....."NOHA NE BANA DI JODI"😉
n nice update.....👏 🤗
thanx dear.......😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

A quick wedding for np2! how lucky.....
just fabuloussss!!!!!!
want read moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee


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