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Shona91

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Posted: 15 years ago

sorry for not commenting earlier mera net nahin chal raha tha sorrrrrrrrrrrrrry
very nice update
i like uday
continue soon bye

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poojabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey rya i am so so sorry for the delay .i was busy somewhere.bt mai agar comment na bhi to take it for granted ki i am allways with u.rn has a spl place in my heart so do all the things related to them.so mai uska saath kabhi nehi chor sakti so tumhare is fic ka saath bhi nehi chodungi.ab ate hai ud pe. i am really happy after reading it.bacause rn are together aur kya chahye?and u have written d part very well.so cont soon.cya.👍🏼

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

nice part...keep it up...👏👏👏👏👏do continue soon..😊

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Riti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Hey😛😛
Ria M sorry Sweety...
But I was Reading the Whole Story...
And I really Liked It Very Much...
U really Write Very Good...
It Was Awesome...And Do contnue ur FF soon...
I Was Reading The Base And Prgress OF The Story..😕😕
Then I got To Understand It...
Beacause U hv 3 Parts And It took time to finish...😕😕
Sorry Again As M late..
I really Liked It.....
Do Update Soon..😊😊
I hope ur nt angry.....But I finishd all ur parts in 1 weekk....
U write too good...
Chal All The Best do cont soon...😊😊

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Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

Hiiiiiiiiii Ria
How r u?

update was awesome yaar
finally Raj n Naina k beech sab theek ho gaya
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

wonderful part yaar...

plzz continue soon.😊

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ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

raj and naina were kissing each other when they heard a knock on their door .By hearing the knock they broke the kiss raj goes to open the door raj ke door kholte he tia raj par barasne laagte haai"what is this bhaiya hum waha kab se aap dono ka intezar kar rahe haai aur aap haai ke aabhie tak yahaan baithte ho very bad i am really upset with u"tia ke baat sunke raj muskura deta haai aur tia se kaheta haai"mere pyaari bahen plz aapne bhaiya ko maaff kar de "

tia-no way bhaiya aapko main maaff nahin karunge(tia aapne chehera pher ke khare ho jaate haai raj samajh jaata haai that the situation is really hot so he have to do something so that tia forgives him so he turns towards where tia was looking and hold his ears and very cutely he says"sorry tia is bar maaff kar de aapne bhaiya ko "raj was looking so adorable that tia cant resist and she started laughing "bhaiya aap bhi na thik haai last time maaff kiya aapko"

raj-thanks tia acha ab tu jaa hum bas 5 mins mein taiyar hoke neeche aate haai

tia-ok bhaiya but dont make it more than 5 mins

raj-hmm

tia neeche aate haai .tia ko dekhte he udhay aur karthik usse pucchne laagte haai ke raj aur naina kab tak aa rahe haai tia tells them they are coming within 5 mins tia ke baat sunke sab log jaake candels cake ,ballons etc sab kuch ready karne laagte haai

after 10 mins raj aur naina neeche aate haai .

karthik-aa gaye aap dono hum log kab se wait kar rahe plz aaye aake ab cake katie warna burn candels ke smell se he humara pet bhar jaayega

udhay-bilkul thik kaha aapne bhaiya plz naina bhabhi jaldi ab cut katie

naina aur raj ab jaake cake katte haai to which everyone claps and the party starts

dekhte dekhte raat ke 12 baje jaate haai party khatam hone mein everyone was very tired so they retaired to their respectives rooms

raj aur naina bhi aapne room mein aate haai .

naina-raj main change karke aate hu

raj-ok

naina goes to change

after changing when naina comes who dekhte haai raj sharab pi raha haai naina toh yeh dekh ke bohot gussa she just goes to raj and snatches away the glass from his hand "raj tum aj bhi sharab pi rahe ho"

raj-naina u know naa that i cant leave without it plz naina let me have it

naina-no way raj

raj-but naina i(before raj could say anything more this time naina puts her lips on raj's and starts kissing him

after a longggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg kiss they separate .

raj-naina i wan u tonight may i

naina bas aapna haan mein hilla dete haai

raj ab naina ko aapne godhe mein uttha ke bed par litta deta haai naina ne to aapne aakhen

kas kar ke badsh ke rakhe the raj samajh jaata haai that naina is lil bit nervous so he thought that he will take the thing slowly so raj first move to naina face which was shinning in the light raj starts kissing every part of naina's face every passionately makin naina moan raj samajh jaata haai that naina is realaxed so he now slowly starts unbuttoning the buttons of naina's nighty naina bhi raj ke shirt ke buttons ko kholne laagte haai

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 15 years ago

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Riti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

hey ria...
this part was gud...n very romantik...and ye kya tumne Raj ko sharabi bana dia...😔....but wo jo bhi ho...updt...was gud....n u knw...it was lil......HOT too...😉 .....chal Updt soon..tck care bye
with love
Riti

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