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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Hey Sravanthi
Nice part
I seriously got bored with the pakau jokes
They did a good job
Update soon

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Sravanthi

@sravze

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Hey Sravanthi
Nice part
I seriously got bored with the pakau jokes
They did a good job
Update soon

thanks. i did that to show how stupid these boys were.

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vcsss

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

its new and nice. upload the next part soon

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vyshu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

I UNDERSTOOD.........KYA YAAR CHAITHU

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Sravanthi

@sravze

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Part 4

India,
While going out of the club Veer asked the bearer"how were our jokes?"
"sir, they were very good."
Veer put his hands on the bearer's shoulder and said to himself,"kethana jute baltha hey ye."
"kya sir"asked the bearer.
"nothing,thankyou" said Veer and left the place.
As Veer left , bearer thought "ye log aur unki paltu jokes." and left the place.

U.K,

"may I come in, sir."asked Ayesha
"yes,come in." said Dr.John.
"good morning sir."
" good morning Ayesha.
" Sir,this is my resignation."
"Resignation,are u sure that you want to resign."he was upset.
"yes,sir.I have even booked my tickets to India tonight."
" but Ayesha,you are famous and high paid doctor over here.What is the need to go to India and whom do you know over there, you were five when you came here with your dad , from then you have no contacts with India, so what is the need to go to India leaving all your friends over here.
Ayesha said smiling: tumay kya ki may kaha javu aur kyam javu, har jiis janana hey tumay .
"excuse me."
"sorry sir, I was telling that, my father always use to tell me that India is a beautiful country. So,I just want to go there and work there for few years and then come back. And I have even made many promises to dad and it's the tim,e I need to fulfill them.
Dr.john: Ok then, its your wish.All the best. Take care.
Ayesha: thankyou sir.
Then Ayesha left Dr.john's cabin and went on her late rounds in that hospital.She then went to each and every corner of the hospital and the attached medical college in which she had completed her education and intern ship. She recollected all the happy as well as sad moments she had with the place and then met all the friends. she went home and then she went to each and every corner of the house and recollected all the sweet and sour memories she have there. And finally she got into the taxi and left to the airport but as she was going near to the airport tears rolled from her eyes and she burst out crying.
"nahi muje nahi rona hey,meri sonkalpa, papa ka sapana, aur meri unsay keye hoye vada ye sab mari is darda say kaye jaba hey." Thinking this she wraps her tears and became bold.
"muje is sab chejom ka samana karna he hoga."
She reached the airport and then boarded the flight.

India,

" may I come in sir." Said sister lata.
' yes" replied Veer.
" sir,Dr.john has called from U.K to inform that Dr.Ayesha Sharma has accepted our proposal.She is going to join on 10th june."
" its great. Thankyou sister lata."
" thankyou sir."
Then sister leaves the cabin and Veer couldn't control him happiness.

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vcsss

@vcsss

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

its nice,now we have to wait and watch what is going to have in India.

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Aila! Veer couldn't control his happiness!?
Why?
The part was nice n I kind of figured you have a bit of problem with Hindi, coz I couldn't the dialogues right.... I can help you if you would like 😊
Update soon
Take care

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago

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vcsss

@vcsss

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Hi, its nice. waiting for next part

Edited by vcsss - 15 years ago

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Sravanthi

@sravze

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Aila! Veer couldn't control his happiness!?
Why?
The part was nice n I kind of figured you have a bit of problem with Hindi, coz I couldn't the dialogues right.... I can help you if you would like 😊
Update soon
Take care

thankyou,I will ask you for help when I need. 😊 😊

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Sravanthi

@sravze

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Part5
Veer was very happy. He then called his mom Kamini ,
"hi mom,how are you?"
"I' m fine,how are you?"
"fine mom."
"Veer is there any good news, you seem to be very happy."
"yes mom, the U.K's famous doctor has accepted our proposal and is coming to India to work in our hospital."
"wow! This great."
"mom. Now just wait and watch, till now our hospital is one of the best hospitals in Mumbai, but very soon its going to be Mumbai's best hospital."
"yes, then India,next in Asia and finally in World."
"mommmmmm!"
"yes, your goal shouldn't be just Mumbai."
"I know mom. Mom, Aditi used to tell me that a journey of thousand miles just starts with a single step, and now I have taken that single step by requesting Dr.Ayesha Sharma to work in our hospital. I hope that rest of the journey goes smooth and fast."
"All the best Veer. Veer just remember that this is not only your dream but also your father's, your brother's, Shashank uncle's and Padma aunt's ,Aditi's and even my dream and now it is in your hands to fulfill our dream."
"don't worry mom, I will try my best to reach our goal."
"Bye Veer, all the best and take care."
"bye mom."
Then Veer took out a photo and looking at the photo,
"Aditi, if you were alive today, I would have a supporter " then thinking for a while he says "no, no, if you were alive you would be doing all the work and I would be enjoying." Then Veer gave a smile and continued "but don't worry I will make this hospital the best".
Then tears rolled from his eyes and he was about to say something, there was a ring on his Mobile . He wiped his tears and picked up the phone "hello"
"hello Veer"
"O hi"
"Veer I called you to inform that day after tomorrow there is a bike race in our place."
"Ok, then see you over there."
"bye"
"bye"

Two days later,

The entire place was crowded. Everyone over there were shouting "Veer".
" guys, just chill. I will win even this time like the last five races." Said Veer.
The race had started. All the participants were driving very fast. After sometime Veer has over taken everyone and he was driving even faster.
"Veer Veer Veer Veer Veer ………………………."the track was reverberating with the shouting of crowd.
The race was almost finished, suddenly one bike crossed Veer's and crossed the finish line before Veer. That rider lifted the hand showing the victory symbol and turned back and showed thumbs down to the Veer. The rider then removed the helmet. She was none other than Ayesha. Ayesha went on to the stage and took her award and left that place.
Veer was very upset about coming second that too because of a girl.

Next day,

Everyone in the hospital were eagerly awaiting Ayesha.
"Sister Lata, did Ayesha inform when she is going to come." asked Veer.
"Sir, she told she is going to come at 10'clock." Replied Sister Lata.
Then the clock struck ten and Ayesha entered the hospital. Veer then saw Ayesha and was shocked to see the girl who defeated him in the race last night is none other than Ayesha.
Veer then went near Ayesha. While giving her bouquet "welcome to People's hospital"
"Thank you" said Ayesha.
"come I will introduce everyone. " then "he is Dr.Rajdeep Sahni. She is Dr. Pamminder Kaur. She is ……………………………………………………………………………………"
He introduced the entire staff of the hospital. Then they went into the conference hall and discussed about all the matters related to the hospital. After this, Veer showed Ayesha her cabin and left for rounds.
Ayesha then went around the hospital, at every spot she recollected some happy or sad moments which Aditi, Veer , Shashanak ,Padma , Avinash and other spent over there.
And finally she went and sat on a bench with tears rolling in her eyes.

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