I love u too much to lose u#2(Rajeev)EpiloguePg-14 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

hi..............😃...................good to see u after long time............😃 😃 😃...........whenver sent u a PM..............got a msg ur PM box is full 😆 😆 😆 😆...............Hey Puri....sorry that u had to cum across to a full PM box.....i never realized when there were more than 150 PMs....and how the inbox got full....😆
firstly thanx 4 the update 😳 😳 😳 mindblowing part 👏 👏 👏 👏................the wait seems worthy enough................😃Ohh really?? U knw wat....it feels gud to hear such gud words....😃😆
njoyed reading the part 😳 😳 😳........................... loved how u included all emotions in one update...... father-daughter, brother -sister, teasing, anxiety, nervousness.........not to 4get romance too 😳 😳 😳............it felt good reading the whole part...........I hope it didnt get boring and u didnt fall asleep while reading the biiiiiiiggggg part.....lolz. But jokles apart....thats for the appreciation dear.😛
Ayaan is so sweet...........😳 😳 😳.............if asmi doesn't mind....i'm in love with him....... ......Oh surely Asmi doesnt mind....agar mind karne lagi.....to kitneeee logo se mind karna hoga na....hehe...waise its gr8 to hear that u loved the character so much....and yeah....its our RIGHT to LOVE him....😉 ..... really love how he teases her...... ......Happy to knw dat dear.....
so finally after the wedding......now this fic nearing its completion.............😔........................but never mind that means a new 1 4m u.......... ....So u r dancing....hmm....lets see if u like the next one as well....😉.........so when can we expect a new one........ 😉 😉........Ahh...very soon....😃
continue soon ASAP........😃

Originally posted by: pinky901

awesome part dear

Originally posted by: chinmayi

hey finally u updated it, luved d part, & specially d romance btw them...keep it up, sad tht d fic wil end in next part, bt plzzz do UD the next part soon as wud be eagerly w8ing 4 it, d end also brings along a +ve hope of u starting wid a new fic 😊👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sumaiya

Welcome back..I hope your lappy is fine now😃 Hey Dii....yeah I got a new one actually....😃

Now coming to the much awaited update- U wrote this really well👏👏👏Awww....thank u sooo much Dii...😃 last ke inn UDs ko lekar main thoda skeptical hu....but glad u found it well...

Asmi's dad is able to attend her marriage and all because of Ayaan😊

He is missing his family very much...Asmi was so happy to see him..

Samay will really miss Asmi😭😭😭 That he will...

Ayaan is one of its kind..He really thinks to much of himself..But I love him for this..😛Yeah....I think he is loved becoz of loving himself...(and Asmi of cousre...)😉

Did he really expected dat Asmi wud not match him in looks😆😆😆Haha....he cant afford to think that....can he??

He knows how to turn a romantic moment into funny..He made Asmi angry...

But he knows dat her anger is all fake...Hehe....making it all funny.....is sumthing I do....everytym....see....romance ko bhi funny bana diya...😕😆

The marriage description was gud..For the first time Ayaan didn't hesitate to show his eagerness for Asmi..😉😃

This scene was really sweet

As he went closer to tie the 'mangalsutra' he slightly whispered to her "You Are A dream Sweetheart'.Which I'll Never Let Break"'.and then he winked at her cutely while descending away!!"

Am glad u liked this portion Dii....and yeah....I am thankful that I didnt goof up in the marriage part....thanks to AMMU though....😃

Ayaan knows dat Asmi is upset and he is trying to cheer her...😛

But she is really naive...usko yeh bhi nahin pata ki ghar ko uthakar apni marzi ki location par nahin le ja sakte😆😆😆 She was too upset to even let her mind work....I guess...😆😆

She was on verge of tears when she saw the picture of Ayaan's family...

Ayaan is really romantic..He was busy romancing while his wife was pretending to b angry😉😆😆

But as always Asmi forgot her anger n they both were lost in their love😃

Now only one update is left...Ohh no!! But every gud thing has its ending so I'll wasit for u to begin another fiction like dis one..Donno if like dis one....but yeah a new one will be started shortly...😃

Continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Welcome back!!

update was fabulous.👏 Thank Nisha....am glad u liked the UD...😛

Asmi is overjoyed to see her father and glad that he will be able to attend her wedding. 😊Loved it when you said that everyone knew that Asmi's father would come because they knew that ayaan would make sure of it.Aww....am glad u mentioned it...😛 asmi's father has missed her and his family very much. He regrets doing everything that he has done.😭Hmm...that he does....and guess thats more important....to relaize the mistake...😊

Samay does not want to let Asmi go...he will miss her very much. 😭He has been a loving bro after all...

Ayaan is angry because koi use bhaav nahi de raha. 😆But he made sure that he was the first one who saw Asmi.😉 He cudnt afford otherwise...😉Asmi gets angry with him for speaking with her rudely.

The wedding ceremonies were perfect. Loved how ayaan made all his special promises to Asmi while perfoming the rituals.👏Gud to knw that u liked it all...😛

Asmi is suprised to see Ayaan's family home. It was very funny to hear that asmi had not even realised that they had come to Delhi and not Mumbai.😆Am glad u found it funny....and liked it as well...😃

Mauli welcomes Asmi by performing all the rituals to her new home. How could she deny ayaan's comand..poor girl did not even get to attend the wedding properly.😉😆Hehe....but then who else but her cud hav done it??😊

Asmi is angry with raj...she is sad to leave her family. But ayaan ko use manana aata hai. and Asmi gets lost in his love.😳May be Ayaan ko usse manana achha lagta hai...😉

Waiting for your next update...please continnue

Originally posted by: chinmayi

hey sumi dear...next part kab UD karr rahi ho? w8ing very eagerly 2 read it :) plzzz jaldi UD karna :)

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Oh godddddd !!!

finally sumi updated !!! Hehe....yeah FINALLY!!!

Superb update dear...

very nice and apt description of ceremony .....Thanks to Ammu that I didnt goof up the rituals....and yeah....thatnks for liking the part.

Mauli Ayaan convo was as usual cute and hilarious hehe....hilarious was sumthing I was expecting....kyunki mujhe pura part hilarious lag raha tha....romace to tha hi nahi....(almost)😆

And then the Asmi ayaan scene....Sweet and romantic !!! 😃Arre tumhe bhi mil gaya romance...chalo achha hai....tumhara milna hi zaruri hai....😆

continue soon ! 😃

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

chalo...der aaye durust aaye...!!! ye kahawat mere liye kaafi faydemand rahi...😆main janti hun ki tumhara lappy kharab tha...par hum bhi toh miss karte the na Ayaan ko...!!!I understand....main bhi miss karti thi...jab kuch likh nahi paa rahi thi....gussa ata tha....aur kabhi kabhi rona bho....ye alag baat hai ki main nahi roti....am a big girl...and achhi bacchi too...😆 maine toh tabhi padh liya tha jis din tum ne Ud kiya tha...!!! par main in diono thoda jyada BG thi...iosiliye late cmnt karr rahi hun...!!! I knw...u alwys read quickly....and u knw wat....surprisingly u never forget to comment later on....so its always ok....waise bhi main super late ho jaungi next UD karte karte....itna to andaza karna hi tha na...😆aur mujhe pata hai...ki 'achhi bachhi' itni achhi hai ki voh mujh par bilkul bhi gussa nahi hogi...!!! 😃 😃 😃Bilkul sahi....I hav to live upto my name na....😉

now abt d UD...

mind-blowing...awesome...fantastic...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Thanks for the BEAUTIFUL words....😃

sare emotions ko tumne baht hi khubshurti k sath likha hai...chahe voh asmi n her father ka scene ho ya phir samay n asmi ka scene...tum ne sare emotions ko baht hi achhe se describe kiya hai...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Am glad u thought so yaar.....and hopefully wo sab kuch zyada ghisa pita nahi tha....😆 thanks btw...😃

asmi ka photo bhejne ka scene n ayaan ka yeh kahna ki ' use baht tym milega manane k liye' was too gud...!!!! dono kabhi nahi sudhrenge...😆 😆 😆Not that we want them to.....hai na??? waise....am glad u liked this scene as well....its a rare mention....😛

asmi janti hai ki ayaan kuch na kuch chakkar chala kar us k dad ko le hi aayega...!!! kitne achhe se janti hai voh ayaan ko...😃 😃 😃Hmm....Ayaan is that sweet na....

aayan bhi na ek namuna hai...bole toh one piece...achhe khase romatic scene ko kab funny scene bana deta hai pata hi nahi chalta...😆 😆 😆Hehe.....kaha tha na....main romantic scene likh rahi hu....matlab kuch 'ajeeb' hoga.....aur phir saath dene k liye AYAAN hai yaar....😆

par mujhe 'mangalshutra' ka scene sab se jyada achha laga tha...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃Aww.....thanks....😃

yeh asmi bhi na...kaisi ladki hai yaar...!!! apne parents k ghum me itna khoyi hui thi ki use pata hi nahi chala ki kab voh delhi pahunch gayi...aur upar se kahti hai ki 'delhi wala ghar delhi me hona chahiye...mumbai me kyoun hai'...!!!Haha....pata hai abhi mujhe bhi ye sochke kaafi hassi aa rahi hai....😆 thank God ki aayan us k sath tha...varna voh toh kahin aur pahunch jati...!!! vaise is sawal par asmi ka ayaan ko denewala jawab MAST tha...hun...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Yeah....am glad u found that well...😆

phir 'full moon' ka scene...!!! in dono k jhagde bade funny hote hain...!!! par finally unhe laga ki aaj ki raat unhe jhagda nahi karna chahiye...!!! last scene baht hi romantic tha...n kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...phir bhi na kahun toh tum pata nahi apne dimagless dimag se mere dimagless dimag k bare me kya sochogi...!!! isiliye bata hi deti hun...!!! voh scene bat hi beautiful tha...!!! par phir bich me asmi ne apne weight ko le kar sawal puch liya...ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Am AGAIN glad u liked the full moon scene....and weight wali baat....umm....may be I had read sumthing familiar to this somewhere.....not purely my creation....haha....however tumhe ye sab romantic laga....tumhare dimagless dimag ko maza aya....and mere dimagless dimag ko shanti mili....😃

ab tum is fic ko jaldi hi khatam karne wali ho...mujhe pata hai...aur main is fic ko baht miss bhi karnewali hun...!!!And I think....isse MISS karne k liye iska khatam hona zaruri tha....warna bore nahi ho jate kya...😆😆 par mera dimagless dimag mujh se yeh kah raha hai ki SUMI baht jald ek aur fic suru karnewali hai...jo ki teen-age love story hogi...(may b)...ha ha ha...!!! aaj kal main astrology ki practice karr rahi hun...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆......astrology ha?? Waise....maine ek baar Mana k fic pe comment karte waqt likha tha....meri next story ek younger love story hai.....😆😉....lekin abhi sochti hu....usse third me launch karungi.....guess I will update another one next.....😆😆

love ya

priya😃

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely Part !! Thanks Vandu....am glad u found the part lovely....😛

It was damn sweet !!Guess u r very swwet to say that....😃

Continue soon !! Oops....sorry for the delay already....😕😆😳

Luv,

Vandu