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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi,I'm new this forum and this is my first fan fiction. Hope you guys will like it. Please do read and comment.

RaaZ

OVERVIEW:This is a story of a girl named Ayesha Sharma who is a docter and she comes to India from U.K.In India she works in a hospital which is owned by Vardhans.She comes to India to find anwsers to many questions which are in her mind from her childhood and also to find the people who are responsible for the death of her parents and to prove them guilty.

It even has very important people like Veer who loves Ayesha, who they fall in love and how they finialy come together inspirte of many problems and Armaan how comes from a upper middle class family, and Riddhima who belongs to very rich family.How they fall in love and how they come together inspirt of many differences and problems.

CHARACTERS:

1.Ayesha Sharma:

She is Ayesha Sharma a good docter and a very good philosopher. Life has taught her many things (actually more than want is needed for her age.).she is a cute and naughty girl and at the same time knows want she wants.She belives in doing things which she thinks to be right (may the entrie whole thinks it to be wrong.) and is always ready to face its results.

2.Veer Vandhan Singh:

He is Veer a docter and directer of People's hospital.He looks like a very silent person but is a very naughty person. He belives in leading a happy life as we don't know how long we will live.

3.Armaan Malik:

He is Armaan Malik.He cames from a upper middle class family.he lost his parents and his only sister.He belives that life is long and there is a tommorow in our life. he belives that we must think and plan for our future, he thinks that things in life must be long lasting. He is a pratical person.
4.Riddhima Kapoor:
She is Riddhima Kapoor.She comes from a very rich family.She lost her parents in her childhood and lives with her grandfather.She is a very careless girl.She belives that life is short and sweet.She thinks that we don't know whether we have a tommorow,so we must live today completely. She belives in we must live for today,plan for tommorow and party tonight concept. She is little far from pratical life.
5.Kamini Vardhan Singh:

She is Kamini .She is Veer's mother and the owner of People's hospital.

6.Vijay Vardhan Singh:

Veer's father

7.Avinash Vardhan Singh:

Veer's brother.

8.Nandini Vardhan Singh:

Avinash's wife.

9.Nihal Vardhan Singh:

He is Nihal,Avinash and Nandini' son. He is very special to Veer and he become veer's life after the death of Avinash and Nandini.

10.Rakesh Sharma:

Ayesha's father.(he adopted Ayesha).

11.Dr.Shashank Gupta:

He was a very famous docter and he worked in People's Hospital.

12.Mrs. Padma Gupta.:

she worked as Head nurse in People's Hospital.

13.Rajdeep Sahni:
he is Raj and he works in People's hospital as a docter and he a good friend of Veer.
14.Pamminder Kaur:
She is pammi,she works in People's hospital as a docter.
15.Alok Nath Kapoor:
he is Riddhima' grandfather.he belives that life is something which we should enjoy completely but at the same time belives that there is tommorow. He like honest people and people who take life pratically.
And few more character play as a supporting role.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Edited by sravze - 14 years ago
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Index

Pg-1 Introduction
Pg-1 Part 1
Pg-1 Part 2
Pg-2 Part 3
Pg-3 Part4
Pg-3 Part 5
Pg-4 Part 6
Pg-4 Part 7
Pg-5 part 8
Pg-5 part 9
Pg-6 part10
Pg-6 part 11
Pg-7 part 12
Pg 7 part 13
Pg 8 part 14
Pg 9 part 15
Pg 9 part 16
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1
5th june 1986,

A man came running into the house calling "Padma,Padma jaldi avo".His tone was shivering and he looked very tensed. Then a lady came out and said "Shashanak, kya huva, sab kuch tik tho hey na".Shashanak replied"vo,vo", Then suddenly someone entered the house. Shashanak stops talking to Padma and asks the outsider "tum kaun ho". The outsider just smiles and says"tumari mouth". Padma exclaimed "kya?" and the outsider takes out a knife and kills both Padma and Shashanak and then he ran out of the house and sets fire to the house.Then he quitely moves off from that place.

After some time everyone came running towards the house .They try to put off the fire but it was too late. Everything burned and everyone inside the house died.The entrie crowd cried out "ye kya huva ,aba hamara Dr.shashanak aur Padma is duniya may nahi rahe."

Within no time media has reached the spot and everyone was speaking

about the death of Dr.Shashanak Gupta and Padma Gupta.

Then a car come and stopped near that house and a man,a women and two boys got down from the car, One of the boys went running towords the house and fell on his knees and cried out"Aditi,Aditi",then the lady came near that boy and called him Veer and then consoled him but she herself was crying.

6th june 1986,

In the press meet the directer of People's Hospital Dr.Vijay Vardhan Singh talks to the press in this way,

"Dr.Shasanak Gupt hamara hospital ka best Docter he nahi balki world's best docters may se yek hey. unki mouth se hum yek ache doctor ko kho gaye".then pointing to the photo of Shashanak he continued "aaja se is photo yahi per rahegi unki yadha may".,

From then onwards, for few days, people and media spoke only about the incident, about him and his achivements. As time went on people forgot everything.

Edited by sravze - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was bad 😭 Shashank n Padma died 😭

But now I think I've understood where the story is proceeding

The was too good

Continue soon

Take care

P.S: Can u reveal your name?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it is very good.continue soon.
Edited by vcsss - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

That was bad 😭 Shashank n Padma died 😭

But now I think I've understood where the story is proceeding

The was too good

Continue soon

Take care

P.S: Can u reveal your name?

Thankyou. I'm Sravanthi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2

24 Years Later

5Th June 2010,
In U.K,
A girl was climbing stairs of a building under constrution . She reached the top floor of the building. Heard somebody shouting "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!". When she turned back, she saw a lady falling down from the second floor due to electrical shock .She was taken aback . She ran down and asked a person over there to place the women on the table. She checked her pulse . It was very low.She immediately gave the women mouth to mouth respiration .

When the woman's heart started beating she felt happy. When heart beat became normal she got up and looked around

Everyone over there was shocked .

Someone from the crowd asked her surprisingly "wow, its amazing. What did you do?"

"this is called mouth to mouth respiration".

"pardon me" .asked the stranger

"This is a technique to improve the rate of heart beat." .

"how do you know this?".

"Every docter would know this , by the way I'm Dr.Ayesha Sharma."

She looked at him smilingly😊 and shook his hand. She was pleased.


In India,

A young man entered the People's Hospital and walked towards the reception . He asked the nurse over there to give a file urgently required for him.The nurse was too busy

" please wait". She replies even without looking at him

He was upset and angry at this.😡

'sister lata, do you know whom are you asking to wait, I am Dr.Veer Vardhan Singh the director of this Hospital."

The nurse got up and said " I am Sorry sir" and gave him the file, he asked for.

Edited by sravze - 15 years ago
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Hey short part!!!
But it was nice
Jaldi update karooooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 3

India,
It was a huge and crowded house.In this house everyone was busy in their own way. Two of them are in a room.
"Chachaji apa yeha kya karahehe?"asked a young girl.
"Raji may yeha yek plan banarahahu "
"plan "asked Raji.
"ha plan"
"per yea tho Ramu ka room hey" said Raji.
"ha may hey plan Ramu kuo sabak sikanay ke liye he banaya tha."
"tho ab?" asked Raji.
"theyko , hamesha ke tharaha Ramu is khidike ke our thekatha huva
ayega,aur thab is thel per apana perar rakakar slip hokar is bed per gerjayega,aur main neche se ye screws nekal diya"
"kya???????"asked Raji with a suprising face.
Then they both looked at each other's face and smiled and laughed imaging what is going to happen.
"Raji ye bata hum donom ke beech he rahana chahiyea,promise"
"promise". And they both continued to laugh.
Chachaji was then standing near to the door.Suddenly his wife opened the door. He himself sliped and fell down through the window.

"chachajiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" shouted Raji.
"kya huvo" asked chacheji.
"chachaji niche gir gaye."

.

people who were present there surrounded him and his wife reached there and asked them to bring him to Ramu's room .

everyone over there carried him to the room. Worried Raji pulled a table and asked them to place him on the table but chacheji asked to place him on the bed, then the chachaji who could not speak out of pain looked at Raji,to this Raji replied slowly "promise chachaji,I will not tell anyone."

Then they placed him on the bed. Chachaji then showed everyone some skews.

"ye kya hey?"asked chacheji

"isse bed ka screws hey chacheji"asked Raji

"kya????" then the entrie bed got separated and fell.

Then suddenly a girl comes running into the room looked at this and got shocked.

She asked them to shift him to her room and immediately treated him.

"ab sab kuch tek ha"asked chacheji

"ha hamara gur ka pehle doctor, Dr.pamminder Kaur."

Then everyone gave a smile on their faces.

Scene 2

A man is driving very speedly . He was caught by a police.

"why are you driving the car very fast and that too in the night time" shouted the police.

"sir,I'm a doctor and I have to reach the hospital immediately, its an emergeny"

"What is your name and where do you work. Show your ID"

"I'm Dr.Rajdeep Sahni and I work in people's hospital. This is my ID"

"Ok you can go"

Then his car stops and many of his friends came near him.One of them asked "why are you late, the party has started."

"I was in danger and escaped" laughed Raj.

Everyone rushed into the club.

All the friends sat at a place. Veer then came and joined the party.

All of them wanted to play a game.

"ok folks, everyone of us is going to tell a joke, who tells the worst joke will have the honor of paying the bill.Decsion of the group is final. Shall we start.?"said Raj.

"Ok"said everyone.

"I will start" said Raj." Man: I offer you myself.
Woman: I am sorry I never accept cheap gifts.

Man: I want to share everything with you.
Woman: Let's start from your bank account."

"Next please."

"A family of mice were surprised by a big cat. Father Mouse jumped and and said, "Bow-wow!" The cat ran away. "What was that, Father?" asked Baby Mouse. "Well, son, that's why it's important to learn a second language."

"Next",

"Once there were three turtles. One day they decided to go on a picnic. When they got there, they realized they had forgotten the soda. The youngest turtle said he would go home and get it if they wouldn't eat the sandwiches until he got back. A week went by, then a month, finally a year, when the two turtles said,"oh, come on, let's eat the sandwiches." Suddenly the little turtle popped up from behind a rock and said, "If you do, I won't go!"

"The teacher to a student: Conjugate the verb "to walk" in simple present.
The student: I walk. You walk ....
The teacher intruptes him: Quicker please.
The student: I run. You run ..."
This went on for some time then Raj looked at Veer"Sir want about you, yours is the last."
Veer started his joke,
"
Raju: I want to becme very famous.

Ram; then take this. When u press this button this will turn to a rabbit. Now u call everyone and say that you will show them a magic. Ask them which animal they what this to be convert to

Raju: if they say some other animal

Ram: just shout rabbit, in such a huge crowd everyone will think someone asked for rabbit.

Then raju called everyone and asked them the same question.

Then manyof the member asked for elephant

Then raju in the same way shouted rabbit

Then someone said "who is asking for rabbit we want elephant."

Then raju said in tension"he,he"

Then that man replied "this means you don't know magic'

Listening to this everyone ran towards raju and Blashed Raju."

Then came the bearer with the bill

"then shall we call the owner to tell the last joke"said Veer.

Everybody laughed.

What about the result said Raj.

Veer said "wait I will declare the result.

He then paid the bill and said"folks let us go".

Edited by sravze - 15 years ago

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