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Sweet_Ashum thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Hey
Lovely part
Ayesha won the race?
Cool!!!!
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Very nice and interecting. Hope Veer and Ayesha will have a good begining.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Part 6


[I]Ayesha sat on a bench with tears rolling out of her eyes. She was then staring at the wall and recollects:

Flashback (5th june 2000),

Ayesha was performing the yearly death ceremony of her parents and went home then Rakesh Sharma came near Ayesha and called her "Aditi" to which Ayesha replied "ji dad".
"Aditi I know that you want to know what had happened with your parents that night and why we left India and come here that night?"
" dad you told me that you will definitely tell that fact when the right time will come, so I will not ask you."
"Aditi the right time has come, listen to me. first promise me that you will not take any wrong step after listening to it and will take every step carefully".
" ok dad."
' Aditi that night I suddenly got a call from Shashank and he asked me to come to your house immediately.Shashank sounded very tensed. Aditi I don't know what has happened with your parents that night but I just know one thing that your parents didn't die because of a fire accident."
"but dad why do you think like this?" asked Ayesha in a very doubtful tone and a question mark face.
" Aditi that night Shashank as call me again when I was on the way to your house.He just told me that your are in the car which is parked outside your house and he asked me to take care of
you as your life is also in danger and he stoped speaking. When I reached your house I saw that it was completely burned.Then secretly I took you along with me."
"but dad, all this happened and I did not get to know anything."
"because you were given sleeping pill. Aditi that time everyone thought that you are also died and even I acted in the same way.You stayed in my house for a while secretly and then one night we took the flight and came here.I adopted you and changed you name to Ayesha Sharma so that no one will get any doubt."
"thank you dad" said crying Ayesha.
"Aditi I'm sure that some thing as happened in People's Hospital that night, and I want you to know what has happen and the people and reason behind Shashank and Padma's death. Aditi no one think that you are Aditi as all your records say that you are Ayesha and remember, you will not tell anyone about all this and that you are Aditi till you find out the facts."
"promise dad"




Present
"dad I'm in People's Hospital today and very soon the entire world will know the fact behind Dr.Shashank and Padma's death."saying this Ayesha gets up and starts to walk.
"Papa(referring to Shashank ), you have done so must to this Hospital and what did this hospital do to you. you thought that this hospital is your life but this hospital has taken your life." and then Ayesha stands boldly and says" I promise you Papa and mom that I will find out all the facts and I will prove the person behind your murder guilty."

"Ayesha" called someone from behind.When Ayesha turned back and saw it was Pammi.
" hello Pammi"
"hello, what are you doing here?"
"nothing"
"Actually I have here to invite you to Dr.Veer's birthday party."
"o, its Veer's birthday today."
"yes, the party is held in the hospital's auditorium and definitely come, you can even meet Kaminiji tonight in the party."
"Sure I will be there."
"so meet you there at 7."
"bye"
"bye"
[I]
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Nice!!!
Lets see whats happens at the party!
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon
Take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
[I]
Part 7



Ayesha then left for rounds. On her way in one part of the hospital she found that there was a lot of tension. She walk to that place and was surprised to see that one girl had committed susite in the hospital. And then she immediately treated that girl. Then she enquired about that girl and got to know that her name is Anu and she was admitted in the hospital by her friend for the same reason. Ayesha left that placed. In the evening Ayesha come to her and sat beside her and spoke to her like this;

"I don't know the reason behind your action but I don't even want to know. I will just say u that life is not as easy as you want it to be, if it gives you happiness it will also give you sorrow, if you have people around you who love you, you will also have people who create problems for u, and let it be I would just tell you that if life give you problems it will also tell you the solutions of your problem, you should just sit with peace of mind and think for the solution without worrying about the problem.
u known one thing, every problem will have many solutions but we just think of one or none.
I will just tell you one story with my father used to tell me in my childhood,
once there lived a poor farmer and his beautiful daughter. As the farmer was poor he had many loans to clear one on such was to be paid to an old man named Raj. one day Raj came to the farmer house for asking him to pay the interest. There he saw farmer's beautiful daughter and liked her. Therefore he made an evil plan of tricking the farmer and marrying her. The next day, he went to the farmer's house and spoke to him like this "When will you pay your loan, I'm sorry to say that but I'm sure u will not be able to pay it." Then after some time "I have a plan in this way u need not pay you loan. U just accept for your daughter and my marriage." Listening to this farmer and his daughter was shocked and couldn't reply anything out of shock .then Raj continued "Ok, as you people are not able to decide let us leave it to god ,we can see many white and black stones on this road I will put 1 black and 1 white stone in this bag and your daughter will put up 1, if it is black then you need not pay ur loan and your daughter need not marry me but if it is white then you need not pay ur loan and your daughter need to marry me " Having no choice left or with selfishness the poor farmer has accepted to it.
Then Raj went on to the road and picked up 2 white stone and put it in the bag, Farmer daughter saw this and as worried as if she tells this to everyone she need not marry raj but her father has to pay money that time itself and I if she keep quite she has to marry him.
Now I will ask you what u will do if u r in her place."
To this Anu answered "I will not have any choice except marrying Raj."
Then Ayesha "But she sat down and thought with an clam mind and found a other way,
She went on to the road where Raj was standing and picked up 1 stone but she throw it down in such a way that it seemed that it fall down unconsciously and then said ooooo!it fall down……. But don't worried we will know the stone I picked up by seeing the stone in the bag, o, its white this means I picked up black. Thank you sir.
Listening to this Raj just moved silently as he would not say anything.
So in this way even ur problems will have some other solutions, just think."
Saying this she moved from that place.
From one corner of the room Veer was watching her and then while was going he just had a cute smile on his face and then he started to moved in other direction as after walking some distance he stopped and his smiling face suddenly became a shocked face and then he returned back and look at Ayesha ,at that time he had a mixed expression of question mark and surprise on his face.

vcsss thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#26
hi nice one I'm waiting for party scene and to know the reason why he had returned back like that.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Part 8


From one corner of the room Veer was watching her and then while was going he just had a cute smile on his face and then he started to moved in other direction as after walking some distance he stopped and his smiling face suddenly became a shocked face and then he returned back and look at Ayesha ,at that time he had a mixed expression of question mark and surprise on his face, as he recollected that the same story was said to Aditi and him by Dr.Shashank ,and then realized that Aditi is dead , with a sad face he left the place.

In a huge house a little boy was playing and then a servant came to him and said
"Nihalbaba, don't u remember that today is ur chachu's birthday and u have o go to hospital for the birthday celebrations "
"I remember , how can I forget such important thing."
"then, get ready soon, let's go to hospital"
"no I'm waiting for chachu"
"nihalbaba madamji asked us to come to hospital."
"but chachu will come to take me,I know."
"but Nihalbaba"


"Nihal….", it was veer.
"hi chachu"saying this nihal went running towards veer and hugged veer.we could see a special affection between them. "yar nihal u did not get ready till."
"no chachu I was waiting for u"
"ok then lets get ready soon."



in hospital
A very beautiful lady entered the hospital .Everyone ran towards her and Ayesha stood away the crowd and was trying to see who the lady was. As they all wished her and spoke with her they dispersed and then Ayesha saw her and got a smile on the face and told kamini aunty in a low voice. Then Raj came near Kamini and started to talk with her and while talking he saw Ayesha and called her and introduced her to kamini and all the 3 started to talk with each other.

in veer's house
Veer and Nihal got ready and came down and then they left to the hospital.

in hospital
In the party hall all of them were waiting for Veer seeing this Kamini got annoyed. Then Veer and Nihal entered the hall and then went towards Kamini and Veer took Kamini's blessings and then Nihal, after this Nihal left the place. Kamini then asked Veer "why did u go home to get Nihal, he could had come his own in the car. Do u know everyone were waiting for u and u are the host of the party, I don't like this veer." Saying this she left that place. Veer do not understand what to do. And left that place and then started to attend the guests. Then suddenly the doors of the party hall opened and it was Ayesha in pink which was her color, she was so beautiful that the entire hall wouldn't stop looking at her and in the same way Veer was also looking at her. Not to forget Raj also had a cute smile on his face and was just looking at her forgetting everything. Then Ayesha walked down and moved towards Veer and wishes him but there was no reply from Veer as he was busy looking at her and just looking at her.



Edited by sravze - 15 years ago
Sweet_Ashum thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Nice parts!!!
And its so typical of Kamini to say something like that
Want to know what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Take care

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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Nice parts,
even Raj also looking at Ayesha??????
lets see whats gone happen.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Part 9
Then Ayesha walked down and moved towards Veer and wishes him but there was no reply from Veer as he was busy looking at her and just looking at her.Then Ayesha little confused just smiled and moved from that place.
Veer was just looking at her.
Then he remembers,
Veer was talking on mobil while walking on the road "Hi mom"
"don't worry I have reached shimla safely."
"sorry mom ,sorry sorry sorry I just forgot to call u."
"ok I'm sorry ma."..................
Then Veer had reached a signal where he had to cross the road.Veer busy with his call just moved on then suddenly someone hold his hand and pulled him back,Veer was about to fall but some how controlled and then with full of angry when he turned his face he saw a huge truck moving on the road.then he understood that if he had cross the road the truck must have hit him and then veer look turned his face towards the girl how saved him but she was looking other side and then she moved on Veer was looking at that girl and then he noticed that her watch which she wore on right hand and his watch on left hand got linked (giving us a hint that their lifes are going to link together soon.) and Veer just moved along with her and was tring very hard to look at her face. By that time both reached the other side of the road but suddenly that girl slipped and was about to fall ,she turned completely towards Veer and fall,she caught Veer's shoulders and her face was completely on other side it looked a she was looking down and then coming to Veer he hold her on her stomach and Veer was looking at her. it looked like there was a straight line (Veer) and a cross line which is cutting the straight line (that girl). Then that girl turned her face but her dupatta just moved and covered her face as soon as she turned her face.Then She stood properly and then pulled her dupatta down First we can see her eyes they were very beautiful that beautiful that if and on looks at them onces has to turn back and look at it onces more.then her nose and then her lips and then finially her complete face .( o its Ayesha.) then she said to Veer "Thankyou"
but Veer left speechless.Then she politely asked Veer to leave her but Veer didnot reply then that girl just put off Veer's hands and moved on and Veer as looking at her and then she cought a auto and left. then Veer got back to our world and said" oy!" and lifted his left hand and then found her watch (broken and linked with his watch.) but by the time he pulled the watch and seperated it she left.
Edited by sravze - 15 years ago

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