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Posted: 15 years ago
hello i know...bahot satati hoon na tujhe ..
kya karo bada mazza atta hai
well love it i know guusa bi hogi ki comment nahi karti
but yaar i want Armaan to know his pari is Riddhima ...as soon as possible
aww love when Armaan blushes he had never done that
and love it too core glad they are in same collage and .....can't wait to AR to start falling in love i love it please u have to update soon
agar nahi kiya toh main ronne lag yaoo gi
well Good going
And for now Bye will come back to read more Love Heaven



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

hello i know...bahot satati hoon na tujhe ..

kya karo bada mazza atta hai
well love it i know guusa bi hogi ki comment nahi karti
but yaar i want Armaan to know his pari is Riddhima ...as soon as possible
aww love when Armaan blushes he had never done that
and love it too core glad they are in same collage and .....can't wait to AR to start falling in love i love it please u have to update soon
agar nahi kiya toh main ronne lag yaoo gi
well Good going
And for now Bye will come back to read more Love Heaven



tujh par ghussa??????????
no waysssssss...heaven....
😡😡tumpar main ghussa nahi...bahuth gussa hu...kyu...yeh maine tumhe scrap likdiya hai...
abhi abhi toh ek doosre ke liye kuch feel kar rahe hai....😉
zara time lagega...pyaaaaaaaar...mein doodne ke liye....😳😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshhhhhhhh

tujh par ghussa??????????
no waysssssss...heaven....
😡😡tumpar main ghussa nahi...bahuth gussa hu...kyu...yeh maine tumhe scrap likdiya hai...
abhi abhi toh ek doosre ke liye kuch feel kar rahe hai....😉
zara time lagega...pyaaaaaaaar...mein doodne ke liye....😳😉

acha baba sorry dekh kitni pyarri comment likhi hai ....
chal well i will defnitally wait
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

acha baba sorry dekh kitni pyarri comment likhi hai ....

chal well i will defnitally wait

u hav to dear.......
itz ok ....i was kidding
HeAvEnS thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshhhhhhhh

u hav to dear.......
itz ok ....i was kidding

abb kab update kar rahi hai i want an update soon
and u better be writing that
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

abb kab update kar rahi hai i want an update soon

and u better be writing that

achaaaa,.....khudhi late update karthi hai..aur mujhe dararahi hai...
o madam...main week mein do updates dethi hu...
(actually...aaj kal eki derahi hu😉😛)
do din mein mil jayegi......doosri ff pe concentrate kar rahi hu...
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey guys....thanku for your lovely comments..

part-15
recap:rahul confessess
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muskaan was not expecting any such kind of thing though she loved him...that too this early....she was surprised....she thought
"isse shaahid yeh calm silent waala muskaan pasand hain....shaahid yeh nahi jaantha ki main aisi nahi hu....kya karu...batha duu..batha du ki main chatter box hu....nahi...agar vo..mujhe chodkar chala jayega toh....par...agar nahi batayi toh kitne din aisi rahu....kitne din..uske saamne silent rehsakhthi hu...ek na ek din patha chal jayega...tab...agar tab chaodiya toh....better hain ki abhi batha du..."
she sighed..
mu;tumhe..kyu laghtha hain ki tum mujhse pyaar karthe ho...
ra;matlab...
mu:matlab...tk....dekho..main itna calm nahi hu...main bahuth chapad chapad baath kar thi hu....
ra;mujhe patha hain...
mu;tch...yehi toh...tumhe nahi patha...
ra:mujhe patha hai...maine tumhe abhi ko daanthe hue dekha..
muskaan raised her eye brows...
mu;kyaa...
ra;haa..aur infact..(he became little serious)
mujhe...lag raha tha ki tum mujhse baath nahi karna chahthe ho.....iss liye main itne din chup raha...
mu:toh ab?
ra(he smiled alittle)armaan ne tumhe ridz ko baathathe suna tha tohhhhhhh.....
mu:KYAAAA??????ARMAAN...vo toh gaya mere haaath mein bathathi hu...aur haa...tum usse kuch math batha naa...samjha..
ra:hmmmmmm...ek sharath par..
mu:kyaa..
rahul raised his eye brows
ra;u know...
mu;dekh ...mujhe aise..isshaare samaj mein nahi aathe hain...batha..
ra:confess...
mu;kyaa??/
rahul shrugged his shoulders...
muskaan made an:'oo"
ra;haa...bolo..
mu;umm....(blushing controlling her smiles)
ra;im waiting
mu.....
ra:...
mu:tk....haa...ummm...mmeee...tttooo
rahul pulled her into a hug
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armaan was rolling on his bed...
he saw a resemblence btween ridzis eyes and paris....his heart was accepting it..but his logic was not...he was having atough time...
he got up frustrated...
ar;URGH...
at the same time his cell phone beeped..
"amith calling"
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ridzi was thinking"mujhe itna bura kyu lag raha tha...pari....tch...aur...main...kya se kya sochne lagi thi....pari kaun hain mujhe yeh bhi nahi patha..aur...mujhe uspar itna ghussa...yeh armaan bhi naa...sirf aankhe dekh khar kaise...pyaar....par..vo kisse pyaar karega mujhe kyu....mujhe itni chintha kyu...urgh...god."
she closed her eyes and soon drifted into sleep..
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armaan lifted the phone...
ar;hello...
am:hai armaan..
ar;hey amith..kaise ho...
am:main bilkhul teek hu...vo..abhi ka cell not reachable aaraha hai...toh...tum kal use mujhe call karne ko kahoge..
ar;sure...par...kyu...anything special...mujhe nahi batha saktha..
am;arey aise koi baath nahi...vo ....bas...tk..kya tumhe...nainithal mein kuch...hostels patha hain...women hostels...
ar;kyu....haa....mcafe...hai...famous hain...security bhi hain usse...par kyu..
am;vo...ummm...kuch nahi koi dosth ko chahiye tha..
ar;(lie)ohhh....fine...toh watelse...
am:kuch nahibas...tk baad mein baath kartha hu...
ar;bye...gud morning..hehehe..
am:hehe..bye..
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college...
anjali was sitting in canteen..
atul came over there...
at;ridz ne kaha..tumne mujhe bulayi..
an;haa...baito...wait...
at;kya..
an;wait...patha chal jayega...
a girl entered the college...she was of the same age as athul an anjali...
gi:anjieeeeeee.....
athul turned and was surprised..
at;rrriyaaa...
riyaa also looked at him...but not frowning..as anjie thought..but...happy...very happy....
ri:athul bhaiyaa.....wowwwwww....
anjali was shocked..
an:bhaiyaa...
riya hugged athul tight...
at;arey...tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...
before riya culd reply...anjie pulled her...ou of the hug...
an:yeh kya keh rahe ho...yeh vo nahi ahi jisne tumse..shaadi karke...tumhe chodiya...
at;WAT?????????
PRECAP:armaan came running...
ar:ggguys......
he was heaving hard...
all;kya hua(ridz was not there)
ar:ppppaaariii......
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ok guys.....i know this is a very boring part..but plz bear wid me...nxt parts wud be intresting....and plzzz..plzzzz.comment...
love,
vyshu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yayyyy!!!!!!'
Me first!!!!🥳 Kitne dino baad!!!! 😆
N as for the part
Superb!!!!
Ooooohhhhhhhh
Riddhima jealous???? 😉
N ye Amit ka kya chakkar hai?
Womens hostel???😕
N Armaan ne fir Riddhima ko scarf mein dekha?
Hmmm, bewakoof kab apne dimag par yakeen karega?
Update jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Love,
Ashu
Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago
vyshu-avi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Yayyyy!!!!!!'
Me first!!!!🥳 Kitne dino baad!!!! 😆
N as for the part
Superb!!!!
Ooooohhhhhhhh
Riddhima jealous???? 😉
N ye Amit ka kya chakkar hai?
Womens hostel???😕
N Armaan ne fir Riddhima ko scarf mein dekha?
Hmmm, bewakoof kab apne dimag par yakeen karega?
Update jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Love,
Ashu

sure..sure....kal ya parso kardungi..thanks for the comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing part.........
awesome............
loved it............
precap is amazing...............
thnx for the pm.............

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